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2025广西 英 语 写作培优册 1 第二部分 高频主题三阶写作指导 人与自我 主题6 促进中学生“五育并举”的发展 （德育：乐于助人；智育：创新方式解决；体育：体育运动；美 育：美育知识，艺术课程；劳育：劳动实践的经历与感受） （2020北部湾经济区） 2 【教材模块/单元链接】 外研版 人教版 译林牛津版 七（下）M2 讨论能 力 七（下）M12 娱乐：中西方音乐 八（上）U8 烹饪 八（下）U2 志愿 服务与慈善 八（下）U3 家务 和许可 七（上）U8 设计衣服 七（下）U7 爱心俱乐部 3 外研版 人教版 译林牛津版 八（上）M5 娱乐： 戏剧&电影 八（下）M6 爱好 九（上）M3 英雄： 有名的人 八（下）U8 文学 和音乐 九（全）U9 音乐 和电影 八（上）U4 自己做 九（上）U4 对你影 响最大的人 九（上）U5 艺术形 式 续表 4 一阶 素材积累与训练 5 素材积累 短语与搭配 1.care for照顾 2.clean up打扫干净 3.sweep the floor扫地 4.take out the rubbish倒垃圾 5.make the bed铺床 6 6.do the dishes清洗餐具 7.climb mountains爬山 8.enjoy pop music喜欢流行音乐 9.basic life skills基本的生活技能 10.keep healthy/fit保持健康 11.develop an interest in在……方面培养兴趣 7 12.be able to do sth.能够做某事 13.make a big difference意义重大；有很大影响 14.look after oneself照顾某人自己 15.develop one’s independence培养某人的独立性 16.open up one’s eyes and mind开阔某人的眼界和思维 8 开头句 1.To be a better person, I think I should do the following things. 2.Life skills are necessary for us teenagers. To live more healthily and happily, we are supposed to learn more life skills. 9 3.There are all kinds of music in the world. Music makes people happy. Good music brings people comfort and peace of mind. Everyone loves music, but different people have different tastes. 中间句 德育 1.I think Odysseus is a true hero. He is very clever and has a strong will. I also learn from him that great men never give up, no matter what difficulties they face.［外研九（上）M3］ 2.I am outgoing and helpful. As long as someone is in trouble， I will try my best to help them.［人教七（下）U1］ 11 智育 1.Daniel always thinks carefully when he works. He plans everything well.［译林牛津七（下）M7］ 2.We should deal with the difficulties we meet wisely. They can help us become better persons. 12 体育 1.After school, I sometimes play basketball for half an hour. ［人教七（下）U2］ 2.Basketball offers me enjoyment, friendship, knowledge and relaxation. 3.Exercising is a good way to keep us healthy and happy. 13 美育 1.I like smooth music that helps me relax after a long week at work.［人教九（全）U9］ 2.It’s our duty to value and spread Chinese culture. 14 劳育 1.I ’d like to be the cleaning monitor. I often help my mother do cleaning at home and I like a clean and tidy house. I’m sure everybody would like a clean classroom, just like home. Choose me and we can make our classroom beautiful.［外研七 （下）M2］ 2.Students are able to learn necessary life skills by taking cleaning or cooking lessons in school.［人教七（上）U9］ 15 3.Doing chores helps to develop children’s independence and teaches them how to look after themselves.［人教八（下）U3］ 4.I think it is important for children to learn how to do chores and help their parents with housework.［人教八（下） U3］ 16 结尾句 1.By learning to cook, we can learn some cooking skills. At the same time, we can share housework and become more independent. 2.I’m sure the earlier we learn to be independent, the better our future will be. 3.We should not be afraid of challenge. Instead, we should try our best to solve the problems in our study and life. 17 句型训练 1.Running can reduce our pressure.（用a good way to do升格句 子） _____________________________________________ Running is a good way to reduce our pressure. 2.We can show our care to our parents. We can cook a meal for them.（用“by+v.-ing表示通过某种方式”改写句子） ________________________________________________________ ________ We can show our care to our parents by cooking a meal for them. 18 3.When I am tired, I prefer to listen to the music. It can make me relaxed.（用that 引导的定语从句升格句子） ________________________________________________________ __________________ When I am tired, I prefer to listen to the music that can make me relaxed. 4.作为新时代的青少年，向世界介绍中国文化是我们义不容辞的 责任。（汉译英） ________________________________________________________ _____________________________ As teenagers in new times, it’s our duty to introduce Chinese culture to the world. 19 5.我们学校将开设一些新的课程来帮助学生学习一些基本的生活 技能。（汉译英） ________________________________________________________ ___________________________ Our school will set up some new courses to help students learn some basic life skills. 20 二阶 主题典例探究 21 （2024长沙改编）音乐，一种听觉艺术，是直通心灵的艺术。 你校英文报刊正在开展以“What does music bring to me?”为题 的征文活动,请你用英语写一篇短文，向专栏投稿。内容包括： 1.音乐给你带来的益处（给我带来希望和力量、开阔我的眼 界……）； 2.你的希望。 22 注意： 1.词数为80左右； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称； 4.短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。 23 参考词汇：strength（n.力量），broaden one’s horizons （开阔某人的眼界） What does music bring to me? Music is like a key, which opens a door to the world for me. ______________ 24 写作剖析 一、仔细审题 1.文体：本文要求介绍音乐带给自己的益处，是一篇________； 2.时态：介绍音乐带给自己的益处为一般说明，以____________ 为主，表达自己的希望时，用____________； 3.人称：介绍音乐的时候用第____人称，介绍自己的经历、音乐 给自己带来的好处及号召大家怎么做时用第____人称。 说明文 一般现在时 一般将来时 三 一 25 二、构思框架，列出要点 构思框架 26 列出要点 1.___________________________ 给我带来希望和力量 2._______________ 弹吉他 3.__________ 处理 4.________________ 在我的日常生活中 5.__________________ 提醒某人某事 6.__________总之 7._______________________________________________ 使我的 生活更加丰富多彩，更有意义 bring me hope and strength play the guitar deal with in my daily life remind sb. of sth. all in all make my life more colorful and more meaningful 27 三、遣词造句，连句成文 What does music bring to me? Music is like a key, which opens a door to the world for me. Music brings me hope and strength during hard times. When I was a kid, I used to be shy. After I took up playing the guitar to deal with my shyness, I made lots of friends. 28 Besides, music can broaden my horizons. I can know something that can’t be learned in my daily life or from the textbooks. Also, music reminds me of some happy memories. It makes me remember the love and care my teachers and friends have given me. All in all, music makes my life more colorful and more meaningful. I hope that all of us will value music and make it a part of our life. 三阶 写作实战训练 30 （2024玉林一模）为落实国家教育部提出的对中小学加强劳 动教育（labor education）的实施意见，你们学校安排了丰富多 彩的劳动教育活动。假如你是王涛，请给你的笔友Tony写一封邮 件，谈谈你参加学校组织的劳动教育活动的情况。内容包括： 1.简单介绍你们学校开展的劳动教育活动（烹饪、种植……）； 2.具体叙述一次你参加劳动教育活动的经历； 3.谈谈你参加劳动教育活动的体会和收获。 31 注意： 1.词数为80左右; 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称； 4.文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：different（adj.不同的）, encourage（v.鼓励）, independent（adj.独立的） 32 Dear Tony, How’s it going？_____________________________________ _______________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ Let me tell you something about our labor education. We have many different labor education activities in our school, such as cooking, cleaning rooms and growing vegetables. I’m interested in cooking best, so I joined the cooking club last month. Miss Li, our cooking teacher, is 33 ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ very kind and patient. Once, when we learned to cook tomato and egg soup, I found it hard to cook. And I didn’t feel like cooking anymore. Miss Li encouraged me and taught me how to cook the dish carefully. Finally, I made it. How happy I was! ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ What about you? Do you have any labor education activities at school? Please write to me soon. Yours, Wang Tao I enjoy the labor education activities very much. I think labor education activities not only help us learn life skills, but also help us to be independent. 36 $$