2025届高考英语复习读后续写练习：暂别手机三十天：重拾生活本真 课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习 暂别手机三十天：重拾生活本真 1 王 均艳 (王) - 题目分析 读后续写 题目再现 范文呈现 努力方向 2 2 Part 1 题目呈现 3 3 续写原文 My iPhone was missing. One day, it was glued to my palm, and the next…poof! It was gone. I took all the necessary steps to find my phone. I checked jacket pockets, searched our apartment, and I stopped back into Whole Foods and gym. Desperately, I called and texted the phone, and I downloaded a phone-finder app. Bad luck. It was gone. I was reflecting on what it would mean not to have a smart phone—maybe not forever, but possibly for longer than a couple of days. As I heard my husband about to bind me into another two-year contract, I found myself screaming, “No!” I decided to conduct a social experiment. I would not use a smart phone for thirty days. I knew that once I had a replacement in hand, it would not be so easy to get rid of the screen. 4 4 续写原文 Early on, I reached for a phantom (虚幻的) phone more times than I can count. Finally, to have something for my hands to do, I bought a book that had been recommended by more than one friend. I wasn’t able to take photos. This was a loss for me. My Instagram was typically updated every week or so, and I used the camera feature to record places I wanted to revisit, items for my shopping list, and the behaviors of my four children. As an enthusiastic user of the iPhone notepad feature, I ended up buying a physical notebook, which led to more meaningful note taking. 5 5 续写原文 I had more time to truly listen. I had been programmed to ignore everything except what was directly in front of me on the fascinating screen. Without the distraction, I was more present. More sleep, less activity…the thirty-day break was a complete reset on the basics. It also left me with a heightened awareness of how carelessly I had been managing adult life. Getting away from the phone, I opened up to a new way of being. Finally, I managed to stop the constant rush of doing things. 6 6 段首句 Paragraph 1： I began to return to the life that I had abandoned years ago. Paragraph 2： Soon after the experiment, a new iPhone arrived. 7 7 Part 2 题目分析 8 8 续写原文分析 9 作者的 iPhone 丢失后，多方寻找无果。因不想与丈夫签订新的两年合约，决定开展为期 30 天不用智能手机的社会实验。实验初期，她常下意识找手机，后通过看书、买笔记本替代手机功能。没有手机干扰，她能更专注地倾听、享受生活，意识到之前被手机分散了太多精力。 9 点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语； 点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句； 点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语； 点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。 情节构建的重点 10 10 续写思路分析 Para 1： I began to return to the life that I had abandoned years ago. 我开始重新回归到多年前曾抛弃的生活。曾经，阅读纸质书是我最大的爱好，可智能手机的出现让我渐渐遗忘了那种沉浸在文字海洋中的快乐。如今，我又重新捧起一本本经典著作，在午后的阳光下，慢慢翻动书页，感受作者笔下细腻的情感与深刻的思想。我还恢复了晨跑的习惯，沿着河边的小路奔跑，呼吸着清新的空气，欣赏着沿途的风景，看着朝阳一点点升起，心中充满了对生活的热爱。与家人相处的时光也变得更加珍贵，晚上我们会一起玩桌游，欢声笑语回荡在房间里，增进了彼此之间的感情。 11 11 续写思路分析 Para 2： Soon after the experiment, a new iPhone arrived. 在实验结束后不久，一部新的 iPhone 送到了我手中。当我拆开包装，看到那熟悉的屏幕时，心中既兴奋又有些担忧。兴奋的是它能再次为我带来便捷的生活和丰富的信息，担忧的是我会再次陷入对手机过度依赖的怪圈。于是，我给自己制定了严格的使用规则。我卸载了一些容易让人沉迷的娱乐软件，只保留了必要的社交和工作应用。我规定自己每天使用手机的时间不超过两小时，并且在和家人相处、阅读、运动的时候，将手机调至静音状态。通过这些措施，我希望能更好地掌控手机，而不是被它掌控我的生活。 12 12 Part 3 范文呈现 13 13 范文呈现 I began to return to the life that I had abandoned years ago. Reading physical books used to be one of my greatest pleasures, but the advent of smartphones made me gradually forget the joy of being immersed in the ocean of words. Now, I picked up classic works again. In the afternoon sun, I slowly turned the pages, feeling the delicate emotions and profound thoughts described by the authors. I also resumed my morning running routine. Running along the riverside path, I breathed in the fresh air and admired the scenery along the way. Watching the sun rise bit by bit, my heart was filled with love for life. The time spent with my family became more precious. In the evenings, we played board games together. The laughter echoed in the room, strengthening our bond. 14 14 范文呈现 Soon after the experiment, a new iPhone arrived. When I unpacked it and saw the familiar screen, I felt both excited and a bit worried. I was excited because it could bring me convenience and access to abundant information again. However, I was worried that I would fall back into the trap of over - relying on the phone. Therefore, I set strict rules for myself. I uninstalled some entertainment apps that were easy to get addicted to and only kept essential social and work applications. I limited my daily phone - using time to no more than two hours. Also, when I was with my family, reading, or exercising, I would turn my phone to silent mode. Through these measures, I hoped to better control my phone use instead of being controlled by it. 15 15 升级版范文呈现 I embarked on a journey back to the life I had forsaken years ago. Once, delving into physical books was one of my most cherished pastimes, yet the emergence of smartphones gradually lured me away from the enchantment of losing myself in a sea of words. Now, I once again cradled classic volumes in my hands. Bathed in the warm glow of afternoon sunlight, I leisurely turned each page, savoring every emotion and profound insight penned by the authors. Additionally, I reinstated my morning jogging routine. As I trotted along the riverside trail, the crisp, fresh air filled my lungs, and the captivating scenery unfolded before my eyes. Witnessing the sun's gradual ascent, my heart swelled with an overwhelming sense of love for life. Moreover, the time spent in the company of my family took on a newfound significance. In the evenings, we engaged in board - game sessions, our laughter reverberating throughout the room, forging an even stronger family bond. 16 16 升级版范文呈现 Shortly after the experiment's conclusion, a new iPhone found its way into my hands. Upon unwrapping it and laying eyes on the familiar screen, a complex mix of excitement and trepidation coursed through me. The excitement stemmed from the anticipation of the convenience and vast reservoir of information it promised, while the trepidation arose from the fear of slipping back into the quagmire of excessive phone dependence. Thus, I imposed stringent regulations upon myself. I purged several entertainment apps that were notorious for fostering addiction, retaining only the essential social and work - related applications. I restricted my daily phone usage to a maximum of two hours. Furthermore, whenever I was in the company of my family, engrossed in reading, or engaged in physical exercise, I ensured my phone was set to silent mode. Through these initiatives, I aimed to assert greater control over my phone use, rather than allowing it to dictate the rhythm of my life. 17 17 Part 4 努力方向 18 18 高级结构 名词性从句 高级结构 三连动 虚拟语气 形容词做状语 无灵主语 19 定语从句 状语从句 （包含倒装句） 强调句 副词做状语 非谓语 （包括独立主格） 19 20 Thank you! $$