UNIT 3 Section Ⅴ Using Language—Reading for Writing-【金版新学案】2024-2025学年高中英语选择性必修第四册同步课堂高效讲义配套课件（人教版2019）

UNIT 3 SEA EXPLORATION 主题语境：人与社会——海洋奥秘探索、人类发展与海洋的关系 Section Ⅴ Using Language —Reading for Writing 内容索引 40分写作限时练 3 提升阅读 读语篇 1 模仿写作　学范文 2 提升阅读 读语篇 返回 1．What is the main idea of Text 1? A．Sea exploration is essential for future development and resource extraction. B．Sea exploration is harmful and poses significant environmental threats. C．Sea exploration is primarily focused on scientific research and environmental preservation. D．Sea exploration has minimal impact on marine ecosystems and biodiversity. 2．According to Text 1，what environmental problems are caused by sea exploration? A．Overpopulation and resource reduction. B．Plastic pollution and overfishing. C．Deforestation and habitat destruction. D．Desertification and water scarcity. √ √ 3．What is the main idea of Text 2? A．Sea exploration is vital for understanding climate change and managing resources. B．Sea exploration is insignificant in comparison to other scientific endeavors. C．Sea exploration is solely driven by economic interests and resource extraction. D．Sea exploration is primarily focused on exploiting marine life for commercial purposes. √ 4．Based on Text 2，what benefits can be gained from understanding more about the sea? A．Increased pollution and species extinction. B．Improved resource management and medical discoveries. C．Accelerated climate change and environmental degradation. D．Reduced biodiversity and habitat loss. √ 返回 模仿写作　学范文 返回 原文呈现 Text 1 When people talk of exploring the sea more，they usually mean exploiting it.Sea exploration has caused many problems and will continue to cause more. More exploration means more pollution.The Deepwater Horizon spilled over 200 million gallons of oil into the sea in 2010.Plastic pollution is also bad，killing many birds and fish，and has even been found in our tap water. Mining for resources is very damaging，especially in the Arctic.①Because of climate change，there is less ice now，which means we can look for more fossil fuels further north．But if we burn these，the ice will melt more and this negative cycle will continue.Climate change is warning us that something is very wrong. Overfishing is another problem.Whales and dolphins are also hunted for their meat or for so-called research.Although this was banned in 1982，some countries are still “murdering” these intelligent creatures without mercy. The sea is home to life，not human beings' possessions.It is huge，but it is more sensitive than we think.If we do not protect it，future generations will not forgive us. Text 2 To truly understand our planet，we must explore the oceans which cover most of it.Opponents may be concerned，but sea exploration is important for our future.For example，scientific research ships can help address important issues such as climate change. ②We need to understand what is happening to our planet so that we can take action. Therefore，more research is necessary. Understanding more about the sea will also help us manage its resources better.Logging new species will improve our understanding of life on the earth.It may help us discover new medicines，as well as new sources of food and energy.Accessing the deep ocean may also help us to predict events such as earthquakes. The population of the world is growing and we need new resources for future development. There are probably vast amounts of resources under the sea and ice，not just oil and gas but also valuable minerals. Of course，there are still environmental risks.However，these should be balanced with economic needs.Hopefully，as technology improves，we may have more options for managing this balance. 名师圈点 学语言 Ⅰ.精彩表达 1．采用比喻夸张等手法，如 “murdering” these intelligent creatures without mercy中使用murdering一词把捕猎鲸鱼和海豚的行为比喻为“谋杀”。 2．利用举例使表达更清楚，比如For example，scientific research ships can help address important issues such as climate change.能使读者清楚海洋开发的重要性。 Ⅱ.句法结构 ①本句为主从复合句。句子主干为there is less ice now，which引导非限制性定语从句，从句中的谓语动词means后跟宾语从句，省略了that。 ②本句为主从复合句。句子主干为We need to understand，其后跟what引导的宾语从句，以及so that引导的目的状语从句。 知结构 1．框架结构 两篇课文均采用“总—分—总”结构。 (1)开篇：提出观点。 (2)主体：从几个不同方面论述支撑观点。 (3)结尾：总结照应首段主题。 2．启发写作 (1)本单元的写作项目属于新课标中议论体类别中的“辩论性议论文”。它是对某个议论对象提出见解或主张并说明理由，使读者信服的文章。作者通过摆事实、讲道理、辨是非来确定其观点的正误，支持或否定某种主张，从而达到让读者信服或接受其观点或看法的目的。 (2)议论文通常采用总分总三段模式，即开篇点题，中间从不同角度阐述，末段总结照应。 情境任务写作 假设你是新华中学的李华，最近，你们班同学就是否应该进行海洋探索展开了热烈的讨论。有人赞成，有人反对，请你就此事用英语写一篇发言稿，表达你的个人看法。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右； 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 仿写程序步骤 1．一仿结构布局合理 首段：引入主题，即海洋探索的讨论。 主体：介绍双方观点。 尾段：简述自己的观点。 2．二仿语言规范美观 根据要求完成下列句子。 (1)我们班一直在讨论人们是否应该去探索海洋。 Our class has been discussing _____________________________________． (2)有些人强烈反对，而另一些人则赞成。我对此印象深刻。 Some are strongly against it while others approve of it.I was _______________ by this. whether people should explore the sea or not strongly impressed (3)正如各种媒体所报道的那样，海洋勘探造成了许多问题，如污染、过度捕捞等。 ___________ in various media，many problems have been caused by sea exploration，such as pollution，overfishing，and so on. (4)海底蕴藏着丰富的矿藏，等待着我们去开采。 Under the sea are abundant minerals，____________________． (5)在探索海洋的同时，我们必须保持海洋探索和海洋保护之间的平衡，这样环境才能避免被破坏。 While we explore the sea，we must ______________________ sea exploration and sea conservation so that the environment can avoid being damaged. As reported waiting for us to mine keep the balance between 3．三仿句式高级表达 (6)把(2)中的句子用what主语从句改写。 _______________________ is that some are strongly against it while others approve of it. (7)将(5)中的while从句改写成省略结构。 ______________________，we must keep the balance between sea exploration and sea conservation so that the environment can avoid being damaged. What impresses me most While exploring the sea 4．四仿教材连句成篇(适当添加过渡语) ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ Lately，our class has been discussing whether people should explore the sea or not.What impresses me most is that some are strongly against it while others approve of it. For one thing，as reported in various media，many problems have been caused by sea exploration，such as pollution，overfishing，and so on.For another，under the sea are abundant minerals，waiting for us to mine. Personally，while exploring the sea，we must keep the balance between sea exploration and sea conservation so that the environment can avoid being damaged. 精彩素材积累 (一)话题优词 1．exploit the resources of the sea 开发海洋资源 2．among all kinds of sea animals在各种海洋动物中 3．regard the dolphin as the most lovely and smartest one认为海豚是最可爱、最聪明的 4．take some measures to protect them采取一些措施去保护它们 5．Some people...while others...有些人……，然而有些人…… 6．I prefer to do ...rather than do... 我宁愿做……而不愿做…… 7．...may be important，but it is ...that make(s) ... ……可能是重要的，但正是……使……。 8．There is a famous saying that ...which shows the importance of ... 有句名言说……，表明了……的重要性。 9．The message conveyed here is very clear ... 这里所传达出的信息十分明确…… 10．Hence it is not difficult to see that ... 因此不难看出…… (二)话题亮句 1．Some of us are in favour of the idea. 我们中有些人赞成这个想法。 2．For one thing，it at least proves that a scientific breakthrough has been made. 一方面，它至少证明已经取得了一个科学上的突破。 3．However，other students are against the idea. 然而，其他学生反对这个想法。 4．The illegal hunt for ocean creatures is becoming worse and worse. 非法捕猎海洋生物正变得越来越严重。 5．The number of the whale has sharply decreased in the past five years. 在过去的五年中鲸的数目急剧减少。 6．The whale has been the main target of the illegal hunt in the whole world. 在全世界范围内鲸成为非法捕猎的主要目标。 7．Once we were not aware of the importance of protecting ocean creatures. 曾经我们没有意识到保护海洋生物的重要性。 8．If we did not stop the illegal hunt in the ocean，the ecological balance of ocean creatures would be disastrously destroyed. 如果我们不停止在海洋中非法捕猎，海洋生物的生态平衡将遭到灾难性的破坏。 返回 40分写作限时练(三) 返回 Ⅰ.应用文写作(共15分) 假如你是李华，最近你们班在英语课上组织了一场主题为“Deep-Sea Fishing”的辩论会。请你根据辩论情况写一篇英语短文。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右； 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ Recently，our class has had a debate on whether we should go deep-sea fishing. 40% of students hold the view that deep-sea fishing is beneficial，because fish is a good source of food，which can provide us with protein and other nutrients.Besides，fishermen can earn more by fishing.However，others believe that it is necessary to stop deep-sea fishing.As is reported，deep-sea fishing has severely polluted the ocean.What's more，overfishing has led to the decrease in the number of species and destroyed the deep-sea ecosystem. In my opinion，there should be seasonal limitation on deep-sea fishing so that we can possess sustainable fish resources. Ⅱ.读后续写(共25分) 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 (2023·龙岩一中高二月考) One day a man named Steve Gowan was fishing in the Thames Estuary in Britain.By the end of the day，besides fish and seaweed，he fished a message bottle.He opened it carefully and inside the bottle was a brief love letter from a British soldier named Hughes to his wife： “Dear Wife， I am writing this note on this boat and dropping it into the sea just to see if it will reach you.If it does，sign this envelope on the right-hand bottom corner where it says receipt.Put the date and hour of receipt and your name where it says signature and look after it well. Ta-ta for now.Your hubby” Also attached was a covering note intended for the finder of the bottle： “Sir or Madam，would you kindly forward the enclosed letter and earn the blessing of a poor British soldier on his way to the front this ninth day of September，1914.Signed Private T．Hughes.” Actually，as Hughes crossed the English Channel from Southampton to Saint-Nazaire on 9 September，1914，at 7：52 p．m.，he dropped a message in a green beer bottle over the side of the ship and he died two days later in the war. 85 years later，the bottle was finally caught by Steve Gowan，the fisherman. Steve Gowan examined the letter carefully.It had the soldier's name and army number，so he supposed that the message should be real.But how could he deliver it to the intended recipient (接受者)? In 1999，the Internet was still in its early years.No way would he be able to find Hughes' possible surviving family that way！So，what to do? Well，he put an advertisement in a local paper! The story captured so many hearts and minds that it gained national coverage.Somewhere along the way，through magic and luck，he learned that Hughes' daughter，Emily，was still alive in New Zealand! 注意：1.续写词数应为 150 左右； 2．请按如下格式作答。 Right away，Gowan and journalists managed to get in touch with Emily. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ It felt like a miracle to this senior lady and she couldn't even believe it was true.Emily said in an excited voice，“I only possess a few photos of my father and spend most of my life trying to find more about him.I am so overwhelmed by this discovery！” The letter meant so much to her and it seemed that it was a gift from her father.What was more surprising was another gift from the local paper. The local paper decided to offer Gowan an air ticket to deliver the letter in person.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 返回 Gowan felt it was like a mission and gladly accepted the gift.Hughes' message to his family was finally delivered 85 years after it had been sent. When Emily opened the letter with her trembling hands，Gowan witnessed tears，laughter and gratitude，all the mixed feelings from Emily.He felt he had fished not a letter in a bottle but huge treasure，a bridge connecting the living with the dead and a message bonding a family. 谢 谢 观 看 ！ 返回 $$