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“同题异构”提升应用文写作训练的效率之专题
03-7(运动与健康)“同题异练”
所谓“同题异练”是指:要求考生就同一话题以书信体写作的要求和非书信体的写作要求进行不同视角下的写作训练。具体的说:针对同一个话题或题目,从不同的角度命题,要求考生使用不同的文体风格和表达方式来进行多次写作练习。这有助于考生更全面地理解话题,积累更多的素材和灵感,提升思维的灵活性,激发写作的创造力,快速提高写作能力,以便在未来的高考中写出精彩纷呈的考场作文。
本专题的话题是“运动与健康”,在练习时考生需要注意以下几个方面。
一是要弄清写作文体:认真审题,弄清写作文体,是用书信体还是用非书信体。本次练习涉及到的文体大体为:书信体的邀请信;非书信体的投稿、图表类写作、倡议书、报道等。
二是要谋划篇章结构:一般来说,我们常常采用三段式写作(与本专题相关的写作):
三是要打开写作思路:这是考生普遍存在的软肋(高考英语第一节的写作作为衡量考生英语综合运用
能力的重要题型之一,近年来愈发凸显考生思路开阔的重要性。然而,许多考生除了语言基础不扎实、表达受阻这一最常见的问题外,思路不开阔的问题也越来越常见)。就本专题,笔者建议考生从以下几个方面打开思路:①“运动与健康”常见的主题有:热爱运动、健康生活;②围绕“运动与健康”主题的活动一般有:参与有关体育活动(包括体育比赛、校园“体育节、健康周”活动、演讲等)、有关活动的组织(包括邀请他人参与、呼吁他人参与、体育锻炼开展情况的调查)及其参与活动经历及意义/感想/反响的分享、有关(包括自己最喜爱的)体育活动项目推荐与说明;③对“运动与健康”的重要性及有关建议的分享。
另外,建议考生参看本系列资料的专题01“同题异解”细节的构思(将题目中所给的关键信息进行充
实与拓展)。
(2024年1月浙江省首考真题)请你写一篇短文向校英文报“Sports and Health”栏目投稿,向同学们推荐一项适合课间开展的运动。
内容包括:1. 介绍这项运动;
2. 说明推荐理由。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答:
Stand Up and Exercise, Everybody!
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【简析】
本篇属于非书信体的投稿的写作。要求考生向同学们推荐一项适合课间开展的运动。内容包括:介绍这项运动和说明推荐理由。本篇写作的重点就是以上这两点内容的构思(需要考生打开写作思路)。以下就此提供不同的写作内容。
1. I recommend Kongzhu, also known as the Chinese yo-yo, works as a diabolo spinning and buzzing like an acrobat on a string. Not only does it offer a fun and challenging way to improve hand-eye coordination, it also serves as a powerful tool for stress management. Better yet, it’s a window into a rich cultural heritage, providing us with an opportunity to connect with our roots while enhancing our health.
2. I strongly recommend kongzhu as a classroom break activity. Not only does it offer a fun and challenging way to improve hand-eye coordination, it also serves as a powerful tool for stress management. As we navigate the challenges of our academic lives, it’s essential to find outlets that promote relaxation and wellness. Kongzhu serves the purpose perfectly. Better yet, it’s a window into a rich cultural heritage, providing us with an opportunity to connect with our roots while enhancing our health.
3. It’s my honor to recommend walking to you, which has a lot of benefits. Walking is the easiest and simplest form of exercise to stay healthy and lose weight. Besides, walking is of great convenience. You can take a walk during the class breaks or after dinner. You can walk at a fast speed or just walk slowly around the campus, and it is up to you to decide where you will walk and whom you will walk with. Importantly, you can avoid some unnecessary injuries which often occur in other sports and all you need may be only a pair of sneakers.
4. It’s my honor to recommend long-distance running to you, which has a lot of benefits. Running will help you get fit and prevent diseases. Like any exercise, it increases the flow of blood and oxygen to your brain. At the same time, it’s good for your eyes after a whole day of study. It also strengthens your immune system and reduces the risk of health problems. What’s more, if you feel down, going for a run can cheer yourself up.
5.It’s my honor to recommend cycling to you, which has a lot of benefits. Cycling, first of all, provides me with the most convenient means of transportation from home to school. Also, it satisfies my love of being surrounded by nature as much as possible. What’s more, I read from many trustworthy magazines that regular cycling is not only good for my cardiovascular fitness, but can also have a positive effect on my sense of well-being, which makes me love the exercise even more.
6. Swimming, which deserves to be recommended, is my favorite sport. Swimming is a kind of aerobic exercise which is of great benefit to health. After a day of study, what fun it is to jump into the pool to swim with a few partners because swimming is a really relaxing exercise and it helps to relieve stress. Besides, it can increase flexibility of our body, enhance balance and coordination. Most importantly, swimming enables us to rescue ourselves in time of emergency while in the river.
【完整答案】
Stand Up and Exercise, Everybody!
Everybody! Are you tired of sitting in class all day? How about incorporating some physical activity into your daily routine? One great option is the “Stand Up and Stretch” exercise. This simple routine involves standing up from your desk, stretching your arms, legs and back, and taking a few deep breaths. It’s a quick and easy way to get your blood flowing and re-energize your body and mind. This exercise is recommended for several reasons.
First, it helps to combat the negative effects of prolonged sitting, such as back pain and stiffness. Second, it can improve your focus and concentration, making it easier to stay engaged in class. Lastly, it promotes a healthy and active lifestyle, which is essential for overall well-being.
So, next time you feel a bit sluggish during class, remember to stand up and stretch! It’s a small change that can make a big difference in your day.
1
(江苏省盐城市五校联考2024-2025学年高三上学期10月月考)假如你校英语报“Sports and Health”栏目正在征集稿件,请你就上周参加学校运动会的一个项目写一篇短文投稿。
内容包括:1. 比赛过程;
2. 赛后感想。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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2
(2024届四川省宜宾市高高三上学期第一次诊断考试)你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以“Love Sports, Love Myself”为题,写一篇短文参赛。
内容包括:1. 你热爱的运动项目;
2. 对你的影响。
注意:1. 写作词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Love Sports, Love Myself
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3
(广东省珠海市一中2023-2024学年高三上学期10月阶段性考试)你校英文报 “Teenage Life”专栏本期的主题为“Sports and Health”。请你用英语写一篇短文投稿。
内容包括:1. 运动的重要性;
2. 你的运动建议。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Sports and Health
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4
(黑龙江省哈尔滨市三中2024-2025学年高三上学期10月月考)学校英文报就高三学生体育锻炼情况开展调查。请你根据图表内容,以“Sports and Health”为题写一篇短文。
每日体育运动时长调查结果
内容包括:1. 调查结果;
2. 概述原因;
3. 你的看法。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡上的相应位置作答。
Sports and Health
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5
(四川省眉山市仁寿县2023-2024学年高二上学期10月月考)为增强学生体质,你校将在下周举办一次“Love Sports, Love Life”的体育活动。假定你是学生会主席李华,请你用英文写一篇倡议书,呼吁同学们积极进行体育锻炼。
内容包括:1. 活动的目的;
2. 进行体育运动的益处;
3. 提出倡议,表达期待。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear friends,
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With best wishes.
The Students’ Union
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(广东省清远市阳山县2024-2025学年高一上学期期中)我校英文报“Teenage Life”专栏本期的主题为“Sports and Health”。请你用英语写一篇短文投稿。
内容包括:1. 运动的重要性
2. 你最喜欢的运动与你喜欢它的原因
3. 关于运动的建议。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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(河北省秦皇岛市海港区秦皇岛市英才高级中学2024-2025学年高一上学期11月期中)假设你是李华,看到很多同学因为学习而忽略了体育锻炼,请按照以下要点,以“Health and Sports”为题写一篇英语短文给学校英语报社投稿。
内容包括:1. 身体健康的重要性;
2. 运动对大家的好处;
3. 你的建议。
注意:1. 词数80左右。标题已给出,不计入总词数。
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
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(江苏省苏州市相城区苏州国裕外语学校2024-2025学年高二上学期12月月考)假如你是李华,下个月你校将要举办以“体育与健康”为主题的校园体育节。请你写一封邮件给交换生Peter,邀请他参加体育节。
内容包括:1. 活动的时间和地点;
2. 活动的内容和意义。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Peter,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
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(福建省三明市一中2024-2025学年高一上学期期中)假定你是李华,上周你校组织开展了“运动健康周”活动。请你为校英语报写一篇报道。
内容包括:1. 活动目的;
2. 活动内容;
3. 活动反响。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Sports and Health Week
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10
(山东省滨州市惠民县2023-2024学年高二下学期期中阶段性质量检测)假定你是李华,为强身健体丰富校园生活,你校开展了“阳光大课间”活动,请你写一篇短文在校英文报“Sports and Health”栏目报道此事。
内容包括:1. 活动目的;
2. 活动内容;
3. 活动的反响及意义。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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“同题异构”提升应用文写作训练的效率之专题
03-7(运动与健康)“同题异练”
所谓“同题异练”是指:要求考生就同一话题以书信体写作的要求和非书信体的写作要求进行不同视角下的写作训练。具体的说:针对同一个话题或题目,从不同的角度命题,要求考生使用不同的文体风格和表达方式来进行多次写作练习。这有助于考生更全面地理解话题,积累更多的素材和灵感,提升思维的灵活性,激发写作的创造力,快速提高写作能力,以便在未来的高考中写出精彩纷呈的考场作文。
本专题的话题是“运动与健康”,在练习时考生需要注意以下几个方面。
一是要弄清写作文体:认真审题,弄清写作文体,是用书信体还是用非书信体。本次练习涉及到的文体大体为:书信体的邀请信;非书信体的投稿、图表类写作、倡议书、报道等。
二是要谋划篇章结构:一般来说,我们常常采用三段式写作(与本专题相关的写作):
三是要打开写作思路:这是考生普遍存在的软肋(高考英语第一节的写作作为衡量考生英语综合运用
能力的重要题型之一,近年来愈发凸显考生思路开阔的重要性。然而,许多考生除了语言基础不扎实、表达受阻这一最常见的问题外,思路不开阔的问题也越来越常见)。就本专题,笔者建议考生从以下几个方面打开思路:①“运动与健康”常见的主题有:热爱运动、健康生活;②围绕“运动与健康”主题的活动一般有:参与有关体育活动(包括体育比赛、校园“体育节、健康周”活动、演讲等)、有关活动的组织(包括邀请他人参与、呼吁他人参与、体育锻炼开展情况的调查)及其参与活动经历及意义/感想/反响的分享、有关(包括自己最喜爱的)体育活动项目推荐与说明;③对“运动与健康”的重要性及有关建议的分享。
另外,建议考生参看本系列资料的专题01“同题异解”细节的构思(将题目中所给的关键信息进行充
实与拓展)。
(2024年1月浙江省首考真题)请你写一篇短文向校英文报“Sports and Health”栏目投稿,向同学们推荐一项适合课间开展的运动。
内容包括:1. 介绍这项运动;
2. 说明推荐理由。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答:
Stand Up and Exercise, Everybody!
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【简析】
本篇属于非书信体的投稿的写作。要求考生向同学们推荐一项适合课间开展的运动。内容包括:介绍这项运动和说明推荐理由。本篇写作的重点就是以上这两点内容的构思(需要考生打开写作思路)。以下就此提供不同的写作内容。
1. I recommend Kongzhu, also known as the Chinese yo-yo, works as a diabolo spinning and buzzing like an acrobat on a string. Not only does it offer a fun and challenging way to improve hand-eye coordination, it also serves as a powerful tool for stress management. Better yet, it’s a window into a rich cultural heritage, providing us with an opportunity to connect with our roots while enhancing our health.
2. I strongly recommend kongzhu as a classroom break activity. Not only does it offer a fun and challenging way to improve hand-eye coordination, it also serves as a powerful tool for stress management. As we navigate the challenges of our academic lives, it’s essential to find outlets that promote relaxation and wellness. Kongzhu serves the purpose perfectly. Better yet, it’s a window into a rich cultural heritage, providing us with an opportunity to connect with our roots while enhancing our health.
3. It’s my honor to recommend walking to you, which has a lot of benefits. Walking is the easiest and simplest form of exercise to stay healthy and lose weight. Besides, walking is of great convenience. You can take a walk during the class breaks or after dinner. You can walk at a fast speed or just walk slowly around the campus, and it is up to you to decide where you will walk and whom you will walk with. Importantly, you can avoid some unnecessary injuries which often occur in other sports and all you need may be only a pair of sneakers.
4. It’s my honor to recommend long-distance running to you, which has a lot of benefits. Running will help you get fit and prevent diseases. Like any exercise, it increases the flow of blood and oxygen to your brain. At the same time, it’s good for your eyes after a whole day of study. It also strengthens your immune system and reduces the risk of health problems. What’s more, if you feel down, going for a run can cheer yourself up.
5.It’s my honor to recommend cycling to you, which has a lot of benefits. Cycling, first of all, provides me with the most convenient means of transportation from home to school. Also, it satisfies my love of being surrounded by nature as much as possible. What’s more, I read from many trustworthy magazines that regular cycling is not only good for my cardiovascular fitness, but can also have a positive effect on my sense of well-being, which makes me love the exercise even more.
6. Swimming, which deserves to be recommended, is my favorite sport. Swimming is a kind of aerobic exercise which is of great benefit to health. After a day of study, what fun it is to jump into the pool to swim with a few partners because swimming is a really relaxing exercise and it helps to relieve stress. Besides, it can increase flexibility of our body, enhance balance and coordination. Most importantly, swimming enables us to rescue ourselves in time of emergency while in the river.
【完整答案】
Stand Up and Exercise, Everybody!
Everybody! Are you tired of sitting in class all day? How about incorporating some physical activity into your daily routine? One great option is the “Stand Up and Stretch” exercise. This simple routine involves standing up from your desk, stretching your arms, legs and back, and taking a few deep breaths. It’s a quick and easy way to get your blood flowing and re-energize your body and mind. This exercise is recommended for several reasons.
First, it helps to combat the negative effects of prolonged sitting, such as back pain and stiffness. Second, it can improve your focus and concentration, making it easier to stay engaged in class. Lastly, it promotes a healthy and active lifestyle, which is essential for overall well-being.
So, next time you feel a bit sluggish during class, remember to stand up and stretch! It’s a small change that can make a big difference in your day.
1
(江苏省盐城市五校联考2024-2025学年高三上学期10月月考)假如你校英语报“Sports and Health”栏目正在征集稿件,请你就上周参加学校运动会的一个项目写一篇短文投稿。
内容包括:1. 比赛过程;
2. 赛后感想。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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【答案】
Last week, I participated in our school sports meet, competing in the 400-meter race—a thrilling and unforgettable experience.
On hearing the sharp whistle, I dashed out, the wind rushing against my face and the crowd’s cheers echoing around me. My attempts to match the pace of fellow runners proved challenging, but I did not give up. I pushed myself to the limit and crossed the finish line with all my strength.
I was glad that I took part in the sports meet, which not only pushed my limit but also inspired me the importance of persistence.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给校英语报“Sports and Health”栏目投稿,写一写上周参加的
学校运动会的比赛过程和赛后感想。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
冲:dash→charge
证明:prove→turn out
尽全力:with all my strength→with all my might
启发:inspire→enlighten
2. 句式拓展
原 句:Last week, I participated in our school sports meet, competing in the 400-meter race—a thrilling and
unforgettable experience.
拓展句:Last week, I participated in our school sports meet, where I competed in the 400-meter race—a thrilling
and unforgettable experience.
【高分句型】
1. On hearing the sharp whistle, I dashed out, the wind rushing against my face and the crowd’s cheers echoing
around me.(运用了独立主格结构)
2. I was glad that I took part in the sports meet, which not only pushed my limit but also inspired me the
importance of persistence.(运用了that引导的宾语从句,which引导非限制定语从句和not only…but also…
句型)
2
(2024届四川省宜宾市高高三上学期第一次诊断考试)你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以“Love Sports, Love Myself”为题,写一篇短文参赛。
内容包括:1. 你热爱的运动项目;
2. 对你的影响。
注意:1. 写作词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Love Sports, Love Myself
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【答案】
Love Sports, Love Myself
I am a huge fan of sports, and my favorite sport is swimming.
Firstly, swimming allows me to stay active and maintain a healthy lifestyle. Regular swimming helps me build strength. Moreover, I have learned to set goals for myself and work towards achieving them. Through swimming, I have developed a strong work ethic and the ability to push myself beyond my limits.
Overall, swimming has had an important impact on my life. I am grateful for the opportunities that swimming has given me, and I will continue to pursue my passion for sports, always trying my best to be the best version of myself.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“Love Sports, Love Myself”为题,围绕自己热爱的运动项目
及其对个人的影响进行阐述,旨在展现运动对个人成长和生活的积极作用。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
铁杆粉丝:a huge fan → hardcore fan
此外:moreover → besides
重要的:important → significant
影响:impact → influence
2. 句式拓展
原 句:Through swimming, I have developed a strong work ethic and the ability to push myself beyond my
limits.
拓展句:Through swimming, I have cultivated a strong work ethic and gained the ability that enables me to push
myself beyond my limits.
【高分句型】
1. Firstly, swimming allows me to stay active and maintain a healthy lifestyle.
(运用了动词不定式短语作宾语补足语)
2. I am grateful for the opportunities that swimming has given me, and I will continue to pursue my passion for
sports, always trying my best to be the best version of myself. (运用了关系代词that引导的限制性定语从句
和现在分词短语作伴随状语)
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(广东省珠海市一中2023-2024学年高三上学期10月阶段性考试)你校英文报 “Teenage Life”专栏本期的主题为“Sports and Health”。请你用英语写一篇短文投稿。
内容包括:1. 运动的重要性;
2. 你的运动建议。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Sports and Health
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【答案】1
Sports and Health
As we know, the column Teenage Life of our school newspaper is intended to draw students’ attention into “Sports and Health”, for which I am absolutely willing to share my perspectives.
It is a common sense that regular exercises benefit us in various ways. Not only can it serve as a chance for students to strengthen a good figure in face of increasing learning burden but also it is central to promoting personal mental well-being. In the course of doing sports, it’s highly recommended that students should work out a reasonable timetable in compliance with their physical quality and curriculum arrangement.
I sincerely wish everyone would take an active part into sports and gain more insight into the benefits it conveys because of our endeavors.
【答案】2
Sports and health
Learning that the column Teenage Life of our school English newspaper is committed to casting a light on the topic “Sports and health”, I am more than thrilled to express my view.
The reasons why we should work out regularly are that not only does it build up our bodies, but it boosts our learning efficiency as well. Based on such a meaningful theme, a wide variety of activities are highly recommended. Additionally, several health professionals can be invited to give some lectures about how to do daily exercise properly after all the competitions.
Only by raising the awareness of taking exercise and participating actively can we truly enjoy the benefits it brings. I believe every participant will achieve something amazing.
【导语】本文是应用文写作。要求考生用英语以“Sports and Health”为主题写一篇短文投稿。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
非常兴奋:thrilled→excited
锻炼:work out→exercise
此外:additionally→furthermore
参加:participant→take part in
2. 句式拓展
原 句:Based on such a meaningful theme, a wide variety of activities are highly recommended.
拓展句:As is based on such a meaningful theme, a wide variety of activities are highly recommended.
【高分句型】
1. Learning that the column Teenage Life of our school English newspaper is committed to casting a light on the
topic “Sports and health”, I am more than thrilled to express my view.(that引导的宾语从句)
2. The reasons why we should work out regularly are that not only does it build up our bodies, but it boosts our
learning efficiency as well.(why引导的定语从句)
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(黑龙江省哈尔滨市三中2024-2025学年高三上学期10月月考)学校英文报就高三学生体育锻炼情况开展调查。请你根据图表内容,以“Sports and Health”为题写一篇短文。
每日体育运动时长调查结果
内容包括:1. 调查结果;
2. 概述原因;
3. 你的看法。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡上的相应位置作答。
Sports and Health
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【答案】
Sports and Health
Our school English newspaper conducted a survey on how much time Senior 3 students spend on sports every day.
The results show that only 4% of students play sports for more than 30 minutes. About 30% do it for 20 to 30 minutes, but 60% only play for less than 20 minutes. Sadly, 6% don’t do any sports.
This is horrible! I think the main reason is that students are very busy with their studies and have less time for sports. But doing sports is so important for our health. Schools, I think, should encourage students to do more sports by having fun activities after school and making sure there are enough places to play.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于图表作文。要求考生根据学校英文报对高三学生体育锻炼情况的调查结果,以
“Sports and Health”为题写一篇短文,需涵盖调查结果、概述原因及个人看法。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
开展调查:conduct a survey → carry out a survey
表明:show → indicate
糟糕的:horrible → awful
确保:make sure → ensure/guarantee
2. 句式拓展
原 句:Sadly, 6% don’t do any sports. This is horrible!
拓展句:Sadly, 6% don’t do any sports, which is horrible!
【高分句型】
1. The results show that only 4% of students play sports for more than 30 minutes.
(运用了连接词that引导宾语从句)
2. I think the main reason is that students are very busy with their studies and have less time for sports. (运用了
省略了连接词that的宾语从句和连接词that引导表语从句)
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(四川省眉山市仁寿县2023-2024学年高二上学期10月月考)为增强学生体质,你校将在下周举办一次“Love Sports, Love Life”的体育活动。假定你是学生会主席李华,请你用英文写一篇倡议书,呼吁同学们积极进行体育锻炼。
内容包括:1. 活动的目的;
2. 进行体育运动的益处;
3. 提出倡议,表达期待。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear friends,
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With best wishes.
The Students’ Union
【答案】
Dear friends,
We are writing to call on everyone to participate in the activity called Love Sports, Love Life, whose aim is to urge us to take an active part in physical exercise.
There is no denying that taking exercise is beneficial to us. Firstly, it can help build up our body and keep healthy, thus protecting us from the epidemic flu nowadays. In addition, not only can exercising relieve stress from study, but it can improve our learning efficiency. More importantly, doing sports can build up our confidence and strengthen our willpower, which will have a lasting effect on our life.
It is high time that we got started. Only when we have a healthy body can we live a happy life.
With best wishes.
The Students’ Union
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生用英文写一篇倡议信,呼吁同学们积极进行体育锻炼。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
呼吁:call on→appeal to
参与:participate in→take part in
目的:aim→objective
另外:in addition→what’s more
2. 句式拓展
原 句:Firstly, it can help build up our body and keep healthy, thus protecting us from the epidemic flu nowadays.
拓展句:Firstly, it can help build up our body and keep healthy, which protects us from the epidemic flu nowadays.
【高分句型】
1. We are writing to call on everyone to participate in the activity called Love Sports, Love Life, whose aim is to
urge us to take an active part in physical exercise. (运用了whose引导的非限制性定语从句)
2. More importantly, doing sports can build up our confidence and strengthen our willpower, which will have a
lasting effect on our life. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
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(广东省清远市阳山县2024-2025学年高一上学期期中)我校英文报“Teenage Life”专栏本期的主题为“Sports and Health”。请你用英语写一篇短文投稿。
内容包括:1. 运动的重要性
2. 你最喜欢的运动与你喜欢它的原因
3. 关于运动的建议。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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【答案】
Sports play an important role in maintaining our physical and mental health. When it comes to my favourite sport, the first one that comes to my mind is basketball.
The reasons are as follows. Firstly, playing basketball helps me build up my body and makes me healthier and more positive. Besides, it provides me with a way to relax myself during the stressful school days. Finally, by playing basketball, I have learned how to get along with others and realized the importance of teamwork. Therefore, I suggest everyone do exercises regularly and choose one that they really enjoy.
In a word, doing sports can strengthen our body and is good for our mental and physical health. Let’s do sports together and enjoy a healthy life.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“Sports and Health”为题写一篇短文,给校英文报专栏“Teenage
Life”投稿。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
重要的:important→significant
此外:besides→what’s more
重要性:importance→significance
因此:therefore→hence
2. 句式拓展
原 句:Firstly, playing basketball helps me build up my body and makes me healthier and more positive.
拓展句:Firstly, it is playing basketball that helps me build up my body and makes me healthier and more
positive.
【高分句型】
1. When it comes to my favourite sport, the first one that comes to my mind is basketball.(运用了when引导的
时间状语从句和that引导的定语从句)
2. Therefore, I suggest everyone do exercises regularly and choose one that they really enjoy.(运用了虚拟语气
和that引导的定语从句)
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(河北省秦皇岛市海港区秦皇岛市英才高级中学2024-2025学年高一上学期11月期中)假设你是李华,看到很多同学因为学习而忽略了体育锻炼,请按照以下要点,以“Health and Sports”为题写一篇英语短文给学校英语报社投稿。
内容包括:1. 身体健康的重要性;
2. 运动对大家的好处;
3. 你的建议。
注意:1. 词数80左右。标题已给出,不计入总词数。
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
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【答案】
Health and Sports
Good health is of vital importance to everyone. A healthy person can always be energetic and enjoy life. A person who is in poor health can’t work well.
When it comes to keeping healthy, playing sports enjoys widespread popularity among people. As high school students, we must study hard and take many exams, which makes many students nervous. Therefore, it’s necessary to take exercise regularly to help release stress. Physical exercise can help make muscles strong. What’s more, while doing sports, we get relaxed, which can help us study more efficiently.
Since sports can make us physically and mentally healthy, we should do sports every day no matter how busy we are. Do remember that good health is the best wealth.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生一篇英语短文给学校英语报社投稿,介绍身体健康的重要性
及运动对大家的好处。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
至关重要的:vital→essential
精力充沛的:energetic→vigorous
焦虑的:nervous→anxious
因此:therefore→thus
2. 句式拓展
原 句:Physical exercise can help make muscles strong.
拓展句:Physical exercise can help make muscles strong, which is very beneficial for our body.
【高分句型】
1. A person who is in poor health can’t work well.(运用了who引导的限制性定语从句)
2. As high school students, we must study hard and take many exams, which makes many students nervous.(运用
了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
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(江苏省苏州市相城区苏州国裕外语学校2024-2025学年高二上学期12月月考)假如你是李华,下个月你校将要举办以“体育与健康”为主题的校园体育节。请你写一封邮件给交换生Peter,邀请他参加体育节。
内容包括:1. 活动的时间和地点;
2. 活动的内容和意义。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Peter,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Peter,
Knowing you are interested in sports, I’m writing to invite you to participate in our annual Sports Festival scheduled to be held on December 1st in our school stadium.
The coming festival, with the theme of Sports and Health, will consist of various activities, ranging from the tug-of-war to Chinese martial art. Subsequently, a relevant lecture concerning a healthy lifestyle will be arranged. Undoubtedly, it will serve as a platform to demonstrate our talent and stimulate our enthusiasm for sports.
Looking forward to your reply to confirm your participation.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对于下个月你校将要举办以“体育与健康”为主题的校园体
育节这一情况,写一封邮件给交换生Peter,邀请他参加体育节。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
对……感兴趣:be interested in→ be keen to
参加:participate in → take part in
各种各样的:various→ all kinds of
展示:demonstrate→ show
2. 句式拓展
原 句:Knowing you are interested in sports, I’m writing to invite you to participate in our annual Sports Festival scheduled to be held on December 1st in our school stadium.
拓展句:Because I know you are interested in sports, I’m writing to invite you to participate in our annual Sports Festival scheduled to be held on December 1st in our school stadium.
【高分句型】
1. The coming festival, with the theme of Sports and Health, will consist of various activities, ranging from the
tug-of-war to Chinese martial art.(运用了非谓语动词中的现在分词作状语)
2. Undoubtedly, it will serve as a platform to demonstrate our talent and stimulate our enthusiasm for sports.(运
用了非谓语动词中的动词不定式to do作后置定语修饰platform)
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(福建省三明市一中2024-2025学年高一上学期期中)假定你是李华,上周你校组织开展了“运动健康周”活动。请你为校英语报写一篇报道。
内容包括:1. 活动目的;
2. 活动内容;
3. 活动反响。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Sports and Health Week
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【答案】
Sports and Health Week
To raise our awareness of the importance of health, a “Sports and Health Week” was organized in our school last week, in which all the students took an active part.
Some girls, who normally have no interest in any sports, played skip rope and had great fun. Some students practiced dancing, increasing their confidence. What was the most exciting was the football match, before which players made full preparations.
All the students benefited a lot from the activity, both physically and mentally. They all expressed a firm belief that they would continue working out regularly to build up their body.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就学校上周举办的“运动健康周”活动,写一篇报道,内容
包括活动目的、活动内容和活动反响。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
重要性: importance→significance
参加:take part→participate
增长:increase→boost
强身健体:build up one’s body→get into shape
2. 句式拓展
原 句:Some students practiced dancing, increasing their confidence.
拓展句:Some students practiced dancing, which increased their confidence.
【高分句型】
1. To raise our awareness of the importance of health, a “Sports and Health Week” was organized in our school
last week, in which all the students took an active part. (运用了不定式短语作状语和介词+关系代词which引导的非限制定语从句)
2. What was the most exciting was the football match, before which players made full preparations.
(运用了what引导主语从句和介词+关系代词which引导的非限制性定语从句)
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(山东省滨州市惠民县2023-2024学年高二下学期期中阶段性质量检测)假定你是李华,为强身健体丰富校园生活,你校开展了“阳光大课间”活动,请你写一篇短文在校英文报“Sports and Health”栏目报道此事。
内容包括:1. 活动目的;
2. 活动内容;
3. 活动的反响及意义。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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【答案】
Embracing the “Sunshine Break” for a Healthier and More Vibrant School Life
As part of our school’s initiative to promote physical well-being and enrich campus life, the “Sunshine Break” activity has been launched.
This program aims to encourage students to engage in physical activities during breaks, offering a range of sports including basketball, volleyball, and fitness exercises. The response has been overwhelmingly positive, with students embracing the opportunity to stay active and connected.
The “Sunshine Break” not only enhances physical fitness but also fosters a sense of camaraderie and community, making our school a more vibrant and enjoyable place to be.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。为强身健体丰富校园生活,学校开展了“阳光大课间”活动,要求考
生写一篇短文在校英文报“Sports and Health”栏目报道此事。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
促进:promote→stimulate
启动:launch→initiate
机会:opportunity→chance
加强:enhance→strengthen
2. 句式拓展
原 句:The “Sunshine Break” not only enhances physical fitness but also fosters a sense of camaraderie and
community, making our school a more vibrant and enjoyable place to be.
拓展句:The “Sunshine Break” not only enhances physical fitness but also fosters a sense of camaraderie and
community, which makes our school a more vibrant and enjoyable place to be.
【高分句型】
1. The response has been overwhelmingly positive, with students embracing the opportunity to stay active and
connected. (运用了with的复合结构)
2. The “Sunshine Break” not only enhances physical fitness but also fosters a sense of camaraderie and
community, making our school a more vibrant and enjoyable place to be. (运用了not only...but also连接并列
谓语和现在分词作状语)
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