内容正文:
2025河北
英 语
主题写作册
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第二部分 高频主题三阶写作指导
人与自我
主题6 促进中学生“五育并举”的发展
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【教材单元链接】
人
教
版 八(上)Unit 8 烹饪 八(下)Unit 3 家务和许可
八(下)Unit 8 文学和音乐
九(全)Unit 9 音乐和电影 九(全)Unit 10 感受
冀
教
版 七(下)Unit 2 表演开始 八(下)Unit 1 种植物
九(全)Unit 4 故事和诗歌
九(全)Unit 5 研究科学 九(全)Unit 6 电影和剧院
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一阶 素材积累与训练
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素材积累
短语与搭配
1.care for照顾
2.clean up打扫干净
3.fix up修理
4.sweep the floor扫/拖地
5.take out the rubbish倒垃圾
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6.make the bed铺床
7.do the dishes清洗餐具
8.fold the clothes叠衣服
9.set cooking courses开设烹饪课程
10.clean the blackboard擦黑板
11.water flowers浇花
12.climb mountains爬山
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13.enjoy pop music喜欢流行音乐
14.collect stamps集邮
15.basic life skills基本生活技能
16.keep healthy/fit保持健康
17.develop an interest in在……方面培养兴趣
18.be able to do sth. 能够做某事
19.make a big difference起很大作用
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20.look after oneself照顾某人自己
21.develop one’s independence培养某人的独立性
22.get a strong feeling of satisfaction获得强烈的满足感
23.open up one’s eyes and mind开阔某人的眼界和思维
24.enrich our knowledge丰富我们的知识
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句型
开头句
1.To be a better person, I think I should do the following
things.
2.I suppose tree planting is very important work. It’s also a
great way to learn about nature.【冀教版八(下)U2】
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3.There are all kinds of music in the world. Music makes
people happy. Good music brings people comfort and peace of
mind. Everyone loves music but different people have different
tastes.
4.Life skills are necessary for us teenagers.To live more
healthily and happily, we are supposed to learn more new life
skills.
中间句
劳动实践
1.I think doing chores is not so difficult. I do not mind doing
them.【人教版八(下)U3】
2.You could help to clean up the city parks.
3.We can do housework in our spare time to show care to our
parents.
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4.Doing chores helps to develop children’s independence and
teaches them how to look after themselves.【人教版八(下)
U3】
5.I think it is important for children to learn how to do
chores and help their parents with housework.【人教版八(下)
U3】
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6.It seems that doing some housework such as cooking and
cleaning is good for us.
7.Since students live in one house with their parents, they
should know that everyone should do their part in keeping it
clean and tidy.【人教版八(下)U3】
8.Some students are interested in taking part in social practice
activities while others plan to help with housework.
9.It’s important to learn some basic life skills, like cooking,
washing clothes and tidying up our rooms.
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体育活动
1.I like ping-pong. It’s easy for me.【人教版七(上)U5】
2.Basketball offers me enjoyment, friendship, knowledge and
relaxation.
3.We play soccer at school with our friends, which is relaxing.
4.Exercising is a good way to make us confident and happy.
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美育知识
1.I enjoy reading stories and listening to music. It’s great fun.
2.I like smooth music that helps me relax after a long week
at work.【人教版九(全)U9】
3.It’s our duty to value and spread Chinese culture.
4.What’s more, Beijing Opera is also an important part of
Chinese culture.
5.The reason why we plan a visit to a tea house is that we
can learn a lot about tea culture there.
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结尾句
呼吁、感受或收获
1.Carrying out labor education makes campus life more colorful
and meaningful.
2.By learning to cook, we can learn some cooking skills. At
the same time, we can share housework and become more
independent.
3.Learning life skills is necessary for us, because what we
depend on is what we learn.
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4.I’m sure the earlier we learn to be independent, the better
our future will be.
5.We should not be afraid of challenges and try our best to
solve the problems in our study and life.
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技巧训练
1.It’s important to learn how to clean our rooms.(用such as扩
写具体事例)
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It’s important to learn how to clean our rooms, such as sweeping the floor, making our beds and putting away our clothes.
2.Exercise can rest our brains and eyes.(用that引导的定语从句
扩写句子)
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Exercising is a good way that can rest our brains and eyes.
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3.We hold the traditional Chinese opera activity to learn more
about traditional Chinese culture.(用the reason why…is that…
升格句子)
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The reason why we hold the traditional Chinese opera activity is that we can learn more about traditional Chinese culture.
4.Running can reduce our pressure.(用a good way to升格句子)
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Running is a good way to reduce our pressure.
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5.We can make a cake for our parents by ourselves.(用动词不
定式扩写目的)
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We can make a cake for our parents by ourselves to show our care to them.
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二阶 典例探究
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(2024长沙改编)
你校英文报刊正在开展以 “What Does Music Bring to
Me?”为题的征文活动。你和同学们就此进行了讨论。请综合
下图所示的笔记内容,并作适当拓展,写一篇短文投稿。
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注意:(1)短文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
(2)词数80个左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
What Does Music Bring to Me?
Music is like a key, which opens a door to the world for
me. __________________________________________________
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步骤一 审好题
1.文体:作文要求以“音乐给我带来了什么?”为题写一篇文章,
文体为________;
2.人称:描写与音乐相关的事情主要使用__________,描写自己
的经历和感受时主要使用__________;
3.时态:介绍音乐带来的好处时,主要使用____________,描述
自己学习音乐的经历主要使用____________。
说明文
第三人称
第一人称
一般现在时
一般过去时
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步骤二 构思框架,列出要点
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步骤三 遣词造句,连句成文
What Does Music Bring to Me?
Music is like a key, which opens a door to the world for
me.
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Music brings me hope and strength during hard times,
offering words of wisdom that guide me through life’s
challenges. Music helps me build a good relationship. When
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I was a kid, I used to be shy. As I took up playing the
guitar to deal with my shyness, I made lots of friends.
Besides, music opens my eyes. Through music, I can broaden
my horizons, sharpen my mind, and deepen my
understanding. Also, music reminds me of some happy
memories. It makes me remember the love and care my
teachers and friends have given me. It tells me the best
things in life are free.
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Overall, music enriches my life, making it more
meaningful and fulfilling. I hope all of us will value music
and make it a part of our life.
三阶 写作实战
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第1篇(2024遂宁改编)
传承优秀家风是中华民族家国情怀的重要体现,为响应号召,
你校校报英语专栏将举办“孝敬长辈,从我做起”的主题征文活动。
请根据以下的结构图提示,结合自己的生活,写一篇短文,向该
专栏投稿。
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注意:(1)短文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
(2)词数80个左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Love and Respect the Elders
As we all know, respecting and caring for our elders is not
only a traditional Chinese virtue but also our duty. ___________
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In the
process of my growing up, I’ve seen my grandparents’
selfless love for our family. They helped to look after me
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and raise me so that my parents could focus on their work.
Therefore, we should love and respect our elders.
To show our love and respect, we can help our elders
with their chores. Spending time communicating with our
elders is also important so that they don’t feel lonely.
What’s more, it’s necessary to take them to do exercise, like
walking in the park, to keep them healthy.
In conclusion, as everyone will grow old one day, it’s
important to take action now.
第2篇(2024张家口三模)
李华的英国朋友John的班级将要开展暑期实践活动,下面是
John给李华发来的电子邮件的部分内容。请你根据邮件内容,以
李华的名义回复。
Our class will have summer activities. My teacher gives us
two projects, cooking and planting vegetables. Can you give
me some advice? Which activity should I choose? Why?
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注意:(1)邮件中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
(2)词数80个左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear John,
What good news! It’s so interesting to do a project during
summer holiday. _________________________________________
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I believe that learning to cook will be an
excellent choice. It’s wonderful to create your own dishes.
Besides, you can take care of yourself when your parents
are not at home.
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Yours,
Li Hua
In order to develop your cooking skills, you should first
ask your parents for help. And it’s also a good idea to
learn from the cooking videos online. There are many short
videos about cooking on the Internet.
Little life skills are a big help. Let’s start learning them
now.
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