内容正文:
2025河北
英 语
主题写作册
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第二部分 高频主题三阶写作指导
人与自然
主题10 环境污染及原因,环保意识和行为(2018)
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【教材单元链接】
人教版 七(下)Unit 5 动物园的动物
九(全)Unit 13 保护环境
冀教版 八(下)Unit 2 动物是我们的朋友
八(下)Unit 8 拯救我们的地球
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一阶 素材积累与训练
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素材积累
短语与搭配
破坏环境的行为及影响
1.cut down砍伐
2.pour waste water into向……里排放废水
3.throw litter around/here and there到处扔垃圾
4.waste water resource浪费水资源
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5.be harmful to/be bad for对……有害
6.become worse and worse 变得越来越糟糕
保护环境的做法
1.turn off关掉
2.clean up打扫;清除
3.recycle books and paper回收利用书和纸
4.stay/keep away from远离……
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5.prevent…from polluting the environment阻止……污染环境
6.protect…from… 保护……免受……
7.make a contribution/contributions to为……做贡献
8.try one’s best to do sth. 尽某人的最大努力做某事
9.call on sb. to do sth. 号召某人做某事
10.make a difference起作用;有影响
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11.make the world a better place to live in 让世界变成一个更
好的居住地
12.take measures/action to do sth. 采取措施/行动做某事
13.It’s our duty to do sth. 做某事是我们的责任。
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句型
开头句
1.The earth is our home. However, our earth is facing a lot of
serious problems.
2.As we all know, air pollution has become a serious problem.
3.As is known to everyone, animals are our friends. However,
many kinds of animals are in danger now.
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中间句
环境问题
1.The river was dirty. Even the bottom of the river was full of
rubbish. 【人教版九(全)U13】
2.Making a loud noise in public is also a kind of pollution. It
not only disturbs others but also does great harm to people’s
hearing.
3.The more cars there are in the street, the more serious the
air pollution is.
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4.Many people always use plastic bags, which are bad for the
environment.
动物问题
1.Some people kill animals for their meat or fur.
2.People cut down many trees, so animals can’t find enough
food and lose their homes.
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保护环境的行为
1.We should stop factories from pouring waste water directly
into rivers.
2.We can use energy-saving electricity lights as much as
possible instead of the traditional lights.
3.I never take wooden chopsticks or plastic forks when I buy
takeaway food. I use the ones at home. 【人教版九(全)U13】
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4.We encourage students to collect waste paper and soft drink
cans. Then we sort them so that they can be recycled.
5.We can save water by taking shorter showers and turning off
the tap when we brush our teeth.
6.Bring your own shopping bag! Bring your own bag when you
go shopping. It’s a good way to reduce packaging. 【冀教版八
(下)U8】
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7.Save electricity! Turn off the lights when you leave a room.
Turn off the television and shut down the computer when you
are not using them.【冀教版八(下)U8】
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保护动物的行为
1.We should call on everyone not to kill endangered animals.
2.We should protect them and stop them from disappearing.【冀
教版八(下)U3】
3.The number of tigers in the wild is quickly decreasing and
we must do something about it.【冀教版八(下)U3】
4.If possible, we can take part in some activities to learn more
about wild animals and try to protect them.
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5.What’s more, we should advise the government to make laws
so that they can get enough protection.
共建绿色校园
1.Firstly, our school plants many trees and flowers every year.
2.Secondly, to avoid waste, we reuse textbooks.
3.Thirdly, each of us students is a cleaner. If we see garbage,
we will actively pick it up and put it in the bin.
4.When we leave the classroom, we turn off the lights.
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结尾句
号召一起行动
1.So together, our actions can make a difference and lead to a
better future! 【人教版九(全)U13】
2.I think it’s necessary for everyone to protect the
environment. If we work together, we can make the world a
better place.
3.It’s not too hard to protect the environment. We just need to
try. 【冀教版八(下)U8】
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4.It’s time for us to take responsibility for the world.
强调保护环境的重要性
1.We should do everything we can to protect the earth,
because we have only one earth.
2.Only when we form the good habit of protecting the
environment can we make the earth more beautiful tomorrow.
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俗语/谚语
1.Save water, shame of waste. 节约用水,浪费可耻。
2.Don’t let our tears become the last drop of water on the earth.
不要让我们的眼泪成为地球上的最后一滴水。
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技巧训练
1.Firstly, I will take public transportation.(用as much as
possible与when引导的时间状语从句扩写句子)
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Firstly, I will take public transportation as much as possible when I go out.
2.I save water by watering the flowers with used water.
(用It’s necessary for…to do…升格句子)
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It’s necessary for me to save water by watering the flowers with used water.
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3.It is better to use china cups and cloth bags. They can be
used many times.(用because引导的原因状语从句升格句子)
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It is better to use china cups and cloth bags because they can be used many times.
4.I recycle more and the earth will become cleaner.(用“the+比
较级, the+比较级”升格句子)
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The more I recycle, the cleaner the earth will become.
5.使用过多的塑料袋对我们的环境有害。(汉译英)
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Using too many plastic bags is harmful to our environment.
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二阶 典例探究
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假定你是李华,你的外国朋友Alan上周来你校参观。回去后,
他给你发来邮件想了解一些信息。请根据以下内容,给他回复一
封邮件。
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Dear Li Hua,
I had a good time in your school last week. It is so
beautiful and clean. I want to know, as students,
1.how you make the school green;
2.how you keep the school clean;
3.how you reuse waste;
4.how you save energy.
I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours,
Alan
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注意:(1)邮件中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
(2)词数80个左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Alan,
I am pleased to hear from you.________________________
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Yours,
Li Hua
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步骤一 审好题
1.文体:作文要求写一封邮件,文体为________;
2.人称:描述与自己相关的行为时主要使用__________,描述学
校信息时主要使用__________;
3.时态:作文主要描写学校的现状和自己的行为,写作时主要使
用____________。
应用文
第一人称
第三人称
一般现在时
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步骤二 构思框架,列出要点
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步骤三 遣词造句,连句成文
Dear Alan,
I am pleased to hear from you. _______________________
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I’m also glad you like our school.
Firstly, our school plants many trees and flowers every
year. Secondly, each student is a cleaner. If we see garbage,
we will actively pick it up and put it in the bin.
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Yours,
Li Hua
Thirdly, to avoid waste, we reuse textbooks. At the same
time, we will also use old objects to make some reusable
objects, such as using cans as pen holders. Finally, to save
energy, we turn off the tap when brushing our teeth. When
we leave the classroom, we turn off the lights. These are
some of our ways. Do you usually do these too?
I’m looking forward to your reply.
三阶 写作实战
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第1篇
假如你是李华,在暑假的乡村旅游中,你发现了一些游客的
不文明行为。请根据下表信息给英文报栏目的编辑写一封邮件,
反映这些问题并给出建议。
Uncivilized
behaviors
(不文明行为) 1.threw rubbish everywhere
2.picked flowers
3.climbed trees
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Suggestions 1. put rubbish into bins
2. …
注意:(1)邮件中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
(2)词数80个左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
续表
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Dear Editor,
I was shocked to see some uncivilized behaviors during my
summer vacation trip to a village.___________________________
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Some visitors threw rubbish
everywhere and left plastic bags flying around. Some picked
flowers without permission, just to take photos so that they
could show off online. And some climbed trees for fun,
which might result in serious accidents. I think it is wrong
to enjoy oneself at the cost of others.
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Visitors are supposed to protect the environment, like
putting rubbish into proper bins. And they should be careful
not to cause trouble to the locals and avoid dangerous
activities. By doing so, a greener, cleaner and more civilized
new village will be there for everyone to enjoy.
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第2篇
为提高人们的动物保护意识,《英语青年报》正在举行英语征
文竞赛。请根据以下内容提示,写一篇英语短文,简要分析野生动
物减少的原因并提出保护野生动物的措施,参加此次征文比赛。
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注意:(1)邮件中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
(2)词数80个左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
As we all know, animals are people’s friends. ___________
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However,
the number of wild animals is getting smaller and smaller
because wild animals’ living places are becoming fewer and
fewer. Also, many wild animals now can’t find enough food
to eat. At the same time, people are killing animals for their
fur, teeth, bones or other body parts.
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What should we do to protect wild animals? First, we
should stop buying fur coats and killing them. It’s a good
way to set up more reserves for them. Second, making laws
to protect them is important. Last but not least, the
government should set up natural parks to offer them
comfortable homes.
All in all, it’s our duty to protect wild animals.
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