第2部分 主题7 经历与感受(课件PPT)-【众相原创·赋能中考】2025年中考英语写作培优册（译林版 广西专用）

2025广西 英 语 写作培优册 1 第二部分 高频主题三阶写作指导 人与自我 主题7 经历与感受 （与家人、朋友之间的事情；让你成长、改变的经历； 难忘的经历） 2 【教材模块/单元链接】 外研版 人教版 译林牛津版 八（下）M1 感受 八（下）M2 个人经历 九（上）M4 独自在家的生 活 九（下）M3 现在的生活& 过去的生活 八（下）U5 难 忘的事情 九（全）U4 我 们的变化 九（全）U11 感 受 八（下）U1 改变 （过去和现在） 九（上）U2 颜色 和心情 九（上）U3 不同 的烦恼 3 一阶 素材积累与训练 4 素材积累 短语与句型 积极正面的感受 1.be deeply moved by... 被……深深地感动 2.be thankful to sb.感激某人 3.be proud of... 为……感到骄傲/自豪 4.be pleased with... 对……满意 5 5.be surprised at… 对……感到惊讶 6.be sure about… 确信；对……有把握 7.be excited about… 对……感到兴奋 8.be of help/helpful有帮助的 9.enjoy doing sth.喜欢做某事 10.enjoy oneself=have a good/great/nice/wonderful time 玩得开心 6 11.look up to钦佩，仰慕 12.cheer up使……振作 13.The most exciting moment was… 最激动人心的时刻是…… 14.a sense of… 一种……感 15.can’t wait to do sth. 迫不及待做某事 7 担心/其他感受 1.be afraid of （doing） sth.害怕/担心（做）某事 2.be afraid to do sth.因害怕而不敢做某事 3.be/feel sorry for… 为……感到抱歉 4.be tired of/be bored with… 对……感到厌倦 5.be angry with sb.生某人的气 6.be angry at/about sth.因某事而生气 8 7.be mad at sb.生某人的气 8.be in/get into trouble陷入困境 9.say sorry to… 向……道歉 10.It’s a pity that… 很遗憾…… 9 开头句 1.I’m having a wonderful time in Beijing. I’ve done so many things!［外研八（下）M2］ 2.During my lifetime， I’ve had a lot of unforgettable experiences. Among them， the most important experience was a basketball game when I was 14. ［人教九（全）U11］ 3.Everyone has his or her own fears. No matter how big or small it is， learning how to overcome it is especially important. 10 中间句 介绍经历与表达感受 1.I often feel a bit sad at first when I leave my mum and dad for a few days, and I’m quite shy when I’m with strangers. I feel nervous when I speak Chinese, but I’ll be fine in a few days.［外研八（下）M1］ 2.I worried that I had let my teacher and classmates down. But to my surprise， they all comforted me with warm words. ［人教九（全）U11］ 11 3.Last Thursday, Wang Hong saw an elderly blind man wandering around the street corner on her way home. Wang Hong offered to help him cross the road after communicating with the old man. When they crossed the road, the drivers on the road stopped their cars and waited patiently. Wang Hong took the old man across the road and said goodbye to him. I think Wang Hong is really a very warm-hearted and kind girl. I should learn from her and try my best to help others. 12 结尾句 1.From this experience， I learned that it’s not terrible to fail as long as I can stand up in failure.［人教九（全）U11］ 2.In short, I think the excellent game will be in my mind forever. 3.I was so thankful that I decided to help others from then on. 4.In my view, helping others gives me a strong feeling of being needed and brings me happiness. 13 俗语/谚语 1.Many hands make light work.众人拾柴火焰高。 2.Failure is the mother of success.失败是成功之母。 3.Experience is the best teacher.经验是最好的老师。 4.God helps those who help themselves.天助自助者。 14 句型训练 1.The memories of the junior high school are sweet. I will always keep them in my heart.（用so…that… 引导的结果状语从 句升格句子） ________________________________________________________ ___________________________________ The memories of the junior high school are so sweet that I will always keep them in my heart. 2.对我来说，最难忘的经历是和同学们去野营。（汉译英） ________________________________________________________ ____________________________ As for me, the most unforgettable experience is going camping with my classmates. 15 3.每当我帮助别人的时候，都会有一种强烈的幸福感。（汉译英） ________________________________________________________ _______________ I always have a strong feeling of happiness when I give others a hand. 4.遗憾的是，我们没有时间品尝当地的食物。（汉译英） _______________________________________________________ It’s a pity that we didn’t have time to try the local food. 16 5.我非常感谢我的英语老师，在她的帮助下，我取得了很大的进 步。（汉译英） ________________________________________________________ ____________________________ I’m very thankful to my English teacher, and with her help, I have made great progress. 17 二阶 主题典例探究 18 心若芬芳，花自开。生活中总有一些瞬间让我们心生欢喜: 一杯热茶、一次偶遇、抑或是一次成功……某英文网站正在开展 以“My little happiness”为题的征文活动。请你用英语写一篇短文 投稿。内容包括： 1.一次让你心生欢喜的经历（交到新朋友、得到赞扬……）； 2.让你心生欢喜的原因； 3.你的感受/收获。 19 注意： 1.词数为80左右； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称； 4.短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。 20 参考词汇：fail an exam（未通过考试）, comfort（v. & n. 安 慰）, promise（n. & v. 承诺）, moved（adj. 感动的） My little happiness Happiness is always around us if we put our heart into it. ______________________ 21 写作剖析 一、仔细审题 1.文体：本文要求记叙一次让自己心生欢喜的经历，是一篇 ________； 记叙文 2.时态：记叙一次让自己心生欢喜的经历及自己心生欢喜的原因， 时态以____________为主；介绍自己的感受/收获，用一般现在 时或现在完成时； 一般过去时 3.人称：记叙一次让自己心生欢喜的经历及自己心生欢喜的原因， 用第____人称和第____人称；介绍自己的感受/收获用第____人称。 一 三 一 22 二、构思框架，列出要点 构思框架 23 列出要点 1.______________________________ 想要做某事 2.___________________ 与某人分享某物 3.____________ 告诉某人某事 4.___________________ 结交一个新朋友 5._____________________ 做某事感到高兴 would like/love/want to do sth. share sth. with sb. tell sb. sth. make a new friend feel happy to do sth. 24 6.______________ 被……表扬 7.______________________________ 某人下定决心做某事 8._________________________ 我将永远记得…… 9._________________________ 我真的很高兴…… be praised by make up one’s mind to do sth. I will always remember… I feel really happy that… 25 三、遣词造句，连句成文 My little happiness Happiness is always around us if we put our heart into it. I’d love to tell you what happened in class that day. I am a shy girl. I am always afraid of failing in the exam, because I don’t study very well. However, that day, I got my courage and confidence back. When the teacher told me my 26 grades were not higher than others, I was very upset. But my teacher added, “Your handwriting is the most beautiful writing in the class.” All my classmates cheered for me. What’s more, my teacher praised me, which made me happy. I have made up my mind to study better, answer more questions in class and work harder on tests. I feel really happy that I had this experience—it gave me confidence, courage and support from my classmates and teachers. 三阶 写作实战训练 28 在校园生活和家庭生活中，我们经常会遇到一些困难。在克 服这些困难的过程中，我们收获了解决问题的经验，且能力也在 逐步提升。你校英文报正在开展以“Difficulties help me grow up” 为题的征文活动。请你用英语写一篇短文投稿。内容包括： 1.介绍你曾遇到过的一个困难； 2.你是如何面对并战胜它的（向父母寻求帮助、勇敢面对……）； 3.克服困难后你的感受/收获。 29 注意： 1.词数为80左右； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称； 4.短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：challenge（v. & n.挑战），get over（克服） 30 Difficulties help me grow up Everyone meets difficulties on the way to success. ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ When I was in middle school, I had a big problem with my English learning. It was really hard for me to understand grammar rules and remember new words. To deal with this challenge, I decided not to be afraid. Every day, I spent more time studying English. I made word cards and practiced writing simple sentences. 31 ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ My teacher also helped by encouraging me to speak more often in class. Day by day, my English improved. I could read stories without looking up the dictionary. Getting over this difficulty taught me that practice makes perfect and asking for help is also important. Now, I feel more confident. This experience has shown me that facing and getting over difficulties helps me grow up. I like each challenge because it makes me stronger and better prepared for life. 33 $$