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[答案 P21]
学会介绍一处景点
Have you ever been to Hawaii(夏威夷)? It's one of the most beautiful places on the earth. The weather is friendly. The temperatures range from 26℃ to 31℃ all year long. So every day is a beach day for somebody. Hawaii has always been a magic name to people who like traveling. People from all over the world dream of seeing the beautiful islands in the middle of the ocean. It's always one of their dreams to watch the sun going down. The sun drops like a ball of fire into the sea, and it drops so quickly that you can even see it move.
About two thousand years ago, the first people went to Hawaii in a very small boat. They found the
beautiful white sand beaches and the waving palm trees(棕榈树). But it was difficult for people to go to Hawaii at that time. And there were no big hotels like the ones today. Now people can get to Hawaii in different ways. More and more people go to Hawaii. So lots of nice big hotels have been built in recent years. However, the scenery(自然风景)in Hawaii hasn't changed much. The white sand beaches and the waving palm trees are still there. People often have a peaceful time taking a walk along the water in the morning. At night, they get together to hold parties, chatting with each other, singing and dancing. Children like playing games. So if you're thinking about relaxing, Hawaii is surely the first place for you to choose.
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★So if you're thinking about relaxing, Hawaii is surely the first place for you to choose.
因此,如果你正考虑放松一下,夏威夷绝对是首选之地。
think about doing sth.考虑做某事;
the…for sb.to do sth.对某人来说是做某事的……
1.我正在考虑明天和妈妈逛街。
I am thinking about going shopping with my mother/mum tomorrow.
2.对我来说这是去旅游的最好时间。
It's the best time for me to take a trip.
假设你是Tom,你和父母曾经去过某地度假。请以“A Wonderful Trip to ” 为题,写一篇短文,内容包括:
1.度假的时间、地点;
2.介绍旅游经历,如参观的名胜古迹、开展的活动和品尝的美食等;
3.你的感受。
思路点拨
衔接成文
A Wonderful Trip to Hainan
Have you ever been to Hainan? Well, I have been there once. Last weekend I had a wonderful trip to Hainan with my parents.
We went to Hainan by plane. The weather was warm. We visited many places of interest, such as Tianya Haijiao which means “the edge of the sky and the rim of the sea”. We also visited Wanquan River. We went swimming, fishing and diving there. We also enjoyed the delicious food there. The long white beaches there were very beautiful. I lay on the beach to relax myself quietly.
We had a great time. Though we were tired, we all felt very happy.
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