“同题异构”提升应用文写作训练的效率之专题03-8(根除陋习)“同题异练”——2025届新高考英语二轮复习

“同题异构”提升应用文写作训练的效率之专题 03-8(根除陋习)“同题异练” 所谓“同题异练”是指：要求考生就同一话题以书信体写作的要求和非书信体的写作要求进行不同视角下的写作训练。具体的说：针对同一个话题或题目，从不同的角度命题，要求考生使用不同的文体风格和表达方式来进行多次写作练习。这有助于考生更全面地理解话题，积累更多的素材和灵感，提升思维的灵活性，激发写作的创造力，快速提高写作能力，以便在未来的高考中写出精彩纷呈的考场作文。 本专题的话题是“根除陋习”，在练习时考生需要注意以下几个方面。 一是要弄清写作文体：认真审题，弄清写作文体，是用书信体还是用非书信体。本次练习涉及到的文体大体为：书信体的建议信；非书信体的演讲、投稿、倡议书等。 二是要谋划篇章结构：一般来说，我们常常采用三段式写作(与本专题相关的写作)： 三是要打开写作思路：这是考生普遍存在的软肋(高考英语第一节的写作作为衡量考生英语综合运用 能力的重要题型之一，近年来愈发凸显考生思路开阔的重要性。然而，许多考生除了语言基础不扎实、表达受阻这一最常见的问题外，思路不开阔的问题也越来越常见)。就本专题，笔者建议考生从以下几个方面打开思路：①所谓“陋习”是指“不良习惯”。常见的不良行为习惯：网瘾(包括手机成瘾<低头族>、手机/电脑/网络游戏成瘾以及玩抖音成瘾等)、做事拖延、熬夜、上学迟到、乱扔垃圾、缺失礼仪等等；②以“根除陋习”为主题的活动主要有：主题教育活动(主题班会、主题征文、主题报道、主题倡议等)；③亲身的经历(包括方法和建议)的分享以及对他人求助的回复(重点是提供解决问题的办法与建议)。 另外，建议考生参看本系列资料的专题01“同题异解”细节的构思(将题目中所给的关键信息进行充 实与拓展)。 (整合学科网有关资料)假设你是李华，你的笔友Tom最近沉迷于电脑/手机/网络游戏/抖音，这对他造成了很大危害。请你给他写一封信，劝说他改掉这个不良习惯，并提出建议。 内容包括：1. 影响及危害； 2. 你的建议。 注意：l. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答. Dear Tom, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours Sincerely, Li Hua 【简析】 本篇属于书信体的建议信的写作。Tom最近沉迷于电脑/手机/网络游戏/抖音，这对他造成了很大危害。请考生以李华的名义，并以笔友的身份给他写一封信，劝说他改掉这个不良习惯，并提出建议。本篇写作的重点是沉迷于电脑/手机/网络游戏/抖音的影响及危害；根除此陋习的建议(需要考生打开写作思路)。以下就此提供不同的写作内容。 1. Since computer games not only cause damage to you physically and mentally, but also waste a lot of valuable time, I urge you should quit them. Firstly, you’d better develop some hobbies, such as fishing and skating, which are able to distract attention. Next, it’s advisable to ask your parents, teachers and classmates for help when you have difficulty adjusting to the real life. Last but not least, try some exercise in the open air where you can breathe the fresh air and explore something more interesting rather than the virtual world. 2. Being addicted to computer games will be harmful to you in many ways. To begin with, they will waste too much valuable time which should be spent on your study or other beneficial things. In addition, playing games for a long time will do harm to your health, especially to your eyes. Worse still, some games are full of violence, which will be harmful to your mental health. Therefore, I strongly hope that you can stay away from them. The earlier, the better. In order to live a meaningful life, you can read more good books, take more exercise to build up or participate in some social activities to expand your horizons. 3. Actually, long-time exposure to mobile games affects not only your academic performance but also your health. It will harm your eyes as well as your brain. So it is high time that you kicked the habit. Here I’d like to offer you some suggestions. First of all, start some other hobbies, such as reading and working out regularly, which will take your mind off the game and help you resist the temptation. In addition, it is also a necessity to have a heart-to-heart conversation with your parents. 4. Actually, it is commonly seen that more and more teenagers get crazy about mobile phone games, which distract them from studies. Besides, it causes a lack of sleep, posing a threat to their health. Therefore, to avoid it, I recommend you to manage your time wisely and responsibly. The less time you spent on online gaming, the less likely it is you will be addicted. Moreover, if I were you, I would prefer to engage with family and friends outdoors rather than sit on the couch looking down at your phone. 5. Addicted to playing online games, you are not only wasting your valuable time but also hurting the feelings of your parents. Judging from your last letter, your parents are living a simple life to save every penny for your future. Therefore, wouldn’t it be reasonable for you to respect them, have a talk with them and apologize? Meanwhile, you should manage your time more wisely and find some meaningful ways to spend your free time, such as playing sports with your friends, learning a new language, etc. 6. Slightly as playing games online might relieve us, spending too much time on it is a waste of time. Meanwhile, we are more likely to suffer from failing eyesight if staring at it frequently. Therefore, I can’t wait to give you some suggestions.  First of all, start some other hobbies, such as reading, listening to music, or playing chess, etc., which will take your mind off the games. Secondly, make more friends. Friends will help you when you can’t resist the temptation of the games. Thirdly, do more sports. As well as keeping you healthy, sports can also enrich your life and help you forget the games. 7. Addiction to Tik Tok is bad to your health and affects your study. Therefore, I’d like to offer you some advice that I think may be helpful to you. First of all, I recommend that you (should) learn to control yourself and make good use of your time to work hard. Secondly, it’s better for you to take part in some extracurricular activities, which can not only keep you healthy but also enrich your life. Last but not least, you have to develop other hobbies that can help you forget Tik Tok. 8. There is no denying that your life will be thrown into a mess if you are absorbed in browsing Tik Tok: not only will you be likely to shut yourself out of normal social life, but also will be distracted from study routine. Fortunately, some easy ways can help you get out of this obsession. In the first place, it is absolutely a great idea to switch your love to other healthier hobbies, such as reading books and volunteering. In addition to trying out new things, you are supposed to seek assistance from your parents. For example, turn in your cell phone and let them draw up a “screen time” timetable for you. 【完整答案】1 Dear Tom, Hearing that you are addicted to playing computer games/mobile games, I felt very worried. To begin with, it will make you waste too much valuable time which should be spent on your study. In addition, playing computer /mobile games for a long time will do harm to your health, especially to your eyes. Worse still, some games are full of violence, which will be harmful to your mental health. Therefore, I strongly hope that you can break away from it. The earlier, the better. You can read more good books, take more exercise or participate in some social activities to broaden your horizons. I hope the advice above will be helpful to you. Looking forward to your good news. Yours Sincerely, Li Hua 【完整答案】2 Dear Tom, I am worried to know that you should be so addicted to TikTok these days. Playing with TikTok too much is bad for your health. Besides, if you spend so much time on it, I’m afraid you will fall behind your classmates sooner or later. In my opinion, you should find something interesting to do if you want to relax. For example, take a walk on the playground with your friends. Alternatively, you can chat with your classmates, which will cheer you up. It doesn’t mean that TikTok should be completely refused in our life, but playing too much will surely affect our study. I know you have a strong will and you are clever. I believe you can get rid of this bad habit quite soon. Yours Sincerely, Li Hua 1 (内蒙古自治区锡林郭勒盟2024-2025学年高三上学期10月期中)假如你是高三学生李华，你班刚举行了以“克服拖延症( Overcoming Procrastination)”为话题的主题班会。会后，你认真地进行了自我反思和总结。请你写一份班会个人感想。 内容包括：1. 个人拖延经历； 2. 如何克服拖延。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80个左右； 2. 请在答题卡的相应位置作答。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 My Reflection on Overcoming Procrastination As a senior three student, I recently attended a class meeting focused on “Overcoming Procrastination”. It sparked deep reflections within me. Personally, I’ve often delayed starting tasks until the last minute, leading to unnecessary stress and poor results. To combat this, I’ve decided to set clear goals and break them down into manageable steps. Additionally, I’ll use time management tools like planners and reminders to stay on track. By committing to these strategies, I’m confident I can overcome procrastination and achieve my academic goals. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一份主题为“克服拖延症”的班会的个人感想。 【详解】 1. 词汇积累 关注：focus on→concentrate on 推迟：delay→put off 压力：stress→pressure 目标：goal→objective 2. 句式拓展 原 句：Personally, I’ve often delayed starting tasks until the last minute, leading to unnecessary stress and poor results. 拓展句：Personally, I’ve often delayed starting tasks until the last minute, which leads to unnecessary stress and poor results. 【高分句型】 1. Personally, I’ve often delayed starting tasks until the last minute, leading to unnecessary stress and poor results. (运用了现在分词作状语) 2. By committing to these strategies, I’m confident I can overcome procrastination and achieve my academic goals. (运用了动名词作宾语) 2 (2023届四川省绵阳中学高三2月模拟检测)为了帮助学生养成良好的学习习惯，你校英文报正在举行“拒绝拖延(Procrastination)”的征文活动，请你以“How to Overcome Procrastination”为题投稿。 内容包括：1. 拖延的影响； 2. 克服拖延的方法。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 How to Overcome Procrastination ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 How to Overcome Procrastination Procrastination, a common problem among students, may bring low grades and high levels of anxiety and guilt. Because of its negative consequences, it is high time that we overcame it. The very first step is to reflect on the reasons why you postpone doing things constantly. Only by doing so can you truly begin to change your behavior. It is also a good choice to break big tasks into small manageable ones. This is because when a task is too overwhelming to tackle, procrastination often follows. Besides, keeping yourself motivated by promising yourself a reward might help. While procrastination may not be conquered overnight, by practicing these methods, you will find it easier to get started on important tasks. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。要求考生对于你校英文报正在举行“拒绝拖延 (Procrastination)” 的征文活动，以“How to Overcome Procrastination”为题投稿。 【详解】 1. 词汇积累 由于：Because of → Due to 推迟：postpone→ put off 选择：choice→option 此外：Besides→ What’s more 2. 句式拓展 原 句：Procrastination, a common problem among students, may bring low grades and high levels of anxiety and guilt. 拓展句：Procrastination, which is a common problem among students, may bring low grades and high levels of anxiety and guilt. 【高分句型】 1. The very first step is to reflect on the reasons why you postpone doing things constantly. (运用了不定式作表语，why引导的限制性定语从句) 2. While procrastination may not be conquered overnight, by practicing these methods, you will find it easier to get started on important tasks.(运用了while引导的让步状语从句，动名词作宾语，不定式作宾语) 3 (四川省南充市2024-2025学年高三上学期12月月考)你校英文报计划举办主题为“改掉坏习惯”的征文活动。请你写一篇短文投稿。 内容包括：1. 你过去的坏习惯； 2. 你改掉坏习惯的过程； 3. 你的感悟。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 不必写标题。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Achieving your dreams can be challenging if you have numerous bad habits. One such habit that prevented my progress was my addiction to watching short videos on my cellphone late at night, resulting in poor sleep quality. To break free from this habit, I decided to read classic Chinese novels. Although the initial weeks were tough, the process proved to be rewarding. I discovered that the joy of reading physical books surpassed the short-lived entertainment provided by watching videos. It’s not easy to kick an old habit, but if you stay determined, you can make it. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“改掉坏习惯”为题写一篇短文给校英文报投稿。 【详解】 1. 词汇积累 许多：numerous→a large number of 阻止：prevent→bar 艰难的：tough→burdensome 发现：discovered→spot 2. 句式拓展 原 句：Achieving your dreams can be challenging if you have numerous bad habits. 同义句：It can be difficult to realize your dreams when you have a large number of bad habits. 【高分句型】 1. I discovered that the joy of reading physical books surpassed the short-lived entertainment provided by watching videos. (运用了that引导的定语从句) 2. Although the initial weeks were tough, the process proved to be rewarding. (运用了Although引导的让步状语从句) 4 (江西省十校2024-2025学年高三上学期第一次联考)假如你是李华，即将进入高三，你班开展“改正不良生活习惯，助力高三学习”主题班会，请用英文准备一份你自己的发言稿。 内容包括：1. 你养成的一个不健康的生活习惯； 2. 你的改变方法。 注意：1. 字数80左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear classmates, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you for your listening. 【答案】 Dear classmates, I’m going to share a bad habit of mine, and explain why and how I plan to change it. I used to stay up late and didn’t have a good sleep, which made me feel tired and unable to concentrate during the day. To change this bad habit, firstly, I decided to establish a regular sleep schedule and go to bed and wake up at the same time every day. Secondly, I created a comfortable sleep environment, keeping the bedroom quiet, dark and at an appropriate temperature. Thirdly, I avoided using electronic devices before bedtime as the blue light could affect sleep. Moreover, I also did some relaxation exercises such as deep breathing or gentle stretching before going to bed. By following the ways above, I have gotten rid of this bad habit completely. Thank you for your listening. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生就班级开展“改正不良生活习惯，助力高三学习”主题班会 用英文准备一份自己的发言稿，其内容包括：你养成的一个不健康的生活习惯和你的改变方法。 【详解】 1. 词汇积累 疲惫不堪的：tired→exhausted 首先：firstly→to begin with 影响：affect →influence 完全地：completely→totally 2. 句式拓展 原 句：Moreover, I also did some relaxation exercises such as deep breathing or gentle stretching before going to bed. 拓展句：Moreover, I also did some relaxation exercises such as deep breathing or gentle stretching before I went to bed. 【高分句型】 1. I used to stay up late and didn’t have a good sleep, which made me feel tired and unable to concentrate during the day. (运用which引导的非限制性定语从句) 2. Secondly, I created a comfortable sleep environment, keeping the bedroom quiet, dark and at an appropriate temperature. (运用了现在分词作状语) 5 (云南省昆明市2024-2025学年高三上学期开学检测)假定你是李华，你校英语社团正在组织以“No unhealthy living habits”为主题的征文比赛，请你结合自己的亲身经历写一篇短文参赛。 内容包括：1. 过去的不良饮食和运动习惯； 2. 决心改变的原因和方式； 3. 改变带来的结果。 注意：1. 词数80左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 No unhealthy living habits ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 No unhealthy living habits In the past, I had unhealthy eating and exercise habits. I often ate junk food and rarely exercised. This led to weight gain and low energy levels. Realizing the negative impact on my health, I decided to change. I started eating balanced meals with more fruits and vegetables and began exercising regularly, such as jogging and doing yoga. These changes have brought significant results. I have lost weight, feel more energetic, and my overall health has improved. I am determined to maintain these healthy habits for a better life. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。学校英语社团正在组织以《不要有不健康的生活习惯》为主题的征文 比赛，要求考生按照要求结合自己的亲身经历写一篇短文参赛。 【详解】 1. 词汇积累 很少：rarely→ seldom 导致：lead to→ result in 影响：impact→ influence 决定：decide→ determine 2. 句式拓展 原 句：I often ate junk food and rarely exercised. 拓展句：Not only did I often eat junk food but also I rarely exercised. 【高分句型】 1. Realizing the negative impact on my health, I decided to change.(运用了现在分词Realizing作状语) 2. I started eating balanced meals with more fruits and vegetables and began exercising regularly, such as jogging and doing yoga.(运用了动名词eating作宾语) 6 (陕西省韩城市2023-2024学年高二下学期期中)假设你是李华，近期你校英语报正在开展以“Change the Bad Habits and Live a Healthy Life”为主题的稿件征集活动。请你给校报编辑发一封邮件，谈谈你想要改变的不良生活习惯。 内容包括：1. 你想要改变的不良生活习惯以及原因； 2. 你的改变方法； 3. 你的期望。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Editor, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Editor, I’m Li Hua. I’m writing to share a bad habit of my life, and explain why and how I plan to change the bad habit. In my daily life, I like eating junk food such as hamburger, potato chips, and cold drinks. Obviously, they are harmful to our health. These food can cause malnutrition and contain a lot of calories. To get rid of the bad habit, I plan to eat at home instead of restaurants, drink warm water, and eat more vegetables. Besides, I will try taking exercise twice a week. I hope that I will develop a good habit and live a healthy life. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的身份向校报编辑发邮件，分享想要改变的不良生活 习惯、改变方法及期望，旨在响应学校英语报的稿件征集。 【详解】 1. 词汇积累 解释：explain→clarify 日常生活：daily life→everyday routine 明显地：obviously→evidently 另外：besides→additionally 2. 句式拓展 原 句：These food can cause malnutrition and contain a lot of calories. 拓展句：These food, which can cause malnutrition, contain a lot of calories. 【高分句型】 1. I’m writing to share a bad habit of my life, and explain why and how I plan to change the bad habit.(运用了 why and how引导的宾语从句) 2. I hope that I will develop a good habit and live a healthy life.(运用了that引导的宾语从句) 7 (广东省广州市2023-2024学年高二下学期期中)假定你是李华，你校的许多同学由于种种原因养成了熬夜的习惯，熬夜会对健康造成很大的危害。请你以“The Harmful Effects of Staying Up Late”为题，写一篇英语短文，给你校英文报投稿，以使熬夜的同学认识到熬夜的危害并改掉这一不良习惯。 The Harmful Effects of Staying Up Late ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 The Harmful Effects of Staying Up Late There are various reasons why many students have got into the habit of staying up late. Actually, staying up late is a bad habit, which has negative effects on our physical and mental health. To begin with, it will not only lead to a lack of energy but also cause us to suffer from dizziness and be unable to concentrate on our lessons. Additionally, long-time staying up late will weaken our memory, and do harm to eyesight as well as liver. What’s worse, those who are accustomed to staying up late are more likely to suffer from other diseases. Therefore, it is high time that we made up our minds to adopt a healthy lifestyle. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇“The Harmful Effects of Staying Up Late”为主题英语短 文进行投稿，以使熬夜的同学认识到熬夜的危害并改掉这一不良习惯。 【详解】 1. 词汇积累 各种各样的：various→a variety of 消极的：negative→passive 导致：lead to→bring about 专心于：concentrate on→focus on 2.句型转换 原 句：Actually, staying up late is a bad habit, which has negative effects on our physical and mental health. 拓展句：Actually, staying up late is a bad habit because it has negative effects on our physical and mental health. 【高分句型】 1. There are various reasons why many students have got into the habit of staying up late. (运用了why引导定语从句) 2. Actually, staying up late is a bad habit, which has negative effects on our physical and mental health.(运用了 which引导非限定性定语从句) 8 (广东省揭阳市揭东一中2024-2025学年高二上学期期中)手机成瘾者已经越来越普遍，为了提醒同学们关注这一问题，请你为校报写一篇通讯稿。 内容包括：1. “手机成瘾”的原因； 2. “手机成瘾”的影响； 3. “拒为手机成瘾者”的建议。 注意：1. 词数80左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：手机成瘾mobile phone addiction 低头族(特指在社交中忽略他人而只专注手机或其他电子设备的人)phubber ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】      Nowadays, people tend to stare at their mobile phones almost everywhere—in subways, restaurants, lifts, supermarkets, everywhere. While it is normal to check your phone occasionally, if you are one of those people who just can’t stop using their phone, then you could be suffering from mobile phone addiction. We cannot ignore the mobile phone’s negative influences. Many people waste too much time using their phones every day. Their spare time is spent on things like mobile phone games, watching Internet videos, and checking social media apps. Such constant use can lead to physical health problems like neck pain and eye disease. Relationship problems can also occur due to “phubbing”—ignoring the people around you in favour of your phone. It is high time that people put their phones aside and raised their heads. Pay more attention to others and have more face-to-face communication. What’s more, do more exercise, which is much more beneficial than time spent on a phone. In a word, only when we learn to limit our phone use can we live a happy life. 【导语】本文是说明文。手机成瘾者已经越来越普遍，为了提醒同学们关注这一问题，请你为校报写一篇 通讯稿。内容包括：“手机成瘾”的原因、“手机成瘾”的影响和“拒为手机成瘾者”的建议。 【详解】 1. 词汇积累 偶尔：occasionally→once in while 导致：lead to→result in 由于：due to→because of 总之：In a word→In brief 2. 句式拓展 原 句：Their spare time is spent on things like mobile phone games, watching Internet videos, and checking social media apps. Such constant use can lead to physical health problems like neck pain and eye disease. 拓展句：Their spare time is spent on things like mobile phone games, watching Internet videos, and checking social media apps, which can lead to physical health problems like neck pain and eye disease. 【高分句型】 1. While it is normal to check your phone occasionally, if you are one of those people who just can’t stop using their phone, then you could be suffering from mobile phone addiction.(运用了if引导的条件状语从句和who 引导的限制性定语从句) 2. What’s more, do more exercise, which is much more beneficial than time spent on a phone. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) 9 (广东省肇庆市2023-2024学年高二下学期期中)学校英文报正在开展以“健康生活”为主题的征文活动，请根据你自身情况写一篇短文投稿。 内容包括：1. 自己的不良行为习惯以及后果； 2. 自己的意识及行动； 3. 发出倡议。 注意：1. 词数80左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 As is known to all, a healthy lifestyle plays a significant role in our life, which needs us to be aware of the importance of a balanced diet and our appropriate schedule. Half a year ago, I realized I hardly ever felt well, either physically or mentally. I often felt sleepy and dizzy in class, and even lacked passion. Hence, I made up my mind to make some changes. Firstly, I stopped buying all the junk food such as sweets, sugary drinks. In addition, I did some simple exercise and went for a walk for at least 20 minutes every day. To my surprise, I have got quite fantastic results. Now I feel more dynamic and stronger than before, in both body and mind. I sleep soundly every night. From my experience above, I believe that we students all can be in control of our own life. Everybody can definitely change themselves for the better. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“健康生活”为主题根据自身情况写一篇短文投稿。 【详解】 1. 词汇积累 意识到：be aware of/ realize→recognize 因此：hence→therefore 惊讶：surprise→astonishment 决定：make up one’s mind→be determined to 2. 句式拓展 原 句：Firstly, I stopped buying all the junk food such as sweets, sugary drinks. In addition, I did some simple exercise and went for a walk for at least 20 minutes every day. 拓展句：Not only did I stop buying all the junk food such as sweets, sugary drinks, but also I did some simple exercise and went for a walk for at least 20 minutes every day. 【高分句型】 1. As is known to all, a healthy lifestyle plays a significant role in our life, which needs us to be aware of the importance of a balanced diet and our appropriate schedule. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句) 2. From my experience above, I believe that we students all can be in control of our own life. (运用了that引导宾语从句) 10 (云南省昭通市2023-2024学年高二上学期期中)假定你是李华，是某外国语学校的学生会主席。最近，你校发起了“消除不良行为习惯”的活动。请你代表学生会写一封倡议书。 内容包括：1. 列举学生的不良行为习惯(迟到、乱扔垃圾、缺失礼仪等)； 2. 好习惯的重要性； 3. 发出倡议。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear students, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ The Students’ Union 【答案】 Dear students, As everybody can see in our school, many students don’t have good behavior. They don’t get up early and are often late for school. They throw rubbish and park their bicycles anywhere as they like. What’s worse, they don’t behave according to the etiquette rules. I think it’s high time that we should develop good behavior habits when we’re studying at school. For one thing, good habits have a key effect on our characters, which will determine our fortune. For another thing, good habits are symbols of Chinese traditional virtues, which were responsible to spread to the world. Dear friends, if we take action to change our behavior right away, we can make a big difference in the future. The Student Union 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生根据校发起的“消除不良行为习惯”的活动，写一封倡议书。内 容包括：列举学生的不良行为习惯(迟到、乱扔垃圾、缺失礼仪等)；好习惯的重要性；发出倡议。 【详解】 1. 词汇积累 对……产生……的影响：have a/an...effect on→have a/an...impact on 决定：determine→decide 形成：develop→form 采取措施：take action→take measures 2. 句式拓展 原 句：They throw rubbish and park their bicycles anywhere as they like. 拓展句：Not only do they throw rubbish but also they park their bicycles anywhere as they like. 【高分句型】 1. I think it’s high time that we should develop good behavior habits when we’re studying at school. (运用了虚 拟语气和when引导的时间状语从句) 2. For one thing, good habits have a key effect on our characters, which will determine our fortune. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ “同题异构”提升应用文写作训练的效率之专题 03-8(根除陋习)“同题异练” 所谓“同题异练”是指：要求考生就同一话题以书信体写作的要求和非书信体的写作要求进行不同视角下的写作训练。具体的说：针对同一个话题或题目，从不同的角度命题，要求考生使用不同的文体风格和表达方式来进行多次写作练习。这有助于考生更全面地理解话题，积累更多的素材和灵感，提升思维的灵活性，激发写作的创造力，快速提高写作能力，以便在未来的高考中写出精彩纷呈的考场作文。 本专题的话题是“根除陋习”，在练习时考生需要注意以下几个方面。 一是要弄清写作文体：认真审题，弄清写作文体，是用书信体还是用非书信体。本次练习涉及到的文体大体为：书信体的建议信；非书信体的演讲、投稿、倡议书等。 二是要谋划篇章结构：一般来说，我们常常采用三段式写作(与本专题相关的写作)： 三是要打开写作思路：这是考生普遍存在的软肋(高考英语第一节的写作作为衡量考生英语综合运用 能力的重要题型之一，近年来愈发凸显考生思路开阔的重要性。然而，许多考生除了语言基础不扎实、表达受阻这一最常见的问题外，思路不开阔的问题也越来越常见)。就本专题，笔者建议考生从以下几个方面打开思路：①所谓“陋习”是指“不良习惯”。常见的不良行为习惯：网瘾(包括手机成瘾<低头族>、手机/电脑/网络游戏成瘾以及玩抖音成瘾等)、做事拖延、熬夜、上学迟到、乱扔垃圾、缺失礼仪等等；②以“根除陋习”为主题的活动主要有：主题教育活动(主题班会、主题征文、主题报道、主题倡议等)；③亲身的经历(包括方法和建议)的分享以及对他人求助的回复(重点是提供解决问题的办法与建议)。 另外，建议考生参看本系列资料的专题01“同题异解”细节的构思(将题目中所给的关键信息进行充 实与拓展)。 (整合学科网有关资料)假设你是李华，你的笔友Tom最近沉迷于电脑/手机/网络游戏/抖音，这对他造成了很大危害。请你给他写一封信，劝说他改掉这个不良习惯，并提出建议。 内容包括：1. 影响及危害； 2. 你的建议。 注意：l. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答. Dear Tom, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours Sincerely, Li Hua 【简析】 本篇属于书信体的建议信的写作。Tom最近沉迷于电脑/手机/网络游戏/抖音，这对他造成了很大危害。请考生以李华的名义，并以笔友的身份给他写一封信，劝说他改掉这个不良习惯，并提出建议。本篇写作的重点是沉迷于电脑/手机/网络游戏/抖音的影响及危害；根除此陋习的建议(需要考生打开写作思路)。以下就此提供不同的写作内容。 1. Since computer games not only cause damage to you physically and mentally, but also waste a lot of valuable time, I urge you should quit them. Firstly, you’d better develop some hobbies, such as fishing and skating, which are able to distract attention. Next, it’s advisable to ask your parents, teachers and classmates for help when you have difficulty adjusting to the real life. Last but not least, try some exercise in the open air where you can breathe the fresh air and explore something more interesting rather than the virtual world. 2. Being addicted to computer games will be harmful to you in many ways. To begin with, they will waste too much valuable time which should be spent on your study or other beneficial things. In addition, playing games for a long time will do harm to your health, especially to your eyes. Worse still, some games are full of violence, which will be harmful to your mental health. Therefore, I strongly hope that you can stay away from them. The earlier, the better. In order to live a meaningful life, you can read more good books, take more exercise to build up or participate in some social activities to expand your horizons. 3. Actually, long-time exposure to mobile games affects not only your academic performance but also your health. It will harm your eyes as well as your brain. So it is high time that you kicked the habit. Here I’d like to offer you some suggestions. First of all, start some other hobbies, such as reading and working out regularly, which will take your mind off the game and help you resist the temptation. In addition, it is also a necessity to have a heart-to-heart conversation with your parents. 4. Actually, it is commonly seen that more and more teenagers get crazy about mobile phone games, which distract them from studies. Besides, it causes a lack of sleep, posing a threat to their health. Therefore, to avoid it, I recommend you to manage your time wisely and responsibly. The less time you spent on online gaming, the less likely it is you will be addicted. Moreover, if I were you, I would prefer to engage with family and friends outdoors rather than sit on the couch looking down at your phone. 5. Addicted to playing online games, you are not only wasting your valuable time but also hurting the feelings of your parents. Judging from your last letter, your parents are living a simple life to save every penny for your future. Therefore, wouldn’t it be reasonable for you to respect them, have a talk with them and apologize? Meanwhile, you should manage your time more wisely and find some meaningful ways to spend your free time, such as playing sports with your friends, learning a new language, etc. 6. Slightly as playing games online might relieve us, spending too much time on it is a waste of time. Meanwhile, we are more likely to suffer from failing eyesight if staring at it frequently. Therefore, I can’t wait to give you some suggestions.  First of all, start some other hobbies, such as reading, listening to music, or playing chess, etc., which will take your mind off the games. Secondly, make more friends. Friends will help you when you can’t resist the temptation of the games. Thirdly, do more sports. As well as keeping you healthy, sports can also enrich your life and help you forget the games. 7. Addiction to Tik Tok is bad to your health and affects your study. Therefore, I’d like to offer you some advice that I think may be helpful to you. First of all, I recommend that you (should) learn to control yourself and make good use of your time to work hard. Secondly, it’s better for you to take part in some extracurricular activities, which can not only keep you healthy but also enrich your life. Last but not least, you have to develop other hobbies that can help you forget Tik Tok. 8. There is no denying that your life will be thrown into a mess if you are absorbed in browsing Tik Tok: not only will you be likely to shut yourself out of normal social life, but also will be distracted from study routine. Fortunately, some easy ways can help you get out of this obsession. In the first place, it is absolutely a great idea to switch your love to other healthier hobbies, such as reading books and volunteering. In addition to trying out new things, you are supposed to seek assistance from your parents. For example, turn in your cell phone and let them draw up a “screen time” timetable for you. 【完整答案】1 Dear Tom, Hearing that you are addicted to playing computer games/mobile games, I felt very worried. To begin with, it will make you waste too much valuable time which should be spent on your study. In addition, playing computer /mobile games for a long time will do harm to your health, especially to your eyes. Worse still, some games are full of violence, which will be harmful to your mental health. Therefore, I strongly hope that you can break away from it. The earlier, the better. You can read more good books, take more exercise or participate in some social activities to broaden your horizons. I hope the advice above will be helpful to you. Looking forward to your good news. Yours Sincerely, Li Hua 【完整答案】2 Dear Tom, I am worried to know that you should be so addicted to TikTok these days. Playing with TikTok too much is bad for your health. Besides, if you spend so much time on it, I’m afraid you will fall behind your classmates sooner or later. In my opinion, you should find something interesting to do if you want to relax. For example, take a walk on the playground with your friends. Alternatively, you can chat with your classmates, which will cheer you up. It doesn’t mean that TikTok should be completely refused in our life, but playing too much will surely affect our study. I know you have a strong will and you are clever. I believe you can get rid of this bad habit quite soon. Yours Sincerely, Li Hua 1 (内蒙古自治区锡林郭勒盟2024-2025学年高三上学期10月期中)假如你是高三学生李华，你班刚举行了以“克服拖延症( Overcoming Procrastination)”为话题的主题班会。会后，你认真地进行了自我反思和总结。请你写一份班会个人感想。 内容包括：1. 个人拖延经历； 2. 如何克服拖延。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80个左右； 2. 请在答题卡的相应位置作答。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2 (2023届四川省绵阳中学高三2月模拟检测)为了帮助学生养成良好的学习习惯，你校英文报正在举行“拒绝拖延(Procrastination)”的征文活动，请你以“How to Overcome Procrastination”为题投稿。 内容包括：1. 拖延的影响； 2. 克服拖延的方法。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 How to Overcome Procrastination ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3 (四川省南充市2024-2025学年高三上学期12月月考)你校英文报计划举办主题为“改掉坏习惯”的征文活动。请你写一篇短文投稿。 内容包括：1. 你过去的坏习惯； 2. 你改掉坏习惯的过程； 3. 你的感悟。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 不必写标题。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4 (江西省十校2024-2025学年高三上学期第一次联考)假如你是李华，即将进入高三，你班开展“改正不良生活习惯，助力高三学习”主题班会，请用英文准备一份你自己的发言稿。 内容包括：1. 你养成的一个不健康的生活习惯； 2. 你的改变方法。 注意：1. 字数80左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear classmates, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you for your listening. 5 (云南省昆明市2024-2025学年高三上学期开学检测)假定你是李华，你校英语社团正在组织以“No unhealthy living habits”为主题的征文比赛，请你结合自己的亲身经历写一篇短文参赛。 内容包括：1. 过去的不良饮食和运动习惯； 2. 决心改变的原因和方式； 3. 改变带来的结果。 注意：1. 词数80左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 No unhealthy living habits ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6 (陕西省韩城市2023-2024学年高二下学期期中)假设你是李华，近期你校英语报正在开展以“Change the Bad Habits and Live a Healthy Life”为主题的稿件征集活动。请你给校报编辑发一封邮件，谈谈你想要改变的不良生活习惯。 内容包括：1. 你想要改变的不良生活习惯以及原因； 2. 你的改变方法； 3. 你的期望。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Editor, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 7 (广东省广州市2023-2024学年高二下学期期中)假定你是李华，你校的许多同学由于种种原因养成了熬夜的习惯，熬夜会对健康造成很大的危害。请你以“The Harmful Effects of Staying Up Late”为题，写一篇英语短文，给你校英文报投稿，以使熬夜的同学认识到熬夜的危害并改掉这一不良习惯。 The Harmful Effects of Staying Up Late ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8 (广东省揭阳市揭东一中2024-2025学年高二上学期期中)手机成瘾者已经越来越普遍，为了提醒同学们关注这一问题，请你为校报写一篇通讯稿。 内容包括：1. “手机成瘾”的原因； 2. “手机成瘾”的影响； 3. “拒为手机成瘾者”的建议。 注意：1. 词数80左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：手机成瘾mobile phone addiction 低头族(特指在社交中忽略他人而只专注手机或其他电子设备的人)phubber ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9 (广东省肇庆市2023-2024学年高二下学期期中)学校英文报正在开展以“健康生活”为主题的征文活动，请根据你自身情况写一篇短文投稿。 内容包括：1. 自己的不良行为习惯以及后果； 2. 自己的意识及行动； 3. 发出倡议。 注意：1. 词数80左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10 (云南省昭通市2023-2024学年高二上学期期中)假定你是李华，是某外国语学校的学生会主席。最近，你校发起了“消除不良行为习惯”的活动。请你代表学生会写一封倡议书。 内容包括：1. 列举学生的不良行为习惯(迟到、乱扔垃圾、缺失礼仪等)； 2. 好习惯的重要性； 3. 发出倡议。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear students, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ The Students’ Union 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$