Unit 3 Writing 课件2024-2025学年沪教版（2024）七年级英语上册

Unit 3 The seasons 第5课时 Writing 单元话题写作 汇报人：Sophie 话题概述 本单元的写作话题是“四季”。此话题的设题方向通常是要求学生介绍一下自己最喜欢的季节。写作时，要注意以下几点: 1.点明所喜爱的季节; 2.重点说明喜爱此季节的原因; 3.突出该季节的主要特征以及可从事的活动。 素材积累：I. 单词运用 背一背 1. festival n. 节日 2. scenery n. 风景；景色 3. pick v. 采；摘 4. comfortable adj. 令人舒适的 5. weather n. 天气 6. snowy adj. 多雪的；下雪的 7. temperature n. 气温；温度 8. bring v. 带来 9. gently adj. 轻轻地 10. activity n. 活动 11. heat n. 炎热 12. colourful adj. 五彩缤纷的 练一练 1. The bad will bring problems for many farmers. 2. Today’s in Heilongjiang Province is -18C. It’s very cold. 3. It’s a day today. I’m going to make a snowman outside. 4. The mother held the baby in her arms. 5. We found that the bed in this hotel was very . 6. Vistors can see many flowers in the garden. weather temperature snowy gently comfortable colourful 素材积累：II. 短语运用 背一背 1. enjoy oneself 过得愉快 2. come back to life 恢复生机 3. spend time (in) doing sth. 花时间做某事 4. come out 出现；盛开 5. different kinds of 各种各样的 6. climb mountains 爬山 7. get together 相聚 8. be good for 对……有好处 练一练 1. As the snow melts and the weather gets warm, everything . 2. When the stars at night, the sky becomes more beautiful. 3. Last weekend, we went to the zoo to see animals. 4. They in Heilongjiang last winter holiday. comes back to life come out different kinds of enjoy themselves 素材积累：III. 佳句储备 背一背 1. It’s nice to go swimming on a hot summer day. 2. The weather in autumn in Beijing is quite nice, but the air is a little bit dry. 3. In spring, the scenery is as beautiful as a painting. 4. I can do lots of outdoor activities in this season. 5. In spring, I usually go out to play with my friends instead of staying at home. 译一译 1. 。 2. 。 3. 。 4. 。 5. 。 在炎热的夏天去游泳很棒 北京秋天的天气很好，但空气有点干燥 春天，风景美如画 在这个季节我可以进行很多户外活动 春天，我通常和朋友出去玩而不是待在家里 佳作赏析 满分范文 Dear Tom, I’m glad to talk about my favourite season with you. I like summer best.① Dalian is near the sea. In summer, it’s hot, so people would like to go to the beach and swim in the sea.② We enjoy ourselves in the water. Sometimes,③ I go fishing by the sea. Many tourists come to Dalian every year and some of them are foreigners. What’s more,③ I can also taste all kinds of④seafood in summer. They're delicious. By the way, what's your favourite season?⑤ Yours, Wang Peng 满分解密 ①首段开门见山地交代出自己最爱的季节。 ②此句中先用hot点明大连夏季的天气情况，再用连词so引出人们所进行的活动,凸显出夏季的炎热。 ③在列举活动时，运用Sometimes及What's more使文章内容层层递进，逻辑清晰。 ④all kinds of 的使用，生动形象地展现了夏季海鲜种类的丰富。 ⑤by the way与特殊疑问句的使用新颖别致，增强了与读者的互动感。 参考译文 亲爱的汤姆: 我很高兴和你谈论我最喜爱的季节。我最喜欢夏季。 大连临海。夏天，天气很热，所以人们想去海边并在海里游泳。我们在水中玩得很开心。有时候,我去海边钓鱼。每年都有许多游客来到大连,其中有一些是外国人。另外，在夏天我也可以品尝到各种各样的海鲜。它们很美味。 顺便问一下，你最喜爱的季节是什么? 谨启， 王鹏 写作运用 I.词语操练(背诵“佳作赏析”的范文并填空) Dear Tom, I’m glad to 1. 2. my 3. season with you. I like 4. best. Dalian is near the sea. In summer, it’s hot, so people 5. 6. 7. go to the beach and swim in the sea. We 8. 9. in the water. Sometimes, I go fishing by the sea. Many 10. come to Dalian every year and some of them are 11. . 12. 13. , I can also taste 14. 15. 16. seafood in summer. They are 17. . 18. 19. 20. , what’s your favourite seasons? Yours, Wang Peng talk about favourite summer would like to enjoy ourselves tourists foreighers What’s more all kinds of delicious By the way 写作运用 II.句型仿写 1. In summer, it’s hot, so people would like to go to the beach and swim in the sea. 夏天，天气很热，所以人们想去海滩并在海里游泳。 仿写1 公园很漂亮，所以我想去拍一些照片。 . 仿写 2 那条裙子很好看，所以埃米想把它买下来。 . The park is beautiful, so I would like to take some photos That skirt is nice, so Amy would like to buy it 写作运用 II.句型仿写 2. What's more, I can also taste all kinds of seafood in summer.另外，在夏天我也可以品尝到各种各样的海鲜。 仿写1 另外，你也可以坐公共汽车去上学。 . 仿写2 另外，她也可以谈论她最喜欢的颜色。 . What’s more, you can also go to school by bus What’s more, she can also talk about her favourite colour 写作运用 Ⅲ.段落操练，将下列句子排成一篇文理通顺的短文 1. My favourite season is autumn. 2. There are four seasons in a year. 3. During this season, there are many fun outdoor activities to enjoy. 4. Sometimes, I go to the farm to pick apples with my family. 5. I usually climb hills with my friends at weekends. 6. So I look forward to it every year. 7. Autumn is a season that brings joy and happiness to people's lives. 排序后的正确顺序是: ____ 2-1-3-5-4-7-6 写作运用 IV.短文改错 文中共有5处语言错误。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在横线上写出加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在横线上写出修改后的词。 Of all the season, I like spring best. In spring, the weather is warm and windy. I go out to the fields and enjoy the warm sunshine on warm days. And on windy days, I can fly kites with my friends. When I watch ∧ kites fly higher and higher in the sky, I will feel exciting and I will forget something unhappy in my everyday life. Every time spring arrive, I have a new hope. So I work harder than before to make it to come true. For me, it is interesting and meaningful every day. 1. seasons 2. the 3. excited 4. arrives 5. to 写作运用 V.学以致用 请根据下面表格内容，以“My Favourite Season--Winter”为题写一篇英语短文。 要求：1. 包含表格里的要点，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯; 2. 不少于 60 词，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 My Favourite Season - Winter There are four seasons in a year and I love winter the most. . 最喜爱的季节 冬天 天气 寒冷，有风，下雪 适合的活动 堆雪人，打雪仗…… 节日 春节 参考范文 My Favourite Season — Winter There are four seasons in a year and I love winter the most. Now let me tell you why. In winter, the weather is cold. There is always wind, and the snow makes winter more interesting than the other seasons. People can enjoy lots of activities in winter. When it snows, people can make snowmen, have snowball fights with their friends and go skiing on hills. What’s more, there is a very important holiday in winter — the Spring Festival. During this holiday, our family will gather together to celebrate it. I like winter. It is a very interesting and meaningful season. The End Sophie $$