2025届高考英语复习读后续写练习：挑战马背特技：突破自我的电视之旅 课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习 挑战马背特技：突破自我的电视之旅 1 王 均艳 (王) - 题目分析 读后续写 题目再现 范文呈现 努力方向 2 2 Part 1 题目呈现 3 3 续写原文 Never in my wildest imagination did I picture myself standing on the back of a running horse. I’m not a cowgirl and don’t even ride horses for pleasure. But I was doing a television fitness show, and someone in the group had the bright idea that we should go to the rodeo (牛仔竞技表演) grounds and ask the trick rider if they could teach me a stunt (特技表演) to do on camera. We could use this short video as the new opening to the show. I agreed the stunt would be eye-catching and prove how flexible a fit person can be. That was how I ended up at the rodeo grounds with a camera group, watching the remarkable performances of three talented young cowgirls. Once their show was over, we approached them, detailing our ideas for the television show. 4 4 续写原文 The cowgirls asked me which particular stunt I was interested in learning. I especially liked one stunt — one of the girls led a horse to continuously and slowly run around the grounds while one of the other girls ran across the grounds toward a small trampoline (蹦床). It was timed perfectly so that she jumped onto the trampoline, up into the air, and then onto the horse’s back. As she landed on its back, she stood up and stretched her arms outward as the horse continued slowly running. It looked impressive. They talked me through the necessary moves, stressing the timing since I would need to be in the air at the correct time when the horse ran past. I alone would judge the speed of the horse and my own speed to jump onto the horse on time. It was clearly difficult. I was a little hesitant, afraid of being unable to do that well and slowing down the filming. But I knew the most important thing for me was to concentrate on the task at hand. 5 5 段首句 Paragraph 1： The first time out, I hit the horse’s back part and fell to the ground. Paragraph 2： At 6: 00 pm, we completed the stunt filming, with my knee injured. 6 6 Part 2 题目分析 7 7 续写原文分析 8 作者原本不是骑马爱好者，却因参与电视健身节目，要学习在马背上的特技表演，用于节目开场。在牛仔竞技表演场地，作者观看了三位女牛仔的精彩表演后，选定了一个难度较高的特技，即借助蹦床跳到奔跑的马背上并站立。女牛仔们向作者讲解了动作要点，强调了时机的重要性。尽管作者有些犹豫，但还是决定专注完成任务。 8 点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语； 点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句； 点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语； 点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。 情节构建的重点 9 9 续写思路分析 Para 1： The first time out, I hit the horse’s back part and fell to the ground. 第一次尝试时，我没能把握好时机，只碰到了马的后半部分，便重重地摔倒在地上。身体传来的疼痛让我瞬间有些恍惚，但我骨子里的那股不服输的劲儿立刻涌了上来。女牛仔们迅速跑过来，一边查看我的伤势，一边安慰我。她们说第一次失败很正常，还细心地再次给我讲解动作的关键之处，鼓励我不要害怕。我深吸一口气，重新调整状态，眼睛紧紧盯着奔跑的马，心中默默计算着起跳的时机。当马再次靠近时，我鼓足全身的力气，奋力一跃。这一次，我成功地落在了马背上，虽然身体还在摇晃，但我知道我已经迈出了成功的第一步。 10 10 续写思路分析 Para 2：At 6: 00 pm, we completed the stunt filming, with my knee injured. 下午 6 点，我们终于完成了特技拍摄，此时我的膝盖受了伤。不过，看着拍摄完成的精彩画面，我心中的喜悦远远超过了身体的疼痛。女牛仔们纷纷过来祝贺我，摄影团队也对我的表现赞不绝口。当这个短片作为节目开场播出后，引起了巨大的反响。观众们对这个独特的开场十分惊艳，也对我的勇气和坚持表示钦佩。这次经历让我明白，只要勇于挑战，敢于突破自己的舒适区，就能收获意想不到的成果，也能发现自己无限的潜力。 11 11 Part 3 范文呈现 12 12 范文呈现 The first time out, I hit the horse’s back part and fell to the ground. The impact was so strong that I felt a sharp pain all over my body. However, I didn't let the pain defeat me. I got up quickly, with a determined look on my face. The cowgirls, who were very experienced, rushed towards me right away. They carefully examined my body to make sure I was not seriously hurt. Then they gave me more detailed instructions. "You need to be more confident and keep your eyes on the horse's speed all the time," one of them said. Taking a deep breath, I gathered my courage for another attempt. I focused intently on the approaching horse and jumped at the right moment. Fortunately, I landed on the horse's back, though I was still a bit unstable. 13 13 范文呈现 At 6: 00 pm, we completed the stunt filming, with my knee injured. Despite the throbbing pain in my knee, I was filled with a strong sense of achievement. The cowgirls congratulated me sincerely, and the camera crew also gave me a lot of praise. When the short video was shown as the opening of the television show, it became an instant hit. The audience was deeply impressed by the exciting stunt and my perseverance. This experience taught me a valuable lesson. It made me understand that as long as I have the courage to step out of my comfort zone and persevere in the face of difficulties, I can overcome any challenge and discover my own potential. 14 14 升级版范文呈现 The first time out, I hit the horse’s back part and tumbled to the ground. The impact was so intense that a sharp pain shot through my entire body. Nevertheless, I refused to be vanquished by the pain. I sprang up promptly, wearing a resolute expression. The experienced cowgirls dashed towards me in an instant. They scrutinized my body meticulously to ensure I wasn't severely injured. Subsequently, they imparted more elaborate instructions. "You must be more self - assured and keep a close eye on the horse's speed throughout," one of them advised. Taking a deep breath, I mustered up my courage for another try. I fixed my eyes intently on the approaching horse and leaped at the opportune moment. Thankfully, I landed on the horse's back, albeit still a bit unsteady. 15 15 升级版范文呈现 At 6: 00 pm, we wrapped up the stunt filming, with my knee injured. Despite the persistent pain in my knee, a profound sense of accomplishment welled up within me. The cowgirls offered their sincere congratulations, and the camera crew heaped praise upon me as well. When the short video was presented as the opening of the television show, it became an immediate sensation. The audience was deeply captivated by the thrilling stunt and my unwavering perseverance. This experience taught me a precious lesson. It made me realize that as long as I possess the courage to break free from my comfort zone and remain steadfast in the face of hardships, I can surmount any obstacle and uncover my latent potential. 16 16 Part 4 努力方向 17 17 高级结构 名词性从句 高级结构 三连动 虚拟语气 形容词做状语 无灵主语 18 定语从句 状语从句 （包含倒装句） 强调句 副词做状语 非谓语 （包括独立主格） 18 19 Thank you! $$