第2部分 主题5 自我认识，自我管理，自我提升(课件PPT)-【众相原创·赋能中考】2025年中考英语写作培优册（译林版 广西专用）

2025广西 英 语 写作培优册 1 第二部分 高频主题三阶写作指导 人与自我 主题5 自我认识，自我管理，自我提升 （自我介绍；提升自我；职业与梦想） 2 【教材模块/单元链接】 外研版 人教版 译林牛津版 七（下）M2 自荐成为班长 七（下）M9 爱好 八（下）M10 工作&职业 九（上）M3 英雄 七（下）U9 外貌特征 八（上）U3 性格特征 八（上）U6 生活目标 九（全）U4 我们的变 化 七（上）U1 自我介绍 九（上）U1 性格特点 九（上）U4 对我影响最大的人 九（下）U2 名人 3 一阶 素材积累与训练 4 素材积累 短语与搭配 外貌特征 1.have a strong body 有强壮的身体 2.have long/short hair 留着长发/短发 3.（be） of medium height 中等身高 4.（be） of medium build 中等体型 5 性格介绍 1.get better at 更擅长…… 2.be different from… 与……不同；与……有差异 3.the same as 和……相同；与……一致 4.as+形容词/副词原级+as… 和……一样…… 6 兴趣与爱好 1.be interested in对……感兴趣 2.be crazy about 热爱…… 3.do well in/be good at在……做得好；擅长…… 4.in one’s spare/free time在某人的业余/空闲时间 5.have…in common with sb. 与某人在……方面有共同之处 7 职业与梦想 1.expect/hope/wish to do sth. 期待/希望做某事 2.look forward to期盼 3.would like to do sth. 想要做某事 4.dream of being... 梦想成为…… 5.make up one’s mind to do sth. 某人下定决心做某事 8 开头句 人物介绍 1.Everyone has a hero in his or her heart. Yuan Longping is a hero in my heart. 2.Who do you think is the person that knows about you best? I think I am the person who knows myself best. 9 生活目标与梦想 1.Everyone has a dream. Some hope to be a doctor to help others, while others dream of being teachers. 2.The life goal is just like a light which guides us in darkness and helps us overcome difficulties. My life goal is to be a doctor. 10 中间句 外貌特征 1.I usually wear jeans, a T-shirt and sports shoes.［人教七（下） U9改编］ 2.I’m quite tall, with short hair, and I wear a pair of glasses. 3.I take after my father—we both have big eyes. 11 性格特点 1.I’m always ready to help others when they are in trouble. 2.I am very popular in our school because I am polite to everyone. 3.I like making friends because I think they can bring me much pleasure. 12 兴趣爱好 1.I love reading books because I think it’s a good way to open my mind. 2.I spend much of my spare time practicing the piano and I can play it very well now. 3.Besides, I’m very interested in playing basketball. 13 生活目标与梦想 1.As for me, I’m going to choose the most fun and exciting job in the world. I’m going to be an astronaut. 2.I will also learn to communicate with others, because communicating skills are important for a teacher. 3.To make my dream come true, first, I will study harder and try to read more books. 14 结尾句 1.As a student, I will study hard to get into a top university. In this way, I can get more chances to make a great contribution to China’s science and technology industry. 2.I strongly believe if I put my heart into it, I can achieve my dream in the future. 15 俗语/谚语 1.God helps those who help themselves. 天助自助者。 2.No pain, no gain. 一分耕耘，一分收获。 3.Where there’s a will, there’s a way. 有志者，事竟成。 4.Big dreams are the key to everything. 远大的理想是开启万物 的钥匙。 16 高分模板 Everybody has his or her dream job. Different people have different ideas in choosing their jobs. My dream is to be a __________（职业）. The reason why I want to be a __________（职业） is that __________（拥有这个梦想的原因）. To achieve my dream, I will __________（为了实现梦想将要做的事情1）. 17 In addition, I will __________（为了实现梦想将要做的事情2）. Besides, I will __________（为了实现梦想将要做的事情3）. I strongly believe if I put my heart into it, I can achieve my dream in the future. 句型训练 1.I know that she cares about me.（用because引导的原因状语从 句扩写句子） ________________________________________________________ __________ I know that she cares about me because she’s always there to listen. 19 2.Reading books and newspapers is my favorite hobby. It has become a necessary part of my life.（用which引导的定语从句升 格句子） ________________________________________________________ _______________________________________ Reading books and newspapers is my favorite hobby which has become a necessary part of my life. 二阶 主题典例探究 21 自我管理能力是个体终身成长和发展的关键。你校英文报以 “Know myself， improve myself”为题向同学们征稿。请你用英 语写一篇短文投稿。内容包括： 1.你对自己的评价（乐于助人、善于理财……）； 2.你将如何提升自己（读书、运动……）； 3.你的决心。 22 注意： 1.词数为 80左右；2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯； 3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称； 4.短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。 参考词汇： manage （v. 管理）；carry out（执行） Know myself, improve myself Self-management is important to us. ____________________ ___ 23 写作剖析 一、仔细审题 1.文体：本文要求介绍自我评价及提升自己的方法，是一篇 ________； 2.时态：介绍自我评价，主要使用____________；介绍提升自己 的方法，用____________； 3.人称：介绍自我评价及提升自己的方法，写作时主要使用第 ____人称； 说明文 一般现在时 一般将来时 一 24 二、构思框架，列出要点 25 列出要点 1.___________ 在……中表现良好 2._______________ 自我管理 3._________________________ 有健康的生活习惯 4._____________ 早起 5._______________________ 每天坚持跑步 do well in manage oneself have healthy living habits get up early keep running every day 26 6._______________________________ 做某事有困难 7.__________________________ 为某事制订清晰的计划 8.__________________ 向某人寻求建议 9.____________ 读书 10.______________ 持续学习 have difficulty （in） doing sth. make a clear plan for sth. ask sb. for advice read books keep learning 27 三、遣词造句，连句成文 Know myself, improve myself Self-management is important to us. I think I do well in managing myself. I can manage my pocket money well. I have healthy living habits—getting up early and keeping running every day. However, I sometimes have difficulty managing my time of study and rest. 28 To better manage myself, I will make a clear plan for my study and rest time and carry it out with a strong will. Besides, I will ask my friends and parents for their advice. I will also read some books about self-management, from which I will get some useful tips. There is a long way to go to improve myself, but I will keep learning. 三阶 写作实战训练 30 （2024临沂改编）假定你是李华，你的外籍朋友Sam想了解 你的梦想职业。请你用英语写一封邮件，告诉他你的梦想职业。 内容包括： 1.你的梦想职业是什么（医生、老师……）； 2.你有这个梦想的原因（希望帮助他人、我的经历……） 3.你的想法。 31 注意： 1.词数为 80左右； 2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯； 3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称； 4.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 参考词汇： manage （v. 管理）；carry out（执行） Dear Sam, 32 Thanks for your e-mail. ______________________________ ______________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ I’m very glad to tell you something about my dream job. I have dreamed of being a teacher since I was a child, because I enjoy staying with children. Besides, I want to be a teacher because of the power of an example—Miss Li, my English teacher. She often helps me with my English, and she influences me a lot. I used to be weak in English and it ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ Best wishes! Yours， Li Hua made me sad. She cheered me up and told me some good ways to improve my English. With her help, I made great progress in English. I have made up my mind to be a good teacher like her when I grow up. Although I know it is not easy to be a teacher, I will make every effort to realize my dream. 35 $$