2025届高考英语复习读后续写练习：十二岁生日，梦想自行车终成真 课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习 十二岁生日，梦想自行车终成真 1 王 均艳 (王) - 题目分析 读后续写 题目再现 范文呈现 努力方向 2 2 Part 1 题目呈现 3 3 续写原文 The sun was already beginning to sink. The air was somewhat bitter. It was Robert’s 12th birthday. But Robert was walking home alone with his eyes focusing on his worn-out shoes. Kids after school were riding by in twos and threes, ringing their bicycle bells merrily. Robert didn’t raise up his head, but he knew clearly that those guys were wearing big smiles on their faces, and that the strings of their bike wheels were shining in the golden sunlight. “How lucky they are!” Robert thought to himself. He admired everyone who had his own bike. He had dreamed many times that he was one of those who were on their bikes to and from school. He really wanted a bike, especially as a gift for his 12th birthday. However, Robert was clear that his family couldn’t afford it. His parents worked hard only to meet their daily life need. Fortunately, the family lived happily together regardless of the poor condition. Robert should be satisfied with it. But he just couldn’t help feeling sad about not being able to own a bike. 4 4 续写原文 Soon the sun disappeared from nowhere and the street lamps were on, casting Robert’s figure on the ground. Looking down at his moving shadow, Robert stopped his steps suddenly. He stretched out (伸出) both of his arms with his hands holding something tightly, and then raised his right leg and left leg in turn to push himself forward. Definitely, the figure on the ground did as Robert did. It seemed that he was riding a bike. A brand new black handsome bike! A bike that Robert had been dreaming of. The imagination excited and delighted Robert a lot. He sped up his imaginary bike towards his home happily. The air became sweet and gentle. 5 5 段首句 Paragraph 1： When Robert got home, the house was dark and it seemed nobody was there. Paragraph 2： Robert rushed excitedly to the yard only to find an old gray bike. 6 6 Part 2 题目分析 7 7 续写原文分析 8 在罗伯特 12 岁生日这天，他独自走在回家路上，看到其他孩子骑着自行车，心生羡慕。他渴望有一辆自行车作为生日礼物，可家庭贫困，父母无力购买。太阳下山，路灯亮起，他想象自己骑着崭新的黑色自行车，沉浸在喜悦中。回到家时，房子里漆黑一片，似乎没人在家。 8 点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语； 点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句； 点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语； 点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。 情节构建的重点 9 9 续写思路分析 Para 1： When Robert got home, the house was dark and it seemed nobody was there. 当罗伯特到家时，屋里黑漆漆的，好像没人在。他心里一阵失落，原本还期待着回家能看到温馨的生日布置，哪怕只是简单的烛光和父母的笑脸。他缓缓走进屋子，轻声呼唤着爸爸妈妈，回应他的只有自己的回声。就在这时，他注意到桌上有一张纸条，心猛地一紧，赶忙拿起纸条，上面写着：“儿子，去后院看看。” 看到这几个字，他的心瞬间被好奇填满，顾不上换鞋，转身就朝着后院飞奔而去，脑海里不断浮现出各种可能的惊喜。 10 10 续写思路分析 Para 2：Robert rushed excitedly to the yard only to find an old gray bike. 罗伯特兴奋地冲进后院，却只看到一辆旧灰色的自行车。他的脚步猛地顿住，脸上的笑容瞬间消失，取而代之的是深深的失望。他呆呆地站在那里，心里五味杂陈。然而，当他走近自行车时，却发现了不一样的地方。车把上挂着一个崭新发亮的铃铛，车筐里装满了他最爱吃的零食，车座上还放着一张精心制作的卡片，上面写着：“亲爱的罗伯特，生日快乐！我们爱你。” 就在这时，他的父母从树后走了出来，脸上带着温柔的笑容。罗伯特的眼眶瞬间湿润，泪水夺眶而出。他明白了，这辆承载着父母爱意的自行车，比任何崭新昂贵的车子都要珍贵。 11 11 Part 3 范文呈现 12 12 范文呈现 When Robert got home, the house was dark and it seemed nobody was there. Disappointment filled his heart. He had secretly hoped for a warm birthday surprise from his parents. He walked into the house slowly, calling out for his mom and dad, but only his own voice echoed back. Then, he noticed a note on the table. With a racing heart, he picked it up and read, "Go to the backyard, son." Curiosity overwhelmed him. Without bothering to change his shoes, he rushed towards the backyard, his mind filled with all kinds of exciting possibilities. 13 13 范文呈现 Robert rushed excitedly to the yard only to find an old gray bike. His steps halted suddenly, and the smile on his face disappeared, replaced by deep disappointment. He stood there, feeling a mix of emotions. However, as he got closer to the bike, he noticed something different. There was a shiny new bell on the handlebars, a basket filled with his favorite snacks, and a hand - made card on the seat, which read, "Happy 12th Birthday, Robert! We love you." Just then, his parents stepped out from behind a tree, wearing warm smiles. Robert's eyes welled up with tears. He realized that this bike, full of his parents' love, was more precious than any brand - new expensive one. 14 14 升级版范文呈现 When Robert got home, the house was plunged into darkness, giving the impression that nobody was present. A sense of disappointment crept into his heart. Secretly, he had been harbouring hopes of a heart - warming birthday surprise arranged by his parents. Slowly, he made his way into the house, calling out for his mom and dad, yet only the echo of his own voice reverberated through the empty rooms. It was then that a note on the table caught his eye. His heart pounding, he picked it up and read, "Go to the backyard, son." Overwhelmed by curiosity, he dashed towards the backyard without even pausing to change his shoes, his mind abuzz with all sorts of thrilling possibilities. 15 15 升级版范文呈现 Robert rushed excitedly to the yard, only to be greeted by an old gray bike. His steps came to an abrupt halt, and the smile that had adorned his face vanished in an instant, replaced by profound disappointment. Standing there, he was engulfed by a complex mix of emotions. However, as he approached the bike, he noticed several distinctive features. A shiny new bell adorned the handlebars, a basket brimming with his favorite snacks sat on the front, and a hand - crafted card on the seat read, "Happy 12th Birthday, Robert! We love you." Just at that moment, his parents emerged from behind a tree, their faces wreathed in warm smiles. Robert's eyes welled up with tears of joy. He came to realize that this bike, imbued with his parents' deep love, was far more precious than any brand - new, costly one could ever be. 16 16 Part 4 努力方向 17 17 高级结构 名词性从句 高级结构 三连动 虚拟语气 形容词做状语 无灵主语 18 定语从句 状语从句 （包含倒装句） 强调句 副词做状语 非谓语 （包括独立主格） 18 19 Thank you! $$