内容正文:
2025河北
英 语
主题写作册
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第二部分 高频主题三阶写作指导
人与自我
主题5 自我认识,自我管理,自我提升
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【教材单元链接】
人教
版 七(下)Unit 9 外貌特征 八(上)Unit 3 性格特征
八(上)Unit 6 生活目标
九(全)Unit 4 我们的变化 九(全)Unit 7 规则
冀教
版 八(上)Unit 5 我的未来 八(上)Unit 8 为自己祝!
八(下)Unit 6 成为冠军 九(全)Unit 10 为未来做准备
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一阶 素材积累与训练
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素材积累
短语与搭配
外貌特征
1.have a strong body 有强壮的身体
2.have long/short hair 留着长发/短发
3.(be) of medium height 中等身高
4.(be) of medium build 中等体型
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性格介绍
1.get better at 更擅长……
2.be different from… 与……不同;与……有差异
3.the same as 和……相同;与……一致
4.as+形容词/副词原级+as… 和……一样……
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兴趣与爱好
1.be interested in对……感兴趣
2.be crazy about 热爱……
3.do well in/be good at在……做得好;擅长……
4.in one’s spare/free time在某人的业余/空闲时间
5.have…in common with sb. 与某人在……方面有共同之处
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职业与梦想
1.expect/hope/wish to do sth. 期待/希望做某事
2.look forward to 期盼
3.would like to do sth. 想要做某事
4.dream of being… 梦想成为……
5.make up one’s mind to do sth. 下定决心做某事
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句型
开头句
人物介绍
1.Everyone has a hero in his or her heart. Yuan Longping is a
hero in my heart.
2.As I grow older, I have noticed several changes in my life.
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生活目标与梦想
1.Everyone has a dream. Some hope to be a doctor to help
others, while others dream of being a teacher.
2.The life goal is just like a light which guides us in darkness
and helps us overcome difficulties. My life goal is to be a
doctor.
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中间句
外貌特征
1.I usually wear jeans, a T-shirt and sports shoes.
2.I’m quite tall, with short hair, and I wear a pair of glasses.
3.I take after my father—we both have big eyes.
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性格特点
1.I’m always ready to help others when they are in trouble.
2.I am very popular in our school because I am polite to
everyone.
3.My face often turns red when I speak with strangers.
4.I like making friends because I think they can bring me
much pleasure.
5.I used to enjoy playing video games, but now I prefer
reading books and playing sports.
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兴趣爱好
1.I love reading books because I think it’s a good way to open
my mind.
2.I spend much of my spare time practicing the piano and I
can play it very well now.
3.Besides, I’m very interested in playing basketball.
4. The more I play basketball, the stronger I am.
5.The habit of taking notes not only improves my learning
abilities, but also helps me get good grades.
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生活目标与梦想
1.As for me, I’m going to choose the most fun and exciting
job in the world. I’m going to be an astronaut.
2.I will also learn to communicate with others, because
communicating skills are important for a teacher.
3.To make my dream come true, first, I will study harder and
try to read more books.
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结尾句
1. I’m sure I will make myself better and better.
2. As a student, I will study hard to get into a top university.
In this way, I can get more chances to make a great
contribution to China’s science and technology industry.
3. I will learn to enjoy my life, and I’ll try my best to do
better.
4.All in all, I’m happy with these changes, because they have
brought me the happiness of growth.
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俗语/谚语
1.God helps those who help themselves.天助自助者。
2.Where there’s a will, there’s a way. 有志者,事竟成。
3.Big dreams are the key to everything. 远大的理想是开启万物
的钥匙。
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高分模板
Everybody has his or her dream job. Different people have
different ideas in choosing their jobs. My dream is to be a
______________(职业).The reason why I want to be a
______________(职业) is that ______________(拥有这个梦
想的原因). To achieve my dream, I will ______________
(为了实现梦想将要做的事情1).
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In addition, I will ______________(为了实现梦想将要做的事
情2). Besides, I will ______________(为了实现梦想将要做的
事情3).I strongly believe if I put my heart into it, I can
achieve my dream in the future.
技巧训练
1.I used to be short. I didn’t like exercising.(用and连接两个并
列句)
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I used to be short and didn’t like exercising.
2.The most important thing is to be a useful person.
(用that引导的宾语从句升格句子)
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________
I think that the most important thing is to be a useful person.
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3.I know that she cares about me.(用because引导的原因状语从
句扩写句子)
________________________________________________________
__________
I know that she cares about me because she’s always there to listen.
4.Books are my friends. Books give me knowledge and strength.
(用which引导的定语从句升格句子)
________________________________________________________
__________
Books are my friends, which give me knowledge and strength.
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5.Reading can open up our eyes. Reading can improve our
knowledge.(用not only…but also…升格句子)
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________________
Reading can not only open up our eyes but also improve our knowledge.
6.当我们有空闲时间的时候,我们应该分担家务。(汉译英)
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We should share the housework when we have free time.
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二阶 典例探究
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(2024邯郸三模)
自我管理能力是个体终身成长和发展的关键。你校正在对学
生进行自我管理方面的调查。请你先完成下面的自我管理评价表,
再根据提示写一篇短文。
Self-management Assessment
I can use my pocket money properly.
I can do exercise once a week.
I can plan my time of study and rest well.
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提示:(1) Do a self-assessment according to your form.
(2) Make a plan to improve your self-management
abilities.
注意:(1)短文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
(2)词数80个左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Self-management is important to us. ____________________
_________________________________________________________
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步骤一 审好题
1.文体:作文要求完成自我管理评价表,再根据提示写一篇短文,
是一篇材料作文;
2.人称:作文与自我管理能力相关,写作时主要使用__________;
3.时态:描述自我评价相关信息主要使用____________;制订提高
自我管理能力的计划主要使用____________。
第一人称
一般现在时
一般将来时
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步骤二 构思框架,列出要点
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步骤三 遣词造句,连句成文
Self-management is important to us. ____________________
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
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I think I do well in
managing myself. I manage my pocket money well. I have
healthy living habits—getting up early and keeping on
running every day. However, I sometimes have difficulty
managing my time of study and rest.
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________________________________________________________
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To better manage myself, I will make a clear plan for
my study and rest time and carry it out with a strong will.
Besides, I will ask my friends and parents for their advice. I
will also read some books about self-management, from
which I will get some useful tips.
There is a long way to go to improve myself, but I will
keep learning and getting better.
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三阶 写作实战
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第1篇(2024临沂改编)
假定你是李平,请根据该邮件内容,用英语给Eric回复。
Hi Li Ping,
You mentioned your dream job in your last letter. I’m really
interested in it. Why did you choose it? What/Who influenced
you to make the decision? Tell me your experience, please. I
look forward to hearing from you soon!
Eric
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注意:(1)邮件中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
(2)词数80个左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Eric,
Thanks for your e-mail. __________________________________
_______________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________
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I’m very glad to tell you something about my dream job. I have always dreamed of being a teacher since my childhood, as I enjoy being with children. Besides, I want to be a teacher because of my English teacher—Miss Li. She often helps me with my English, and influences me a lot.
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_______________________________________________________
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Li Ping
I still remember failing an important English exam and feeling upset. She not only cheered me up but also told me some good ways to improve my English. With her help, I made great progress. I have made up my mind to be a good teacher like her when I grow up. Although I know it is not easy to be a teacher, I will try my best to realize my dream.
Best wishes!
续表
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第2篇(2024贵州改编)
成长的道路上,我们努力改
变以提升自我。假如你是李华,
你校英语广播站正在开展主题为
“The Change Made Me_______”
的征文活动。请参考图文信息,
积极投稿。
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注意:(1)补全标题。
(2)短文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
(3)词数80个左右。
The Change Made Me ________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Better
There are many things in our life that can help us
to be better. In my opinion, the changes I made have made me better.
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I used to be weak because of my bad habits. After
communicating with my teacher, I started eating regularly
every day and exercising often, and I am strong now.
What’s more, I was so careless that I made many
mistakes in my exams. My teacher advised me to check my
answers carefully and develop good learning habits. Now, I
get better in my schoolwork after following my teacher’s
advice.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
These good changes made me feel better and brave
enough to face new challenges.
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