Unit 5 Music Reading for Writing 课件-2024-2025学年高中英语人教版（2019）必修第二册

Unit 5 Reading for Writing Write a speech 1 How does music affect our life? 音乐怎样影响着生活？ relieve our pressure offer us comfort help us relaxed and concentrate give us courage and power keep us company express our feelings lead-in Predict What’s the speech about? Sarah Williams 1. Where is she? 2. What is she doing? 3. How does she feel? She is in hospital. She is listening to the music. She feels relieved & happy . The text is a . It talks about . speech how music has had an impact on Sarah’s life You are going to attend the English public Speech Competition, whose topic is “Music and Me” Please write a speech! ANNOUNCEMENT: Paragraph.1 opening: introduce the topic Paragraph.2 closing: calling to action Paragraph.3 thanks to the audience Paragraph.4 music helped me recover Paragraph.5 music gave me good feelings Read for the main ideas Focus on one topic. The impact of music on Sarah Paragraph.1 Paragraph.2 Paragraph.3 Paragraph.4 Paragraph.5 Read for the structure Have a clear structure beginning body ending “Speech Sandwich” Read for details Good morning, ladies and gentlemen.My name is . It's an honor to be here and to share with you the story of . Para. 1 Beginning: ＋ . Useful expressions演讲表达: Introduction Topic Good morning! My name is Sarah Williams. It’s an honour to be here and to share with you the story of how music has had an impact on my life. Have you ever faced a time when things looked dark and you  had no hope at all? Two years ago, I was told I had a serious  disease which was difficult to cure. My body ached all the time and thus I thought I didn’t have much longer to live. I was very afraid and I felt so alone and discouraged. Then one day, I had to go through a two-hour medical treatment. The doctor wanted me to relax so he had me listen to some music, and one of the songs was "Happy". The song made me feel so much better that  from then on I began to listen to music all the time. John A. Logan said,“ Music is the medicine of the mind." And It’s true. Music helped me recover. Q1: What was Sarah's problem? Q2: How did music help her during her difficult time? A serious disease. The “medicine of the mind”. Para. 2 Body: . story & experience Rhetorical question 设问 Quote 引用 Music gave me happiness. When I listened to music, it made my spirits fly like a kite in the wind. Music gave me strength and brought me relief. It was the rock I leant on to become strong and to get through those hard times. Moreover, music gave me hope and a sense of satisfaction. It became my best friend. It spoke words of encouragement to the deepest part of my being. Q3: What impacts does the music have on Sarah? Para. 3 Body: . feelings(impacts) Repetition 重复 Metaphor 暗喻 Simile 明喻 Personification 拟人 [C] Music gave me happiness ... Music gave me strength and brought me relief... Music gave me hope and a sense of satisfaction. [D] ... it made my spirits fly like a kite in the wind. [E] It was the rock I leant on to become strong and to get through those hard times. [F] It became my best friend. It spoke words of encouragement to the deepest part of my being. metaphor (暗喻) _______ personification (拟人) _______ repetition (排比) _______ simile (明喻) _______ E C F D Using rhetorical devices 修辞手法 Read for language 10 Write the body part “Music and Me” Personal story rhetorical devices修辞手法 body Read for details in the endning Of course, I hope none of you have to go through the same kind of suffering that I did . At the same time , we all go through various periods when we feel sad or alone. During those times, music can help you in the same way that it helped me . I hope all of you will somehow begin to treasure music and make it a part of your life. Thank you! beginning Summary of main point Call to action Thank the audience Ending (para.4-5) 12 Rhetorical device（修辞手法） simile(明喻) metaphor(暗喻) Jack works like a horse. That businessman is a real fox. rhetorical question(设问) How could I be so stupid? personification(拟人) The sky cries. quote(引用) As Longfellow says, “Music is ...'' repetition(重复) I came, I saw, I conquered. Example Appreciate the language features 语言鉴赏 Why?To make the speech . vivid, powerful, attractive, appealing &convincing wr Language Features Metaphor暗喻: Personification拟人: Quote引用: Repetition重复: Rhetorical question反问: Simile明喻: E F B C A D 演讲技巧2: Proper rhetorical devices (修辞手法) make the speech vivid and impressive. Have you ever faced a time when things looked dark and you had no hope at all? John A. Logan said, “Music is the medicine of the mind.” Music gave me happiness. When I listened to music.Music gave me strength and brought me relief. It made my spirits fly like a kite in the wind. It was the rock I leant on to become strong... It became my best friend. It spoke words of encouragement to the deepest part of my being. Post-reading Structure Content Language features Make a mind map of the speech Beginning Body Ending Greeting Self-introduction Topic Personal experience (problem-solving pattern) Impact of music (topic+ details) Hope and advice Thank to audience Rhetorical devices Linking words The philosopher Plato once said, “Music gives a soul to the universe, wings to the mind, flight to the imagination and life to everything.” Appreciate the language features in the speech A quote When I’m happy, when I’m sad, when I’m bored, when I’m stressed, I listen to and I create music. Repitition Music surrounded me. It made me who I was, and it gave me a place to belong to. Now, music has these parts--rhythm, melody and harmony --just like our lives. simile Personification Music has rhythm, which is routines and habits we have. Metaphor Proper rhetorical devices make the speech powerful, convincing and successful. The virtual choir The music festival Music and Sarah Music origin由来 influence Definition定义 Author’s attitude Sarah’s suffering苦难 Music’s impact on Sarah have a talent for music form a band have one’s own studio release the albums set up equipment try out as musical performers run food stands Mind map: The virtual choir origin由来 influence Definition定义 be uploaded onto the internet an internet connection have an opportunity to sing connect ordinary people together enable people to add voices to other individuals’ become part of the global community prove to be a positive influence on lives an award-winning composer and conductor come up with the idea fall in love with classical music graduate from university receive a master’s degree in musical composition original compositions get inspired by a girl’s performance lead to the creation of the virtual choir become a worldwide phenomenon a wonderful way thus make the world a better place Author’s attitude Music and Sarah Sarah’s suffering Music’s impact on Sarah have a serious disease go through a medical treatment feel alone and discouraged go through suffering and various periods prove to be a positive influence on lives have an impact on her life Music is the medicine of the mind . Music speaks words of encouragements to the deepest part of her being make her spirits fly like a kite in the wind give her strength and energy bring her relief relive her mental disease get through hard times give her a sense of satisfaction treasure music Write a speech Write a speech 假设你是星光中学的李华，将参加主题为“Music has changed my life”的英语演讲比赛。请撰写一份演讲稿，主要内容包括： 1．个人经历事例； 2．个人感受； 3. 祝愿。 注意： 词数80左右； 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 请适当用上修辞手法。 Outline Beginning Body Ending: Para. 1 Para. 2-3 Para. 4 ① welcome the audience ② introduce oneself ③ introduce the topic ① supply advice to the audience ② thank the audience ③ close the speech ① personal experience ② personal feelings about music (use rhetorical devices) Sample 1 Hello! My name is John. I feel honored to be here to give you a speech about the power of music. Just as someone said, “Where words fail, music speaks.” Music is a special language that everyone can understand. Have you ever experienced a time when things looked dark and you were hopeless? A year ago, I just went to a new school. Failing to keep up with other classmates, I was depressed and lonely. I had no friends and missed my parents so much. Ocassionally I heard a song named “dream it possible”, which gives me encouragement and comfort. Gradually I adapted to the new environment. Music gives me happiness. It comforts me when I feel sad. It touches my heart and makes me relaxed. It helps me go through bad times and become stronger. It teaches me to cherish and feel grateful for what I have. Music is so powerful. Whether you are happy or frustrated, listen to some music. you can never imagine how much it will influence you. Thank you for listening! null 149035.3 $$