2025届高考英语复习读后续写练习：寒夜奇迹：从绝望到重生的触动 课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习 寒夜奇迹：从绝望到重生的触动 1 王 均艳 (王) - 题目分析 读后续写 题目再现 范文呈现 努力方向 2 2 Part 1 题目呈现 3 3 续写原文 I was working as a supervisor in a small, rural hospital on a bitter cold Midwestern winter in 1992. I wasn’t even supposed to be working the evening shift, but had agreed to swap with a colleague who needed the night off. Among my many duties was to assist in the emergency room (ER) if our ER nurse needed help. Suddenly, my pager (寻呼机) echoed down the hallway that quiet evening. “I need your help now,” a nurse in ER said urgently. “We have an ambulance out on a little boy. Not many details, but it doesn’t sound good. He was found outside in a snow bank, and the first responders have started CPR.” My heart sank. It was thirty degrees below zero with windchill. The child didn’t have a chance. 4 4 续写原文 I entered the emergency room. The ambulance was just pulling up, and when the gurney (轮床) rolled into the ER it was met with dead silence. CPR was in progress. The blond boy lay lifeless and pale with little hands frozen so solid. Because of the circumstances, we were obligated to continue CPR until his core body temperature was raised. No one in the room seemed to hold any hope of bringing back this little boy. The next hour passed quickly as many ways were conducted to warm him up. I stood silently over him, tears running down my cheeks, as I prayed silently for him and his family. I couldn’t even help understanding the pain his parents were experiencing. 5 5 续写原文 He was the same age as my little boy, with the same beautiful blue eyes and blond hair. I thought of how much I loved my son and tried to remember the last time I told him I loved him so. What if he died tonight? Would he die knowing how much I loved him? I realized, watching a group of doctors and nurses desperately trying to do the impossible, that I hadn’t even hugged him before leaving for work. And I deeply regretted that now. 6 6 段首句 Paragraph 1： Then a miracle occurred. Paragraph 2： Watching the scene, I made a promise to myself that night. 7 7 Part 2 题目分析 8 8 续写原文分析 9 1992 年寒冷的中西部冬夜，本不当值的 “我” 替同事上夜班，在医院担任主管，负责协助急诊室工作。当晚，急诊室接到一个被发现冻在雪堆里的小男孩，送来时已无生命迹象，医护人员持续进行心肺复苏。“我” 看着小男孩，想起自己的儿子，为他和他的家人默默祈祷。在大家努力升温施救的过程中，“我” 深感生命脆弱，后悔上班前没拥抱自己的儿子。 9 点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语； 点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句； 点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语； 点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。 情节构建的重点 10 10 续写思路分析 Para 1： Then a miracle occurred. 接着，奇迹发生了。在医护人员不懈的努力下，小男孩原本毫无反应的身体，突然有了极其微弱的动静。心电监护仪上，那条原本几乎成直线的生命迹象显示线，竟开始出现了极不规律的微弱起伏。刹那间，整个急诊室仿佛时间凝固了一般，所有人都不敢相信自己的眼睛。紧接着，医生们迅速调整治疗方案，加大了对小男孩的救治力度。护士们也更加忙碌起来，密切关注着各项生命体征数据。大家齐心协力，眼神中重新燃起了希望。随着时间的推移，小男孩的心跳逐渐变得有力了一些，身体也开始有了温度。 11 11 续写思路分析 Para 2： Watching the scene, I made a promise to myself that night. 看着这一幕，当晚我对自己许下了一个承诺。我深知生命是如此的脆弱与无常，小男孩的奇迹生还让我深深领悟到，不能再对身边的亲人朋友习以为常，要珍惜每一个相处的瞬间。从那以后，每天上班前，我都会紧紧地拥抱我的儿子，凝视着他的眼睛，认真地告诉他我有多么爱他。我也会在生活中，对家人朋友表达更多的关心和爱意，不再让那些本该说出口的温暖话语，留在心底。我要让每一个我爱的人，都能时刻感受到我的爱与关怀。 12 12 Part 3 范文呈现 13 13 范文呈现 Then a miracle occurred. After continuous efforts of the medical staff, there was a faint movement in the little boy's body that had been unresponsive. On the electrocardiogram monitor, the line indicating the vital signs, which had been almost a straight line, began to show extremely irregular and weak fluctuations. In an instant, it seemed as if time froze in the emergency room. Everyone couldn't believe what they saw. Immediately, the doctors quickly adjusted the treatment plan and increased the intensity of the rescue for the little boy. The nurses also got busier, closely monitoring all the vital signs data. Working together, hope rekindled in their eyes. As time went by, the little boy's heartbeat gradually became a bit stronger, and his body started to warm up. 14 14 范文呈现 Watching the scene, I made a promise to myself that night. I realized that life was so fragile and unpredictable. The little boy's miraculous survival made me deeply understand that I shouldn't take my loved ones for granted any longer. I should cherish every moment of getting along with them. From then on, before going to work every day, I would hug my son tightly, look into his eyes, and tell him earnestly how much I loved him. In daily life, I would also express more care and love to my family and friends. I wouldn't let those warm words that should have been spoken stay in my heart. I wanted everyone I loved to feel my love and concern all the time. 15 15 升级版范文呈现 Then a miracle occurred. After the unremitting efforts of the medical team, a faint stir emerged in the little boy's hitherto unresponsive body. On the electrocardiogram monitor, the line representing his vital signs, which had been almost flat, began to register extremely irregular, feeble undulations. In an instant, the emergency room seemed to be caught in a time - warp, as everyone stared in disbelief. Without hesitation, the doctors promptly adjusted the treatment protocol, intensifying their efforts to save the little boy. The nurses, too, redoubled their efforts, closely observing every nuance of his vital signs. United in their mission, hope once again flickered in their eyes. As moments passed, the little boy's heartbeat gradually strengthened, and his body began to regain warmth. 16 16 升级版范文呈现 Watching this heart - warming scene, I made a solemn vow to myself that night. I came to the profound realization that life is incredibly fragile and fleeting. The little boy's miraculous recovery served as a poignant reminder that I should no longer take my loved ones for granted. Instead, I resolved to cherish every precious moment spent with them. From that day forward, each morning before leaving for work, I would embrace my son tightly, locking eyes with him as I earnestly conveyed my love. In my daily life, I would make a conscious effort to shower my family and friends with more care and affection, ensuring that no heartfelt words of love remained unspoken. I was determined to let those dear to me feel my love and concern at all times. 17 17 Part 4 努力方向 18 18 高级结构 名词性从句 高级结构 三连动 虚拟语气 形容词做状语 无灵主语 19 定语从句 状语从句 （包含倒装句） 强调句 副词做状语 非谓语 （包括独立主格） 19 20 Thank you! $$