“同题异构”提升应用文写作训练的效率之专题03-4(安全教育)“同题异练”——2025届新高考英语二轮复习

“同题异构”提升应用文写作训练的效率之专题 03-4(安全教育)“同题异练” 所谓“同题异练”是指：要求考生就同一话题以书信体写作的要求和非书信体的写作要求进行不同视角下的写作训练。具体的说：针对同一个话题或题目，从不同的角度命题，要求考生使用不同的文体风格和表达方式来进行多次写作练习。这有助于考生更全面地理解话题，积累更多的素材和灵感，提升思维的灵活性，激发写作的创造力，快速提高写作能力，以便在未来的高考中写出精彩纷呈的考场作文。 本专题的话题是“安全教育”，在练习时考生需要注意以下几个方面。 一是要弄清写作文体：认真审题，弄清写作文体，是用书信体还是用非书信体。本次练习涉及到的文体大体为：书信体的告知信；非书信体的投稿、报道、通知、倡议书以及演讲稿等。 二是要谋划篇章结构：一般来说，我们常常采用三段式写作(与本专题相关的写作)： 三是要打开写作思路：这是考生普遍存在的软肋(高考英语第一节的写作作为衡量考生英语综合运用 能力的重要题型之一，近年来愈发凸显考生思路开阔的重要性。然而，许多考生除了语言基础不扎实、表达受阻这一最常见的问题外，思路不开阔的问题也越来越常见)。就本专题，笔者建议考生从以下几个方面打开思路：①“安全教育”常见的主题有：防火、防震、防(溺)水、防(台)风以及安全用电等防范知识、技能的教育与培训；②以“安全教育”为主题的活动一般有：防灾减灾活动的组织与演练；③活动后的总结、评价或反思。 另外，建议考生参看本系列资料的专题01“同题异解”细节的构思(将题目中所给的关键信息进行充 实与拓展)。 (整合学科网有关资源)为了增强学生的安全防范意识，今天上午你校组织了紧急逃生疏散演练活动。假定你是李华，请你给校英文广播站写一篇相关的新闻报道。 内容包括：1. 活动目的； 2. 活动内容； 3. 活动感受。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：疏散演练 evacuation drill ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【简析】 本篇属于非书信体的活动报道的写作。要求考生以李华的身份就学校组织的一次紧急逃生疏散演练活动写一篇相关的新闻报道。内容包括：活动目的；活动内容和活动感受。本篇写作的重点是活动内容的构思(需要考生打开写作思路)。以下就此提供不同的写作内容。 1. In the morning, all the classmates sat quietly in the classroom, watching a 30-minute video about fire safety. It was shocking that we saw so many deaths and injuries due to the lack of safety consciousness. Then an impressive drill came. About 9: 40 when the alarm went off, we ran quickly from the classroom to the playground. 2. At half past nine o’clock a.m, we heard the alarm. Instructed by some teachers in charge, we rushed to the appointed areas in order. Afterwards, we followed the messages on the air to head for the safe place. On arriving at the playground, we stood in line. Our headmaster made a summary, attaching great importance to safety. 3. At first, the teachers gave us some instructions in the classroom and told us how to prevent ourselves from being injured once an earthquake happened. After that, they told us that we should run safely down the stairs the moment we heard the bell ring. Under teachers’ guidance, all the students ran to the playground smoothly in a few minutes. 4. Before the drill started, our teachers gave us some basic and useful instructions on what to do during an earthquake. When the alarm rang, students left the teaching building in order. Within a minute, all of the students gathered in the playground, for which we were praised by our headmaster. 5. Before the drill, the teachers gave us some instructions which include the aspects we should take into consideration and the things we should do to prevent ourselves from being injured once an earthquake happened. After that, they showed us the safety procedures in which going downstairs following a set order on hearing the bell is the first step. Under teachers’ guidance, all the students ran to the playground safely and smoothly in a few minutes. The whole process was well organized, which ensured the great success of the event. 【完整答案】 One emergency evacuation drill In order to enhance the security awareness of our students, and teach them what to do when a fire or an emergency happens, our school organized a fire evacuation drill this morning. At half past nine o’clock am, we heard the alarm. Instructed by some teachers in charge, we rushed to the appointed areas in order. Afterwards, we followed the messages on the air to head for the safe place. On arriving at the playground, we stood in line. Our headmaster made a summary, attaching great importance to safety. Not only did the drill increase our knowledge of protecting ourselves in the face of emergencies, a fire in particular, but also provided a precious opportunity to deal with them. 1 (湖南省长沙市平高教育集团2024-2025学年高三上学期八月联合考试)假定你是李华，上周五你校在教学楼举行了一次消防演习(fire dill)。请你为校英文报写一篇短文投稿，介绍这次活动。 内容包括：1. 演习的目的与过程； 2. 演习的意义。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Last Friday witnessed a fire drill in our teaching building, which was to test students’ ability to deal with emergencies. The drill started at 3 pm when we were taking lessons. Hearing the fire alarm, all of us listened to the teacher giving directions and lined up to go downstairs to the playground where we were supposed to meet. With great discipline and cooperation, we performed the drill efficiently.   Not only did the fire drill expose us to some life-saving skills, but also it taught us not to be panicky in the face of an emergency. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对于上周五你校在教学楼举行了一次消防演习(fire dill)。为校 英文报写一篇短文，介绍这次活动。 【详解】 1. 词汇积累 处理：deal with→ solve 惊慌的：panicky→ panic-stricken 测试，检查：test→ examine 执行：perform→ conduct 2. 句式拓展 原 句：With great discipline and cooperation, we performed the drill efficiently.   拓展句：As we had great discipline and cooperation, we performed the drill efficiently. 【高分句型】 1. Last Friday witnessed a fire drill in our teaching building, which was to test students’ ability to deal with emergencies.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) 2. Hearing the fire alarm, all of us listened to the teacher giving directions and lined up to go downstairs to the playground where we were supposed to meet.(运用了非谓语动词中的现在分词作状语以及关系副词 where引导的定语从句) 2 (2024届安徽省蚌埠市高三第三次教学质量检查)假定你是李华，上周你校组织了消防安全宣传活动。请给你的英国笔友Tom写封信，向他介绍此次活动。 内容包括：1. 活动的目的； 2. 活动的内容； 3. 你的感受。 注意：1. 写作词数应为 80个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Tom, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Tom, How is everything going? To raise awareness of fire safety and enhance emergency responsibilities among students, my school organized a fire safety campaign on the school campus last week. Some fire prevention knowledge was shown on the display board. In addition, a fire drill was conducted on campus. My classmates and I also performed first aid to the “injured”. I’ve learned a lot about fire prevention and treatment through the campaign, which is a really meaningful and useful! Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。上周学校组织了消防安全宣传活动，要求考生按照要求给英国笔友Tom 写封信，向他介绍此次活动。 【详解】 1. 词汇积累 提升：raise→ promote 增强：enhance→ strengthen 安排：organize→ arrange 展示：show→ display 2. 句式拓展 原 句：My classmates and I also performed first aid to the “injured”. 拓展句： It was first aid to the “injured” that my classmates and I also performed. 【高分句型】 1. To raise awareness of fire safety and enhance emergency responsibilities among students, my school organized a fire safety campaign on the school campus last week.(运用了不定式To raise作状语) 2. I’ve learned a lot about fire prevention and treatment through the campaign, which is a really meaningful and useful!(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) 3 (河北省沧州市泊头市2024届高三上学期12月月考)假定你是校学生会主席李华，上周校学生会组织开展了主题为“防灾减灾”的知识宣传图片展。请你为校英文报写一篇报道。 内容包括：1. 活动的过程； 2. 活动的反响。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡相应位置作答。 A Photo Exhibition Of Disaster Prevention And Reduction ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 A Photo Exhibition Of Disaster Prevention And Reduction Last Sunday, our school’s student union organized a knowledge promotion photo exhibition with the theme of “Disaster Prevention and Reduction”, aiming to enhance our awareness and ability. We posted the relevant pictures on the walls of the exhibition hall. Then we had students from each class take turns watching. Meanwhile, we invited professionals to give explanations to the students. We know that our efforts can change the people around us. Everyone has learned a lot about disaster prevention and reduction, which is very meaningful. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于新闻报道。要求考生为校英文报写一篇报道，报道上周校学生会组织开展的主 题为“防灾减灾”的知识宣传图片展。 【详解】 1. 词汇积累 主题：theme→subject 提高：enhance→improve 让：have→let 同时：meanwhile→at the same time 2. 句式拓展 原 句：We posted the relevant pictures on the walls of the exhibition hall. 拓展句：We posted the pictures that were relevant on the walls of the exhibition hall. 【高分句型】 1. Last Sunday, our school’s student union organized a knowledge promotion photo exhibition with the theme of “Disaster Prevention and Reduction”, aiming to enhance our awareness and ability. (运用了非谓语动词现在分词作状语) 2. Everyone has learned a lot about disaster prevention and reduction, which is very meaningful. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) 4 (2024届北京市朝阳区高三下学期一模)假如你是红星中学高三学生李华。在第16个全国防灾减灾日到来之际，你们学校开展了一次以“安全进校园”为主题的教育活动。你校国际部交换生 Jim 对此很感兴趣，发来邮件询问。请你用英文给他回复。 内容包括：1. 活动目的； 2. 活动安排。 注意：1. 词数100左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡相应位置作答。 提示词：全国防灾减灾日—National Disaster Prevention and Reduction Day Dear Jim, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Jim, How is everything going? Knowing that you are interested in the “Safety Education into Campus” event, I am glad to share it with you. In response to the 16th National Disaster Prevention and Reduction Day, our school organized activities to raise our awareness of self-protection in the face of emergencies. First, an expert from a professional rescue team delivered a lecture on how to react when disasters strike us, such as fires and earthquakes, equipping us with basics of evacuation. Besides, we made brochures concerning the practical tips on dealing with disasters and handed them out on campus to further spread the safety knowledge among students. I have prepared an English brochure for you. Hope it will help. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给国际部交换生Jim写邮件，说明“安全进校园”为主题的 教育活动的目的和安排。 【详解】 1. 词汇积累 感兴趣的：be interested in→show interest in 高兴的：glad→delighted 此外：besides→furthermore 处理：deal with→cope with 2. 句式拓展 原 句：In response to the 16th National Disaster Prevention and Reduction Day, our school organized activities to raise our awareness of self-protection in the face of emergencies. 拓展句：In response to the 16th National Disaster Prevention and Reduction Day, our school organized activities that aim to raise our awareness of self-protection in the face of emergencies. 【高分句型】 1. Knowing that you are interested in the “Safety Education into Campus” event, I am glad to share it with you.(运用了现在分词作状语和that引导的宾语从句) 2. First, an expert from a professional rescue team delivered a lecture on how to react when disasters strike us, such as fires and earthquakes, equipping us with basics of evacuation.(运用了疑问词+to do作宾语和when引 导的状语从句，现在分词作状语) 5 (河南省TOP二十名校2024-2025学年高三上学期调研考试四)假定你是某国际学校学生会主席李华，你校将于下周五举办一场主题为防火安全教育(Fire Safety Education)的活动。请你用英语写一则通知。 内容包括：1. 活动的时间、地点； 2. 活动的内容； 3. 注意事项等。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Notice Dear fellow students, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ The Students’ Union 【答案】 Notice Dear fellow students, An activity themed on “Fire Safety Education” will be held in our school. The aim of this event is to strengthen the awareness of fire safety among us and help us to master some skills of protecting ourselves in case of fire. It will take place in the school field from 2 pm to 5 pm next Friday. The activity includes a lecture, which will be given by an expert and some fire drills. Please arrive 10 minutes in advance. During the lecture, please keep quiet and listen to it attentively. Be sure to take the drills seriously when they begin. The Student s’ Union 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以学生会主席的身份，撰写一则关于防火安全教育活动的通 知，内容包括活动的时间、地点、具体内容以及注意事项等。 【详解】 1. 词汇积累 目的：aim → goal    增强：strengthen → enhance 帮助：help → assist 提前：in advance → ahead of time 2. 句式拓展 原 句：An activity themed on “Fire Safety Education” will be held in our school. 拓展句：An activity which is themed on “Fire Safety Education” will be held in our school. 【高分句型】 1. The activity includes a lecture, which will be given by an expert and some fire drills. (运用了which引导的非限制定语从句) 2. Be sure to take the drills seriously when they begin.(运用了when引导的时间状语从句) 6 (陕西省西安中学2024届高三上学期8月月考)假设你是育才中学学生会主席李华，你校决定本周五在教学楼举行一次紧急疏散演练(emergency evacuation drill)，请用英语写一则书面通知。 内容包括：1. 演练目的； 2. 具体安排； 3. 注意事项。 注意：1. 词数100左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 NOTICE ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】1 NOTICE An emergency evacuation drill is scheduled for this Friday in our teaching building, whose aim is to raise our awareness of safety and self-protection, developing our survival skills in case of an emergency. In order to achieve the expected results, a class meeting is to be held before the drill to explain the evacuation route and action points. At 9:00, with the sound the siren, students are instructed to evacuate from the building swiftly and safely. All the students are required to gather on the playground. After that, a gathering will be held to conclude what we will have learned. What deserves your attention is to wear a pair of comfortable shoes. That’s all. Thank you. NOTICE In order to get better prepared in face of danger, the Student Union intend to organize an emergency evacuation drill at 3 p.m. this Friday in our teaching building. We will arrange many practical activities for the participants. Not only can you learn about the evacuation routes in case of fire and other emergencies, but also you can get trained in first aid. Positive attitude, clear mind and survival skills will save your life and we promise you will not feel disappointed. Please join us. Don’t miss the chance and be sure to be punctual for our drill. Students’ Union 【导语】本文为一篇应用文。要求学生写一则通知，通知本周五在教学楼将要举行一次紧急疏散演练。 【详解】 1. 词汇积累： 目的：aim→purpose/objective/goal 为了：in order to→so as to/with the aim of 总结：conclude→summarize/make a summary 要求：require→request/demand 2. 句式拓展： 原 句：All the students are required to gather on the playground. After that, a gathering will be held to conclude what we will have learned. 拓展句：All the students are required to gather on the playground, after which a gathering will be held to conclude what we will have learned. 【高分句型】 1. After that, a gathering will be held to conclude what we will have learned.(运用了what引导宾语从句。) 2. An emergency evacuation drill is scheduled for this Friday in our teaching building, whose aim is to raise our awareness of safety and self-protection, developing our survival skills in case of an emergency. (运用了whose引导非限制性定语从句和现在分词作状语。) 7 (山东省新泰市2023届高二下学期第一次阶段考试)假定你是李华，你校在上周举办了防震减灾宣传活动(Earthquake Prevention and Disaster Reduction Campaign)，你的网友John发邮件向你询问此次活动的相关情况，请你给John回一封邮件，介绍此次活动。 内容包括：1. 活动内容； 2. 对此次活动的感受与收获。 注意：1. 词数80左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 请在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear John, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear John, I’m delighted to receive your letter, in which you expressed eagerness for some information about the Earthquake Prevention and Disaster Reduction Campaign held in our school. I’m glad to share it with you. As scheduled, the activity took place last Friday. First, all the teachers and students attended a lecture to get a good knowledge of earthquake. During the lecture, the lecturer impressed on us the damage an earthquake can cause and how to protect ourselves when an earthquake happens through videos and pictures. After that, an earthquake prevention drill was conducted. I’ve learned a lot from this activity. It is of great significance for us to master some self-help measures. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给网友John回复邮件，介绍学校上周举办的防震减灾宣传活 动。 【详解】 1. 词汇积累 高兴的：delighted→pleased 造成：cause→bring about 进行：conduct→carry out 有意义的：be of significance→be significant 2. 句式拓展 原 句：First, all the teachers and students attended a lecture to get a good knowledge of earthquake. 拓展句：First, all the teachers and students attended a lecture in order that they can get a good knowledge of earthquake. 【高分句型】 1. I’m delighted to receive your letter, in which you expressed eagerness for some information about the Earthquake Prevention and Disaster Reduction Campaign held in our school. (运用了“介词+关系代词”引导非限制性定语从句) 2. During the lecture, the lecturer impressed on us the damage an earthquake can cause and how to protect ourselves when an earthquake happens through videos and pictures.(运用了省略that/which引导的限制性定 语从句，when引导时间状语从句) 8 (湖南省长沙市平高集团六校联考2023-2024学年高二下学期期末)假如你是李华。在暑假来临之际，学校向全校学生发出安全倡议，请你代表校英文俱乐部写一封防溺水(Drowning Prevention)倡议书。 内容包括：1. 倡议目的； 2. 倡议内容； 3. 发出呼吁。 注意：1. 写作词数应为100左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】1 Dear students, Summer vocation always comes along with people’s great concern over safety, especially when drowning remains a significant cause of death among young people. In order to call on everyone to prioritize safety, we propose: Whenever you participate in water-related activities, remember to have a friend or family member with you, in case an emergency arises. And do observe water safety rules, paying attention to warning signs and follow lifeguards’ instructions. More importantly, using appropriate safety equipment is highly proposed, especially if you are not a confident swimmer. Remember, prevention is the key. By taking these simple precautions, we can significantly reduce the risk of drowning incidents and enjoy a safer summer holiday. English Club 【答案】2 Dear students, With summer holidays around the corner, water activities will be getting more and more popular. To protect ourselves from getting drowned, we make the following proposals. First, a licensed water pool is always our No. 1 choice. What’s more, never do water sports without an adult’s company. Life jackets are strongly recommended, whether you are an expert or a green hand. Last but not least, try to spread knowledge about drowning prevention, which can help more people. Always give the highest priority to safety while enjoying ourselves. English Club 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假如你是李华。在暑假来临之际，学校向全校学生发出安全倡议，请 你代表校英文俱乐部写一封防溺水(Drowning Prevention)倡议书。 【详解】 1. 词汇积累 为了：In order to→ So as to 参加：participate in → take part in 注意：pay attention to→ take notice of 更重要的是：More importantly→ Above all 2. 句式拓展 原 句：More importantly, using appropriate safety equipment is highly proposed, especially if you are not a confident swimmer. 拓展句：More importantly, it is highly proposed that appropriate safety equipment should be used, especially if you are not a confident swimmer. 【高分句型】 1. Whenever you participate in water-related activities, remember to have a friend or family member with you, in case an emergency arises.(运用了whenever引导的时间状语从句和in case引导的目的状语从句) 2. More importantly, using appropriate safety equipment is highly proposed, especially if you are not a confident swimmer. (运用了动名词作主语，if引导的条件状语从句) 9 (改编自江苏省泰州市民兴实验中学2023-2024学年高一下学期第一次月度检测)假定你是李华，针对近期家乡台风频发，你将为全班同学做一次主题为“如何防范台风”的英语演讲。请按以下提示写一篇演讲稿。 内容包括：1. 台风给人们的生命和财产带来损失； 2. 防范台风的措施。 注意：1. 词数80左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：财产property 低洼他带low-lying areas ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】     Good afternoon, everyone! I’m Li Hua, and it’s my honour to give a speech about how to deal with typhoon. As we know, typhoon is one natural disaster that often results in heavy losses to people’s life and property. It is vital for us to learn how to protect ourselves from its damage. Firstly, preparedness is very important. Therefore, before the coming of typhoon, we should pay close attention to the reports about it and take measures in advance. Secondly, people living in the low-lying areas should leave there to protect themselves from the flood. Lastly, when typhoon comes, we had better stay indoors and close all the doors and windows. I hope we can be less affected by typhoon in the future. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇演讲稿，为全班同学做一次主题为“如何防范台风”的英 语演讲，要点包括：1.台风给人们的生命和财产带来损失。2.台风防范措施。 【详解】 1. 词汇积累 荣幸：honour→privilege 重要的：vital→important 因此：therefore→hence 提前：in advance→ahead of time 2. 句式拓展 原 句：It is vital for us to learn how to protect ourselves from its damage. 拓展句：It is vital that we should learn how to protect ourselves from its damage. 【高分句型】 1. As we know, typhoon is one natural disaster that often results in heavy losses to people’s life and property. (运用了as引导的非限制性定语从句和that引导的限制性定语从句) 2. Lastly, when typhoon comes, we had better stay indoors and close all the doors and windows. (运用了when引导的时间状语从句) 10 (贵州省遵义市2022-2023学年高三上学期期中统一考试)天气逐渐变冷，用电量开始增大。请写一篇短文在你校英文报上投稿，倡议大家安全用电。 内容包括：1. 安全用电的重要性： 2. 安全用电的注意事项。 注意：1. 词数100左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Safe Use of Electricity ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Nowadays there are more and more places in life that use electricity. As a place for students to study and live, the school has always used a large amount of electricity. Safe use of electricity can effectively avoid the occurrence of many dangerous events. Here are some precautions for safe use of electricity. First, do not use your hands or electrical conductors to touch and probe the inside of the electrical outlet. Second, Electrical appliances should be unplugged when you don’t use them. Third, in the process of use, if you find a charger or a lamp smoking, sparking or sending out burnt odor, you should immediately turn off the power switch. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生请写一篇短文给校英文报投稿，倡议大家安全用电。 【详解】 1. 词汇积累 大量的：a large amount of→a lot of 发生：occurrence→happening 立即：immediately→instantly 关闭：turn off→switch off 2. 句式拓展 原 句：As a place for students to study and live, the school has always used a large amount of electricity. 拓展句：The school, where students study and live, has always used a large amount of electricity. 【高分句型】 1. Nowadays there are more and more places in life that use electricity. (运用了that引导的限制性定语从句) 2. Third, in the process of use, if you find a charger or a lamp smoking, sparking or sending out burnt odor, you should immediately turn off the power switch.(运用了if引导的条件状语从句) 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ “同题异构”提升应用文写作训练的效率之专题 03-4(安全教育)“同题异练” 所谓“同题异练”是指：要求考生就同一话题以书信体写作的要求和非书信体的写作要求进行不同视角下的写作训练。具体的说：针对同一个话题或题目，从不同的角度命题，要求考生使用不同的文体风格和表达方式来进行多次写作练习。这有助于考生更全面地理解话题，积累更多的素材和灵感，提升思维的灵活性，激发写作的创造力，快速提高写作能力，以便在未来的高考中写出精彩纷呈的考场作文。 本专题的话题是“安全教育”，在练习时考生需要注意以下几个方面。 一是要弄清写作文体：认真审题，弄清写作文体，是用书信体还是用非书信体。本次练习涉及到的文体大体为：书信体的告知信；非书信体的投稿、报道、通知、倡议书以及演讲稿等。 二是要谋划篇章结构：一般来说，我们常常采用三段式写作(与本专题相关的写作)： 三是要打开写作思路：这是考生普遍存在的软肋(高考英语第一节的写作作为衡量考生英语综合运用 能力的重要题型之一，近年来愈发凸显考生思路开阔的重要性。然而，许多考生除了语言基础不扎实、表达受阻这一最常见的问题外，思路不开阔的问题也越来越常见)。就本专题，笔者建议考生从以下几个方面打开思路：①“安全教育”常见的主题有：防火、防震、防(溺)水、防(台)风以及安全用电等防范知识、技能的教育与培训；②以“安全教育”为主题的活动一般有：防灾减灾活动的组织与演练；③活动后的总结、评价或反思。 另外，建议考生参看本系列资料的专题01“同题异解”细节的构思(将题目中所给的关键信息进行充 实与拓展)。 (整合学科网有关资源)为了增强学生的安全防范意识，今天上午你校组织了紧急逃生疏散演练活动。假定你是李华，请你给校英文广播站写一篇相关的新闻报道。 内容包括：1. 活动目的； 2. 活动内容； 3. 活动感受。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：疏散演练 evacuation drill ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【简析】 本篇属于非书信体的活动报道的写作。要求考生以李华的身份就学校组织的一次紧急逃生疏散演练活动写一篇相关的新闻报道。内容包括：活动目的；活动内容和活动感受。本篇写作的重点是活动内容的构思(需要考生打开写作思路)。以下就此提供不同的写作内容。 1. In the morning, all the classmates sat quietly in the classroom, watching a 30-minute video about fire safety. It was shocking that we saw so many deaths and injuries due to the lack of safety consciousness. Then an impressive drill came. About 9: 40 when the alarm went off, we ran quickly from the classroom to the playground. 2. At half past nine o’clock a.m, we heard the alarm. Instructed by some teachers in charge, we rushed to the appointed areas in order. Afterwards, we followed the messages on the air to head for the safe place. On arriving at the playground, we stood in line. Our headmaster made a summary, attaching great importance to safety. 3. At first, the teachers gave us some instructions in the classroom and told us how to prevent ourselves from being injured once an earthquake happened. After that, they told us that we should run safely down the stairs the moment we heard the bell ring. Under teachers’ guidance, all the students ran to the playground smoothly in a few minutes. 4. Before the drill started, our teachers gave us some basic and useful instructions on what to do during an earthquake. When the alarm rang, students left the teaching building in order. Within a minute, all of the students gathered in the playground, for which we were praised by our headmaster. 5. Before the drill, the teachers gave us some instructions which include the aspects we should take into consideration and the things we should do to prevent ourselves from being injured once an earthquake happened. After that, they showed us the safety procedures in which going downstairs following a set order on hearing the bell is the first step. Under teachers’ guidance, all the students ran to the playground safely and smoothly in a few minutes. The whole process was well organized, which ensured the great success of the event. 【完整答案】 One emergency evacuation drill In order to enhance the security awareness of our students, and teach them what to do when a fire or an emergency happens, our school organized a fire evacuation drill this morning. At half past nine o’clock am, we heard the alarm. Instructed by some teachers in charge, we rushed to the appointed areas in order. Afterwards, we followed the messages on the air to head for the safe place. On arriving at the playground, we stood in line. Our headmaster made a summary, attaching great importance to safety. Not only did the drill increase our knowledge of protecting ourselves in the face of emergencies, a fire in particular, but also provided a precious opportunity to deal with them. 1 (湖南省长沙市平高教育集团2024-2025学年高三上学期八月联合考试)假定你是李华，上周五你校在教学楼举行了一次消防演习(fire dill)。请你为校英文报写一篇短文投稿，介绍这次活动。 内容包括：1. 演习的目的与过程； 2. 演习的意义。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2 (2024届安徽省蚌埠市高三第三次教学质量检查)假定你是李华，上周你校组织了消防安全宣传活动。请给你的英国笔友Tom写封信，向他介绍此次活动。 内容包括：1. 活动的目的； 2. 活动的内容； 3. 你的感受。 注意：1. 写作词数应为 80个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Tom, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 3 (河北省沧州市泊头市2024届高三上学期12月月考)假定你是校学生会主席李华，上周校学生会组织开展了主题为“防灾减灾”的知识宣传图片展。请你为校英文报写一篇报道。 内容包括：1. 活动的过程； 2. 活动的反响。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡相应位置作答。 A Photo Exhibition Of Disaster Prevention And Reduction ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4 (2024届北京市朝阳区高三下学期一模)假如你是红星中学高三学生李华。在第16个全国防灾减灾日到来之际，你们学校开展了一次以“安全进校园”为主题的教育活动。你校国际部交换生 Jim 对此很感兴趣，发来邮件询问。请你用英文给他回复。 内容包括：1. 活动目的； 2. 活动安排。 注意：1. 词数100左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡相应位置作答。 提示词：全国防灾减灾日—National Disaster Prevention and Reduction Day Dear Jim, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 5 (河南省TOP二十名校2024-2025学年高三上学期调研考试四)假定你是某国际学校学生会主席李华，你校将于下周五举办一场主题为防火安全教育(Fire Safety Education)的活动。请你用英语写一则通知。 内容包括：1. 活动的时间、地点； 2. 活动的内容； 3. 注意事项等。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Notice Dear fellow students, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ The Students’ Union 6 (陕西省西安中学2024届高三上学期8月月考)假设你是育才中学学生会主席李华，你校决定本周五在教学楼举行一次紧急疏散演练(emergency evacuation drill)，请用英语写一则书面通知。 内容包括：1. 演练目的； 2. 具体安排； 3. 注意事项。 注意：1. 词数100左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 NOTICE ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7 (山东省新泰市2023届高二下学期第一次阶段考试)假定你是李华，你校在上周举办了防震减灾宣传活动(Earthquake Prevention and Disaster Reduction Campaign)，你的网友John发邮件向你询问此次活动的相关情况，请你给John回一封邮件，介绍此次活动。 内容包括：1. 活动内容； 2. 对此次活动的感受与收获。 注意：1. 词数80左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 请在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear John, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 8 (湖南省长沙市平高集团六校联考2023-2024学年高二下学期期末)假如你是李华。在暑假来临之际，学校向全校学生发出安全倡议，请你代表校英文俱乐部写一封防溺水(Drowning Prevention)倡议书。 内容包括：1. 倡议目的； 2. 倡议内容； 3. 发出呼吁。 注意：1. 写作词数应为100左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9 (改编自江苏省泰州市民兴实验中学2023-2024学年高一下学期第一次月度检测)假定你是李华，针对近期家乡台风频发，你将为全班同学做一次主题为“如何防范台风”的英语演讲。请按以下提示写一篇演讲稿。 内容包括：1. 台风给人们的生命和财产带来损失； 2. 防范台风的措施。 注意：1. 词数80左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：财产property 低洼他带low-lying areas ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10 (贵州省遵义市2022-2023学年高三上学期期中统一考试)天气逐渐变冷，用电量开始增大。请写一篇短文在你校英文报上投稿，倡议大家安全用电。 内容包括：1. 安全用电的重要性： 2. 安全用电的注意事项。 注意：1. 词数100左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Safe Use of Electricity ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$