Unit 2仿写法写日常习惯（课件）-2024-2025学年六年级英语下册写作突破专项训练（译林版三起）

Unit 2 译林版三年级起点六年级下册 仿写法写日常习惯 CONTENTS 目录 写作方法指引 01 基础知识精讲 02 真题写作练习 03 模拟写作提升 04 模板来自于： 第一PPT https:/// 01 写作方法指引 PART.01 01 写作方法指引-原文指路 好习惯-在家的生活习惯 4 01 写作方法指引-原文指路 在学校的习惯 坏习惯 5 01 写作方法指引 原文：Li Ming gets up and goes to bed early. 句子结构： gets up … goes to bed early … 仿写： Wang Jun gets up and goes to bed early. 原文：He often does homework. 句子结构：… does homework. 仿写： Zhang Ling often does homework. 6 01 写作方法指引 原文：He brushes his teeth in the morning and before bedtime. 句子结构：…brushes his teeth … 仿写： She brushes her teeth in the morning and before bedtime. 原文：He always puts his things in order. 句子结构：… puts his things in order. 仿写： Li Ming always puts his things in order. 7 01 写作方法指引 原文：He usually finishes his homework before dinner. 句子结构： …finishes his homework … 仿写： She always finishes her homework before dinner. 原文：He listens to his teachers at school. He also does well at home. 句子结构：… listens to his teachers … does well… 仿写： She listens to her parents at school. She also does well at school. 8 01 写作方法指引 原文：He keeps his room clean and tidy. He also helps his parents. 句子结构： …keeps his room clean and tidy … helps … 仿写： She keeps her room clean and tidy. She usually helps her teachers. 原文： He often does his homework late and does not go to bed early. 句子结构：… does … homework late and does not go to bed early … 仿写： Mei Mei often does her homework late and does not go to bed early. 9 Having good habits is important. Lily is my good friend. I know her well. She has good habits at school. She takes notes carefully in class. She keeps her books and notebooks neatly in her bag. She always hands in her assignments on time. But she has some bad habits at home. She likes eating snacks and lying on the sofa. She spends a lot of time on her phone. She often gets up late on weekends. And she sometimes leaves her clothes everywhere. To be a better girl, Lily should try to form good habits at home too. 01 写作方法指引-示例 介绍拥有良好习惯的意义 从多个方面阐述习惯 总结良好 的习惯的必要性 Having good habits is important. Lily is my good friend. I know her well. She has good habits at school. She takes notes carefully in class. She keeps her books and notebooks neatly in her bag. She always hands in her assignments on time. But she has some bad habits at home. She likes eating snacks and lying on the sofa. She spends a lot of time on her phone. She often gets up late on weekends. And she sometimes leaves her clothes everywhere. To be a better girl, Lily should try to form good habits at home too. Having good habits is important. Lily is my good friend. I know her well. She has good habits at school. She takes notes carefully in class. She keeps her books and notebooks neatly in her bag. She always hands in her assignments on time. But she has some bad habits at home. She likes eating snacks and lying on the sofa. She spends a lot of time on her phone. She often gets up late on weekends. And she sometimes leaves her clothes everywhere. To be a better girl, Lily should try to form good habits at home too. Having good habits is important. Lily is my good friend. I know her well. She has good habits at school. She takes notes carefully in class. She keeps her books and notebooks neatly in her bag. She always hands in her assignments on time. But she has some bad habits at home. She likes eating snacks and lying on the sofa. She spends a lot of time on her phone. She often gets up late on weekends. And she sometimes leaves her clothes everywhere. To be a better girl, Lily should try to form good habits at home too. 02 基础知识精讲 PART.02 02 基础知识精讲-句型 1.引入话题-介绍拥有良好习惯的意义 参考句型： Having good habits is very… It can help us lead…. It can also make us more …in ….  Good habits are of great…. Having good habits is… 参考单词： meaningful; a healthy life; efficient; significance; important 12 02 基础知识精讲-句型 2.从多个方面阐述习惯 Good habits-在家的习惯 Li Ming gets up and goes to bed early. He often does homework. He brushes his teeth in the morning and before bedtime. He always puts his things in order. He usually finishes his homework before dinner. 13 02 基础知识精讲-句型 2.从多个方面阐述习惯 Good habits-在学校的习惯 He listens to his teachers at school. He also does well at home. He keeps his room clean and tidy. He also helps his parents. Bad habits But Liu Tao has some bad habits. He often does his homework late at night and does not go to bed early. He sometimes feels sleepy in the morning. 14 02 基础知识精讲-句型 2.从多个方面阐述习惯 Suggestions: Li Ming should do more sports and do better at school. He should listen to his teachers carefully in class and finish his homework on time. 15 02 基础知识精讲-语法 频率副词 定义：频率副词是用来表示动作发生的频率程度的副词。它们能够让我们更准确地描述一个动作是经常发生、偶尔发生还是几乎不发生等情况。 常见的频率副词：always（总是）usually（通常）often（经常）sometimes（有时）seldom（很少）hardly ever（几乎从不）never（从不） 频率副词 在句子中的位置 一般情况：频率副词通常放在实义动词之前，be 动词、助动词或情态动词之后。 特殊情况：如果句子中有多个助动词或情态动词，频率副词一般放在第一个助动词或情态动词之后。 翻译句子 我很少看电视。 ___________________________________________ 他通常在早上跑步。 ___________________________________________ 他们从不迟到。 ___________________________________________ 02 基础知识精讲-语法 I seldom watch TV. He usually runs in the morning. They are never late. 03 模拟写作提升 PART.03 模拟写作提升1 你了解你的朋友吗?你知道他/她在生活和学习方面分别有什么习惯吗?请根据下面的提示,以“My friend’s habits”为题写一写你朋友的习惯,注意用第三人称。 提示： Good habits: put ... in order, finish one's homework on time, listen carefully Bad habits: go to bed late, watch TV, play games, make ... dirty and messy My friend's habits 参考句型： Having good habits is ______. ______is my good friend. He has ______at school. He ______in class. He ______ in order in his desk, He always ______on time. But he has ______at home. He likes ______and ______. He spends ______ on TV. He often ______. And he usually ______. To be a ______ boy, ______ should ______. 参考词汇： habit, important, friend, know, well, at school, listen to, teacher, carefully, put...in order, school thing, finish, homework, on time, at home, like doing, watch TV, play computer games, spend time on, go to bed late, dirty, messy 21 My friend’s habits Having good habits is important. Jack is my good friend. I know him well. He has good habits at school. He listens to teachers carefully in class. He puts his school things in order in his desk. He always finishes his homework on time. But he has some bad habits at home. He likes watching TV and playing computer games. He spends much time on TV. He often goes to bed late. And he usually makes his room dirty and messy. To be a better boy, Jack should try to form good habits at home too. 范文1： 介绍拥有良好习惯的意义 从多个方面阐述习惯 总结良好 的习惯的必要性 22 模拟写作提升2 李明是一名六年级的学生，他每天早睡早起，但他不喜欢锻炼身体。在家时他经常做家务，周末还会照看(look after)自己的小妹妹。但李明有时上课不认真听讲，不按时完成作业。请你给李明的习惯做分析和点评(使用第三人称)。 要求：语句通顺，语法正确，不少于6句话。 23 参考句型： Having good habits is _______. _______in Grade _______ has _______ and _______habits. He sleeps and gets up _______. It's _______ for his health and gives him _______. He often _______at home. On weekends, he _______. He's _______. He doesn't like sports. It may _______. Sometimes he doesn't _______. This can make his study _______. He should _______. 参考词汇： habit（习惯）important（重要的）grade（年级） healthy（健康的）energy（精力） chore（家务） kind（友善的） helpful（有帮助的） sport（运动） listen（听） homework（作业） study（学习） 24 Having good habits is important. Li Ming in Grade Six has good and bad habits. He sleeps and gets up early. It's good for his health and gives him energy. He often does chores at home. On weekends, he looks after his little sister. He's kind and helpful. He doesn't like sports. It may hurt his health later. Sometimes he doesn't listen well in class and doesn't finish homework on time. This can make his study bad. He should keep good habits, like doing sports, listening more and doing homework on time. 范文2： 介绍拥有良好习惯的意义 从多个方面阐述习惯 总结良好 的习惯带来的影响 25 04 真题写作练习 PART.03 请你根据所给图片提示，写一篇英文短文和大家分享一下你在学习和生活上的好习惯。 要求：语句通顺，语法正确，不少于6句话。 真题写作练习-江苏常州 27 参考句型： Good habits are...I have some good habits in...I... every day. After..., I...Then I... At school, I... After school, I... I also like... in my free time. These habits help me... What about you? Do you have...? 参考词汇： habit（习惯）important（重要的）get up（起床）make the bed（整理床铺）neatly（整洁地）breakfast（早餐）on foot（步行）listen to（听）carefully（认真地）take notes（做笔记）finish homework（完成作业）、read books（读书）free time（空闲时间）help（帮助） 28 Good habits are very important. I have some good habits in my study and life. I get up early every day. After getting up, I make my bed neatly. Then I have breakfast and go to school on foot. At school, I listen to the teacher carefully and take notes. After school, I finish my homework first before playing. I also like reading books in my free time. These habits help me a lot in my study and life. What about you? Do you have any good habits? 范文3： 介绍拥有良好习惯的意义 从多个方面阐述习惯 总结良好的习惯带来的影响 29 Thank you! $$