Unit3 思维导图法写饮食习惯（课件）-2024-2025学年六年级英语下册写作突破专项训练（译林版三起）

Unit 3 译林版三年级起点六年级下册 思维导图法写饮食习惯 CONTENTS 目录 写作方法指引 01 基础知识精讲 02 真题写作练习 03 模拟写作提升 04 行业PPT模板http:///hangye/ 模板来自于： 第一PPT https:/// 01 写作方法指引 PART.01 01 写作方法指引-原文指路 陈述好的饮食习惯和不好的饮食习惯 4 01 写作方法指引 开头-表明文章主旨:好的饮食习惯的重要性 中间-陈述好的饮食习惯和不好的饮食习惯 饮食习惯 结尾-倡导大家要养成良好的饮食习惯 检查-量词 5 A healthy diet A healthy diet is very important for everyone. In a healthy diet, there is a lot of fruit and vegetables. They are good for our health. There is also a lot of rice and bread. You can have some meat and fish in your meals. You can also have a few eggs every day. Many children like eating sweet food. But it is not good for teeth. Every one should keep a healthy diet. 01 写作方法指引-示例 A healthy diet A healthy diet is very important for everyone. In a healthy diet, there is a lot of fruit and vegetables. They are good for our health. There is also a lot of rice and bread. You can have some meat and fish in your meals. You can also have a few eggs every day. Many children like eating sweet food. But it is not good for teeth. Every one should keep a healthy diet. 表明文章主旨:好的饮食习惯的重要性 A healthy diet A healthy diet is very important for everyone. In a healthy diet, there is a lot of fruit and vegetables. They are good for our health. There is also a lot of rice and bread. You can have some meat and fish in your meals. You can also have a few eggs every day. Many children like eating sweet food. But it is not good for teeth. Every one should keep a healthy diet. 陈述好的饮食习惯和不好的饮食习惯 A healthy diet A healthy diet is very important for everyone. In a healthy diet, there is a lot of fruit and vegetables. They are good for our health. There is also a lot of rice and bread. You can have some meat and fish in your meals. You can also have a few eggs every day. Many children like eating sweet food. But it is not good for teeth. Every one should keep a healthy diet. 倡导大家要养成良好的饮食习惯 02 基础知识精讲 PART.02 02 基础知识精讲-句型 1.表明文章主旨:好的饮食习惯的重要性 参考句型： A healthy diet is _________. A healthy diet is _______for us. A good eating habit plays a important role in... Without good eating habits, it would be difficult to... Good eating habits are the foundation of... Good eating habits not only... but also... 参考单词： meaningful; a healthy life; efficient; significance; important 8 02 基础知识精讲-句型 2.陈述好的饮食习惯和不好的饮食习惯 参考句型： For breakfast, we have __________. They can give us __________. At lunch, we eat __________. __________ are good for __________. For dinner, we have __________. And we drink __________. 参考词汇： diet（饮食）water（水）meat（肉）vegetables（蔬菜）sweet food（甜食）bread（面包）cola（可乐）noodles（面条）breakfast（早餐） 9 02 基础知识精讲-句型 3.倡导大家要养成良好的饮食习惯 参考句型： Let's start __________. From now on, I should ________. To be healthy, I should ________. 参考词汇： having good eating habits；a balanced diet；good eating habits；good eating habits；a balanced diet 02 基础知识精讲-语法 量词 定义：也叫 “数量词”，用于表示人、事物或动作的数量单位。 修饰可数名词复数的量词： a lot of / lots of：许多，可以修饰可数名词复数和不可数名词。例如：There are a lot of vegetables in the fridge. 冰箱里有许多蔬菜。 02 基础知识精讲-语法 many：许多，只能修饰可数名词复数。 如：Many people have irregular eating patterns. 很多人有不规律的饮食习惯。 a number of：一些，若干，修饰可数名词复数。 例如：A number of students skip meals.一些学生不按时吃饭。 several：几个，数个，修饰可数名词复数。 如：I bought several pieces of bread.我买了几片面包。 02 基础知识精讲-语法 修饰不可数名词的量词： a little：一点，少量，修饰不可数名词。 例如：I only eat a little sweet food.我只吃一点甜食。 a bit of：一点，修饰不可数名词。 如：There is a bit of meat left.还剩下一点肉。 much：许多，只能修饰不可数名词。 例如：We don't have much junk food in our diet. 我们的饮食中没有很多垃圾食品。 02 基础知识精讲-语法 a great deal of：大量的，修饰不可数名词。 如：A great deal of greasy food is bad for our health. 大量油腻食物对我们的健康有害。 既可以修饰可数名词复数，又可以修饰不可数名词的量词： some：一些，可修饰可数名词复数和不可数名词。 例如：I need some vegetables and some rice. 我需要一些蔬菜和一些米饭。 plenty of：大量的，充足的，可修饰可数名词复数和不可数名词。如：There is plenty of water in the bottle.瓶子里有大量的水。 特定形状、容器等相关的量词： a piece of：一块、一片、一张等，通常用于修饰不可数名词使其可数化。 例如：a piece of bread（一片面包）；a piece of meat（一块肉）。 a cup of：一杯。如：a cup of water（一杯水）。 a bowl of：一碗。例如：a bowl of noodles（一碗面条）。 a plate of：一盘。如：a plate of vegetables（一盘蔬菜）。 翻译句子 冰箱里有很多鸡蛋。 ___________________________________________ 他每天喝一点牛奶。 ___________________________________________ 我需要一些水果和一些面包。 ___________________________________________ 许多学生喜欢吃垃圾食品。 ___________________________________________ 02 基础知识精讲-语法 There are a lot of eggs in the fridge. He drinks a little milk every day. I need some fruits and some bread. Many students like to eat junk food. 03 模拟写作提升 PART.03 模拟写作提升1 同学们，均衡饮食是健康的基础，我们该如何通过饮食来保持健康呢?请联系生活实际，以“How to have a healthy diet”为题,写一写健康的饮食习惯对每个人的重要性要求：语句通顺，意思连贯，表达准确，不少于 40个词。 How to have a healthy diet ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考句型： A healthy diet is _________. For breakfast, we have __________. They can give us __________. At lunch, we eat __________. __________ are good for __________. For dinner, we have __________. And we drink __________. Some people don't like __________, but we should __________. Let's start __________. 参考词汇： habit, important, friend, know, well, at school, listen to, teacher, carefully, put...in order, school thing, finish, homework, on time, at home, like doing, watch TV, play computer games, spend time on, go to bed late, dirty, messy 19 A healthy diet is very important for everyone. For breakfast, we have some noodles or bread. They can give us energy for the day. At lunch, we eat lots of vegetables, some rice, and a little meat and fish. For dinner, we have a little rice and a salad. And we drink enough water every day. Some people don't like water, but we should drink more from now on. Let's start having good eating habits today. 范文1： 表明文章主旨:好的饮食习惯的重要性 陈述好的饮食习惯和不好的饮食习惯 倡导大家要养成良好的饮食习惯 20 模拟写作提升2 健康的饮食对我们每个人来说都很重要。本单元围绕饮食习惯,向大家讲述了Mike 和 Yang Ling 的饮食习惯。那么,怎样的饮食是健康的,哪些饮食习惯又是不健康的呢?以“My diet”为题,写一篇英语小短文介绍一下自己的饮食。 要求:语句通顺，语法正确，不少于6句话。 21 参考句型： A healthy diet is _________. I have a ________. I usually have ________for breakfast, For lunch, I usually have ________, I always eat ________for dinner. Sweet food is nice, but it's ________, I only eat ________. I don't like ________. I only ________every day. From now on, I should ________. To be healthy, I should ________. 参考词汇： diet（饮食）noodles（面条）breakfast（早餐）lunch（午餐）vegetables（蔬菜）rice（米饭）meat（肉）fish（鱼）dinner（晚餐）salad（沙拉）sweet food（甜食）teeth（牙齿，复数形式）water（水）healthy（健康的）important（重要的）nice（好的；美味的）good（好的） 22 A healthy diet is very important. I have a healthy diet. I usually have some noodles for breakfast, For lunch, I usually have a lot of vegetables, some rice, some meat and fish, I always eat a little rice and a salad for dinner. Sweet food is nice, but it's not good for our teeth, I only eat a little at a time. I don't like drinking water. I only drink a little water every day. From now on, I should drink more water. To be healthy, I should always keep a healthy diet. 范文2： 表明文章主旨:好的饮食习惯的重要性 陈述好的饮食习惯和不好的饮食习惯 倡导大家要养成良好的饮食习惯 23 04 真题写作练习 PART.03 根据下列信息，以“A healthy diet”为题，写一篇小短文。 要求：语句通顺，书写工整，不少于 40 个单词。 真题写作练习-江苏常州 Who Food and drinks Mike drink much water eat some meat and vegetables eat a little sweet food Nancy have some bread for breakfast drink a little cola eat some noodles 25 参考句型： A healthy diet is _______for us. Mike drinks _______and eats _______ s. He only eats _______. Nancy has _______ for _______, _______ and _______. We should _______. 参考词汇： diet（饮食）water（水）meat（肉）vegetables（蔬菜）sweet food（甜食）bread（面包）cola（可乐）noodles（面条）breakfast（早餐）much（许多，修饰不可数名词）some（一些，可修饰可数名词复数和不可数名词a little（一点，修饰不可数名词）a few（一些）only（仅仅） 26 A healthy diet is very important for us. Mike drinks much water and eats some meat and vegetables. He only eats a little sweet food. Nancy has some bread for breakfast, drinks a little cola and eats some noodles. We should learn from them to keep a balanced diet. 范文3： 表明文章主旨:好的饮食习惯的重要性 陈述好的饮食习惯和不好的饮食习惯 倡导大家要养成良好的饮食习惯 27 Thank you! $$