“同题异构”提升应用文写作训练的效率之专题03-6(成人典礼)“同题异练”——2025届新高考英语二轮复习

“同题异构”提升应用文写作训练的效率之专题 03-6(成人典礼)“同题异练” 所谓“同题异练”是指：要求考生就同一话题以书信体写作的要求和非书信体的写作要求进行不同视角下的写作训练。具体的说：针对同一个话题或题目，从不同的角度命题，要求考生使用不同的文体风格和表达方式来进行多次写作练习。这有助于考生更全面地理解话题，积累更多的素材和灵感，提升思维的灵活性，激发写作的创造力，快速提高写作能力，以便在未来的高考中写出精彩纷呈的考场作文。 本专题的话题是“成人典礼”。在练习时考生需要注意以下几个方面。 一是要弄清写作文体：认真审题，弄清写作文体，是用书信体还是用非书信体。本次练习涉及到的文体大体为：书信体的邀请信、感恩信和建议信；非书信体的投稿、演讲稿以及通知。 二是要谋划篇章结构：一般来说，我们常常采用三段式写作(与本专题相关的写作)： 三是要打开写作思路：这是考生普遍存在的软肋(高考英语第一节的写作作为衡量考生英语综合运用 能力的重要题型之一，近年来愈发凸显考生思路开阔的重要性。然而，许多考生除了语言基础不扎实、表达受阻这一最常见的问题外，思路不开阔的问题也越来越常见)。就本专题，笔者建议考生从以下几个方面打开思路：①“成人典礼”常见的主题有：感恩教育(感恩父母、感恩老师、感恩学校)、责任担当以及展望未来；②“成人典礼”的组织(活动程序的策划或向主办方提出自己的建议、发出通知和邀请等)；③以参与者的身份叙述活动的主要过程和参与活动后的感悟，或者以旁观者的身份记录活动的主要过程并谈谈感想或评价与他人分享。 另外，建议考生参看本系列资料的专题01“同题异解”细节的构思(将题目中所给的关键信息进行充 实与拓展)。 (改编自2020年天津高考真题)假设你是晨光中学高三学生李津。你校于5月8日举办了成人礼活动，你的英国朋友Chris很想了解该活动。你于当晚给Chris回一封电子邮件，介绍有关情况。 内容包括：1. 活动内容； 2. 活动感受。 注意：1. 不少于100； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 参考词汇：成人礼 the coming-of-age ceremony Dear Chris,   ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Jin 【简析】 本篇属于书信体的告知有关活动的告知信写作。要求考生以李津给Chris回一封电子邮件，介绍成人礼活动的相关情况。内容包括：活动内容以及活动感受。以上两点都是本篇写作的重点(需要考生打开写作思路)。以下就此提供不同的写作内容。 1. At the beginning of the event, the principal delivered an inspiring speech, highlighting the importance of embracing adulthood with responsibility and integrity. Then, it was followed by the symbolic act of receiving gifts from parents, which marked the transition into adulthood. To conclude the event, the school organized a heartwarming candle-lighting ceremony, symbolizing the students’ bright future ahead. The ceremony holds great significance as it serves as a reminder for them to take responsibility and develop a strong sense of identity. Overall, it is a memorable and meaningful event for both students and parents, celebrating this significant milestone and encouraging personal growth. 2. The ceremony we had long awaited fell on Feb. 28th., just 100 days before the significant milestone in our life course—Gaokao. At the beginning, every student, flushed with joy, walked the red carpet into the auditorium. Afterwards, teacher and student representatives delivered inspiring speeches, leaving all audience present moved and motivated. Finally the highlight came that we together swore an oath loudly to mark the very day. I would persistently exert myself to fulfill my ambition! 3. At the beginning of the ceremony, we made an oath that we should have a sense of duty for our society and shoulder the responsibility as grown-ups. After that, we expressed our gratitude to our parents who have gone through hardships to bring us up and to our teachers who have been teaching us patiently. Finally, our headmaster delivered a speech, in which he congratulated us on becoming adults and inspired us to embrace the future and pursue our dreams. Thanks to the ceremony, I truly understand what it means to grow up. I will work hard at my lessons to fulfill my dream, thus making myself more competent and better shoulder my responsibility. 4. The event took place from 8 to 11 am, which was to raise our awareness of entering adulthood and becoming responsible members of society. We first briefly looked back on our past, reflecting on what we had gained. Then we watched a documentary about great people who contributed to our mother land. Their deeds and spirits impressed me. I have determined to work hard to become a person like them and realize my social value.  5. First, our principal gave an inspirational speech, emphasizing the importance of taking on greater responsibilities as we transition into adulthood. Afterward, our teachers presented us with certificates symbolizing our readiness to face the challenges of adulthood. I felt a mix of excitement and nostalgia. It marked a significant milestone in our lives.     Speaking of the future, I aspire to pursue higher education and achieve success in my chosen field. I also want to contribute to society and make a meaningful impact on people’s lives. Hoping this gives you a better understanding of our coming-of-age ceremony. 6. The ceremony began with the headmaster’s uplifting speech on the responsibilities we would shoulder and some suggestions. Then, with parents’ company, we went through under the symbolic coming-of-age gate. It was a moving and sensational scene, where many students were not only tearful for their growing up but also thoughtful on their future. The event turned out be a great success. Not only did it make us students realize the importance of embracing maturity and taking on the challenges that come with it but also a meaningful step towards a new chapter in our lives. 7. Dressed in Hanfu, the traditional Chinese costume, we gathered together in the Art Center of our school for the ceremony. The ceremony started with a speech delivered by our headmaster. He congratulated us and encouraged us to pursue our dreams bravely. After that, a student representative expressed our gratitude to our beloved parents and teachers. Then parents gave us a gift with their best wishes. Finally, we took photos together. As it was really a memorable moment, I made up my mind to be independent from then on! 8. The ceremony started with a welcome speech delivered by our school headmaster, in which he highlighted the importance of taking responsibility as an adult. Subsequently, students made an oath (誓言) together, after which they expressed heartfelt gratitude to their teachers and parents. With their best wishes, students passed through the coming-of-age gate, ready to embrace a brand new chapter of life. The ceremony turned out to be a huge success. It is through this event that we feel motivated to strive to make a promising future and contribute to our society. 【完整答案】 Dear Chris, I’m delighted to hear from you. Now I’d like to tell you something about the coming-of-age ceremony held in my school on May 8th this month. After an inspiring speech from our principle, the ceremony highlighted the moment when our parents handed us a customized medal representing that we have been grown-ups. Many students were moved to tears by the touching words. The ceremony ends with our passing through the coming-of-age gate, striding towards a promising future. Inspired by the ceremony, I felt as if I had become a new person. I’m determined to work harder so that I will be more prepared to make contributions for my country. Best regards. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 1 (广东省华南师范大学附中2024-2025学年高三上学期综合测试二)假定你是红星中学高三学生李华。你校将为高三学生举办成人礼活动。请你给班上的交换生Peter写一封邮件，邀请他参加。 内容包括：1. 活动简介； 2. 发出邀请。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80个左右； 2. 请按如下格式再答题纸的相应位置作答。 参考词汇：成人礼the coming-of-age ceremony Dear Peter, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best regards, Li Hua 2 (四川省江油市太白中学2023-2024学年高二下学期期中)假如你是李华，你校于上周举办了成人礼活动。请你给校报英语角写一篇短文投稿。 内容包括：1. 你对活动的感受; 2. 你对“成人”的理解; 3. 你对自己未来的展望。 注意：写作词数应为80左右。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3 (四川省成都市石室中学2024届高三下学期开学考)假定你是李华，现为某国际学校学生会主席。你校将为高三学生举办成人礼仪式，你有幸被选为学生代表发言，请用英语写一篇发言稿。 内容包括：1. 成人礼的意义； 2. 对未来的期许。 注意： 1. 词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：the coming-of-age ceremony成人礼仪式 Ladies and gentlemen, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you for your listening! 4 (四川省眉山市东坡区2023-2024学年高二下学期6月期末联合考试)假设你是李华，你校将于近期为年满18周岁的学生举行以“十八而志，感恩与责任”为主题的成人典礼，你将作为学生代表在典礼上发言。请你用英语写一篇发言稿。 内容包括：1. 表达感恩； 2. 树立志向； 3. 明确责任。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80个左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Good morning, everyone, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you！ 5 (湖北省咸宁市2023-2024学年高二下学期期末考试)上周你校高三的学生举行了主题为感恩的成人典礼，你作为旁观者见证了全过程，你的英国朋友Chris很想了解该活动请写一篇短文记录这次典礼。 内容包括：1. 典礼的时间和地点； 2. 典礼的大致过程(父母期望、表达感恩等)； 3. 你的感想。 注意：1. 词数80左右。开头句已经给出，不计入总词数； 2. 不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。 Dear Chris, Our school’s sports file d saw a coming-of-age ceremony last Sunday.  _________________________  ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6 (2023届四川省成都外国语学校高考适应性模拟检测英语试题一)假如你是李华，你校最近要为高三毕业生举行成人典礼，你作为学生代表，被要求在典礼上发言。请根据下列要点，写一篇发言稿。 内容包括：1. 感谢父母的养育之恩，感谢老师的培养之情； 2. 表达努力学习，争取考出好成绩的决心； 3. 表达为社会和国家承担责任的意志。 注意：1. 词数80左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7 (2023届四川省凉山州高三下学期二诊)假定你是李华, 你校下周即将举行成人礼仪式，你有幸被选为学生代表发言，请用英语写一篇发言稿。 内容包括：1. 成人礼的意义； 2. 感恩老师； 3. 告别同学并祝福。 注意：字数100左右。 参考词汇：the coming-of-age ceremony 成人礼仪式 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8 (2024届江西省南昌市十九中高三下学期第三次模拟)假如你是国际交流学生Jim，学校下周将举办成人仪式典礼，校长要求每个同学写一封信给自己的父母。 内容包括：1. 成长与收获； 2. 表达感恩； 3. 继续努力。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9 (四川省成都市石室中学2024-2025学年高三上学期十月月考)假如你是学生会主席李华，学校将为高三的同学举办“成人礼”(Coming-of-age Ceremony)，请你以学生会名义发一则英文通知，欢迎全校师生参加。 内容包括：1. 活动目的及时间地点； 2. 主要环节； 3. 注意事项。 注意：1.词数80左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文流畅。 Notice ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ The Students Union 10 (江西省萍乡实验学校2024-2025学年高三上学期月考试四暨长郡十八校联考模拟)假定你是李华，学校计划下月举办十八岁成人礼(Coming-of-age Ceremony)，因此组织同学们排练集体节目在成人礼上表演。但是有同学反映，高三课业紧张，无法抽出时间排练。现校方委托学生会向同学们征集意见，请你给学生会写封邮件。 内容包括：1. 你认为成人礼活动安排中存在的问题； 2. 提出改进的建议和理由。 注意：1. 词数80左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Students’ union, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ “同题异构”提升应用文写作训练的效率之专题 03-6(成人典礼)“同题异练” 所谓“同题异练”是指：要求考生就同一话题以书信体写作的要求和非书信体的写作要求进行不同视角下的写作训练。具体的说：针对同一个话题或题目，从不同的角度命题，要求考生使用不同的文体风格和表达方式来进行多次写作练习。这有助于考生更全面地理解话题，积累更多的素材和灵感，提升思维的灵活性，激发写作的创造力，快速提高写作能力，以便在未来的高考中写出精彩纷呈的考场作文。 本专题的话题是“成人典礼”。在练习时考生需要注意以下几个方面。 一是要弄清写作文体：认真审题，弄清写作文体，是用书信体还是用非书信体。本次练习涉及到的文体大体为：书信体的邀请信、感恩信和建议信；非书信体的投稿、演讲稿以及通知。 二是要谋划篇章结构：一般来说，我们常常采用三段式写作(与本专题相关的写作)： 三是要打开写作思路：这是考生普遍存在的软肋(高考英语第一节的写作作为衡量考生英语综合运用 能力的重要题型之一，近年来愈发凸显考生思路开阔的重要性。然而，许多考生除了语言基础不扎实、表达受阻这一最常见的问题外，思路不开阔的问题也越来越常见)。就本专题，笔者建议考生从以下几个方面打开思路：①“成人典礼”常见的主题有：感恩教育(感恩父母、感恩老师、感恩学校)、责任担当以及展望未来；②“成人典礼”的组织(活动程序的策划或向主办方提出自己的建议、发出通知和邀请等)；③以参与者的身份叙述活动的主要过程和参与活动后的感悟，或者以旁观者的身份记录活动的主要过程并谈谈感想或评价与他人分享。 另外，建议考生参看本系列资料的专题01“同题异解”细节的构思(将题目中所给的关键信息进行充 实与拓展)。 (改编自2020年天津高考真题)假设你是晨光中学高三学生李津。你校于5月8日举办了成人礼活动，你的英国朋友Chris很想了解该活动。你于当晚给Chris回一封电子邮件，介绍有关情况。 内容包括：1. 活动内容； 2. 活动感受。 注意：1. 不少于100； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 参考词汇：成人礼 the coming-of-age ceremony Dear Chris,   ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Jin 【简析】 本篇属于书信体的告知有关活动的告知信写作。要求考生以李津给Chris回一封电子邮件，介绍成人礼活动的相关情况。内容包括：活动内容以及活动感受。以上两点都是本篇写作的重点(需要考生打开写作思路)。以下就此提供不同的写作内容。 1. At the beginning of the event, the principal delivered an inspiring speech, highlighting the importance of embracing adulthood with responsibility and integrity. Then, it was followed by the symbolic act of receiving gifts from parents, which marked the transition into adulthood. To conclude the event, the school organized a heartwarming candle-lighting ceremony, symbolizing the students’ bright future ahead. The ceremony holds great significance as it serves as a reminder for them to take responsibility and develop a strong sense of identity. Overall, it is a memorable and meaningful event for both students and parents, celebrating this significant milestone and encouraging personal growth. 2. The ceremony we had long awaited fell on Feb. 28th., just 100 days before the significant milestone in our life course—Gaokao. At the beginning, every student, flushed with joy, walked the red carpet into the auditorium. Afterwards, teacher and student representatives delivered inspiring speeches, leaving all audience present moved and motivated. Finally the highlight came that we together swore an oath loudly to mark the very day. I would persistently exert myself to fulfill my ambition! 3. At the beginning of the ceremony, we made an oath that we should have a sense of duty for our society and shoulder the responsibility as grown-ups. After that, we expressed our gratitude to our parents who have gone through hardships to bring us up and to our teachers who have been teaching us patiently. Finally, our headmaster delivered a speech, in which he congratulated us on becoming adults and inspired us to embrace the future and pursue our dreams. Thanks to the ceremony, I truly understand what it means to grow up. I will work hard at my lessons to fulfill my dream, thus making myself more competent and better shoulder my responsibility. 4. The event took place from 8 to 11 am, which was to raise our awareness of entering adulthood and becoming responsible members of society. We first briefly looked back on our past, reflecting on what we had gained. Then we watched a documentary about great people who contributed to our mother land. Their deeds and spirits impressed me. I have determined to work hard to become a person like them and realize my social value.  5. First, our principal gave an inspirational speech, emphasizing the importance of taking on greater responsibilities as we transition into adulthood. Afterward, our teachers presented us with certificates symbolizing our readiness to face the challenges of adulthood. I felt a mix of excitement and nostalgia. It marked a significant milestone in our lives.     Speaking of the future, I aspire to pursue higher education and achieve success in my chosen field. I also want to contribute to society and make a meaningful impact on people’s lives. Hoping this gives you a better understanding of our coming-of-age ceremony. 6. The ceremony began with the headmaster’s uplifting speech on the responsibilities we would shoulder and some suggestions. Then, with parents’ company, we went through under the symbolic coming-of-age gate. It was a moving and sensational scene, where many students were not only tearful for their growing up but also thoughtful on their future. The event turned out be a great success. Not only did it make us students realize the importance of embracing maturity and taking on the challenges that come with it but also a meaningful step towards a new chapter in our lives. 7. Dressed in Hanfu, the traditional Chinese costume, we gathered together in the Art Center of our school for the ceremony. The ceremony started with a speech delivered by our headmaster. He congratulated us and encouraged us to pursue our dreams bravely. After that, a student representative expressed our gratitude to our beloved parents and teachers. Then parents gave us a gift with their best wishes. Finally, we took photos together. As it was really a memorable moment, I made up my mind to be independent from then on! 8. The ceremony started with a welcome speech delivered by our school headmaster, in which he highlighted the importance of taking responsibility as an adult. Subsequently, students made an oath (誓言) together, after which they expressed heartfelt gratitude to their teachers and parents. With their best wishes, students passed through the coming-of-age gate, ready to embrace a brand new chapter of life. The ceremony turned out to be a huge success. It is through this event that we feel motivated to strive to make a promising future and contribute to our society. 【完整答案】 Dear Chris, I’m delighted to hear from you. Now I’d like to tell you something about the coming-of-age ceremony held in my school on May 8th this month. After an inspiring speech from our principle, the ceremony highlighted the moment when our parents handed us a customized medal representing that we have been grown-ups. Many students were moved to tears by the touching words. The ceremony ends with our passing through the coming-of-age gate, striding towards a promising future. Inspired by the ceremony, I felt as if I had become a new person. I’m determined to work harder so that I will be more prepared to make contributions for my country. Best regards. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 1 (广东省华南师范大学附中2024-2025学年高三上学期综合测试二)假定你是红星中学高三学生李华。你校将为高三学生举办成人礼活动。请你给班上的交换生Peter写一封邮件，邀请他参加。 内容包括：1. 活动简介； 2. 发出邀请。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80个左右； 2. 请按如下格式再答题纸的相应位置作答。 参考词汇：成人礼the coming-of-age ceremony Dear Peter, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best regards, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Peter, I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing to extend a warm invitation to you to participate in our upcoming coming-of-age ceremony. This grand event is a celebration of our students’ entrance into adulthood, marking a significant milestone in their lives and the beginning of a new journey. It is a time of reflection, gratitude, and anticipation as they embark on the next chapter of their lives. We are eager to share this special occasion with you and learn from your unique perspectives and experiences. Please let us know if you would be able to attend. We would be delighted to welcome you and ensure that your stay is both memorable and enjoyable. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。学校将为高三学生举办成人礼活动，要求考生按照要求给班上的交换 生Peter写一封邮件，邀请他参加。 【详解】 1. 词汇积累 发出热情的邀请：extend a warm invitation → send out a warm invitation 参与：participate in → take part in 重要的：significant → important 感激：gratitude → appreciation 2. 句式拓展 原 句：This grand event is a celebration of our students’ entrance into adulthood, marking a significant milestone in their lives and the beginning of a new journey. 拓展句：This grand event is a celebration of our students’ entrance into adulthood, which marks a significant milestone in their lives and the beginning of a new journey. 【高分句型】 1. This grand event is a celebration of our students’ entrance into adulthood, marking a significant milestone in their lives and the beginning of a new journey.(运用了现在分词marking作状语) 2. Please let us know if you would be able to attend.(运用了if引导的条件状语从句) 2 (四川省江油市太白中学2023-2024学年高二下学期期中)假如你是李华，你校于上周举办了成人礼活动。请你给校报英语角写一篇短文投稿。 内容包括：1. 你对活动的感受; 2. 你对“成人”的理解; 3. 你对自己未来的展望。 注意：写作词数应为80左右。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Last week, we held a coming-of-age ceremony in the school hall, which left a deep impression on me. During the event, we looked back on our growth and learned more about adulthood. Coming-of-age means a person grows up and begins to take social responsibilities. At 18, we should cherish our youth, learn to think, and learn to be grateful and independent. Looking ahead, I dream of being a scientist. To attain my goal, I will attach greater importance to exercising my body and mind. I firmly believe my dream will come true. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。你校于上周举办了成人礼活动。要求考生给校报英语角写一篇短文投 稿。 【详解】 1. 词汇积累 举行：hold→host 达到：attain→reach 珍惜：cherish→value 实现：come true→realize 2. 句式拓展 原 句：I firmly believe my dream will come true. 拓展句：I hold the belief that my dream will come true. 【高分句型】 1. Last week, we held a coming-of-age ceremony in the school hall, which left a deep impression on me. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句) 2. To attain my goal, I will attach greater importance to exercising my body and mind. (运用了不定式作目的状语) 3 (四川省成都市石室中学2024届高三下学期开学考)假定你是李华，现为某国际学校学生会主席。你校将为高三学生举办成人礼仪式，你有幸被选为学生代表发言，请用英语写一篇发言稿。 内容包括：1. 成人礼的意义； 2. 对未来的期许。 注意： 1. 词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：the coming-of-age ceremony成人礼仪式 Ladies and gentlemen, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you for your listening! 【答案】 Ladies and gentlemen, Good morning. I’m Li Hua, chairman of the Students’ Union. It is my great honor to deliver a speech today on this momentous occasion of our coming-of-age ceremony. The coming-of-age ceremony holds great significance as it marks our transition from adolescence to adulthood. It is the beginning of a new chapter that symbolizes our readiness to take on greater responsibilities and face the challenges that come with maturity. This ceremony serves as a reminder of the values and virtues we should uphold as we step into the next phase of our lives. As we embark on this new journey, I hope that we will continue to demonstrate resilience, compassion, and integrity. I am confident that with the knowledge and wisdom we have gained, we will rise to the challenges that lie ahead and emerge as responsible, empathetic, and successful individuals. Thank you for your listening! 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的发言稿。要求考生用英语写一篇发言稿，在高三学生举办的成 人礼仪式作为学生代表发言。 【详解】 1. 词汇积累 重要性：significance→ importance 担当：serve as → act as 继续：continue → go on 获得：gain→ acquire 2. 句式拓展 原 句：I’m Li Hua, chairman of the Students’ Union. 拓展句：I’m Li Hua, who is the chairman of the Students’ Union. 【高分句型】 1. It is the beginning of a new chapter that symbolizes our readiness to take on greater responsibilities and face the challenges that come with maturity.(运用了强调句型：It is…that…和that引导的定语从句) 2. This ceremony serves as a reminder of the values and virtues we should uphold as we step into the next phase of our lives.(运用了省略关系代词的定语从句) 4 (四川省眉山市东坡区2023-2024学年高二下学期6月期末联合考试)假设你是李华，你校将于近期为年满18周岁的学生举行以“十八而志，感恩与责任”为主题的成人典礼，你将作为学生代表在典礼上发言。请你用英语写一篇发言稿。 内容包括：1. 表达感恩； 2. 树立志向； 3. 明确责任。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80个左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Good morning, everyone, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you！ 【答案】 Good morning, everyone, It is my great honor to speak on behalf of my schoolmates at the coming-of-age ceremony. First of all, I’d like to express my gratitude to our parents and teachers. It is their support and guidance that make us such excellent individuals today. To repay them, we should spare no effort to work hard so that we can be admitted to our ideal universities. Only by acquiring as much knowledge as possible can we take on more responsibilities for our society and nation. Let’s cherish the good times of youth and strive for a better future. Thank you! 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇成人典礼上的发言稿。 【详解】 1. 词汇积累 荣幸：honor→privilege 发表演讲：speak → address/deliver a speech 表达：express→extend/convey 首先：first of all→ first and foremost 2. 句式拓展 原 句：First of all, I’d like to express my gratitude to our parents and teachers. It is their support and guidance that make us such excellent individuals today. 拓展句：First and foremost, I would like to extend my profound gratitude to our parents and teachers, for it is their support and guidance that make us such excellent individuals today. 【高分句型】 1. To repay them, we should spare no effort to work hard so that we can be admitted to our ideal universities. (运 用了so that引导的目的状语从句) 2. Only by acquiring as much knowledge as possible can we take on more responsibilities for our society and nation.(运用了only+介词短语构成的部分倒装结构) 5 (湖北省咸宁市2023-2024学年高二下学期期末考试)上周你校高三的学生举行了主题为感恩的成人典礼，你作为旁观者见证了全过程，你的英国朋友Chris很想了解该活动请写一篇短文记录这次典礼。 内容包括：1. 典礼的时间和地点； 2. 典礼的大致过程(父母期望、表达感恩等)； 3. 你的感想。 注意：1. 词数80左右。开头句已经给出，不计入总词数； 2. 不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。 Dear Chris, Our school’s sports file d saw a coming-of-age ceremony last Sunday.  _________________________  ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Dear Chris, Our school’s sports field saw a coming-of-age ceremony last Sunday. The ceremony was intended for the students of Grade 3. They, together with their parents and teachers, gathered -together. Wearing radiant smiles, parents and teachers made their sincere wishes for the students. In return, the students expressed their gratitude to their parents and teachers who devoted their love and care to them. They hugged each other; and some of them were even moved to tears. I think it was a very touching moment. I witnessed the whole ceremony, in that it was an enormous, activity on campus. The whole ceremony was brief but meaningful. Standing by, I just couldn’t help picturing my coming-of-age ceremony, which is expected to happen next year. What will it be like? Will I cry then, too? Who knows! All that I can ensure is that our ceremony will definitely be a remarkable one. Now I am really looking forward to my coming-of-age ceremony. Actually I can’t wait! 【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇开放性作文。要求考生写一篇短文记录主题为感恩的成人典礼。 【详解】 1. 词汇积累 表达：express→convey 感激：gratitude→appreciation 拥抱：hug→embrace 肯定地：definitely→certainly 2. 句式拓展 原 句：Our school’s sports field saw a coming-of-age ceremony last Sunday. 拓展句：Our school’s sports field saw a coming-of-age ceremony last Sunday, which is wonderful and memorable. 【高分句型】 1. In return, the students expressed their gratitude to their parents and teachers who devoted their love and care to them.(运用了who引导定语从句) 2. I think it was a very touching moment.(运用了省略了that的宾语从句) 6 (2023届四川省成都外国语学校高考适应性模拟检测英语试题一)假如你是李华，你校最近要为高三毕业生举行成人典礼，你作为学生代表，被要求在典礼上发言。请根据下列要点，写一篇发言稿。 内容包括：1. 感谢父母的养育之恩，感谢老师的培养之情； 2. 表达努力学习，争取考出好成绩的决心； 3. 表达为社会和国家承担责任的意志。 注意：1. 词数80左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Good morning, ladies and gentlemen, I am greatly honored to speak on behalf of my schoolmates at this coming-of-age ceremony.First of all,let’s express our gratitude to both our parents and teachers for what they have done for us to bring us up and teach us knowledge. Without their support and love,we would not be as grown-up as we are today.To pay back,we should spare no effort to work hard in every subject so that we can be admitted into our dream universities.It goes without doubt that only by acquiring as much advanced knowledge as possible can we shoulder more responsibilities not only for the society but also for the future of our country. That’s all.Thank you for listening. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假如你是李华，你校最近要为高三毕业生举行成人典礼，你作为学生 代表，被要求在典礼上发言。请根据下列要点，写一篇发言稿。感谢父母的养育之恩，感谢老师 的培养之情；表达努力学习，争取考出好成绩的决心；表达为社会和国家承担责任的意志。 【详解】 1. 词汇积累 表达感激：express our gratitude to→be grateful to 成年人：grown-up→adult 肩负着：shoulder→undertake 可能的：possible→probable 2. 句式拓展 原 句：Without their support and love, we would not be as grown-up as we are today. 拓展句：If there were not their support and love, we would not be as grown-up as we are today. 【高分句型】 1. First of all, let’s express our gratitude to both our parents and teachers for what they have done for us to bring us up and teach us knowledge.(运用了what引导的宾语从句) 2. To pay back, we should spare no effort to work hard in every subject so that we can be admitted into our dream universities.(运用了不定式作目的状语及引导的目的状语从句) 7 (2023届四川省凉山州高三下学期二诊)假定你是李华, 你校下周即将举行成人礼仪式，你有幸被选为学生代表发言，请用英语写一篇发言稿。 内容包括：1. 成人礼的意义； 2. 感恩老师； 3. 告别同学并祝福。 注意：字数100左右。 参考词汇：the coming-of-age ceremony 成人礼仪式 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Dear teachers and my fellow students, I’m honored to be chosen as the speaker of the coming-of-age ceremony on behalf of our classmates. The ceremony is a grand occasion when we are announced to be grown-up, who must take on the responsibility of our home and country as an adult. How time flies! My dear teachers, it seems like yesterday when I first stepped into the classroom, greeted by your caring eyes and encouraging smiles. Upon our graduation, what pops up from my deepest heart is the endless gratitude for your company during my facing different challenges in the past three years. I’m convinced that each of us has some bittersweet memories with our deskmates, roommates and classmates. Now as we set sail ahead, I wish you to be admitted into your ideal university. And in your long life journey, I also wish you to be embraced warmly in the world. That’s all. Thanks. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文，要求考生在学校下周即将举行的成人礼仪式上，作为学生代表发 表演讲，阐明成人礼的意义，感恩老师，告别同学，并表达祝福。 【详解】 1. 词汇积累： 选择：choose→select 成年人：grown-up→adult 感谢、感激：gratitude→appreciation 旅行：journey→tour 拥抱：embrace→hug 2. 句式拓展 原 句：I’m honored to be chosen as the speaker of the coming-of-age ceremony on behalf of our classmates. 拓展句：I’m honored that I am chosen as the speaker of the coming-of-age ceremony on behalf of our classmates. 【高分句型】 1. The ceremony is a grand occasion when we are announced to be grown-up, who must take on the responsibility of our home and country as an adult.(运用了以关系副词when引导的限制性定语从句和以关 系代词who引导的非限制性定语从句。) 2. Upon our graduation, what pops up from my deepest heart is the endless gratitude for your company during my facing different challenges in the past three years.(运用了以连接代词what引导的主语从句。) 8 (2024届江西省南昌市十九中高三下学期第三次模拟)假如你是国际交流学生Jim，学校下周将举办成人仪式典礼，校长要求每个同学写一封信给自己的父母。 内容包括：1. 成长与收获； 2. 表达感恩； 3. 继续努力。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Dear dad and mom, How time flies! Today I will become a real adult and I know what you have done for me since I was born. So I’m writing this letter to convey my deepest gratitude and love to you. During these years, I gradually gained a lot of confidence from your companion and encouragement, and I still remember when I failed in maths exams and even tended to give it up, you just patted me on the shoulder and inspired me to keep on. What’s more, you praised me for my earnest effort and progress, which really gave me a sense of achievement. To be good parents is by no means an easy job as I imagined before, so I’m very grateful for your patience, guidance, responsibility and affection as well as all you have done for me. Dad and mom, I will spare no effort to pursue my dream and try my best to live up to your expectation. Love you forever! Yours loving boy, Jim 【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。学校下周将举办成人仪式典礼，要求考生写一封信给自己的父母， 信的内容大致如下：1. 成长与收获；2. 表达感恩；3. 继续努力。 【详解】 1. 词汇积累 获得：gain→obtain 激励某人做某事：inspire sb. to do sth.→encourage sb. to do sth. 感激的：grateful→appreciative 此外：what’s more→in addition 2. 句式拓展 原 句：So I’m writing this letter to convey my deepest gratitude and love to you. 拓展句：So I’m writing this letter so that I can convey my deepest gratitude and love to you. 【高分句型】 1. Today I will become a real adult and I know what you have done for me since I was born.(运用了what引导宾 语从句，since引导时间状语从句) 2. What’s more, you praised me for my earnest effort and progress, which really gave me a sense of achievement. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句) 9 (四川省成都市石室中学2024-2025学年高三上学期十月月考)假如你是学生会主席李华，学校将为高三的同学举办“成人礼”(Coming-of-age Ceremony)，请你以学生会名义发一则英文通知，欢迎全校师生参加。 内容包括：1. 活动目的及时间地点； 2. 主要环节； 3. 注意事项。 注意：1.词数80左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文流畅。 Notice ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ The Students Union 【答案】 Notice With the graduation season approaching, our school will hold a Coming-of age Ceremony with an aim to celebrate Senior 3 students’ stepping into adulthood and remind them of the responsibility they are supposed to shoulder as adults. All members on campus are warmly welcome to attend. Scheduled on April 23, the ceremony will open with the principal’s address, followed by speeches delivered by the representatives of students and parents respectively. Then every Senior 3 student will be presented with a booklet of constitution, after which they’ll be conducted to make a vow to follow the items and try to become a qualified citizen and a better individual. Ultimately, the ceremony will end with some entertaining activities. Given that the ceremony will be held on the playground, keep in mind that some precautions against intense sunlight are necessary. Besides, don’t litter casually. Make sure you leave nothing but your cheers at the venue. Thanks for your attention. Looking forward to your participation. The Students’ Union 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。学校将为高三的同学举办“成人礼”，要求考生以学生会名义发一则 英文通知，欢迎全校师生参加。 【详解】 1. 词汇积累 举办：hold→host 最后：ultimately→finally 活动：activity→event 除此之外：besides→in addition 2. 句式拓展 原 句：Scheduled on April 23, the ceremony will open with the principal’s address, followed by speeches delivered by the representatives of students and parents respectively. 拓展句：Scheduled on April 23, the ceremony will open with the principal’s address, followed by speeches which are delivered by the representatives of students and parents respectively. 【高分句型】 1. Then every Senior 3 student will be presented with a booklet of constitution, after which they’ll be conducted to make a vow to follow the items and try to become a qualified citizen and a better individual.(运用了介词+ 关系代词which引导的非限定性定语从句) 2. With the graduation season approaching, our school will hold a Coming-of age Ceremony with an aim to celebrate Senior 3 students’ stepping into adulthood and remind them of the responsibility they are supposed to shoulder as adults.(运用了that/which引导的限定性定语从句，且that/which在从句中作宾语，被省略) 10 (江西省萍乡实验学校2024-2025学年高三上学期月考试四暨长郡十八校联考模拟)假定你是李华，学校计划下月举办十八岁成人礼(Coming-of-age Ceremony)，因此组织同学们排练集体节目在成人礼上表演。但是有同学反映，高三课业紧张，无法抽出时间排练。现校方委托学生会向同学们征集意见，请你给学生会写封邮件。 内容包括：1. 你认为成人礼活动安排中存在的问题； 2. 提出改进的建议和理由。 注意：1. 词数80左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Students’ union, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Students’ union, Our school is planning to hold the Coming-of-age Ceremony next month. However, there may be some issues with the Coming-of-age Ceremony. Some students may think that due to the intense academic workload in their senior year of high school, they are unable to spare time for rehearsals. And the way of celebration is too formal and lacks genuine emotions and interaction. It is suggested that some genuine emotions and interactions should be provided during the celebration, such as inviting parents to participate and share their children's growth stories and learning experiences. During the celebration, we may add celebratory activities such as gratitude, blessings and sharing. It is a time for them to embrace each other and provides a chance to express themselves. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给学生会写一封邮件，反映成人礼活动安排中存在的问题并 提出改进建议和理由。 【详解】 1. 词汇积累 由于：due to→owing to 拥抱：embrace→hug 问题：issue→problem 感激：gratitude→appreciation 2. 句式拓展 原 句：And the way of celebration is too formal and lacks genuine emotions and interaction. 拓展句：And the way in which the celebration is held is too formal and lacks genuine emotions and interaction. 【高分句型】 1. Some students may think that due to the intense academic workload in their senior year of high school, they are unable to spare time for rehearsals.(运用了that引导的宾语从句) 2. It is suggested that some genuine emotions and interactions should be provided during the celebration, such as inviting parents to participate and share their children's growth stories and learning experiences.(运用了it作 形式主语，that引导主语从句) 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$