2025届高考英语复习读后续写练习:青年作家的售书之旅与意外波折 课件

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高考英语读后续写语篇练习 青年作家的售书之旅与意外波折 1 王 均艳 (王) - 题目分析 读后续写 题目再现 范文呈现 努力方向 2 2 Part 1 题目呈现 3 3 续写原文 My name is Shelly and I am a young author. I have been writing books for years and they have been published. However, they didn’t sell well. I thought it was time to promote the sales and share my stories with the world by myself. However, I hadn’t expected that this decision would take me on an adventure I could have never imagined. I have always loved the fast-paced atmosphere of this modern city. It keeps my mind sharp and quick. With my bag full of copies of my first book, I set out to sell them. I walked along the busy streets, stopping at every possible bookstore, trying to persuade them to stock my book. But every manager I spoke to gave me the same answer—“Sorry, we are not interested.” 4 4 续写原文 I was sad. I had put my heart and soul into my book, and here I was, facing many rejections. But I refused to give up. I knew that I needed to get my books sold. As I walked, lost in my thoughts, someone tapped my shoulder. I turned around and saw a young man, probably in his mid-twenties, smiling at me. “Excuse me, Miss. I couldn’t help but overhear your conversation with that bookstore manager. I happen to own a small bookstore a few blocks from here. I would be happy to stock your book,” the man said. 5 5 续写原文 I couldn’t believe my luck. I followed the young man to his bookstore. He introduced himself as Alex, and we ended up chatting for hours. He had a love for books and was glad to help a struggling author like me. From that day on, Alex’s bookstore became my go-to place to sell my books. Months went by, and slowly, my books started selling well. Alex and I became good friends, and he even recommended my books to his customers. I was happy and grateful for his support, but my journey was not smooth. 6 6 段首句 Paragraph 1: One day, as I got to the bookstore, I noticed many people outside. Paragraph 2: With the help of our supporters, we were able to reopen the bookstore. 7 7 Part 2 题目分析 8 8 续写原文分析 9 年轻作家雪莉多年来坚持写作,作品虽已出版却销量不佳。为了推广,她带着书到现代都市的书店推销,却屡屡碰壁。就在她几乎绝望时,遇到了书店老板亚历克斯,他愿意帮忙售卖雪莉的书。在亚历克斯的帮助下,书的销量逐渐好转。但故事并未就此一帆风顺。 9 点1:位于续写第一段段首,流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语; 点2:位于续写第一段段尾,流畅衔接第二段段首句; 点3:位于续写第二段段首,续写衔接第二段段首语; 点4:文章结尾升华,给予读者正能量,揭示和强调主题。 情节构建的重点 10 10 续写思路分析 Para 1: One day, as I got to the bookstore, I noticed many people outside. 一天,当我到达书店时,我注意到外面有很多人。我满心疑惑,快步走近,发现书店的门被警戒线拦住,玻璃碎了一地。经过询问,我才知道原来是一辆失控的货车撞上了书店。亚历克斯站在一旁,脸色苍白,眼神中满是痛苦和绝望。他多年的心血在一瞬间化为泡影。周围的顾客们也都在为书店的遭遇而惋惜,他们纷纷表示一直很喜欢这家书店,希望能尽自己的一份力。我看着眼前的景象,心中五味杂陈,既为书店的惨状感到痛心,又为大家的热心而感动。 11 11 续写思路分析 Para 2: With the help of our supporters, we were able to reopen the bookstore. 在支持者们的帮助下,我们得以重新开张书店。大家自发地捐款,帮忙清理废墟,联系装修工人。经过一番紧锣密鼓的筹备,书店焕然一新。重新开业那天,书店里挤满了人,大家都来为我们加油打气。我和亚历克斯站在门口,对每一位进来的顾客表示感谢。经过这次波折,书店不仅恢复了生机,还吸引了更多人的关注。我的书也因为这次事件受到了更多人的青睐,我和亚历克斯的友谊也更加深厚,我们共同见证了困境中团结的力量。 12 12 Part 3 范文呈现 13 13 范文呈现 One day, as I got to the bookstore, I noticed many people outside. Filled with curiosity, I walked quickly towards it and found that the entrance was blocked by a cordon and the glass was shattered all over the ground. After asking around, I learned that a runaway truck had crashed into the bookstore. Alex stood aside, his face ashen and his eyes filled with pain and despair. Years of his hard work had been destroyed in an instant. The surrounding customers were also expressing their regret for the bookstore's misfortune. They all said that they had always loved this bookstore and hoped to do their part. Looking at the scene in front of me, I felt mixed emotions, both heartbroken for the bookstore's situation and touched by everyone's enthusiasm. 14 14 范文呈现 “You are here!” the daughter said in disbelief. Her eyes were filled with surprise and gratitude. She quickly welcomed us into the house. She held my hand tightly and said words of thanks repeatedly, "Little friend, thank you so much. If it weren't for you, I don't know how long my mom would have been delayed on the road." The old woman also looked at me with great relief and said, "Good boy, you've really done a big favor." I scratched my head shyly and said, "It's what I should do." Looking at the warm scene of the mother - daughter reunion, I felt as sweet as eating honey. At that moment, I felt like a hero in the movies, having done something really meaningful. 15 15 升级版范文呈现 One day, upon arriving at the bookstore, I was met with a scene of commotion. A throng of people had gathered outside, piquing my curiosity. Hastening my steps, I discovered that the entrance was cordoned off, with shards of glass strewn across the ground. Inquiries revealed that a careening truck had slammed into the bookstore. Alex, standing nearby, wore a face drained of color, his eyes mirroring the depths of his despair. Years of painstaking efforts had been obliterated in a single, calamitous moment. The customers, equally dismayed, voiced their deep - seated affection for the bookstore and their eagerness to assist. Standing amidst this chaos, I was engulfed by a maelstrom of emotions, grief - stricken by the bookstore's plight yet deeply moved by the outpouring of support. 16 16 升级版范文呈现 Thanks to the unwavering support of our patrons, the bookstore was resurrected from the ashes. People rallied together, donating generously, lending a hand in clearing the wreckage, and coordinating with decorators. Through concerted efforts, the bookstore emerged transformed, radiating a newfound vitality. On the day of its grand reopening, the bookstore was inundated with well - wishers, all eager to celebrate its return. Alex and I, stationed at the entrance, greeted each customer with heartfelt gratitude. This setback, far from being a deterrent, became a catalyst for growth. The bookstore not only regained its former glory but also expanded its reach, and my books, riding the wave of this resurgence, found an even wider audience. Our friendship, forged in the crucible of adversity, grew stronger, a testament to the power of unity and resilience. 17 17 Part 4 努力方向 18 18 高级结构 名词性从句 高级结构 三连动 虚拟语气 形容词做状语 无灵主语 19 定语从句 状语从句 (包含倒装句) 强调句 副词做状语 非谓语 (包括独立主格) 19 20 Thank you! $$

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