第2部分 主题1 丰富、充实、积极向上的生活(课件PPT)-【众相原创·赋能中考】2025年中考英语写作培优册（译林版 广西专用）

2025广西 英 语 写作培优册 1 第二部分 高频主题三阶写作指导 人与自我 主题1 丰富、充实、积极向上的生活 （多姿多彩的生活；日常活动；游玩旅行；假期计划） （2019北部湾经济区） 2 【教材模块/单元链接】 外研版 人教版 译林牛津版 七（上）M6 去动物园的旅 行 七（下）M3 计划与安排 七（下）M6 生活环境&旅游 七（下）M10 旅游&交通 七（上）U2 家庭 七（下）U2 日常活 动 七（下）U12 周末 活动 七（下）U6 户外活动 八（上）U3 一日游 3 外研版 人教版 译林牛津版 八（下）M8 休假：旅行&自 然 九（上）M1 世界奇观：自 然&旅游 九（下）M1 旅行 八（上）U1 假期 八（上）U1 闲暇活 动 八（下）U2 假期旅行 续表 4 一阶 素材积累与训练 5 素材积累 短语与搭配 1.have/hold a party举办聚会 2.hang out with friends与朋友闲逛 3.climb mountains 爬山 4.go to the movies去看电影；去电影院 5.visit a/the museum参观博物馆 6 6.go to the beach/park/forest去沙滩/公园/森林 7.go hiking去远足 8.go camping去野营 9.go for a picnic去野餐 10.go fishing去钓鱼 11.go boating去划船 12.go shopping 去购物 7 13.watch TV看电视 14.play video games 玩电子游戏 15.take up/develop a hobby 培养一种爱好 16.enjoy oneself玩得开心 17.have a good day 度过愉快的一天 18.plan to do sth. 计划做某事 8 开头句 1.I went to the City Zoo last weekend. I had a good time there. 2.The summer/winter vacation is coming soon, and we’ve had a great plan for it. 3.Last weekend, I had a picnic with my friends at the foot of Cangshan Mountain. It was really interesting. 9 中间句 日常活动 1.We had a wonderful party last night and everybody had a good time.［外研七（下）M10］ 2.I always go swimming in summer because it makes me feel cool.［人教七（下）U2］ 3.You can go to the park. When the weather is fine， you can fly kites and play games with your friends.［人教七（下）U12］ 10 游玩旅行 1.Yesterday we went to the Louvre Museum. It has many world-famous works of art, such as the Mona Lisa.［外研七 （下）M10］ 2.You can visit some places of interest and take beautiful photos.［人教七（下）U12］ 11 3.We went camping last month. It was very interesting.［译林牛 津七（下）U6］ 4.At the end of the day, we watched the fireworks in front of Sleeping Beauty Castle.［译林牛津八（下）U2］ 12 结尾句 1.My holiday is very colourful. I like it very much.［人教八 （上）U1］ 2.Though all of us felt very tired, we got the happiest memory. 3.The tour not only deepens our love for our country but also enriches our understanding of traditional Chinese art! 13 俗语/谚语 1.Life is what you make it.你的生活由你创造。 2.Where there’s a will, there’s a way.有志者，事竟成。 3.Time flies when you’re having fun.快乐的时光总是飞逝。 4.All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.只学习不玩耍， 聪明的孩子也变傻。 14 句型训练 1.The summer vacation is coming. I plan to take up some new hobbies.（用such as… 扩写句子） ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ The summer vacation is coming. I plan to take up some new hobbies, such as taking photos and playing the guitar. 2.There are many works of art in the museum. We will visit it tomorrow.（用which引导的定语从句升格句子） ________________________________________________________ ________________ There are many works of art in the museum which we will visit tomorrow. 15 3.Traveling can open up our mind It gives us a chance to develop basic life skills.（用not only... but also...升格句子） ________________________________________________________ __________________________________ Traveling can not only open up our mind but also give us a chance to develop basic life skills. 4.在西安旅游期间，我参观了很多名胜古迹。（汉译英） _______________________________________________________ I visited many places of interest during the trip to Xi’an. 5.上周末我们在公园里野餐了，我们玩得很开心。（汉译英） ________________________________________________________ __________ Last weekend we had a picnic in the park and we enjoyed ourselves. 16 二阶 主题典例探究 17 假期对学生来说是一段放松自己、关心家人、充实自我的时 间。对于即将到来的暑假你有什么计划和安排?你校英文报刊正 在开展以“My holiday plans”为题的征文活动,请你用英语写一篇 短文，向专栏投稿。内容包括： 1.对假期的看法（提升自己的好时机、享受生活……）； 2.假期计划（游玩、分担家务……）； 3.你的期望。 18 注意： 1.词数为80左右； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称； 4.短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：improve（v.提升）， enjoy（v.享受），cook （v. 烹饪）， share housework（分担家务） My holiday plans The summer holiday is coming.______________________ 19 写作剖析 一、仔细审题 1.文体：本文要求介绍自己的暑期计划，是一篇________； 2.时态：介绍假期里面的活动时以____________为主，介绍这些 活动可能会带来的感受时用____________； 3.人称：介绍自己的暑假计划用第____人称。 说明文 一般将来时 一般现在时 一 20 二、构思框架，列出要点 构思框架 21 列出要点 1._______________在我看来 2._________________________________ 对某人而言是做某事的 好时机。 3.________________________休息 4._____________放松自己 5._______________ 计划做某事 in my opinion It’s a good time for sb. to do sth. take a break/have a rest relax oneself plan to do sth. 22 6.____________________ 和某人共度时光 7._____________________学习基本生活技能 8._________________分担家务 9.____________读书 10.______________去……游玩 11._________________________变得更加独立 12._________________学习新东西 spend time with sb. learn basic life skills share housework read books take a trip to become more independent learn new things 23 13.________________________感受生活的幸福 14.__________________________ 期待做某事 15.___________________________ 我希望…… 16._________________ 我确信…… feel the happiness of life look forward to doing sth. I hope.../It’s my hope that... I am sure that... 24 三、遣词造句，连句成文 My holiday plans The summer holiday is coming. In my opinion， the summer holiday is a good time for me to take a break and relax myself. To have a meaningful holiday, I have made some plans for it. 25 During my holiday, I plan to spend a wonderful time with my family by having a picnic in the park and cooking meals with my parents. I will also show my care for my parents by sharing housework. Besides, I will read some books. Reading makes a full man. Last but not least, I will take a trip to Weihai with my friends. I look forward to creating wonderful memories, reading more and being able to learn new things. By completing these plans with joy, I’m sure that I’ll have a wonderful and meaningful summer holiday. 三阶 写作实战训练 28 好习惯成就更好的自己。良好的习惯对于青少年的健康成长 起到了至关重要的作用。初中三年，你培养了哪些良好的习惯？ 请你以“Good habits for a better me”为题，写一篇英语短文，谈 谈你的良好习惯以及这些习惯带来的好处。内容包括： 1.你有哪些好习惯？（学习、运动、生活等方面） 2.这些习惯给你带来了哪些好处？ 3.呼吁大家养成好习惯。 29 注意： 1.词数为80左右； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称； 4.短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：manage （v.管理）， develop （v.养成） Good habits for a better me As we all know, good habits are the key to success.______ ________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ Good habits make us better people. During my three years in junior high school, I’ve developed many good habits. First, I have developed a habit of setting goals and planning my time. This helps me do well in school and have time for fun. Second, as the saying goes, “Health comes ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ first.” So I usually do some sports after school. I always play basketball with my friends, which is good for my health and makes me relaxed. Third, I try to be on time for everything in my daily life. This shows respect and helps me remember my duties. Good habits have helped me in many ways. They make me healthier and happier. I think everyone should have good habits. 33 $$