2025届高考英语复习读后续写练习：一场误会：从误解到理解的旅程 课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习 一场误会：从误解到理解的旅程 1 王 均艳 (王) - 题目分析 读后续写 题目再现 范文呈现 努力方向 2 2 Part 1 题目呈现 3 3 续写原文 I’ve always prided myself on being a polite and well-mannered gentleman, disliking any behavior that lacks proper politeness. However, in an unexpected turn of events, I found myself becoming the very person I have a strong dislike for. It happened during a wait for a train at the Southampton station. One afternoon, I was waiting for the train to London, and the station was crowded with travelers. With some time to spare, I decided to go into a convenience store to grab a pack of potato chips, which I put into my backpack. With a bit of time before the train’s departure, I took out a book, found a seat, and absorbed myself in reading. 4 4 续写原文 After a while, I noticed a woman beside me casually helping herself to my bag of chips, showing complete disrespect. I was shocked by her rudeness. Without any acknowledgment or permission, she had dived into my snack. While I had the urge to express my dissatisfaction, I held back. I slightly shifted the bag in her direction, hoping she’d take it easy. To my surprise, the woman remained unbothered by the situation and went on pulling out a chip from the pack, giving me a smile. Her actions were so daring that I was left in disbelief. At that moment, I struggled with conflicting emotions. On one hand, I felt like talking to her directly about her actions, but on the other, I resisted the urge, maintaining my calmness. 5 5 续写原文 Then the broadcast announced, “Passengers, please board the train.” I absentmindedly(茫然地)threw my book into my backpack, grabbed the empty potato chip wrapper that had been shared, dropped it into the rubbish bin, and headed straight for the ticket gate. Soon I found my seat on the train. Unexpectedly, the woman’s seat was directly opposite mine. Feeling upset, I reached into my backpack intending to continue my reading so as to calm myself down. 6 6 段首句 Paragraph 1： To my astonishment, I discovered my unopened bag of chips resting safely inside. Paragraph 2： “No worries,” the woman said with a smile. 7 7 Part 2 题目分析 8 8 续写原文分析 9 一向以礼貌著称的 “我” 在南安普顿车站等车时，看到旁边一位女士未经允许吃 “我” 的薯片，虽不满但隐忍未发。上车后，“我” 却发现自己的薯片完好无损，这才意识到误会了女士。此时面对女士，“我” 会作何反应？女士又会如何回应？ 9 点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语； 点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句； 点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语； 点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。 情节构建的重点 10 10 续写思路分析 Para 1： To my astonishment, I discovered my unopened bag of chips resting safely inside. 令我震惊的是，我发现那袋未开封的薯片正安然无恙地躺在背包里。刹那间，我如遭雷击，意识到自己犯下了大错。我一直错怪了这位女士，还在心里对她的行为不满。我的脸瞬间涨得通红，满是羞愧。我缓缓抬起头，目光触及女士的那一刻，恨不得找个地缝钻进去。我深吸一口气，鼓足勇气说道：“实在太抱歉，我之前一直以为您吃的是我的薯片，是我误会您了。” 说完，我局促不安地搓着手，不敢直视她的眼睛。 11 11 续写思路分析 Para 2：“No worries,” the woman said with a smile. “没关系的。” 女士微笑着回应。她的眼神中没有一丝责怪，只有理解与包容。“我看到你看书那么入迷，想着分享薯片也无妨，本应该先问问你的。” 她的这番话，让我更加无地自容。我连忙把那袋未开封的薯片递到她面前，真诚地说：“这次咱们一起吃吧，是我太小心眼了。” 女士欣然接受，我们愉快地分享着薯片，还聊起了各自的旅程。这场误会不仅没有引发不愉快，反而让我们结识了彼此，让原本平淡的旅途增添了一份温暖与美好。 12 12 Part 3 范文呈现 13 13 范文呈现 To my astonishment, I discovered my unopened bag of chips resting safely inside. In an instant, a strong sense of shock hit me, and I realized that I had made a huge mistake. I had been wrongly blaming this lady all along and feeling dissatisfied with her actions in my heart. My face turned red with shame immediately. I slowly raised my head, and when my eyes met the lady's, I felt extremely embarrassed. I took a deep breath and summoned up my courage to say, "I'm really sorry. I thought you were eating my chips before. I misunderstood you." After that, I rubbed my hands nervously, not daring to look her in the eye. 14 14 范文呈现 "No worries," the woman said with a smile. There was no blame in her eyes, only understanding and tolerance. "I saw you were so absorbed in reading, and I thought sharing the chips would be okay. I should have asked you first, though." Her words made me feel even more ashamed. I quickly handed the unopened bag of chips to her and said sincerely, "Let's share them this time. I was too narrow - minded." The lady accepted it gladly. We shared the chips happily and chatted about our respective journeys. This misunderstanding not only didn't cause any unpleasantness but also brought us closer, adding warmth and beauty to the otherwise ordinary journey. 15 15 升级版范文呈现 To my utter astonishment, I unearthed my unopened bag of chips nestled snugly within my backpack. A wave of shock coursed through me, hitting me like a bolt from the blue, as the realization of my colossal blunder dawned. I had unjustly accused this kind - hearted woman, silently seething with discontent over her supposed actions. My cheeks flushed scarlet with shame as I slowly lifted my gaze to meet hers. Summoning every ounce of courage, I stammered, "I'm truly sorry. I wrongly assumed you were munching on my chips. It was a dreadful misunderstanding." My hands fidgeted nervously, betraying my discomfort, and I averted my eyes, unable to bear the weight of her gaze. 16 16 升级版范文呈现 "No worries," the woman replied with a warm smile, her eyes radiating nothing but understanding and compassion. "Observing your deep immersion in the book, I thought sharing a snack might be a pleasant gesture. Alas, I should have sought your permission first." Her words, far from stinging, only deepened my sense of remorse. Without hesitation, I proffered the unopened bag of chips, stating earnestly, "Let's share them now. I was being overly hasty and judgmental." The woman graciously accepted, and we soon found ourselves engaged in a delightful conversation, sharing tales of our travels. This unexpected encounter, birthed from a misunderstanding, had transformed into a heartwarming connection, infusing our journey with a touch of warmth and charm. 17 17 Part 4 努力方向 18 18 高级结构 名词性从句 高级结构 三连动 虚拟语气 形容词做状语 无灵主语 19 定语从句 状语从句 （包含倒装句） 强调句 副词做状语 非谓语 （包括独立主格） 19 20 Thank you! $$