读后续写讲评课 课件-2025届高三上学期英语一轮复习专项

词汇准备 令某人激动的是　 感激的泪水从脸颊滑落 对……深怀感激 高兴地欢呼和鼓掌 不禁想到 激动得热泪盈眶 取得成功 爱上..... 坚定地点了点头 紧紧拥抱某人 抑制内心的激动　　 to one's excitement tears of gratitude roll down one’s cheeks have a deep gratitude towards cheer and clap happily couldn’t help thinking of tears of excitement come to my eyes pay off fall in love with nod determinedly hug sb. tightly contain one’s excitement 造句练习 1.令我激动的是 ，我获得了一等奖。 2.当我领奖时，每个人都高兴地欢呼和鼓掌。 3.我紧紧地拥抱我的老师，眼泪顺着脸颊留下来。 主语1＋谓语..., 主语2+doing/done (独立主格结构) To my excitement,I won the first prize. When I accepted the award, everyone cheered and clapped happily. I hugged my teacher tightly, tears rolling down my cheeks. 文本基本信息 main characters: conflict: I became enjoy writing and don't care about whether I could win. Uitimately I won the contest. my social studies teacher, I I didn't like writing.English is only my second language.My teacher asked me to enter a writing contest. ending: emotional changes to writing: hate----love change of attitude towards the teacher: couldn’t understand----appreciate 梳理写作提纲 A few weeks later, when I almost forgot the contest, there came the news._______________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I went to my teacher’s office after the award presentation. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ (3衔接，2过渡，1主题) 衔接1:消息是什么？ 衔接2:颁奖典礼上发生了什么？ 衔接3:老师的反应是什么？ 过渡1:听到这个消息我有什么反应？ 过渡2:我对老师的反应作出什么回应？ 主题升华: ? 佳作展示 佳作展示 I.Doing..., 主语+谓语 II.主语1＋谓语..., 主语2+doing/done (独立主格结构) 例：Mark hugged his friends tightly, tears filling his eyes. III.It is / was +被强调部分 + that /who+ 其他部分(强调句型) 例：It was the unforgettable journey that made me realize the importance of family. 重点句型回顾 1.是我的老师给了我不断的支持和实用的建议。 It was my teacher who gave me constant encouragement and practical advice. 2.正是这次难忘的经历让我意识到坚持的重要性。 It was the unforgettable experience that made me realize the importance of perseverance. 主题升华句 It is / was +被强调部分 + that /who+ 其他部分(强调句型) A few weeks later, when I almost forgot the contest, there came the news. I won the first place! Hearing the news, I stood there, frozen. I couldn't believe my ears. Had I heard right? My classmates gave me a look of disbelief at first, and then cheered and clapped happily. When I came to my senses, tears of excitement came to my eyes. At the award presentation, I accepted the award certificate, extremely nervous and excited. At that moment, I couldn’t help thinking of my teacher. I went to my teacher's office after the award presentation.When I presented the award certificate to my teacher, his eyes glistening(发光) with tears, he reached out his hands and hugged me tightly. I expressed my sincerest gratitude to the teacher and attributed(把...归因于) this small achievement to him. Looking into my eyes, he said, “I’m so proud of you. It’s your own hard work that paid off. Believe in yourself and you can write better and better.” I nodded determinedly. That was when I fell in love with writing. A few weeks later, when I almost forgot the contest, there came the news. I won the first place! Hearing the news, I stood there, frozen. I couldn't believe my ears. Had I heard right? My classmates gave me a look of disbelief at first, and then cheered and clapped happily. When I came to my senses, tears of excitement came to my eyes. At the award presentation, I accepted the award certificate, extremely nervous and excited. At that moment, I couldn’t help thinking of my teacher. I went to my teacher's office after the award presentation.When I presented the award certificate to my teacher, his eyes glistening(发光) with tears, he reached out his hands and hugged me tightly. I expressed my sincerest gratitude to the teacher and attributed(把...归因于) this small achievement to him. Looking into my eyes, he said, “ I’m so proud of you. It’s your own hard work that paid off. Believe in yourself and you can write better and better.” I nodded determinedly. That was when I fell in love with writing. Homework: Polish your writing and make it better. 评判标准（150词左右） 五种基本句型是否正确？ 2. 是否做到“3衔接2过渡1主题” 3. 是否有高级词汇或高级句型？ 复合句：非谓语 强调句 独立主格 / with 结构...； so...that...; such...that... 定语从句；状语从句等 4. 书写是否整洁? 词数是否符合要求？ 《课程名称》 0 $$