内容正文:
2025广西
英 语
写作培优册
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第二部分 高频主题三阶写作指导
人与自然
主题12 环境保护
(环保行动:垃圾分类,节约用水,绿色校园,低碳生活;保护
动植物)
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【教材模块/单元链接】
外研版 人教版 译林牛津版
九(上)M12 环境
保护 九(全)U13 环境
保护 八(下)U8 环境保
护
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一阶 素材积累与训练
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素材积累
短语与句型
破坏环境的行为及影响
1.cut down砍伐
2.pour waste water into向……里排放废水
3.spit in public 在公共场合吐痰
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4.throw litter around/here and there到处扔垃圾
5.throw away扔掉,抛弃
6.be harmful to/be bad for对……有害
7.become worse and worse 变得越来越糟糕
8.waste water resource浪费水资源
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保护环境的做法
1.turn off关掉
2.clean up打扫;清除
3.call on 号召
4.stay/keep away from远离……
5.start/begin to do/doing sth. 开始做某事
6.start/begin with以……开始
7.stop doing sth. 停止做某事
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8.prevent…from polluting the environment 阻止……污染环境
9.protect…from… 保护……免受……
10.make a contribution/contributions to为……做贡献
11.had better do sth. 最好做某事
12.try one’s best to do sth. 尽某人最大的努力做某事
13.keep off the grass不要践踏草坪
14.recycle books and paper回收书和纸
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总结
1.make a difference起作用;有影响
2.make the world a better place to live in 让世界成为一个更好
的居住地
3.take measures/action to do sth. 采取措施/行动做某事
4.It’s our duty to do sth. 做某事是我们的责任。
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开头句
1.Pollution is our great enemy, and we have to fight it.[外研
九(上)M12]
2.Pollution is one of the biggest problems in the world today.
[译林牛津八(下)U8]
3.The earth is our home. However, our earth is facing a lot of
serious problems.
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4.As we all know, air pollution has become a serious problem.
5.As is known to everyone, animals are our friends. However,
many kinds of animals are in danger now.
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中间句
环境问题
1.The river was dirty. Even the bottom of the river was full of
rubbish. People are throwing litter into the river.[人教九(全)
U13]
2.The more cars there are in the street, the more serious the
air pollution is.
3.Many people always use plastic bags, which are bad for the
environment.
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动物问题
1.Some people kill animals to get money from their meat or fur.
2.People cut down so many trees that animals can’t find
enough food and lose their homes.
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保护环境的行为
1.We can do more to protect the environment. For example, we
can help keep the air clean by planting trees. [外研九(上)
M12]
2.I’ve tried my best to protect the environment. I recycle. I
don’t throw away things if I don’t want them any more. I
turn off the lights when I leave a room.[外研九(上)M12]
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3.To cut down air pollution, we should take the bus or
subway instead of driving. Also, we can ride a bike. It’s
good for health and it doesn’t cost anything.[人教九(全)
U13]
4.I never take wooden chopsticks or plastic forks when I buy
takeaway food. I use the ones at home.[人教九(全)U13]
5.It’s wise for people to choose public transport or ride bicycles.
[译林牛津八(下)U8]
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6.We can save water by taking shorter showers and turning off
the tap when we brush our teeth.
7.Last but not least, it’s of great importance to stop using
plastic bags and chopsticks.
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保护动物的行为
1.We should call on everyone not to kill endangered animals.
2.If possible, we can take part in some activities to learn
more about wild animals and try to protect them.
3.What’s more, we should advise the government to make
laws so that they can get enough protection.
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共建绿色校园
1.At a green school, every class collects waste which can be
recycled or used again. Then the school sells the waste and
uses the money to help students in poor areas.[外研九(上)
M12]
2.Students at a green school also learn ways to save energy and
recycle at home. That means less waste.[外研九(上)M12]
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3.Each of us students is a cleaner. If we see garbage, we will
actively pick it up and put it in the bin.
4.When we leave the classroom, we should turn off the lights.
结尾句
号召大家一起行动
1.Though pollution is heavy now, I don’t think it’s hopeless. If
everyone starts to do something, the world will be saved.[外
研九(上)M12]
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2.We cannot hope for rapid change, but let’s take these simple
steps today so that we will save the world for our grandsons
and granddaughters tomorrow.[外研九(上)M12]
3.In a word, as long as every one of us makes an effort,
our environment will be better and better.
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强调保护环境的重要性
1.We should do everything we can to protect the earth,
because we have only one earth.
2.Only when we form the good habit of protecting the
environment can we make the earth more beautiful tomorrow.
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俗语/谚语
1.Save water, shame of waste.节约用水,浪费可耻。
2.Clear waters and green mountains are golden hills and silver
mountains.绿水青山就是金山银山。
3.Don’t let our tears become the last drop of water on the earth.
不要让我们的眼泪成为地球上的最后一滴水。
4.Sharing the same sky, a total of a soil retaining.同顶一片蓝天,
共护一方水土。
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高分模板
介绍保护环境的方法
Nowadays, our environment is getting worse and worse. To
build a beautiful __________(地名), we must protect our
environment.
First, __________(方法1). __________(与方法1相关的
内容). Second, __________(方法2). __________(与方法2相
关的内容). Third, __________(方法3). __________
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(与方法3相关的内容). What’s more, in order to __________
(目的), we shouldn’t/should __________(方法4).
Let’s try our best to protect our environment. As long as
we pull together, we will build a beautiful __________(地名).
句型训练
1.Our earth will become a better place. Everyone plays a part
to save the earth.(用as long as引导的条件状语从句升格句子)
________________________________________________________
_______________________
Our earth will become a better place as long as everyone plays a part to save it.
2.I recycle more and the earth will become cleaner.(用“the+比
较级,the+比较级”升格句子)
____________________________________________________
The more I recycle, the cleaner the earth will become.
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3.使用过多的塑料袋对我们的环境有害。(汉译英)
_________________________________________________________
Using too many plastic bags is harmful to our environment.
4.李华过着绿色生活,他将垃圾分类回收利用。(汉译英)
________________________________________________________
______________________
Li Hua lives a green life and divides the waste into different groups for recycling.
5.树对环境非常重要,因为它们可以阻止风把土壤吹走。(汉译英)
________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________
Trees are of great importance to the environment, because they can stop wind from blowing the earth away.
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二阶 主题典例探究
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(2024云南改编)保护环境是每个人的责任和义务,我们在
生活中的点滴改变就能使环境有所改变。你校校刊英语专栏正在
开展以“What can we do for the environment”为题的征文活动。
请你用英语写一篇短文,向专栏投稿。内容包括:
1.保护环境的重要性(地球为人们提供水、空气……);
2.保护环境的建议(回收利用、使用环保资源……);
3.你的建议。
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注意:
1.词数为80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
4.短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
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参考词汇:one-time products(一次性用品),environmental
protection(环境保护)
What can we do for the environment
It’s everyone’s duty to protect our environment.
______________________
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写作剖析
一、仔细审题
1.文体:本文要求介绍保护环境的建议,是一篇________;
说明文
2.时态:介绍保护环境的重要性、保护环境的建议时,用
____________;介绍我们已经在环保方面做了哪些努力用
____________。
一般现在时
现在完成时
3.人称:介绍我们应该怎么做时用第____人称。
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二、构思框架,列出要点
构思框架
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列出要点
1.____________________ 为某人提供某物
2.______________ 那就是……的原因。
3._______________________ 保护环境
4.______________________ 从小事做起
5.________________ 开始做某事
provide sb. with sth.
That’s why…
protect the environment
start with small things
start to do sth.
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6.____________________ 减少使用……
7.___________ 塑料袋
8._______________ 关灯
9.___________ 乘坐公共汽车
10._______________ 步行去学校
11.____________________ 减少空气污染
reduce the use of…
plastic bag
turn off lights
take a bus
walk to school
reduce air pollution
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12._________________________________________ 环境保护的
重要性
13.________________________ 鼓励某人做某事
14.__________ 我希望……
15._____________________ 采取行动做某事
the importance of environmental protection
encourage sb. to do sth.
I hope…
take action to do sth.
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三、遣词造句,连句成文
What can we do for the environment
It’s everyone’s duty to protect our environment. The earth
provides us with air, water and other things we need for living.
That’s why we should try our best to protect it. To protect
the environment is to protect the home on which human beings
live.
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To be green, we should start with small things around us.
I have started to reduce the use of one-time products, such as
plastic bags and water bottles. In addition, let’s try to turn off
the lights when leaving. What’s more, let’s walk or take a bus
to school instead of going to school in our parents’ cars, which
helps reduce air pollution. Finally, let’s all work together to
spread the world about the importance of environmental
protection and encourage others to join in it.
I hope people can take action to protect the environment
at once. Love the earth as it is our only home.
三阶 写作实战训练
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治理白色污染,建立绿色家园。你校英文周刊正在开展以
“Rubbish sorting starts with me”为题的征文活动,请你用英语写
一篇短文,向专栏投稿。内容包括:
1.垃圾分类的意义(减少垃圾污染、有助于回收利用……);
2.推进垃圾分类的办法(了解垃圾分类的知识、传播信息……)。
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注意:
1.词数为80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
4.短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:recycle(v. 回收), sort(v. 分类)
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Rubbish sorting starts with me
Nowadays, more and more people have realized the
importance of rubbish sorting. _____________________________
________________________________________________________
__________________________________
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
It can not only reduce rubbish pollution but also recycle rubbish. We can do the following things to sort rubbish well.
First of all, we should learn the knowledge of rubbish
sorting through books and the Internet.
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________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
Then we should throw all kinds of rubbish in different
rubbish bins with different colors. Besides, we can join in
volunteer service to help people sort their rubbish. Third, we
can come up with some interesting activities to make people
realize the importance of sorting rubbish.
If all of us try our best to sort rubbish, we’ll play a
good part in protecting the environment. Let’s pull together
and take action from now on.
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