第2部分 主题2 多彩、安全、有意义的学校生活(课件PPT)-【众相原创·赋能中考】2025年中考英语写作培优册（译林版 广西专用）

2025广西 英 语 写作培优册 1 第二部分 高频主题三阶写作指导 人与自我 主题2 多彩、安全、有意义的学校生活 （学生在学校的学习与生活；校园环境与基础设施；校园活动； 新生建议；规章制度） （2024广西；2023广西；2021北部湾经济区） 2 【教材模块/单元链接】 外研版 人教版 译林牛津版 七（上）M3 我的学校 七（上）M5 上学的一天 七（下）M1 失物招领 九（上）M11 照片：学校 生活 七（上）U3 教室里 的物品 七（下）U1 加入社 团、俱乐部 七（上）U3 学校开放日 3 外研版 人教版 译林牛津版 九（下）M2 教育：学校生活 九（下）M8 学校生活&朋友 七（下）U4 规章制度 七（下）U11 校园旅行 九（全）U14 学校生活 七（上）U4 我在学校的一天 八（上）U2 学校生活 续表 4 一阶 素材积累与训练 5 素材积累 短语与搭配 1.graduate from从……毕业 2.come to an end即将结束 3.pass/fail the exam通过考试/未通过考试 4.set up some clubs成立一些俱乐部 5.join the basketball club加入篮球俱乐部 6 6.take an active part in积极参加 7.different kinds of activities不同种类的活动 8.have a good effect on对……有良好的影响 9.make full use of充分利用 10.make progress取得进步 11.get on/along well with sb.和某人相处得好 7 开头句 1.I’m sure that you all have your own memories about the happiness of the last three years.［外研九（下）M8］ 2. How time flies! I’m graduating from our school. 8 中间句 学校日常生活 1.Our lessons begin at eight o’clock. Usually we have three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. My favourite subject is English. 2.Twice a week, I play baseball after school. I love this game and practice hard every time. Our team won two games last month. 9 社团活动、校园旅行 1.In order to make our school life more colorful, all kinds of clubs have been set up. As for me, I’d like to set up an English Club. In the club, you can speak to foreigners and talk about good ways of learning English. 2.Sometimes my friends and I go to the library in the afternoon. We have a Reading Club. 3.Today I went on a school trip. We visited the science museum and it was really interesting.［人教七（下）U11］ 10 校园环境与基础设施 1.Between this building and the dining hall is the classroom building with twenty-four classrooms.［外研七（上）M3］ 2.My school looks beautiful. The playground is so big. The classrooms are clean and bright. 3.There is a big playground in our school. The place I like most in my school is the playground where I can do exercise and play happily with my classmates. 11 对新生提出关于校园生活的建议 1. You’d better take an active part in different kinds of activities to make your school life more colorful. 2.First, as students, it’s important for you to study hard at school. You must listen to the teachers carefully in class and do your homework carefully after school. Second, it’s also important to keep healthy. To keep healthy, you can exercise often and eat regularly. 12 学校规章制度 You must follow the rules both in and out of school. For example, students should wear the school uniforms at school. And students are not allowed to bring mobile phones to the school. Following the rules at school can make you behave well. 13 结尾句 1.As long as you follow the advice above, I believe you will have a colorful school life. 2.If you make full use of your free time, you will have a wonderful school life and you will learn a lot. 14 高分模板 How time flies！My three-year middle school life is coming to an end. Looking back on the three years, I feel __________（感受类形容词）. Most of my happiness is brought by my teachers and 15 classmates in my school. The teachers are very __________ （评价类形容词）. They not only __________（老师做的事情1） but also __________（老师做的事情2）. My classmates are very __________（评价类形容词）. We always __________ （和同学们做的事情1） and __________（和同学们做的事情2） together. What’s more, our school organized different kinds of activities for us, such as __________（活动1） and __________ （活动2）. They make our school life __________（评价类形 容词）. All good things come to an end, but I am sure __________（希望）. 句型训练 1.I like science best.（用of短语表明范围来升格句子） _____________________________________ Of all the subjects, I like science best. 2.We set up many clubs.（用such as举例俱乐部的种类） ________________________________________________________ ________________________ We set up many clubs, such as the English Club, the Chess Club and the Art Club. 3.I prefer English clubs.（用定语从句扩写具体特点） ________________________________________________________ ____________________________ I prefer English clubs which can provide me with chances to talk with others in English. 18 4.Students should develop good learning habits. It’s important. （用It is +adj.+for sb. to do sth.升格句子） ________________________________________________________ ________ It is very important for students to develop good learning habits. 5.I like the library most in my school. I can borrow books. （用the place I like most is… where… 连接句子） ________________________________________________________ ___________________ The place I like most in my school is the library where I can borrow books. 19 二阶 主题典例探究 20 （2024广西）假定你是李华，你的外籍朋友Sam知道你将参 加你校举办的课本剧比赛（textbook play competition），他对此 很感兴趣。请你用英语写一封邮件，告知他相关的情况。内容包 括： 1.比赛信息（时间、地点……）； 2.你的准备计划（阅读课文、参加讨论……）； 3.表达期待。 21 注意： 1.词数为80左右； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称； 4.开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 22 参考词汇：prepare（v.准备），text（n.课文），discuss （v. 讨论）， performance（n. 表演） Dear Sam, How is it going? I’m glad to tell you something about the coming textbook play competition in our school. _____________ _________ Yours, Li Hua 23 写作剖析 一、仔细审题 1.文体：本文要求给外籍朋友写一封邮件，是一篇________； 2.时态：介绍课本剧比赛信息用____________，介绍自己的准备 计划，以____________为主； 3.人称：介绍课本剧比赛信息用第____人称，介绍自己的准备计 划，用第____人称。 应用文 一般现在时 一般将来时 三 一 24 二、构思框架，列出要点 构思框架 25 列出要点 1.__________________________________________________ 为 了使我们的学校生活更加丰富多彩 2._________________________________ 举办课本剧比赛 3._____________________ 在下午4点举行 4.____________ 为……做准备 5.___________________ 这是我的计划。 6.______________________ 仔细阅读文本 in order to make our school life more colo（u）r-ful hold the textbook play competition be held at 4:00 p.m. prepare for Here are my plans. read the text carefully 26 7.___________________ 理解我的角色 8.________________ 与……讨论…… 9._____________________________ 努力练习表演技巧 10.____________________ 希望做某事 11._____________________________ 献上精彩的表演 12.____________ 赢得一个奖项 13._____________________ 享受这次比赛 understand my role discuss…with… practice the acting skills hard hope/wish to do sth. give a wonderful performance win a prize enjoy the competition 27 三、遣词造句，连句成文 Dear Sam, How is it going? I’m glad to tell you something about the coming textbook play competition in our school. 28 In order to make our school life more colourful, our school will hold the textbook play competition. It will be held at 4:00 p.m. next Friday in the school hall. Everyone is preparing for it. Here are my plans. Firstly, I am going to read the text carefully and try to understand my role. Secondly, I plan to discuss how to get on well with my classmates. Besides, I will practice the acting skills hard together with them. 29 In a word, we will work as a great team. I hope that we’ll give a wonderful performance and win a prize in the textbook play competition. Yours， Li Hua 三阶 写作实战训练 31 丰富多彩的课外活动让我们的校园生活更加充实，促进我们 成长。你校校刊的英语专栏正以“Colorful activities at school”为 题进行征稿，请你用英语写一篇短文投稿。内容包括： 1.你在学校经常做的事情（打篮球、写作业）； 2.你经常做这些事情的原因 （保持健康、交朋友等）； 3.你的收获。 32 注意： 1.词数为80左右； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称； 4.短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：outdoor （adj. 户外的），play basketball （打篮球） 33 Colorful activities at school There are lots of after-school activities in my school. Now, let me introduce some of my own activities. ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ First of all, after school, I usually spend half an hour playing basketball on the playground. The reason why I like playing basketball is that it can make me keep healthy. Then I finish my homework at school. 34 ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ So I can make the most of my time and I don’t have to do my homework after I go home. Finally, I take drawing classes, because I like drawing things on paper best. I think it can help me be more creative. Through these activities, I can not only relax myself but also learn many skills, and my school life becomes more and more colorful. 36 $$