Unit 1- Unit 2话题作文写作指导-2024-2025学年外研版英语七年级下册

七年级英语下册 话题作文写作指导 Unit 1 The secrets of happiness 【话题分析】 本单元围绕“幸福”这一话题展开,回答了一个问题:什么是幸福。大家学到了许多获得真正的幸福的方法:爱家人和朋友、帮助他人、积极乐观等。 在写有关“幸福”话题的短文时,可采用第一人称和第三人称,时态主要用一般现在时和一般过去时。可灵活使用本单元学习的讲故事的技巧和方法,通过列举实例等使自己的描述更加高级和生动。本单元的名人名句、经典语句可以背诵好在写作的时候合理引用，起到给文章增色的效果。 【常用句型】 A life without...is like a( n)... The key to happiness is... Happiness comes/springs from... For example, ... We can be happy by... Keep...in your heart. There are many reasons to be happy. But I think... 【写作实例】 人人都渴望幸福,你认为幸福的秘诀是什么呢?请根据以下要求,用英语写一篇发言稿,参加学校的英语主题演讲活动。 要求: 1.文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名; 2.词数不少于80(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。) Good morning, everyone! I am very happy to be here and make a speech today. The topic of my speech is the secrets of happiness.______________________________ 【思路点拨】 导入话题:幸福的秘诀是什么? The topic of my speech is the secrets of happiness. 展开论述：从做好事和帮助他人以及爱两个层面进行论述 I remember the words of...Some people think...We can be happy by... Oscar Wilde once said...There are... Love can make... 回扣主题:什么是幸福的关键 ...are the key to happiness. 【经典范文】 Good morning, everyone! I am very happy to be here and make a speech today. The topic of my speech is the secrets of happiness. Right at this moment, I remember the words of Plato:“Happiness springs from doing good and helping others.”①（教材经典句1---必背，在演讲的开篇,作者引用了古希腊哲学家柏拉图的话,论述了幸福从哪里来。）Some people think that happiness comes from things like money. But money can't buy everything, especially happiness. （教材经典句2---必背。②举出了生活中反面的观点作为后面论述的铺垫,起到了欲扬先抑的作用。）We can be happy by doing good and helping others. For example, we can try our best to help our teachers and classmates. Their smile or “thank you” will make us feel happy. Oscar Wilde once said, “Keep love in your heart. A life without it is like a sunless garden...” ③（教材经典句3---必背，③在正文的第三段依然引用名人的话作为开头,与第二段在结构上形成呼应。） There are many reasons to be happy. I think love is the most important. Love can make us see the bright side of our life and can help us face difficulties positively. So doing good, helping others and love are the key to happiness.④（④本句起到了总结作用,道出了什么是幸福的关键，给文章一个积极向上的总结式结尾） Unit 2 Go for it 【话题分析】 本单元围绕“运动”这一话题展开,讲述了一位运动爱好者的故事,介绍了中国女足,谈论了运动的好处。 与“运动”有关的书面表达命题较为灵活,可以讲述运动爱好者的故事,也可以介绍一个运动团队,或是推荐体育运动项目等。进行写作时,通常采用第一人称和第三人称,时态主要用一般现在时和一般过去时。在写作中,要注意挖掘运动精神对人们的鼓励,这样会使文章更加深入人心。 【常用句型】 But none of the players... They never give up... The match was between...and..... is the key to success. ...take every chance to learn and improve. With..., the team... I am proud of... 【写作实例】 你所在的学校有什么运动队?你是一位队员还是一位体育迷?请你写一篇英语短文,介绍你们学校的一个体育运动团队，参加学校“运动月”主题为“我爱运动”的英语写作比赛。 要点: 1.描述该团队参加的一次比赛; 2.给出你对该团队的评论。 要求: 1.文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名; 2.词数 100 左右。 【思路点拨】 1.介绍球队和主要队员 ...our school girls’football team. Liu Juan, a top player, ... 2.描述一次足球比赛的经过 Last Friday afternoon, there was a football match... I cheered... All the players tried... Liu Juan scored two goals... Our team won! 3.介绍球队的日常训练并作出评论 To get ready for... They take every chance... They never give up... I am proud of them. 【经典范文】 I am a fan of our school girls’football team. Liu Juan, a top player , is my hero. Last Friday afternoon, there was a football match between our school and another school. I cheered for our team with many other fans. All the players tried their best, but none o them scored. ①( ①用 but 表转折,形象地展现了球场上激烈的竞争场面。) There were only 5 minutes left .The score was still 0-0.“Liu Juan, Liu Juan...' Many other fans and I shouted together. How amazing! With the help of other players, Lit Juan scored two goals in the last five minutes. ② Our team won!（②教材经典句1---必背，本句既赞扬了团队协作,又突出了核心队员，与上文“Liu Juan,a top player, is my hero.”相呼应。） To get ready for every game , the girls train every day in the playground.③（③该句展现了女足队员日常训练的刻苦。） They take every chance to learn and improve.（教材经典2---必背，） ④They never give up when they face difficulties. I am proud of them.（④本句结尾展示了女足队员的积极心态,从侧面回应了比赛胜利的原因。） 3 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$