第2部分 主题11 科技发明与创新(课件PPT)-【众相原创·赋能中考】2025年中考英语写作培优册（译林版 广西专用）

2025广西 英 语 写作培优册 1 第二部分 高频主题三阶写作指导 人与社会 主题11 科技发明与创新 （新科技的出现与应用；新科技/人工智能利弊谈；个人隐私与 网络安全；航天科技发展） 2 【教材模块/单元链接】 外研版 人教版 译林牛津版 七（上）M7 因特网的使用 九（上）M9 发明&科技进步 九（全）U6 发明 八（下）U3 了解计算 机 九（下）U3 机器人如 何帮助我们 3 一阶 素材积累与训练 4 素材积累 短语与句型 作用与影响 1.be used to do sth. 被用来做某事 2.change one’s life改变某人的生活 3.with the development of 随着……的发展 4.make a lot of progress 取得很大的进步 5.have a great influence on 对……产生很大的影响 5 信息技术 1.go on the Internet 上网 2.surf the Internet 网上冲浪 3.chat online 在线聊天 4.make e-friends 交网友 5.text message 手机短信 6.check the email 检查邮件 7.keep in touch with 与……保持联系 8.search for information 查找信息 6 对某种科技或发明的看法 1.On the one hand…，on the other hand… 一方面……，另一方 面…… 2.from my point of view/in my opinion/as for me 在我看来 3.All in all/In short/In a word/In conclusion，I believe… 总之， 我相信…… 7 开头句 1. With the development of science and technology，people have been used to the life with the Internet.［外研七（上）M7］ 2.Nowadays，people spend much time on the Internet. They can do many things with the Internet. ［外研七（上）M7］ 3.The Internet is changing the world. 8 4.There are many inventions that have changed the world.［人 教九（全）U6］ 5.As we all know，smart products change our life greatly. 6.Among many inventions，I think the most useful for me is the bicycle. 9 中间句 某发明/科技的功能 1.I listen to music or watch movies on the computer every Friday night. ［外研七（上）M7］ 2.Today，with the invention of the computer and electronic technology，it’s easy to get information on the Internet.［外研九 （上）M9］ 10 3.I came up with a good idea for my invention. It’s a special box which is used for holding wastes. It can move and speak different languages. As soon as people throw away wastes on the street，they will be cleaned up by the box at once.［人教 九（全）U6］ 11 4.Home robots help with housework so that people have more time to do things they enjoy. 5.The electric car can not only save energy but also protect the environment. 6.ChatGPT offers advice and helps us when we are feeling down. 12 对生活的负面影响 1.I think learning online for a long time is bad for our eyes. 2.Not everything we read on the Internet is true or good for us. 3.Depending on the robots too much may make people lazier. 13 结尾句 表达观点 1.In my opinion，home robots can make our lives easier. 2.All in all，smart products have both advantages and shortcomings. I believe that if we use them correctly，it will help us live a more convenient life in the future. 3.Only when we obey the rules above can we build a healthy online world. 14 俗语/谚语 1.Every coin has two sides.凡事都有两面性。 2.The question mark is the key to any science.问号是开启任何 一门科学的钥匙。 15 高分模板 介绍某科技/发明 Inventions are very important in our daily life. My favorite invention is __________ （发明名称），which was invented by __________ in __________ （发明者和发明时间）. As we all know，__________ is one of the most important inventions（发明的重要地位）. It is made of/from __________ 16 （制作材质）. It looks like __________ （样子）. When it is invented，it will __________ （它的使用方法）. In my opinion， I hope __________ can help us in these ways（用途）.On the one hand，__________. On the other hand，__________ （具体介绍两种用途）. With the help of__________，people can __________ （继续介绍用途）. Thanks to the invention of __________（发明名称），it has made our life __________ （对发明的看法或感受）. 句型训练 1.You can create or invent something. You know more about its knowledge first.（用Only when引导的倒装句升格句子） ________________________________________________________ _______________________________ Only when you know more about its knowledge first can you create or invent something. 2.I start the car and it can fly like a bird.（用as soon as引导的 条件状语从句升格句子） _______________________________________________ As soon as I start the car，it can fly like a bird. 18 3.The car is cheap and environmentally friendly.（用not only… but also… 升格句子） _________________________________________________________ The car is not only cheap but also environmentally friendly. 4.I want to invent a special car. The car can swim in water and run on land.（用定语从句升格句子） ________________________________________________________ __________________ I want to invent a special car that/which can swim in water and run on land. 19 5.人工智能的快速发展对我们的生活产生了巨大的影响。（汉译英） ________________________________________________________ _____ The rapid development of AI has a great influence on our life. 20 二阶 主题典例探究 21 发明不仅给我们的生活带来便利，而且还能促进社会进步和 发展。近日，Invention杂志正在征集有关各类发明的英文稿件。 请以“A useful invention”为题，写一篇短文投稿。内容包括： 1.你心目中最有用的发明是什么（智能手机、扫地机器人……）； 2.这个发明的基本信息（发明时间、发明者、功能……）； 3.你的看法。 22 注意： 1.词数为80左右； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称； 4.短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：invent（v. 发明），convenient（adj. 方便的） 23 A useful invention Inventions allow us to live happy and easy lives. Among all the inventions，I think the most useful one is ___________ ___________ 24 写作剖析 一、仔细审题 1.文体：本文要求介绍自己心中最有用的发明的基本信息，是一 篇________； 2.时态：介绍发明历程，用____________，介绍发明的功能，用 ____________； 3.人称：介绍发明的历程及发明的功能，用第____人称。 说明文 一般过去时 一般现在时 三 25 二、构思框架，列出要点 构思框架 26 列出要点 1.______________ 移动电话 2.__________ 计算机 3.______________ 扫地机器人 4.____________________ 在某年被发明 5.______________________ 以许多方式被使用 6._________________ 提供快速的服务 7._________________ 上网冲浪 mobile phone computer cleaning robot be invented in+年份 be used in many ways offer fast service surf the Internet 27 8.__________________ 开阔我们的视野 9._______________ 听音乐 10._____________ 看视频 11.______________________ 搜索信息 12._____________ 放松自己 13._____________ 明智地使用它 14.______________ 给某人带来某物 open up our eyes listen to music watch videos search for information relax oneself use it wisely bring sb. sth. 28 三、遣词造句，连句成文 A useful invention Inventions allow us to live happy and easy lives. Among all the inventions，I think the most useful one is the mobile phone. The first mobile phone was invented for US Army in 1938 in America. Until 1973，Martin Cooper from Motorola Company 29 invented the first mobile phone for the ordinary people to use. Since then，the world has been changed because of the useful invention. They are used in many ways. First，they offer fast and convenient service for communication. We can talk with our parents or our friends for a long time on mobile phones. We can also surf the Internet on them. That helps us open up our eyes to the outside world. And when we are tired，we can listen to music to relax ourselves. Our life becomes more colourful because of the invention of mobile phones. There is no doubt that the mobile phone plays an important part in our daily life. I think we should use it wisely so that it will bring us much more fun. 三阶 写作实战训练 32 假设你是李华，学校科技节将举办题为“AI in our life”的英 语演讲比赛。请根据以下提示，写一篇英文演讲稿，包含以下内 容： AI in daily life smartphones，cleaning robots The influence of AI make work and study more efficient，help with housework，bring great convenience and progress to，lose jobs，depend on AI too much Your opinion ... 33 注意： 1.词数为80左右； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称； 4.短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear teachers and fellow students, 34 As we all know，AI changes our lives greatly. With the development of science and technology, ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ we can see all kinds of AI products in our daily life. For example，smartphones can make our work and study more efficient while cleaning robots can help with housework. They all bring great convenience and progress to our society. ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thank you! However，with AI technology being widely used，many workers lose their jobs. Also，some students depend on AI too much so that they lose their abilities to do things by themselves. All in all，just as every coin has two sides，AI products have both advantages and shortcomings. I believe that if we use AI wisely，it will help us live a more convenient life in the future. 37 $$