2025届高考英语复习读后续写练习：水灯节的意外与希望：莱克的心愿之旅 课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习 水灯节的意外与希望：莱克的心愿之旅 1 王 均艳 (王) - 题目分析 读后续写 题目再现 范文呈现 努力方向 2 2 Part 1 题目呈现 3 3 续写原文 The moment the bell rang, Lek grabbed his school bag and raced towards his destination. When at last he pushed open the door of his parents’ restaurant, he could hardly catch his breath. He ran into the kitchen and reached for a pile of banana leaves on the counter. If he hurried, he might have time to make his krathong (水灯) before the celebration started. Tonight was Loy Krathong (水灯节), the Festival of the Floating Lanterns. In his town, people would send out lighted candles in tiny boats along rivers and canals so that the past year’s problems could sail away with them and be replaced with wishes for the new year. 4 4 续写原文 As he wrapped the banana leaves around a bamboo base to form his boat, Lek thought about his sister, Katia. She was too sick to float a krathong on the river tonight. Perhaps a wish on Loy Krathong would take away her illness. Maybe then she would be able to laugh the way she used to. He tucked (塞) four red flowers inside the banana leaves and poked three sticks of incense between their blossoms. In the middle, he placed a tall, white candle. This week, Lek had practiced launching a krathong the way his brother, Fred did. Fred was experienced in launching krathongs and often launched krathongs into the river for each of their customers. Lek had balanced stones on the flat piece of metal at the bottom of a long pole and lowered them into the river until their parents had scolded him for standing too close to the water’s edge. 5 5 续写原文 When night fell, Lek and Fred made their way outside through the crowd standing under the full moon. Fred stood on the jetty (突堤), lowering a krathong into the water with his pole. The candlelight danced on the black river as the boat slowly followed the current. A long line of people waited behind Fred. It would take forever before he could help Lek! Lek took matches and lit the candle on his tiny boat. He lowered his krathong toward the water, stretching to reach its surface. 6 6 段首句 Paragraph 1：Suddenly, he felt his body shaking on the edge and the krathong dropped from his hand into the dark water. Paragraph 2： Fred walked towards weeping Lek with a krathong in his hand. 7 7 Part 2 题目分析 8 8 续写原文分析 9 放学铃声一响，莱克就急忙奔向父母的餐厅，准备在水灯节制作水灯。水灯节时人们会在小船上点上蜡烛，让其顺流而下，带走过去一年的烦恼，许下新年愿望。莱克制作水灯是希望能为生病的妹妹祈福。夜幕降临，他和哥哥弗雷德来到河边，弗雷德熟练地用杆子将水灯放入河中。莱克也准备放自己的水灯，就在这时意外发生了。 9 点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语； 点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句； 点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语； 点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。 情节构建的重点 10 10 续写思路分析 Para 1：Suddenly, he felt his body shaking on the edge and the krathong dropped from his hand into the dark water. 突然，他感觉自己在岸边摇晃起来，水灯从手中掉进了黑暗的水里。莱克的心猛地一沉，整个人都僵在了原地。他的眼睛死死地盯着那迅速消失在黑暗中的水灯，双手下意识地向前伸着，仿佛这样就能把水灯抓回来。周围的喧闹声似乎瞬间消失了，他的耳边只有自己急促的呼吸声和砰砰砰的心跳声。想到妹妹充满期待的眼神，莱克的眼眶瞬间红了，泪水不受控制地滚落下来。他满心自责，为什么自己这么不小心，这么重要的水灯，承载着对妹妹康复的全部希望，就这么没了。他呆呆地站在那里，不知道该怎么办，周围人的目光让他觉得更加难受。 11 11 续写思路分析 Para 2：Fred walked towards weeping Lek with a krathong in his hand. 弗雷德手里拿着一个水灯，朝哭泣的莱克走来。他轻轻地拍了拍莱克的肩膀，温柔地说：“别伤心，莱克，这个水灯你拿去放，它会带着你的心愿一起漂走的。” 莱克抬起头，泪眼朦胧地看着弗雷德，眼中满是感激。弗雷德微笑着鼓励他，然后和他一起走到河边。弗雷德小心地协助莱克，将新的水灯缓缓放入水中。水灯稳稳地漂浮在水面上，烛光随着水流摇曳闪烁。莱克双手合十，默默地许下心愿，希望妹妹能快点好起来，像以前一样快乐地玩耍。看着远去的水灯，莱克的心里重新燃起了希望，他相信妹妹一定会康复的。 12 12 Part 3 范文呈现 13 13 范文呈现 Suddenly, he felt his body shaking on the edge and the krathong dropped from his hand into the dark water. Lek's heart sank instantly and he froze in place. His eyes were fixed on the krathong that quickly disappeared into the darkness. His hands stretched forward subconsciously, as if he could catch it back in this way. The noise around him seemed to disappear in an instant. The only sounds in his ears were his rapid breathing and thumping heartbeat. Thinking of his sister's expectant eyes, Lek's eyes instantly turned red and tears rolled down uncontrollably. He was filled with self - blame. Why was he so careless? This important krathong, which carried all his hopes for his sister's recovery, was gone. He stood there blankly, not knowing what to do. The eyes of the people around made him feel even more uncomfortable. 14 14 范文呈现 Fred walked towards weeping Lek with a krathong in his hand. He gently patted Lek on the shoulder and said softly, "Don't be sad, Lek. You can use this krathong to make a wish. It will carry your wish away." Lek looked up at Fred with tear - filled eyes, full of gratitude. Fred smiled and encouraged him. Then they walked to the river together. Fred carefully helped Lek put the new krathong into the water. The krathong floated steadily on the water, and the candlelight flickered with the current. Lek put his hands together and silently made a wish, hoping that his sister would get better soon and play happily as before. Looking at the receding krathong, hope rekindled in Lek's heart. He believed that his sister would surely recover. 15 15 升级版范文呈现 Suddenly, he felt his body shaking on the edge and the krathong dropped from his hand into the dark water. Lek's heart plummeted, and he was rooted to the spot. His eyes were glued to the krathong that vanished into the gloom in the blink of an eye. His hands shot forward instinctively, as if that could retrieve the precious vessel. All the surrounding hubbub seemed to fade into oblivion; the only audible sounds were his ragged breaths and the thunderous pounding of his heart. The image of his sister's expectant eyes flashed across his mind, and Lek's eyes welled up with tears that streamed down his cheeks unchecked. Overwhelmed with self - reproach, he cursed his own clumsiness. How could he have been so careless? This krathong, the bearer of all his hopes for his sister's recovery, was now lost. He stood there, a picture of desolation, not knowing how to react, and the curious stares of onlookers only compounded his misery. 16 16 升级版范文呈现 Fred walked towards weeping Lek with a krathong in his hand. He laid a gentle hand on Lek's shoulder and murmured, "Don't be disheartened, Lek. Here's another krathong for you. It'll carry your wishes to the far - off places." Lek looked up, his eyes swimming with tears, but there was a glimmer of hope as well. Fred's warm smile reassured him. They made their way to the riverside together. With Fred's careful assistance, Lek gingerly placed the new krathong on the water. The little boat bobbed gently, and the candle flame danced in the night breeze. Lek clasped his hands together, his lips moving in silent supplication, praying that his sister would soon be restored to health and joy. As he watched the krathong drift away, hope surged anew in his heart. He was convinced that his sister's recovery was just around the corner. 17 17 Part 4 努力方向 18 18 高级结构 名词性从句 高级结构 三连动 虚拟语气 形容词做状语 无灵主语 19 定语从句 状语从句 （包含倒装句） 强调句 副词做状语 非谓语 （包括独立主格） 19 20 Thank you! $$