内容正文:
2025广西
英 语
写作培优册
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第二部分 高频主题三阶写作指导
人与社会
主题8 人际交往与团队合作
(如何交朋友;解决矛盾的经历或建议;如何与父母相处;团队
协作精神)
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【教材模块/单元链接】
外研版 人教版 译林牛
津版
七(下)M11 身体
语言
八(下)M9 人际交
流
九(上)M6 人际沟
通的困扰 七(上)U1 结交新朋友
七(上)U5 与朋友共度时光
七(下)U8 邻里之间
八(上)U9 邀请
八(下)U4 人际沟通 七(下)U2 互相帮助(邻居)
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一阶 素材积累与训练
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素材积累
短语与搭配
人际交往的问题
1.break a promise/break promises 违背诺言
2.talk back 回嘴,顶嘴
3.get into a fight 打架
4.argue with sb. 与某人争吵
5.have a quarrel with sb.和某人吵架
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6.be worried/nervous about… 为……担忧/紧张
7.turn down 拒绝
8.complain about sth.抱怨某事
9.care about 介意, 在乎
10.refuse to do sth.拒绝做某事
11.laugh at 嘲笑
12.look down on/upon 看不起
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解决方式
1.ask for help 寻求帮助
2.communicate with 和……交流
3.have conversations with sb.和某人交谈
4.keep in touch with sb.和某人保持联系
5.reach an agreement 达成协议
6.face to face 面对面
7.share… with… 和……分享……
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8.give sb. a hand帮助某人
9.get on/along well with sb.与某人和睦相处
10.be friends with sb.成为某人的朋友
11.keep a promise/keep one’s words 遵守承诺
12.learn from sb.向某人学习
13.be nice/good to sb.对某人友善
14.agree with sb.同意某人的看法
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开头句
1.It’s very important for us to know how to get along well
with other people.
2.Have you heard of the saying “Many hands make light
work.”? I’d like to share one of my experiences with you. It
makes me understand it better.
3.Nowadays, many teenagers have difficulty in getting on well
with their parents. Here is some of my advice.
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中间句
和家人相处
1.My problem is that I can’t get on well with my family.[人
教八(下)U4]
2.I get into trouble because my parents do not allow me to
play outside after 6 p.m. I do not understand why they are so
strict with me.[译林牛津九(上)U3]
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3.When I feel stressed about my lessons and exams, I often
communicate with my parents.
4.Finally, we should achieve a balance between our schoolwork
and hobbies so that our parents won’t feel worried about us.
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和朋友、同学、邻居相处
1.You should communicate with your classmates first, so they
can get to know you.[人教八(下)U4]
2.Find common interests between you and your classmates in
the process of communicating. In this way,you can not only
have more conversations with your classmates,but also create
more chances to play together.[人教八(下)U4]
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3.If I find my classmates going through a hard time, I will
offer help to them without thinking twice.
4.When my friends and I have different opinions on something,
I will listen to them patiently and respect their points.
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团队协作
1.If you have a good team, you should support each other.
[人教九(全)U11]
2.We should listen to other people actively and express
ourselves bravely.
3.Team members should have a common goal they need to
achieve.
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4.Everyone should actively take part in the project and do their
part.
5.There is no doubt that communication can help us know
more about our teammates.
结尾句
表达对人际关系的祝福、希望
1.I hope our friendship will last forever.[人教七(上)U1]
2.I hope my advice will be helpful to you. May you be happy
in your new school.
3.Let’s build good student relations, and then we can study hard
together.
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感受
1.Day by day, I learnt to trust people, and they included me in
their circle of friends. The girl with the bright smile has
become my best friend now, and we stick together like glue.
[外研八(下)M9]
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2.From this experience, I realize that the real friendship
between classmates is that whenever you are in difficulty, they
are always ready to help.
3.This experience made me understand what a team sport was.
It was not just about “me”, it was about “us”.
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俗语/谚语
1.A friend in need is a friend indeed. 患难见真情。
2.Many hands make light work. 众人拾柴火焰高。
3.Actions speak louder than words. 行动胜于空谈。
4.One tree does not make a forest. 独木不成林。
5.Unity is strength. 团结就是力量。
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高分模板
和他人相处的建议
…,
I have received your e-mail and known that you have
difficulty in getting along well with__________ (人物:父母/
朋友/同学).To tell you the truth, everyone will feel
uncomfortable when they __________ (问题产生的背景,如进
入新学校等). Don’t worry. I will help you solve this problem.
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First, you should communicate more with __________
(人物) so that you can understand each other. Then, you can
offer to __________ (主动做的事情) such as __________
(举例) so that they can __________ (这样做产生的效果).
Finally, don’t make them __________ (情绪) and try to
__________ (努力做的事情) when you disagree with each
other.
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If you can do all of the above, you will __________
(新的改变).
Yours,
…
解决和朋友之间发生的冲突
In our life, everyone needs friends. Friendship is of great
importance to everyone. But sometimes there are problems
between friends. So, how to solve the problems?
Last week, I had a disagreement with my best friend,
__________ (朋友). I wanted to __________, but she would
like to __________ (两个人产生分歧的事情). We argued
loudly, and __________ (朋友) cried and ran away, leaving
me feeling upset.
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The next day, I realized that__________ wasn’t as
important as our friendship. I decided to __________
(要做的事情). When I found her, I said, “I’m sorry for our
fight. Let’s __________ (一起做的事情) and be friends again.”
__________ (朋友) smiled and replied, “I’m sorry too. We
should listen to each other patiently next time.”
From this experience, I learned that__________ (从这次经
历中收获的事情). Now, __________ (朋友) and I are
closer than ever, and we promise to communicate more patiently
in the future.
句型训练
1.In my opinion, friends are like stars. Friends make our lives
bright.(用which引导的定语从句升格句子)
________________________________________________________
________
In my opinion, friends are like stars which make our lives bright.
2.It is important to treat friends with kindness and respect.
(用there is no doubt that升格句子)
________________________________________________________
_____________________
There is no doubt that it is important to treat friends with kindness and respect.
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3.如果想和家人相处融洽,我们需要适当的沟通。(汉译英)
________________________________________________________
_____________________
We need proper communication if we want to get on/along well with our family.
4.我们要团结协作,因为没有团队合作,就什么都不能实现。
(汉译英)
________________________________________________________
___________________________
We all need to work together because nothing will be achieved without teamwork.
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5.当你的朋友遇到困难时,你应该随时准备帮助他们。(汉译英)
________________________________________________________
______________
Whenever your friends are in trouble, you should be ready to help them.
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二阶 主题典例探究
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为了传承和弘扬中华民族的优良家风,你校英文报刊正在开
展以“Build good relationships with parents”为题的征文活动,请你
用英语写一篇短文,向专栏投稿。内容包括:
1.与父母建立良好关系的重要性(使我们生活得更快乐);
2.具体做法(与父母交流、尊重父母……);
3.感悟与号召。
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注意:
1.词数为80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
4.短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
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参考词汇:respect (v. 尊重), housework(n. 家务),
communicate(v. 交流), patient(adj. 耐心的)
Build good relationships with parents
We are supposed to build good relationships with our
parents. ______________________
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写作剖析
一、仔细审题
1.文体:本文介绍与父母建立良好关系的重要性及做法,是一篇
________;
说明文
2.时态:介绍与父母建立良好关系的重要性及方法时以
____________为主,介绍良好的亲子关系会带来的结果时用
____________;
一般现在时
一般将来时
3.人称:介绍我们应该怎么做时,用第____人称,介绍父母应该
怎么做时,用第____人称。
一
三
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二、构思框架,列出要点
构思框架
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列出要点
1._________________________ 一个良好的家庭关系
2.______________________ 使我们的生活更快乐
3.________________ 主动提出做某事
4._________________ 分担家务
5._____________________ 与某人交流
a good family relationship
make our life happier
offer to do sth.
share housework
communicate with sb.
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6.___________________ 对某人有耐心
7.______________ 与……分享……
8._________________ 不同意某人的意见
9._____________ 让我们一起做某事。
10._______________________________ 与某人建立良好的关系
be patient with sb.
share…with…
disagree with sb.
Let’s do sth.
build good relationships with sb.
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三、遣词造句,连句成文
Build good relationships with parents
We are supposed to build good relationships with our
parents. It’s important because a good family relationship will
make our life happier and easier.
Here are some things we can do. First of all, we can offer
to share the housework such as doing the dishes or sweeping
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the floor, so that our parents can have a rest after a day’s
work. Second, we should communicate with our parents often
and be patient with them. We can share our happiness and
sadness with them. Last but not least, we should respect our
parents at all times. We shouldn’t make them angry when they
disagree with us. Instead, we should explain our thoughts
patiently.
Parents give us everything they can give. Let’s build good
relationships with our parents from now on!
三阶 写作实战训练
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(2024成都改编)“众人拾柴火焰高”。在学习生活中,大家
一起团结协作,往往能取得更好的成果。你校英文刊正在开展以
“Many hands make light work”为题的征文活动,请你用英语写一
篇短文,向专栏投稿。内容包括:
1.“Many hands make light work”传达的含义;
2.你和他人的一次合作经历(如:运动会、读书报告、DIY等);
3.你的收获。
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注意:
1.词数为80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
4.短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:teamwork(n. 团队合作)
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Many hands make light work
Have you heard of the saying “Many hands make light
work.”? It tells people ____________________________________
________________________________________________________
___________________
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
the importance of teamwork. I’d like to share one of my experiences with you. It makes me understand it better.
Last month, our teacher asked us to make a book
report on a book called Treasure Island. Our team members
decided to work together to do the task.
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________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
I like reading novels and always have a better understanding
of the characters, so I offered to pick out the exciting parts
of the novel. My friend Amy searched for some information
about the writer while other members read some reviews
online. We also asked our teacher for advice. Through the
teamwork, the report got great success. We were all very
happy.
From this experience, I believe that working together
not only brings us happiness but also leads us to success.
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