内容正文:
2025广西
英 语
写作培优册
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第二部分 高频主题三阶写作指导
人与社会
主题10 文化交际
(传统节日和习俗介绍;文化活动介绍;传统艺术介绍)
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【教材模块/单元链接】
外研版 人教版 译林牛津版
七(上)M10 节日、假期&庆祝
七(下)M11 身体语言
八(上)M11 社会行为&社会风俗 九(全)U2 节日
九(全)U5 中国制造的物品
九(全)U10 风俗习惯 七(上)U5 节日
七(下)U3 美国交换生
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外研版 人教版 译林牛津版
九(上)M2 节日、假期&庆
祝
九(下)M6 饮食习惯
九(下)M7 语言&文化 九(全)U2 节日
九(全)U5 中国
制造的物品
九(全)U10 风俗
习惯 七(上)U5 节日
七(下)U3 美国交换生
续表
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一阶 素材积累与训练
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素材积累
短语与搭配
节日文化
1.celebrate the festival 庆祝节日
2.the Spring Festival 春节
3.the Mid-Autumn Festival 中秋节
4.the Lantern Festival 元宵节
5.the Dragon Boat Festival 端午节
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6.prepare for 为……做准备
7.get together 聚会
8.sweep away 扫除
9.watch the dragon boat race 观看赛龙舟
10.admire the moon 赏月
11.eat moon cakes/eat zongzi 吃月饼/吃粽子
12.visit relatives and friends 走亲访友
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社会风俗与艺术
1.traditional culture 传统文化
2.social customs 社会风俗
3.paper cutting 剪纸
4.Chinese knot 中国结
5.Beijing/Peking Opera 京剧
6.a symbol of… ……的象征
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7.have a long history of… 有……悠久的历史
8.bring good luck and happiness 带来好运和幸福
9.protect/spread Chinese traditional culture 保护/传播中国传统文化
10.increase one’s knowledge about Chinese culture 增加某人对
中国文化的了解
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礼仪习俗
1.table manners 餐桌礼仪
2.behave oneself well 举止得体
3.meet sb. for the first time 与某人第一次见面
4.shake hands 握手
5.bring a gift带礼物
6.arrive on time 按时到达
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开头句
1.Each different part of China has its own special forms of
traditional art. [人教九(全)U5]
2.The Spring Festival is an important holiday in China. Most
Chinese families celebrate it.[译林牛津七(上)U5]
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3.Eating customs in China are in some ways different from
those in the West.[外研九(下)M6]
4.Nowadays, more people show great interest in traditional
Chinese culture.
5.With the rapid development of our country, it is meaningful
for us to tell our traditional stories well in English to more
foreigners.
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中间句
传统节日
1.My favorite festival is Spring Festival because I can get lucky
money during that festival.[外研七(上)M10]
2.It’s the time that families and friends get together.
3.What makes the festival special for me is the dragon boat
race.The members of the dragon boat team have such great
team spirit that they try their best to win the race.[人教九
(全)U2]
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4.It’s one of the most important festivals in China, which
falls on the fifth day of lunar May.[人教九(全)U2]
5.Chinese people celebrate the festival in honor of Qu Yuan,
who was a great poet in ancient times.[人教九(全)U2]
6.I like the Mid-Autumn Festival. All my family get together
and have a big dinner. Then we eat moon cakes and enjoy the
full moon.[译林牛津七(上)U5]
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7.Mooncakes are in the shape of a full moon on the Mid-
Autumn night. They carry people’s wishes to the families
they love and miss.[人教九(全)U2]
8.The reason why I love the festival is not only the enjoyment
it brings but also the deep meaning behind it.
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传统艺术
1.Sky lanterns are made of bamboo and covered with paper.
They are seen as bright symbols of happiness and good wishes.
[人教九(全)U5]
2.During the Spring Festival, paper cuttings are put on
windows, doors and walls as symbols of wishes for good
luck and a happy new year.[人教九(全)U6]
3.Dancers will be in beautiful Chinese-style costumes to show
fantastic Chinese dancing.
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服饰文化
1.The beautiful silk knots and the other decorations on Tang-
style clothes are popular all over the world now.
2.I had the opportunity to wear hanfu during the Spring Festival.
3.Hanfu has a history that dates back thousands of years to the
Yellow Emperor.
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饮食文化
1.China is famous for tea both in the past and now. Tea is
produced in many different areas, for example, Anxi and
Hangzhou.[人教九(全)U5]
2.You’re not supposed to start eating first if there are older
people at the table.[人教九(全)U10]
3.When you are full but the host still asks you to help yourself
to some more food, you should say “Thank you. It’s delicious,
but I’m full.”
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文化活动
1.Last Tuesday, our school hosted a Hanfu Festival. Held from
4:30 pm to 6:00 pm on the school playground, the festival was
a great success.
2.Some students and teachers will read Chinese poems.
3.We learned much about the traditional food and experienced
the fun of cooking together with our classmates.
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结尾句
1.I hope more and more people can know better about our
traditional culture.
2.Let’s work together to protect this traditional folk craft and
keep it alive.
3.Through this activity, I really understand the beauty of
traditional Chinese culture. I’m proud of my country.
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高分模板
介绍自己最喜欢的节日
Hello, everyone. As a Chinese, it’s my great honor to be
here to introduce __________ (节日名称).
It’s one of the most important festivals in Chinese culture
(节日的地位,最重要的节日之一). The reason why I love it
is __________ (喜欢这个节日的理由). On __________
(节日名称), family members get together to __________.
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They always __________ (在这个节日人们通常会做的事情).
There are all kinds of __________ (有什么活动或食物). To
me, __________ (节日名称)means __________. Because at
that time, __________ (对自己来说,这个节日有什么意义,为
什么).
Welcome to China to celebrate __________ (节日名称)
together.
介绍自己最喜欢的传统工艺
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m glad to see that more and more people enjoy and
spread Chinese traditional culture in our daily life.
__________ (工艺名称)is a very common but typical
traditional art form that we can see everywhere around us—
__________ (地点).
In my eyes, __________ (工艺名称)is one of the
traditional Chinese cultures and through __________
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(工艺名称), people __________ (人们通过这个工艺想传达
什么). Now I’m in a __________ (工艺名称)club. We often
organize some activities or do some projects with our partners.
For example, __________(举例说明我为传承这些工艺所做的事
情).
I hope more and more people can know better about our
traditional culture.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Liu Mei
句型训练
1.My favorite festival is Spring Festival. It usually falls in
January or February. (用which引导的定语从句升格句子)
________________________________________________________
______________________
My favorite festival is Spring Festival, which usually falls in January or February.
2.I love dumplings best. The reason is that they mean good
luck and wealth.(用the reason why…is that… 升格句子)
________________________________________________________
______________________
The reason why I love dumplings best is that they mean good luck and wealth.
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3.China is an old country in the world, and it has a long
history.(用“one of the+adj.最高级+名词复数”升格句子)
________________________________________________________
________________
China is one of the oldest countries in the world, and it has a long history.
4.大多数中国人喜欢红色,因为它被视为吉祥的象征。(汉译英)
________________________________________________________
______________________
Red is loved by most Chinese people because it is seen as a symbol of good luck.
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5.在拜访外国朋友之前,我们应该了解他们的餐桌礼仪。(汉译英)
________________________________________________________
_______________________
We are supposed to know about their table manners before we visit foreign friends.
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二阶 主题典例探究
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中华民族有五千年的文明,积淀了丰富多彩的传统文化,有精
美的民间艺术,如剪纸、风筝;有古老的民族艺术,如京剧、国画
等。 假设你是李华,你们学校英语社团正在进行以“中国传统文化”
为主题的征文活动。请你用英语写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1.你最喜爱的一种中国传统民间工艺或民族艺术(剪纸、京
剧……);
2.你传承这门工艺或艺术的方式(做视频、呼吁他人关注……);
3.你的希望。
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注意:
1.词数为80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
4.开头已给出,不计入总词数。
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参考词汇:folk art(民间工艺), paper cutting(剪纸),
introduce(v. 介绍), foreigner(n. 外国人)
As we all know, our country has many kinds of traditional
Chinese folk art. Among them, my favourite traditional
Chinese folk art is ______________________
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写作剖析
一、仔细审题
1.文体:本文要求介绍自己喜欢的民间工艺或民族艺术及自己传
承它的方式,是一篇________;
2.时态:介绍自己喜欢的民间工艺或民族艺术,用____________,
介绍自己传承它的方式,用____________或一般将来时;
3.人称:介绍自己喜欢的民间工艺或民族艺术,用第____人称,
介绍自己传承它的方式,用第____人称。
说明文
一般现在时
一般现在时
三
一
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二、构思框架,列出要点
构思框架
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列出要点
1.______________ 剪纸
2.______________ 京剧
3._______________________________________ 是中国文化的重
要组成部分
4.________ 张贴
5.____________________ 给某人带来好运
6.________________________ 尽某人最大的努力做某事
paper cutting
Beijing Opera
be an important part of Chinese culture
put up
bring sb. good luck
try one’s best to do sth.
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7._______________ 传统技艺
8._____________ 参加
9._____________ 制作视频
10.____________ 了解
11.________________________ 共同努力做某事
12._______________ 保持某物的活力
traditional skill
take part in
make videos
know about
work together to do sth.
keep sth. alive
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三、遣词造句,连句成文
As we all know, our country has many kinds of traditional
Chinese folk art. Among them, my favourite traditional
Chinese folk art is. .paper cutting.
Paper cutting is an important part of Chinese culture.
People often put them up on the walls. Paper cuttings often
appear at festivals or weddings because people think they can
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bring them happiness and good luck. I try my best to protect
this traditional skill. I take part in the school paper cutting
club and teach the members how to design their own works. I
think I can also make some videos online so that more and
more people are able to know about it.
I hope more people will work together to protect this
traditional folk craft and keep it alive.
三阶 写作实战训练
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中国是有着悠久的历史和光辉灿烂的传统文化的文明古国,
拥有着很多的传统节日,如春节、元宵节、中秋节、端午节、重
阳节……。你校英文周刊正在开展以“My favorite festival”为题
的征文活动,请你用英语写一篇短文,向专栏投稿。内容包括:
1.你最喜欢的节日是什么(春节、中秋节……)
2.节日习俗、活动(团聚、赏月……);
3.节日的意义。
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注意:
1.词数为80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
4.短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:decorate(v. 装饰), couplets(n. 对联), eve
(n. 前夜),celebration(n. 庆祝)
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My favorite festival
Whenever I am asked about my favorite festival, I tell
people that it is _________________________________________
__________________________
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
Spring Festival, the most important traditional festival in China.
We do a lot of things to celebrate it. Homes are
decorated with red couplets and flowers. On the eve of
Spring Festival, my family usually have a big meal together.
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________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
Among all the delicious dishes, dumplings are very popular,
which mean good luck and wealth. What’s more, we visit
our relatives and friends to give them best wishes.
In our hearts, Spring Festival is not only a celebration
of a new year but a chance for all family members to get
together.
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