寒假讲义 Unit1-Unit3话题作文讲练 2024-2025学年人教版八年级英语下册

2025年人教版寒假讲义：八年级下册U1-U3话题作文讲练 U1 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 书面表达写作指导及评分标准： 【写作指导】 本篇习作要求写一篇英语发言稿，为大家讲述保护视力的重要性以及一些方法。在写作过程中，首先要认真观察图片中的做法，然后结合自己的经验，从两方面再各给出一条建议。 主题：人与自我之生活与学习 ☆子主题：身心健康，积极向上的生活 主要时态：一般现在时 行文布局： ①引出话题 It's important for us to protect our eyesight. ②提出建议 Should get close to nature take part in outdoor activities do eye exercises/…(自己的建议) lie down and play with the phone Shouldn’ t spend too much time on the computer read while walking/…(自己的建议) ③表达希望/号召 Hope my advice can be helpful. 必备词语： to start with, what's more, also, should, shouldn't, the right way, lie down, play with the phone, spend too much time on…, read while walking, do eye exercises 高光句型： * It's important for us to protect our eyesight. * We should use our eyes in the right way. * It's harmful to our eyes. * It's necessary for us to take part in outdoor activities. 【评分标准】 (一)总则 1.本题总分为15分，按所给内容要点和行文评分。 2.评分时应注意两个方面：内容要点完整；语意正确、行文流畅。(二)要点内容、行文认定及分值 1.内容要点认定及分值 ①完成表格中的空格；(2分) 1) should; 2) shouldn't ②保护眼睛的重要性；(1分) ③如何做; (8分) 说明：每点提示1分，共4分；补充一点2分，共4分 ④恰当结尾。(1分) 2.行文认定及分值 ①文章结构完整，句式多样，衔接自然。(3分) ②文章结构较完整，句式较多样，衔接较自然。(2分) ③文章结构不完整，句式单一，衔接不够自然。(1分) ④行文影响达意。(0分) (三) One possible version: As we all know, eyes play an important part in our life. It's really important for us to protect them. To start with, we should use our eyes in the right way. We shouldn't lie down and play with the phone. And don't spend too much time on the computer. What's more, never read while walking. To relax our eyes, it's necessary for us to take part in outdoor activities like playing ball games every day. We can also spend some time in green parks and forests as much as possible. Also, it's a good habit for us students to do eye exercises every day. Hope my advice can help you keep your eyes bright. Let's enjoy the beautiful world. U2 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 书面表达写作指导及评分标准： 【写作指导】 本篇习作要求同学们介绍做志愿工作的意义、方式以及自己的经历及感受。 主题：人与社会之社会服务与人际沟通 子主题：志愿服务与公共服务主要时态：一般现在时、一般过去时改行文布局： ①介绍志愿工作的意义： Doing volunteer work is good for others, and it's good for us, too. ②介绍志愿工作的方式： • give away money or useful things to people in need • volunteer to clean up the park • give a helping hand to old people ③介绍你参加过的志愿活动： ※地点： •I once spent a whole day volunteering at Elephant’ s World. ※细节： •In the beginning, a zoo keeper showed us around. •After that, we helped feed elephants and clean their homes. ※感受： •It was a meaningful and interesting experience. •I learned the importance of protecting animals. 必备词语： be good for, give away, clean up, help out, volunteer, meaningful, importance 高光句型： *… is good for… *A zoo keeper showed us around. * We helped feed elephants and clean their homes. * It was a meaningful and interesting experience. *I learned the importance of… 【评分标准】 (一)总则 1.本题总分为15分，按所给内容要点和行文评分。 2.评分时应注意两个方面：内容要点完整；语意正确、行文流畅。 (二)要点内容、行文认定及分值 1.内容要点认定及分值 ①完成表格中的空格；(2分)1) give away/ donate;2) clean up ②志愿活动的意义；(2分) ③志愿活动的方式；(3分，每点1分) ④你的志愿工作经历及感受；(4分，每点2分) ⑤恰当结尾。(1分) 2.行文认定及分值 ①文章结构完整，句式多样，衔接自然。(3分) ②文章结构较完整，句式较多样，衔接较自然。(2分) ③文章结构不完整，句式单一，衔接不够自然。(1分) ④行文影响达意。(0分) (三) One possible version: Now, more and more students volunteer to help others. In fact, doing volunteer work is good for others, and it's good for us students, too. There are many ways for us to help others, such as giving away money or things, cleaning up the park and helping out the old people. I once spent a whole day volunteering at Elephant's World. In the beginning, a zoo keeper showed us around, telling us some interesting facts about elephants. Then, we helped feed elephants and clean their homes. It was a meaningful and interesting experience. I learned the importance of protecting animals. U3 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 书面表达写作指导及评分标准： 【写作指导】 本篇习作要求写一篇英语发言稿。根据提示信息，发言稿内容应包含以下内容：学生为什么要做家务、家务活的种类有哪些、介绍自己所做的家务及做家务的感受。 ☆主题：人与自我之做人与做事 ☆子主题：劳动实践 ☆主要时态：一般现在时 ☆行文布局： ①引出话题 · Doing housework is part of life. · We can do some simple chores. ②家务活的种类 · take out the rubbish· do the dishes · sweep the floor ③自己所做的家务 · do the dishes twice a week · wash my clothes every Friday · sometimes cook dinner ④做家务的感受 · give me a sense of pride · learn some useful life skills · help me relax ☆必备词语： not only... but also, develop, independence, do some simple chores, as for me, do the dishes, wash my clothes, useful life skills, share chores ☆高光句型： * Doing housework should be part of life. * It not only helps..., but also... * Students can do some simple chores. * As for me,I usually do housework at home. * Doing housework gives me a sense of pride. * Everyone should spend some time sharing chores at home. 【评分标准】 (一)总则 1.本题总分为15分，按所给内容要点和行文评分。 2.评分时应注意两个方面：内容要点完整；语意正确、行文流畅。 (二)要点内容、行文认定及分值 1.内容要点认定及分值 ①完成表格中的空格；(1分) 1) kinds ②学生做家务的重要性；(2分) ③家务活的种类；(3分)④你做家务的经历；(2分) ⑤你做家务的感受；(2分) ⑥恰当结尾。(2分) 2.行文认定及分值 ①文章结构完整，句式多样，衔接自然。(3分) ②文章结构较完整，句式较多样，衔接较自然。(2分) ③文章结构不完整，句式单一，衔接不够自然。(1分) ④行文影响达意。(0分) (三) One possible version: For students, I think doing housework should be part of life. It not only helps build a comfortable living environment, but also helps them develop independence. It's easy for students to do some simple chores, like taking out the rubbish, doing the dishes and sweeping the floor. As for me, I often do housework at home. I do the dishes twice a week. Every Friday, I wash my clothes after school and on weekends I help with dinner. Doing housework gives me a sense of pride. I can also learn some useful life skills. And it helps me relax after a day's study. So try to spend some time sharing chores at home. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$