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[答案 P6]
学会就家务劳动提出自己的观点并阐述理由
Dear Sir,
I don't think we should depend on our parents too much because we shall live on our own one day. I sometimes help with chores at home. I think we should share the responsibility(责任)with our parents. I hate some chores while I like others. I hate washing clothes because it's boring. Of all the chores, I like cooking best. I can not only cook the food I like, but also make a big meal for my parents. It's a happy moment for me to watch my parents eat the food I cook and say “It's yummy”. My parents work hard every day and they get home late. If I can spend time doing chores, they can have more time to relax. All in all, it's necessary for children to help do chores at home.
Betty
读一读上面的加黑词汇。看一看下面的重点句型及解析, 造句。
★I can not only cook the food I like, but also make a big meal for my parents.
我不仅可以烹饪我喜欢吃的食物,还可以为父母做一顿丰盛的饭。
句中not only… but(also)…表示 “不但……而且……”,连接两个相同成分的单词或词组(句中连接的是两个动词词组)。而且当它们作主语时,谓语动词的形式遵循 “就近原则”。
如:
Sally is not only clever but also hardworking.(连接两个形容词)萨莉不但聪明而且勤劳。
Not only my parents but I am interested in singing.(连接主语 my parents 和I,谓语遵循 “就近原则” 用am)。我父母和我都对唱歌感兴趣。
1.不仅汤姆的同学,还有汤姆都喜欢这位语文老师。
Not only Tom's classmates but also Tom likes this Chinese teacher.
2.他工作不但努力而且认真。
He works not only hard but also carefully.
同学们,在 “美文赏析学习” 中,Betty表达了自己对做家务的看法。现实生活中,很多青少年在家不做家务。请你也写一篇短文谈谈自己的观点。内容包括:
1.青少年做家务的现状;
2.你对青少年做家务的看法及理由;你平时在家是否也会帮忙做家务?做哪些家务?
3.总结做家务的积极意义。
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衔接成文
Many teenagers don't do housework at home. They think there is no need for them to do housework at home.
In my opinion, it's important for teenagers to do housework at home, because it can help us learn to be independent and learn how to look after ourselves. Besides, our parents are often tired after work and they need our help. We should play a part in keeping the house clean and tidy. So I often help with chores around the house like taking out the trash and doing the dishes after dinner. What's more, I make my bed and fold the clothes.
It's believed that the earlier we start doing chores, the better is for our future.
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