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外研社初中英语七年级上册(2024新版)
Unit 2 More tan fun
书面表达训练
话题分析
本单元以“More than fun”为话题,介绍了了人们的不同爱好。学完本单元,能够运用所学知识谈论爱好,描述你的爱好和快乐瞬间,阐述爱好的益处。
范文导赏
假如你是李明,你校打算组织一次以“My Hobby and Dream(梦想)”为题的英文演讲比赛,请你根据以下思维导图内容提示用英文写一篇演讲稿。
写作要求:1.可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息; 2.语句连贯,词数 80 左右。
My Hobby and Dream
Good morning, everyone!
My name is Li Ming. Today I'd like to talk about my hobby and dream. When I was three years old, I was interested in music. I like singing very much. My dream is to be a singer in the future.
To make my dream come true, I practice singing every day. I also have music lessons after school. I think I will become a great singer as long as I keep practicing.
I feel relaxed every time I sing. More importantly, singing not only makes me happy, but also makes the people around me happy. I sing very well now. I feel that I am getting closer and closer to my dream.
That's all. Thanks for listening.
任务读写
兴趣在我们的日常生活中起着很重要的作用。作为中学生,兴趣在学习中也有着重要的意义。请你根据表格中的内容提示,写一篇题为“My Hobby”的短文。
写作要求:词数:80-100。
I.谋篇布局
第一步:审题
人称:第一人称;时态:一般现在时和一般过去时
第二步:列提纲
第一段:开篇点题,介绍人人都有爱好。
Everyone has their his or her hobby. Hobbies can give you joy and happiness.
第二段:详细叙述,介绍我的爱好历程。
My hobby is … When I was …, I enjoyed/loved … I can get a lot of knowledge and fun from ….
It also can make me …. I hope ….
第三段:结尾总结,表达喜爱及愿望。
I love reading, and I hope ….
第三步:遣词造句
1.have/has表示“有”
[例句] Different people have different hobbies.不同的人有不同的爱好。
[仿写]
2.be interested in…表示“对……感兴趣”。
[例句]I’m interested in collecting stamps. 我对集邮感兴趣。
[仿写]
3.make sb. do sth./adj.让某人做某事/……
[例句]Reading makes me relaxed/feel relaxed.阅读让我放松/感到放松。
[仿写]
4.“hope to do sth./hope +句子”表示“希望做某事/希望…”
[例句]I hope to see you soon.我希望尽快进到你。
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第四步:文段润色
(1)利用hope结构的良好总结构表达愿望,是文章表述不单调;(2)运用when引导的时间状语从句和一般过去时叙述爱好来源。
II.实战演练
One possible version:
My Hobby
Different people have different hobbies. /Everyone has his or her hobby. Hobbies can give us lots of happiness and fun.
My hobby is reading. When I was 6 years old, my father gave me my first book as a birthday present. After that, I am interested in reading. I especially like adventure storybooks. I read almost every day. I can get a lot of knowledge and fun from reading. It also makes me feel relaxed. I hope to read more books in the future. I also hope to become a writer. I hope to write books that people like. I hope one day my dream can come true.
I love reading. And I wish all of us can grow up happily with their own hobbies.
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