Module 2仿写法写某人过去和现在的变化（课件）-2024-2025学年五年级英语下册写作突破专项训练（外研版三起）

Module 2 外研版三起五年级下册 仿写法写某人过去和现在的变化 CONTENTS 目录 写作方法指引 01 基础知识精讲 02 真题写作练习 03 模拟写作提升 04 模板来自于： 第一PPT https:/// 01 写作方法指引 PART.01 01 写作方法指引-原文指路 介绍过去 介绍现在 4 01 写作方法指引 原文：Twenty years ago, Mr Li was a teacher. 句子结构： … years ago … was a... 仿写： Ten years ago, he was a doctor. 原文： He taught Chinese. 句子结构： …taught… 仿写: He played football. 5 01 写作方法指引-示例 This is Lingling's grandma. She was a singer in the past. She sang many wonderful songs. Now she doesn't work because she has retired. But she doesn't stop learning. She is learning painting now. She thinks it's enjoyable and meaningful. She is really an energetic grandma. 介绍过去 介绍现在 结束语 This is Lingling's grandma. She was a singer in the past. She sang many wonderful songs. Now she doesn't work because she has retired. But she doesn't stop learning. She is learning painting now. She thinks it's enjoyable and meaningful. She is really an energetic grandma. This is Lingling's grandma. She was a singer in the past. She sang many wonderful songs. Now she doesn't work because she has retired. But she doesn't stop learning. She is learning painting now. She thinks it's enjoyable and meaningful. She is really an energetic grandma. This is Lingling's grandma. She was a singer in the past. She sang many wonderful songs. Now she doesn't work because she has retired. But she doesn't stop learning. She is learning painting now. She thinks it's enjoyable and meaningful. She is really an energetic grandma. 02 基础知识精讲 PART.02 02 基础知识精讲-句型 1.描述过去 参考句型： ... was...in the past. ... ... did... ...years ago, ... was... …was...then... ... liked... ... years ago, ... were ... . ... lived in a ... . ... was a ... . 参考单词：人物状态类 young（年轻的）beautiful（美丽的）handsome（英俊的）strong（强壮的）shy（害羞的） 8 02 基础知识精讲-句型 活动类 play（玩耍）study（学习）read（阅读）swim（游泳）run（跑步） 地点类 small（小的）old（旧的）quiet（安静的） 2.描述现在 参考句型： Now, ... has changed...... can...now. ... likes...in one's spare time. 9 02 基础知识精讲-句型 参考句型： Now ... are ... , but ... . ... lives in ... . ... doesn't ... . ... spends ... in the park and ... with his friends. ... is content and enjoys ... life every day. 参考单词： 人物状态类 confident（自信的）independent（独立的）active（活跃的）happy（快乐的）mature（成熟的） 人物状态类 confident（自信的）independent（独立的）active（活跃的）happy（快乐的） mature（成熟的） 活动类 surf（上网冲浪）work out（锻炼）travel（旅行）volunteer（做志愿者）shop（购物） 地点类 modern（现代的）spacious（宽敞的）busy（繁忙的）colorful（多彩的）vibrant（充满活力的） 10 02 基础知识精讲-句型 活动类 surf（上网冲浪）work out（锻炼）travel（旅行）volunteer（做志愿者）shop（购物） 地点类 modern（现代的）spacious（宽敞的）busy（繁忙的）colorful（多彩的）vibrant（充满活力的） 11 02 基础知识精讲-语法 一般现在时 vs 一般过去时 定义对比 一般现在时： 表示经常发生的动作、存在的状态或习惯性的行为。 例如：I go to school by bus every day.（我每天乘公共汽车去上学。）这句话描述的是一种日常的、反复进行的行为。 也可用于表示客观事实、真理等。 例如：The earth goes around the sun.（地球绕着太阳转。） 这是一个永恒不变的自然真理。 一般过去时： 主要用于表示过去某个特定时间里发生的动作或存在的状态。例如：I watched a movie last night.（我昨晚看了一部电影。）“last night” 表明动作发生在过去的一个特定时间。 结构对比 一般现在时： 当主语不是第三人称单数（I、you、we、they 等）时，谓语动词用原形。 例如：We play football on Sundays.（我们在周日踢足球。） 当主语是第三人称单数（he、she、it 等）时，谓语动词要使用第三人称单数形式（一般是在动词原形后加 -s 或 -es）。 例如：She reads books every evening.（她每天晚上读书。） 一般过去时： 一般情况下，谓语动词用过去式。动词过去式的构成分为规则变化和不规则变化。 规则变化： 一般在动词原形末尾加 -ed，如：work - worked。 以不发音的字母 e 结尾的动词，在词尾加 -d，如：like - liked。 以 “辅音字母 + y” 结尾的动词，把 y 变为 i，再加 -ed，如：study - studied。 重读闭音节且末尾只有一个辅音字母的动词，要双写这个辅音字母再加 -ed，如：stop - stopped。 不规则变化： 例如，go - went，see - saw，do - did 等 时间状语对比 一般现在时：常与 always（总是）、usually（通常）、often（经常）、sometimes（有时）、every day/week/month/year（每天 / 周 / 月 / 年）等时间状语连用。 一般过去时： 常与 yesterday（昨天）、last night/week/month/year（昨晚 / 上周 / 上个月 / 去年）、...ago（... 以前）、in + 过去的年份（in 2020 等）等时间状语连用。 用法示例对比 一般现在时： 用于陈述现在的习惯或爱好：She loves dancing.（她喜欢跳舞。） 用于描述客观存在的状态：The sky is blue.（天空是蓝色的。） 一般过去时： 用于叙述过去的经历：I met an old friend on the street yesterday. （我昨天在街上遇到了一个老朋友。） 用于描述过去的状态：He was a student ten years ago. （他十年前是个学生。） 用所给动词的适当形式填空。 I often __________ (go) to school by bike. But yesterday I _________ (go) to school on foot. She usually ________ (read) books in the evening. But last night she ________ (watch) TV. We ________ (play) basketball every Sunday. But last Sunday we ________ (go) swimming. 02 基础知识精讲-语法 go went reads watched play went 03 模拟写作提升 PART.03 模拟写作提升1 明明的爷爷过去是一名画家(painter),他画过很多画。现在他退休了(doesn’t work),他正在学习英语。请你根据图片提示,帮他介绍一下他的爷爷,可适当发挥想象。 要求:语句通顺,无语法错误,50词左右。要求: 1.书写规范，正确使用标点符号。 2.语言表达流畅。 3.不少于 50 词。 参考句型： ... was...in the past. ... did...Now ... . doesn't work because...But ... doesn't stop...... is doing...now.... thinks... 参考单词： grandpa（爷爷）painter（画家）paint（绘画）picture（画）retire（退休）learn（学习）English（英语）interesting（有趣的）useful（有用的）active（积极的） 21 范文3： 介绍过去 介绍现在 结束语 This is Mingming's grandpa. He was a painter in the past. He painted many beautiful pictures. Now he doesn't work because he has retired. But he doesn't stop learning. He is learning English now. He thinks it's interesting and useful. He is really an active grandpa. 22 模拟写作提升2 请你根据表格提示写一篇小短文，描述一下小明的变化。 This is Xiaoming. Twenty years ago, he was nine years old. ________________________________________________________ Xiaoming twenty years ago short, thin a good pupil couldn’t ride a bike liked playing football Now tall, strong a doctor can play basketball like watching TV 23 参考句型： ...years ago, ... was...was...then... liked...in one's free time. Now, ... has changed...... can...now. ... likes...in one's spare time. 参考单词： ago（以前）short（矮的）thin（瘦的）student（学生）ride a bike（骑自行车）play football（踢足球）free（空闲的）tall（高的）strong（强壮的）doctor（医生）play basketball（打篮球）hobby（爱好）watch TV（看电视）spare time（业余时间）change（变化）different ways（不同方面） 24 This is Xiaoming. Twenty years ago, he was nine. He was short and thin. He was a good student at school. But he couldn't ride a bike. He liked playing football when free. Now, Xiaoming has changed much. He is tall and strong. He is a doctor. He can play basketball well now. His hobby has changed too. He likes watching TV in his free time. Time has made many changes to Xiaoming in different ways. 范文2： 介绍过去 介绍现在 结束语 25 04 真题写作练习 PART.03 请写一篇短文介绍一下自己的家人,比如他们的年龄、工作、爱好等。 要求: 1.句子通顺,思路清晰有条理。 2.不少于六句,开头已给出,不计人总句数。 真题写作练习-四川成都 27 参考句型： _______ years ago, _______ _______ were _______. _______ lived in a _______. _______ was a _______. Now _______ are _______, but _______. _______ lives in _______. _______ doesn't _______. _______ spends _______ in the park and _______ with his friends. _______ is content and enjoys his life every day. 参考单词：  ten years ago, grandpa, eyes, bright, live, village house, farmer, now, dim, kindness, modern apartment, city, farm work, spend, days, take walks, park, play chess, friends, content, enjoy life 28 My Grandpa Ten years ago, my grandpa's eyes were bright. He lived in a village house. He was a farmer. Now his eyes are a bit dim, but still full of kindness. He lives in a modern apartment in the city. He doesn't do farm work anymore. He spends his days taking walks in the park and playing chess with his friends. He is content and enjoys his life every day. 范文3： 介绍过去 介绍现在 结束语 29 Thank you! $$