UNIT 8 Section Ⅵ Writing Workshop & Reading Club-【金版新学案】2024-2025学年高中英语选择性必修第三册同步课堂高效讲义配套教参（北师大版2019）

Section Ⅵ　Writing Workshop & Reading Club ◎阅读单词——识记 1．work as seamen　　　　　　 当海员 2．a distinguished scholar 一名杰出的学者 3．pull a handkerchief 掏出手帕 ◎核心单词——练通 1．go aboard 上船 2．jump over the fence 跃过栅栏 ◎拓展单词——用活 1．comfort vt.安慰，抚慰 n．舒适感，满足感→comfortable adj.舒适的；舒服的→comfortably adv.舒服地；舒适地 2．emotional adj.情绪的，情感的；敏感的；情绪激动的→emotion n．感情；情感；情绪→emotionally adv.情感上地 3．poison n．毒药，毒素，毒物vt.毒害，毒杀→poisonous adj.有毒的 4．forgive vt.&vi.原谅，宽恕，饶恕→forgiveness n．原谅 5．noble adj.高尚的，崇高的；贵族的→nobly adv.高贵地；高尚地 ◎重点短语——再现 第一组　汉译英 1．有过错，应当负责　　　 at_fault 2．使人摆脱…… free_sb_from... 第二组　英译汉 3．be synonymous with 等同于…… 4．touch one's heart 打动某人的心，触动某人的心弦 5．for the sake of 为了……起见 6．play around 玩弄；玩闹 ◎典型句式——默背 1．句型公式　完全倒装 教材原句　Then_came_the_sound_of_a_heavy_door_opening(接着传来了沉重的开门声)，and two seamen appeared. 2．句型公式　强调句型 教材原句　It_is_my_insanity_that (正是我的疯症) has made me act so badly. 3．句型公式　Now that引导原因状语从句 教材原句　Now_that_the_poison_is_in_your_blood (既然毒药已经在你的血液里)，there is no cure. Ⅰ.核心词汇练全 comfort vt.安慰，抚慰 n．舒适感，满足感 (教材原句)I did not completely believe the words I said，but I knew they would comfort Ned and Conseil.我不完全相信我说的话，但我知道它们会安慰尼德和康塞尔。 学生用书第72页 (1)be a comfort to sb　　 对某人来说是个安慰 in comfort＝comfortably 舒适地 (2)comfort sb with sth 用某物安慰某人 (3)comfortable adj. 舒适的；舒服 单句语法填空/读后续写之细节描写 ①I recalled that my former English teacher often comforted me with inspiring words. ②Even if he was in trouble，he was still optimistic，which was a great comfort to me. ③My ambition is to live in comfort in the suburbs of the city in the future. ④当我沮丧时，父亲总是拍拍我的肩膀安慰我。 When I was depressed，my father would pat_me_on_the_shoulder_to_comfort_me． forgive vi.& vt.原谅，宽恕，饶恕 (教材原句)Even though I forgive you personally，for the sake of the honour of my family I cannot accept your apology.尽管我个人原谅你，但为了我家族的荣誉，我不能接受你的道歉。 (1)forgive sb sth 　　　 原谅某人某事 forgive sb for (doing) sth 原谅某人(做了)某事 (2)forgiveness n. 原 单句语法填空/应用文写作之建议信 ①Please forgive me for not informing(inform) you of the change. ②He got down on his knees and begged for forgiveness(forgive). ③虽然中国家庭会原谅你迟到，但我建议你还是要准时到。 Although Chinese family will_forgive_you_for_your_being_late，I suggest you should arrive on time. take...for granted 视……为理所当然(而对其不重视) (教材原句)I would never again take my home for granted.我再也不会不把家当回事了。 take it for granted that　 认为……理所当然 take one's time 别着急，慢慢来 take it easy＝take things easy 放轻松；不紧张；从容 take sth seriously 重视某事，对某事严肃对待 take...as... 把……当作… 用take的相关短语填空/应用文写作之环境保护 ①Friends play an important part in our lives，although we may take friendship for_granted． ②I know you're not feeling well，so try to take_it_easy today. ③Take_your_time，please.Try to follow the natural steps and have your own clock. ④Take study seriously，or you'll fall behind in the end. ⑤我们总是想当然地认为地球可以提供给我们无穷无尽的自然资源，因此我们过度开发资源。 We always take_it_for_granted_that_the_earth_can_provide_us_with_limitless_natural resources，so we overdevelop the resources. 学生用书第73页 Ⅱ.典型句式讲透 句型公式：完全倒装 (教材原句)Then came the sound of a heavy door opening，and two seamen appeared. 接着传来了沉重的开门声，两位水手出现了。 (1)表示方位和时间的副词和表示地点的介词短语置于句首，且主语是名词时，句子用完全倒装。若主语是代词，则不用倒装。 (2)作表语的形容词、分词短语提到系动词前面时，句子也构成完全倒装。 (3)there be句型也属于完全倒装，be可以用表示存在的动词如：live，stand，remain，exist，lie 等替代 单句语法填空/读后续写之细节描写 ①The class was over；out rushed(rush) the students like arrows. ②There stands(stand) an old temple at the top of the mountain. ③Present at the meeting were(be) the school headmaster and the English teachers the other day. ④树荫下坐着一群孩子，他们手里拿着书。 Under_the_shade_of_a_tree_sat_a_group_of_children，with books in their hands.(完全倒装) …………………………………………………………………………………◎ A Continuation of 20，000 Leagues Under the Sea We were aboard the machine now，and I shook with cold in the darkness.My eyes could see nothing.We were alone.I couldn't say where I was，nor could I imagine[1].All was black，and I was amazed that even after some minutes，my eyes had not been able to see even the smallest shape.I could hear Ned and Conseil breathing quickly.They were nervous，too. Our prison was suddenly lit，and we closed our eyes painfully at the light.Then came the sound of a heavy door opening[2]，and two seamen appeared.They examined us with great attention，without saying a word.Then they shut the door again and left. “We will die in this prison！” cried Ned. “Nonsense！” I said.“We have survived worse than this！” I did not completely believe the words I said，but I knew they would comfort Ned and Conseil. The door opened again，and the men returned with water and dry biscuits.Hardly a large meal，but it made me realise just how hungry I was.We ate in silence. 学生用书第74页 “Tomorrow，we take you home，” said one of the men in a deep voice.“But first，you must tell us how you found our machine.”I smiled.I would never again take my home for granted. ◎………………………………………………………………………………… [学语言] 第一段开头使用动作、神情描写，生动地描绘出了“我”在黑暗中的表现； 第一、二段中使用部分倒装和完全倒装，彰显句式的高级性； with great attention体现出“我”接受检查的程度。 [知结构] Part 1(Para.1)：我们登上那个机器，很冷，并且什么也看不见； Part 2(Para.2)：我们的牢房被点亮，两个水手进来仔细检查，然后离开； Part 3(Paras.3－4)：Ned很害怕，我进行安慰； Part 4(Para.5)：水手给我们拿来水和饼干； Part 5(Para.6)：最后，我微笑着说“我再也不会不把家当回事了”。 [情景任务写作] 阅读下面材料，概括其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Lately，I was deeply touched with two movies about faithful dogs：A Dog's Purpose and A Dog's Way Home.A dog's life cycled and cycled only to meet his first owner while the other covered 400 miles of toil and hunger all the way back to her home.I had a faithful dog too when I was a little girl，but it was a different story. When my dad first took him home in a cardboard box，he was so quiet that I even doubted whether there was really a dog in it.When I peeped through two small holes on the side，I just saw a patch of grey fur.My dad assured me that it was just a small dog before I dared to open the box.There he was! What a lovely grey dog! He was slim and looked smart.I was on my knees as I cheerfully observed him.However，he tried to avoid eye contact with me，apparently a little scared with everything strange around.I wanted to pet his head but he only turned his head away. When he became familiar with me，I called him Billy and he was really delighted，zagging his tail.Every time I left for school，he saw me off.When I came back，he always waited on my way home and greeted me with his licks and brushed his head against legs.When Billy was in the kitchen with my father，lying on a small heap of firewood beside the furnace(灶)，he could always know which piece of firewood my dad would pick and raised his paw in time.It always surprised me how intelligent and considerate Billy was.I imagined him turning into a small boy carrying my schoolbag for me and talking with my dad.With Billy brightening every day of my childhood，I was more than happy. 注意：1.续写词数应为150个左右； 2．请按如下格式作答。 But one day，Billy was seriously ill.___________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ A few years later，I went to a dog's shelter to try my luck._________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ 学生用书第75页 [四步解题示范] 第一步　分析材料，梳理脉络 (一)宏观角度分析 人称：第一人称和第三人称； 时态：以一般过去时为主； 主题：和一只可爱的小狗相处的故事。 (二)掌握基本要素 When In my childhood Where At home Who I，my father and Billy(a dog) (三)提炼段落大意 Para.1　 Lead to the topic. Para.2 When my dog was taken home，he was very shy. Para.3 When he was familiar with me，Billy brightened every day of my childhood. (四)捕捉细节线索 Clue 1：第一段中I had a faithful dog说明主人公与狗狗的感情之深；it was a different story表明与电影中狗寻找主人不同，续写中将会有另一个故事。 Clue 2：第三段具体描写Billy与主人公的日常，暗示了主人公对狗狗感情的难以割舍。 第二步　分步拆解，构思情节 观察段落开头语，针对每段情节写出2－3个要点。 But one day，Billy was seriously ill. 1．I took him to the pet doctor.(承接首句——Billy病重，主人公采取什么措施) 　　　　↓ 2．I was worried about him，but in the end he just left me.(与第二段首句中try my luck相衔接) A few years later，I went to a dog's shelter to try my luck. 3．I found a grey dog that looked like Billy.(承接第二段首句) 　　　　↓ 4．I was so happy that I decided to take him home.(衔接句3) 　　　　↓ 5．I became more and more fond of him，and I could feel his closeness to me. 第三步　深度思考，丰富内容 1．I took him to the pet doctor.→接下来会发生什么事情？ (1)医生说不严重，并给他开了药。 The doctor said it_was_nothing_serious and prescribed medicine for him. (2)但是他的咳嗽越来越厉害，渐渐地他吃不下东西了。 But his cough got worse and worse，and gradually_he_could_not_eat． 2．I was worried about him，but in the end he just left me.→主人公会有什么样的心情？ (3)我伤心了很久，就是没能找到一只狗来代替他。 I had_been_sad_for_a_long_time，but not been able to find_a_dog_that_could_replace_him． 3．I found a grey dog that looked like Billy.→主人公会做什么？狗的反应会是什么？ (4)当我看着他时，他尽量避免和我有眼神接触，就像Billy一样。 As I looked at him，he tried_to_avoid_eye_contact_with_me，which was just like Billy. 学生用书第76页 4.I was so happy that I decided to take him home.→回家之后又会发生什么？如何才能与原文契合？ (5)我给他洗澡，他跟我越来越亲近。 I gave him a bath and he began to grow_closer_to_me． 5．I became more and more fond of him，and I could feel his closeness to me.→如何升华主题？ (6)我给他起名叫Coco。他是独一无二的，我相信他会给我带来很多快乐。 I named him Coco.He is unique and I believe he_will_bring_me_a_lot_of_happiness． 第四步　誊写成文，润色升级 But one day，Billy was seriously ill.___________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ A few years later，I went to a dog's shelter to try my luck._________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ [参考范文] But one day，Billy was seriously ill.I took him to the pet doctor.The doctor said it was nothing serious and prescribed medicine for him.After returning home，I began to take good care of him.He was so smart that every time I held him，he would look at me gratefully.But his cough got worse and worse，and gradually he could not eat.I was worried about him，but in the end he just left me.I had been sad for a long time，but not been able to find a dog that could replace him. A few years later，I went to a dog's shelter to try my luck.When I went in，I found a grey dog that looked like Billy.As I looked at him，he tried to avoid eye contact with me，which was just like Billy.I was so happy that I decided to take him home.I gave him a bath and he began to grow closer to me.After that，I became more and more fond of him，and I could feel his closeness to me.I named him Coco.He is unique and I believe he will bring me a lot of happiness. [精彩素材积累] 1．关于害怕的描写： 当看到那只凶恶的狼时，我感到很害怕。 ①At the sight of the fierce wolf，I felt very scared. ②At the sight of the fierce wolf，I felt so scared that my throat tightened and my knees felt weak. (嗓子发紧，膝盖发软) ③At the sight of the fierce wolf，I froze with terror，too scared to move an inch.(吓呆了，不敢动弹) ④At the sight of the fierce wolf，I was seized by a strong sense of horror and my palms were sweating.(被强烈的恐惧感所控制，手心出汗) 2．关于兴奋的描写 当主持人宣布她获奖时，她兴奋极了。 ①When the host announced that she won the prize，she felt thrilled. ②When the host announced that she won the prize，her eyes twinkled with excitement.(激动得两眼放光) ③When the host announced that she won the prize，her heart was thumping with excitement.(激动得心怦怦跳) ④When the host announced that she won the prize，a wide excitement took hold of her.(兴奋地不能自已) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$