2025届高三英语一轮复习读后续写练习 意外之下，她成为赛道上的闪耀之星 课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习 意外之下，她成为赛道上的闪耀之星 1 王 均艳 (王) - 题目分析 读后续写 题目再现 范文呈现 努力方向 2 2 Part 1 题目呈现 3 3 续写原文 The sun was setting over the school’s football field, casting a golden glow on the last day of the annual track and field meet. The students of Crestwood High were gathered, their eyes fixed on the track where the final event of the day was about to take place — the 4×400m relay race. The race was highly anticipated and the school’s pride was attached to this game. The competition was fierce, and the race was expected to be a nail-biter. The first three legs of the relay were about to begin, and the team’s star runner, Jake, was set to run the anchor leg (最后一棒). However, as the starting gun fired, a gasp went through the crowd. Jake had tripped at the starting line, falling hard and scraping his knee. 4 4 续写原文 Coach Harris rushed to Jake’s side, his face a mask of concern. Jake was in pain, but his eyes were filled with determination. “I can still run,” he insisted, but Coach Harris knew better. The race was too important to risk injury. As the first runner from Crestwood took off, Coach Harris turned to the team. “We need a substitute for Jake,” he announced. The team members exchanged glances, but no one stepped forward. They were all aware of the pressure and the responsibility that came with running the anchor leg. 5 5 续写原文 Then, from the sidelines, a figure emerged. It was Emily, the team’s equipment manager, who had never been part of the race team before. She was known for her dedication to the team, but her athletic abilities were untested. “I’ll do it,” she said, her voice steady despite the uncertainty in her eyes. Coach Harris looked at her, surprised but grateful. “Are you sure?” he asked. Emily nodded, her gaze resolute. “I’ve been training with you guys every day. I know I can do this.” 6 6 段首句 Paragraph 1： As the third runner handed off the baton (接力棒) to Emily, she was in fourth place, with a significant gap between her and the leading runner. Paragraph 2： The crowd was on its feet now, the cheering deafening as Emily inched closer to the leader. 7 7 Part 2 题目分析 8 8 续写原文分析 9 文章讲述了在克雷斯伍德高中年度田径运动会的最后一天，激动人心的 4×400 米接力赛即将开始。队中明星选手杰克原本负责跑最后一棒，然而发令枪响时，他在起跑线摔倒受伤。教练哈里斯急需找人替代杰克，此时，一直默默训练的设备管理员艾米丽挺身而出，主动要求参赛，尽管她从未正式参加过比赛。 9 点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语； 点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句； 点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语； 点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。 情节构建的重点 10 10 续写思路分析 Para 1: As the third runner handed off the baton (接力棒) to Emily, she was in fourth place, with a significant gap between her and the leading runner. 当第三棒选手将接力棒交到艾米丽手中时，她处于第四名，与领先选手之间有着明显的差距。这差距让艾米丽心里“咯噔”一下，紧张感瞬间袭来，她不禁怀疑自己的决定是否正确。但就在这千钧一发之际，她听到了看台上同学们震耳欲聋的加油声。那声音仿佛有一种神奇的力量，瞬间点燃了她内心的斗志。艾米丽深吸一口气，目光紧紧锁定前方，脚下步伐加快，像离弦之箭般冲了出去。她拼尽全力，每一步都充满了力量，汗水顺着脸颊不停地滑落。尽管身体的疲惫感逐渐加剧，可她始终没有放慢速度，一心只想追赶上去。 11 11 续写思路分析 Para 2：The crowd was on its feet now, the cheering deafening as Emily inched closer to the leader. 此刻，全场观众都站起身来，欢呼声震耳欲聋，艾米丽一点一点地逼近领先者。她的双腿仿佛不知疲倦，每一步都蕴含着无尽的能量。她心中只有一个信念：为了团队的荣誉，一定要赢！随着距离终点越来越近，竞争也愈发激烈。艾米丽和领先选手几乎并肩齐驱，难分高下。在最后的冲刺阶段，艾米丽爆发出了全部的潜力，她咬紧牙关，用尽全身力气向前冲。终于，她率先冲过了终点线。全场沸腾，队友们激动地跑过来，将她高高举起。艾米丽躺在队友们的臂弯里，眼中闪烁着激动的泪花，她知道，自己的勇敢尝试和不懈努力，为团队赢得了荣耀。 12 12 Part 3 范文呈现 13 13 范文呈现 As the third runner handed off the baton to Emily, she was in fourth place, with a significant gap between her and the leading runner. This gap made Emily's heart sink, and a wave of nervousness washed over her. She couldn't help but doubt if her decision to step in was right. However, at that very moment, she heard the deafening cheers from the stands. The sound seemed to possess a magical power, instantly igniting the fighting spirit within her. Emily took a deep breath, her eyes fixed firmly on the front, and then she dashed forward with quick steps like an arrow leaving the bow. She pushed herself to the limit, every step full of power, and sweat rolled down her cheeks non - stop. Although the physical exhaustion was gradually increasing, she never slowed down, determined to catch up. 14 14 范文呈现 The crowd was on its feet now, the cheering deafening as Emily inched closer to the leader. Her legs seemed tireless, each step carrying boundless energy. She had only one belief in her heart: to win for the honor of the team! As the finish line drew nearer, the competition became fiercer. Emily and the leading runner were almost neck - and - neck. In the final sprint, Emily unleashed all her potential. She gritted her teeth and pushed forward with all her might. Finally, she crossed the finish line first. The whole stadium erupted into cheers, and her teammates rushed over excitedly, lifting her high. Lying in the arms of her teammates, Emily's eyes sparkled with excited tears. She knew that her brave attempt and unremitting efforts had brought glory to the team. 15 15 升级版范文呈现 As the third runner handed off the baton to Emily, she found herself in fourth place, trailing significantly behind the leading runner. The large gap momentarily sent a jolt of doubt through her, causing her to question her impulsive decision. However, the resounding cheers from the enthusiastic crowd, which seemed to reverberate in every corner of the stadium, immediately rekindled her determination. With a deep breath, Emily fixed her gaze intently on the finish line and bolted forward, her strides long and powerful. Ignoring the burning sensation in her muscles and the sweat blinding her vision, she pressed on with unwavering resolve, driven by an unyielding desire to close the gap. 16 16 升级版范文呈现 The crowd, now fully on their feet, erupted into a deafening roar as Emily gradually closed in on the leader. With every step, her determination became more evident, her legs propelling her forward with an almost supernatural force. In the final stretch, it was a neck - and - neck race. Emily, fueled by the overwhelming support of her team and the crowd, summoned every ounce of her remaining strength. With a final burst of speed, she crossed the finish line first, triggering a wild celebration. Her teammates, overjoyed, rushed to embrace her, lifting her high in the air. It was a moment of pure elation, not just for Emily but for the entire Crestwood High community, as her unexpected victory had brought home the coveted honor. 17 17 Part 4 努力方向 18 18 高级结构 名词性从句 高级结构 三连动 虚拟语气 形容词做状语 无灵主语 19 定语从句 状语从句 （包含倒装句） 强调句 副词做状语 非谓语 （包括独立主格） 19 20 Thank you! $$