18.Unit 4 Eat Well(书面表达)-2024-2025学年下学期七年级英语知识点梳理与巩固(人教版2024)

2024-2025学年下学期七年级英语知识点梳理与巩固(人教版2024) Unit 4 Eat Well书面表达 必备知识清单 一、写作主题 写一篇关于饮食习惯的评论 二、内容分析 初中英语写作关于饮食习惯的评论，主要围绕‌健康饮食的重要性、不良饮食习惯的危害以及如何培养健康的饮食习惯‌展开，旨在引导读者认识到健康饮食的重要性，并鼓励大家培养健康的饮食习惯。该类写作的特点主要体现在以下几个方面： （1）内容贴近学生生活，具有实际性‌。评论往往围绕学生日常的饮食习惯展开，探讨健康饮食的重要性、不良饮食习惯的危害等，与学生生活紧密相连，易于引起共鸣。 （2）结构清晰，逻辑性强‌。评论通常遵循引言-正文-结论的结构，先引出话题，再详细阐述观点，最后总结归纳。在正文中，作者会运用对比、举例等手法来支持自己的观点，使得文章逻辑严密，条理清晰‌。 （3）语言简洁明了，易于理解‌。由于初中生的英语水平有限，评论的语言往往简洁明了，避免使用过于复杂的词汇和句型。同时，作者也会运用一些生动的词汇和形象的比喻来增强文章的表达效果，使得文章更加生动有趣。 （4）注重观点的表达和论证‌。评论的核心在于表达观点，因此作者会明确表达自己的立场，并通过事实、数据、例子等方式来支持自己的观点，增强文章的说服力‌。 （5）包含个人经历或感受‌。为了使得评论更加具有说服力和感染力，作者有时会结合自己的个人经历或感受来阐述观点，分享自己改变饮食习惯后的身体变化、心情改善等，从而让读者更加深刻地认识到健康饮食的重要性‌。 【写作例析】 Recently, I have noticed a significant change in my classmates' eating habits. More and more students are choosing to bring healthy snacks to school, such as fruits and yogurt, instead of junk food like chips and candy. This shift is not only beneficial for their physical health but also helps to create a better learning environment. I believe this change is due to the increasing awareness of the importance of a balanced diet among teenagers. With the guidance of our teachers and parents, we are learning to make wiser food choices. Moreover, the school's effort in promoting healthy eating by providing nutritious meals in the cafeteria has also played a crucial role. However, there is still room for improvement. Some students still rely heavily on sugary drinks and fast food for their meals. It is crucial for us to continue educating ourselves and others about the long-term benefits of maintaining a healthy diet. In conclusion, I am glad to see the positive changes in my classmates' eating habits. I hope that we can all continue to make healthy choices and encourage others to do so as well. Together, we can create a healthier and more vibrant school community. [要点分析] 1.内容结构 (1)‌引言‌ 文章开头直接点明主题，即同学们饮食习惯的变化，并简要描述了这一变化的内容（从垃圾食品转向健康零食）。 (2)‌正文‌ 分析了变化的原因，包括青少年对健康饮食重要性认识的提高、老师和家长的引导，以及学校食堂提供营养餐的努力。提出了存在的问题，即仍有部分学生依赖含糖饮料和快餐，为文章的进一步讨论留下了空间。 (3)‌结论‌ 总结了对同学们饮食习惯变化的看法，表达了对未来持续健康选择的期望，并强调了共同创建健康学校社区的重要性。 2.‌语言特点‌ 使用了清晰、连贯的句式，使文章易于理解。运用了如“significant change”、“balanced diet”、“nutritious meals”等词汇，丰富了文章内容，体现了作者对健康饮食主题的理解。 3.‌观点明确‌ 作者在文章中明确表达了对健康饮食习惯的支持和倡导，同时指出了存在的问题，并提出了改进的建议。 三、话题拓展 初中英语写作关于饮食习惯的评论主题，在应用文写作方面有着丰富的拓展方向。核心在于‌通过具体的应用文体，如发言稿、倡议书、日记、建议书等，来深入探讨和宣传健康饮食习惯的重要性‌。 (1)‌发言稿：如在主题班会上，学生可以围绕“健康饮食”这一主题，准备一篇发言稿，阐述健康饮食习惯的重要性，分析当前学生中存在的不良饮食习惯，并提出具体的改进建议。这样的发言稿既能够锻炼学生的演讲能力，又能够加深同学们对健康饮食的认识‌1。 (2)‌倡议书：如学生可以以班级或学校的名义，撰写一份关于倡导健康饮食的倡议书，呼吁全校师生共同关注饮食健康，抵制垃圾食品，养成良好的饮食习惯。倡议书可以张贴在学校公告栏或通过网络平台发布，以扩大影响力‌2。 (3)‌日记：学生可以结合自己的日常生活，记录自己饮食习惯的变化，分享健康饮食带来的好处，或者反思不良饮食习惯对身体的危害。这样的日记既能够作为自我反思和成长的记录，也能够作为其他同学学习的榜样‌。 (4)‌建议信（书）：如在书信中，学生可以针对学校食堂的菜品设置、营养搭配等方面，提出具体的改进建议，以期为学校提供更加健康、营养的餐饮服务。这样的建议书不仅能够锻炼学生的写作能力，还能够为学校的饮食健康工作提供有益的参考‌。 [参考范文1] Dear friends, In current society, people have known the importance of keeping healthy and good life habit. Eating is an essential part of our daily lives. The food we consume provides us with the energy and nutrients needed to maintain our health and well-being. Therefore, it is crucial to cultivate healthy eating habits‌. In the past, people ate three meals at home, and they ate more vegetables and less meat and fish. They were very strong and seldom went to see doctors. Now life is better, but our eating habits have changed a lot. Some people choose to eat out frequently, consuming more fast food and less nutritious meals. This has led to an increase in health problems‌. To keep healthy, we should focus on a balanced diet, eating more vegetables and fruits, and less high-fat and high-sugar food. We should also avoid eating too much meat and instead choose fish and other healthy protein sources. By cultivating healthy eating habits, we can improve our overall health and well-being‌. Thank you! [参考范文2] Dear schoolmates, As we all know, healthy eating habits are crucial for our physical and mental development. However, in our busy lives, it's often tempting to choose convenient and tasty food over healthy options. To promote a healthier lifestyle, I am initiating this proposal to encourage everyone to develop healthy eating habits‌. Firstly, let's start with breakfast. It's the most important meal of the day, providing us with the energy we need to face the challenges ahead. Make sure to include a variety of foods such as whole grains, fruits, and protein sources like eggs or milk‌. Secondly, we should choose nutritious and balanced meals for lunch and dinner. Avoid excessive intake of oily, salty, or sweet foods. Instead, opt for vegetables, fruits, lean meats, and whole grains. Remember to drink plenty of water to stay hydrated‌. Lastly, let's say no to junk food and sugary drinks. They provide little nutritional value and can harm our health in the long run. Instead, choose healthy snacks like fruits, nuts, or yogurt to satisfy our hunger between meals‌. By following these simple guidelines, we can develop healthy eating habits that will benefit us for a lifetime. Let's work together to create a healthier and happier school environment! Yours sincerely, Li Hua 核心知识回顾 主题词汇示例 1.描述饮食习惯‌ eating habits/dietary habits饮食习惯 regular meals定时进餐 balanced diet均衡饮食 healthy eating健康饮食 junk food垃圾食品 fast food快餐 three meals a day一日三餐 skip breakfast/meals不吃早餐/正餐 overeating暴饮暴食 2.评价饮食习惯‌ good/healthy/nutritious好的/健康的/有营养的 unhealthy/poor不健康的/差的 beneficial有益的 harmful有害的 balanced均衡的 unbalanced不均衡的 3.具体食物和饮食习惯‌ vegetables蔬菜 fruits水果 meat肉 fish鱼 dairy products奶制品 whole grains全谷物 sugary drinks含糖饮料 snacks零食 diet high in fiber/protein/fat高纤维/高蛋白/高脂肪饮食 4.表达观点和建议‌ think/believe/consider认为 should/ought to应该 it's important/essential to......很重要/必不可少 recommend/suggest推荐/建议 change one's eating habits改变饮食习惯 eat more/less of...多吃/少吃... 综合实战演练 1．最近，学校英语社将进行主题为健康生活的宣传活动。假设你是李华，受邀做主题宣讲。为此，你列出提纲结构图，打算以“How can we live a healthy life?”为题，撰写一篇英语演讲稿。 注意事项： 演讲稿须涵盖上图要点，要求语句通顺，意思连贯； 省略部分须做符合题意的适当发挥； 词数在70词左右； 不得使用真实的个人姓名或学校名称。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．青少年养成良好的生活习惯和饮食习惯，不仅有利于身体的健康成长，更能培养出健康良好的生活方式。请你以“How to Keep Healthy”为题写一篇80词左右的短文。 How to Keep Healthy ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．“民以食为天”，饮食的安全和健康受到越来越多的关注和重视。请你以“Say No to Junk Food”为题，根据以下要点写一篇英语短文。 写作要点： （1）垃圾食品尽管美味，但对健康无益，而且其过多的包装会产生更多的垃圾； （2）远离垃圾食品，还应选择正确的生活方式，如：①三餐要有规律、少吃零食、快餐；②多吃蔬菜、水果等健康食物，以提供身体必需营养；③多参加户外活动…… 写作要求： （1）词数：80左右，开头与结尾已写出，不计入总词数； （2）内容必须包括上述所有要点，可适当进行发挥； （3）参考词汇：过多包装over packaging；有规律地regularly；营养nutrition Say No to Junk Food Nowadays, more and more attention has been paid to food safety and health. As far as I am concerned, we should say no to junk food. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ In a word, a healthy diet with less junk food can help make us stronger and stronger. 4．假设你是学校Health Club的成员，最近你对你校学生进行了一项有关生活方式的调查，调查的相关信息见下表。请根据表格内容为校广播站写一篇60词左右的英文广播稿。开头已给出，不计入总词数。 调查 大部分学生骑车或步行上学，两餐之间不吃零食(snacks)，运动很多，很健康 一些学生由家长开车送到学校，吃肉太多，从不锻炼，变胖 希望 用2～3句话展开合理想象，作适当发挥 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．近段时间，某中学不少学生因感冒不能正常上课，影响了学习。为此，学生会主席李华准备利用English Broadcast时间建议学生养成良好的生活习惯和加强体育锻炼，以提高身体素质。请你根据下表提示，为他准备一份英语，发言稿。 现象 因感冒不能上课，影响了学习 建议 生活习惯 健康饮食…… 保证睡眠…… 加强锻炼 参加体育活动…… 其他 …… 期望 …… 参考词汇： affect vt. 影响 要求： （1）短文须包含要点提示中的所有信息，可适当发挥； （2）词数：80左右（短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）； （3）文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。 Boys and girls, Welcome to our English Broadcast! I’m Li Hua, the chairman of Students’ Union. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all! Thanks for your listening! 6．假如你是王帅，外国笔友Tom 想了解你的日常饮食和家庭规则。请根据以下信息给他写一封信，并谈谈健康饮食的好处。 写作要点： 1. 收到信时的⼼情（激动）； 2. 介绍你的日常饮食和家庭规则； 1) 饮食：喜欢鸡蛋，牛奶，面包等健康⻝物，午餐在学校吃 2) 家规：需要早睡早起，到家之后先写作业 3. 谈谈健康饮⻝的好处(至少两点)。 写作要求： 1）不得使用真实的姓名和学校名； 2）可适当加⼊细节，使内容充实，行文连贯； 3）字迹工整、语⾔精练、表达准确、条件清晰； 4）至少80词。 Dear Tom, How are you doing? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________       Best wishes! Yours, Wang Shuai 7．假如你是李磊，你的美国朋友吉姆认为中国人的饮食习惯很健康，就给你写了一封信向你咨询。请你根据他的来信和下面的中文提示给他回信。 Dear Li Lei, I have a good time in Beijing.And I think Chinese food is delicious and the eating habits of Chinese people are healthy. Would you like to give me some advice on how to keep healthy? Yours, Jim 要求：语言流畅，条理清楚，不少于70词。 提示：1.多吃蔬菜和水果： 2.多做运动： 3.少吃垃圾食品。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．一个学期过去了，假如你们班要评选“魅力男生/女生”，请你推荐一个心目中的人选（可以是同学或自己）。 内容包括：1.姓名（用英文名）、年龄； 2.体育爱好； 3.饮食习惯（包括早餐、午餐、晚餐）； 4.喜欢的学科及原因。 注意：1.要点齐全，可适当补充； 2.书写工整，卷面整洁，行文连贯； 3.60词左右，开头已给出不计入总词； 4.文中不得出现真实校名、班级名及姓名。 Hello， everyone！ I think the most charming(最有魅力的) boy/girl is____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．请以“My eating habits”为题写一篇短文，详细描述你的饮食习惯，80词左右。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．在我们的日常生活中，养成健康的饮食习惯是非常重要的。某英文网站正在开展以“健康饮食”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你的饮食习惯以及你对于健康饮食的看法。 提示问题： ●What do you usually eat? ●How can we have a healthy eating habit (习惯) ? 提示词语：vegetables, meat, drink, different, junk food Healthy eating is very important for teenagers. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 2024-2025学年下学期七年级英语知识点梳理与巩固(人教版2024) Unit 4 Eat Well书面表达 必备知识清单 一、写作主题 写一篇关于饮食习惯的评论 二、内容分析 初中英语写作关于饮食习惯的评论，主要围绕‌健康饮食的重要性、不良饮食习惯的危害以及如何培养健康的饮食习惯‌展开，旨在引导读者认识到健康饮食的重要性，并鼓励大家培养健康的饮食习惯。该类写作的特点主要体现在以下几个方面： （1）内容贴近学生生活，具有实际性‌。评论往往围绕学生日常的饮食习惯展开，探讨健康饮食的重要性、不良饮食习惯的危害等，与学生生活紧密相连，易于引起共鸣。 （2）结构清晰，逻辑性强‌。评论通常遵循引言-正文-结论的结构，先引出话题，再详细阐述观点，最后总结归纳。在正文中，作者会运用对比、举例等手法来支持自己的观点，使得文章逻辑严密，条理清晰‌。 （3）语言简洁明了，易于理解‌。由于初中生的英语水平有限，评论的语言往往简洁明了，避免使用过于复杂的词汇和句型。同时，作者也会运用一些生动的词汇和形象的比喻来增强文章的表达效果，使得文章更加生动有趣。 （4）注重观点的表达和论证‌。评论的核心在于表达观点，因此作者会明确表达自己的立场，并通过事实、数据、例子等方式来支持自己的观点，增强文章的说服力‌。 （5）包含个人经历或感受‌。为了使得评论更加具有说服力和感染力，作者有时会结合自己的个人经历或感受来阐述观点，分享自己改变饮食习惯后的身体变化、心情改善等，从而让读者更加深刻地认识到健康饮食的重要性‌。 【写作例析】 Recently, I have noticed a significant change in my classmates' eating habits. More and more students are choosing to bring healthy snacks to school, such as fruits and yogurt, instead of junk food like chips and candy. This shift is not only beneficial for their physical health but also helps to create a better learning environment. I believe this change is due to the increasing awareness of the importance of a balanced diet among teenagers. With the guidance of our teachers and parents, we are learning to make wiser food choices. Moreover, the school's effort in promoting healthy eating by providing nutritious meals in the cafeteria has also played a crucial role. However, there is still room for improvement. Some students still rely heavily on sugary drinks and fast food for their meals. It is crucial for us to continue educating ourselves and others about the long-term benefits of maintaining a healthy diet. In conclusion, I am glad to see the positive changes in my classmates' eating habits. I hope that we can all continue to make healthy choices and encourage others to do so as well. Together, we can create a healthier and more vibrant school community. [要点分析] 1.内容结构 (1)‌引言‌ 文章开头直接点明主题，即同学们饮食习惯的变化，并简要描述了这一变化的内容（从垃圾食品转向健康零食）。 (2)‌正文‌ 分析了变化的原因，包括青少年对健康饮食重要性认识的提高、老师和家长的引导，以及学校食堂提供营养餐的努力。提出了存在的问题，即仍有部分学生依赖含糖饮料和快餐，为文章的进一步讨论留下了空间。 (3)‌结论‌ 总结了对同学们饮食习惯变化的看法，表达了对未来持续健康选择的期望，并强调了共同创建健康学校社区的重要性。 2.‌语言特点‌ 使用了清晰、连贯的句式，使文章易于理解。运用了如“significant change”、“balanced diet”、“nutritious meals”等词汇，丰富了文章内容，体现了作者对健康饮食主题的理解。 3.‌观点明确‌ 作者在文章中明确表达了对健康饮食习惯的支持和倡导，同时指出了存在的问题，并提出了改进的建议。 三、话题拓展 初中英语写作关于饮食习惯的评论主题，在应用文写作方面有着丰富的拓展方向。核心在于‌通过具体的应用文体，如发言稿、倡议书、日记、建议书等，来深入探讨和宣传健康饮食习惯的重要性‌。 (1)‌发言稿：如在主题班会上，学生可以围绕“健康饮食”这一主题，准备一篇发言稿，阐述健康饮食习惯的重要性，分析当前学生中存在的不良饮食习惯，并提出具体的改进建议。这样的发言稿既能够锻炼学生的演讲能力，又能够加深同学们对健康饮食的认识‌1。 (2)‌倡议书：如学生可以以班级或学校的名义，撰写一份关于倡导健康饮食的倡议书，呼吁全校师生共同关注饮食健康，抵制垃圾食品，养成良好的饮食习惯。倡议书可以张贴在学校公告栏或通过网络平台发布，以扩大影响力‌2。 (3)‌日记：学生可以结合自己的日常生活，记录自己饮食习惯的变化，分享健康饮食带来的好处，或者反思不良饮食习惯对身体的危害。这样的日记既能够作为自我反思和成长的记录，也能够作为其他同学学习的榜样‌。 (4)‌建议信（书）：如在书信中，学生可以针对学校食堂的菜品设置、营养搭配等方面，提出具体的改进建议，以期为学校提供更加健康、营养的餐饮服务。这样的建议书不仅能够锻炼学生的写作能力，还能够为学校的饮食健康工作提供有益的参考‌。 [参考范文1] Dear friends, In current society, people have known the importance of keeping healthy and good life habit. Eating is an essential part of our daily lives. The food we consume provides us with the energy and nutrients needed to maintain our health and well-being. Therefore, it is crucial to cultivate healthy eating habits‌. In the past, people ate three meals at home, and they ate more vegetables and less meat and fish. They were very strong and seldom went to see doctors. Now life is better, but our eating habits have changed a lot. Some people choose to eat out frequently, consuming more fast food and less nutritious meals. This has led to an increase in health problems‌. To keep healthy, we should focus on a balanced diet, eating more vegetables and fruits, and less high-fat and high-sugar food. We should also avoid eating too much meat and instead choose fish and other healthy protein sources. By cultivating healthy eating habits, we can improve our overall health and well-being‌. Thank you! [参考范文2] Dear schoolmates, As we all know, healthy eating habits are crucial for our physical and mental development. However, in our busy lives, it's often tempting to choose convenient and tasty food over healthy options. To promote a healthier lifestyle, I am initiating this proposal to encourage everyone to develop healthy eating habits‌. Firstly, let's start with breakfast. It's the most important meal of the day, providing us with the energy we need to face the challenges ahead. Make sure to include a variety of foods such as whole grains, fruits, and protein sources like eggs or milk‌. Secondly, we should choose nutritious and balanced meals for lunch and dinner. Avoid excessive intake of oily, salty, or sweet foods. Instead, opt for vegetables, fruits, lean meats, and whole grains. Remember to drink plenty of water to stay hydrated‌. Lastly, let's say no to junk food and sugary drinks. They provide little nutritional value and can harm our health in the long run. Instead, choose healthy snacks like fruits, nuts, or yogurt to satisfy our hunger between meals‌. By following these simple guidelines, we can develop healthy eating habits that will benefit us for a lifetime. Let's work together to create a healthier and happier school environment! Yours sincerely, Li Hua 核心知识回顾 主题词汇示例 1.描述饮食习惯‌ eating habits/dietary habits饮食习惯 regular meals定时进餐 balanced diet均衡饮食 healthy eating健康饮食 junk food垃圾食品 fast food快餐 three meals a day一日三餐 skip breakfast/meals不吃早餐/正餐 overeating暴饮暴食 2.评价饮食习惯‌ good/healthy/nutritious好的/健康的/有营养的 unhealthy/poor不健康的/差的 beneficial有益的 harmful有害的 balanced均衡的 unbalanced不均衡的 3.具体食物和饮食习惯‌ vegetables蔬菜 fruits水果 meat肉 fish鱼 dairy products奶制品 whole grains全谷物 sugary drinks含糖饮料 snacks零食 diet high in fiber/protein/fat高纤维/高蛋白/高脂肪饮食 4.表达观点和建议‌ think/believe/consider认为 should/ought to应该 it's important/essential to......很重要/必不可少 recommend/suggest推荐/建议 change one's eating habits改变饮食习惯 eat more/less of...多吃/少吃... 综合实战演练 1．最近，学校英语社将进行主题为健康生活的宣传活动。假设你是李华，受邀做主题宣讲。为此，你列出提纲结构图，打算以“How can we live a healthy life?”为题，撰写一篇英语演讲稿。 注意事项： 演讲稿须涵盖上图要点，要求语句通顺，意思连贯； 省略部分须做符合题意的适当发挥； 词数在70词左右； 不得使用真实的个人姓名或学校名称。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．青少年养成良好的生活习惯和饮食习惯，不仅有利于身体的健康成长，更能培养出健康良好的生活方式。请你以“How to Keep Healthy”为题写一篇80词左右的短文。 How to Keep Healthy ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．“民以食为天”，饮食的安全和健康受到越来越多的关注和重视。请你以“Say No to Junk Food”为题，根据以下要点写一篇英语短文。 写作要点： （1）垃圾食品尽管美味，但对健康无益，而且其过多的包装会产生更多的垃圾； （2）远离垃圾食品，还应选择正确的生活方式，如：①三餐要有规律、少吃零食、快餐；②多吃蔬菜、水果等健康食物，以提供身体必需营养；③多参加户外活动…… 写作要求： （1）词数：80左右，开头与结尾已写出，不计入总词数； （2）内容必须包括上述所有要点，可适当进行发挥； （3）参考词汇：过多包装over packaging；有规律地regularly；营养nutrition Say No to Junk Food Nowadays, more and more attention has been paid to food safety and health. As far as I am concerned, we should say no to junk food. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ In a word, a healthy diet with less junk food can help make us stronger and stronger. 4．假设你是学校Health Club的成员，最近你对你校学生进行了一项有关生活方式的调查，调查的相关信息见下表。请根据表格内容为校广播站写一篇60词左右的英文广播稿。开头已给出，不计入总词数。 调查 大部分学生骑车或步行上学，两餐之间不吃零食(snacks)，运动很多，很健康 一些学生由家长开车送到学校，吃肉太多，从不锻炼，变胖 希望 用2～3句话展开合理想象，作适当发挥 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．近段时间，某中学不少学生因感冒不能正常上课，影响了学习。为此，学生会主席李华准备利用English Broadcast时间建议学生养成良好的生活习惯和加强体育锻炼，以提高身体素质。请你根据下表提示，为他准备一份英语，发言稿。 现象 因感冒不能上课，影响了学习 建议 生活习惯 健康饮食…… 保证睡眠…… 加强锻炼 参加体育活动…… 其他 …… 期望 …… 参考词汇： affect vt. 影响 要求： （1）短文须包含要点提示中的所有信息，可适当发挥； （2）词数：80左右（短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）； （3）文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。 Boys and girls, Welcome to our English Broadcast! I’m Li Hua, the chairman of Students’ Union. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all! Thanks for your listening! 6．假如你是王帅，外国笔友Tom 想了解你的日常饮食和家庭规则。请根据以下信息给他写一封信，并谈谈健康饮食的好处。 写作要点： 1. 收到信时的⼼情（激动）； 2. 介绍你的日常饮食和家庭规则； 1) 饮食：喜欢鸡蛋，牛奶，面包等健康⻝物，午餐在学校吃 2) 家规：需要早睡早起，到家之后先写作业 3. 谈谈健康饮⻝的好处(至少两点)。 写作要求： 1）不得使用真实的姓名和学校名； 2）可适当加⼊细节，使内容充实，行文连贯； 3）字迹工整、语⾔精练、表达准确、条件清晰； 4）至少80词。 Dear Tom, How are you doing? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________       Best wishes! Yours, Wang Shuai 7．假如你是李磊，你的美国朋友吉姆认为中国人的饮食习惯很健康，就给你写了一封信向你咨询。请你根据他的来信和下面的中文提示给他回信。 Dear Li Lei, I have a good time in Beijing.And I think Chinese food is delicious and the eating habits of Chinese people are healthy. Would you like to give me some advice on how to keep healthy? Yours, Jim 要求：语言流畅，条理清楚，不少于70词。 提示：1.多吃蔬菜和水果： 2.多做运动： 3.少吃垃圾食品。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．一个学期过去了，假如你们班要评选“魅力男生/女生”，请你推荐一个心目中的人选（可以是同学或自己）。 内容包括：1.姓名（用英文名）、年龄； 2.体育爱好； 3.饮食习惯（包括早餐、午餐、晚餐）； 4.喜欢的学科及原因。 注意：1.要点齐全，可适当补充； 2.书写工整，卷面整洁，行文连贯； 3.60词左右，开头已给出不计入总词； 4.文中不得出现真实校名、班级名及姓名。 Hello， everyone！ I think the most charming(最有魅力的) boy/girl is____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．请以“My eating habits”为题写一篇短文，详细描述你的饮食习惯，80词左右。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．在我们的日常生活中，养成健康的饮食习惯是非常重要的。某英文网站正在开展以“健康饮食”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你的饮食习惯以及你对于健康饮食的看法。 提示问题： ●What do you usually eat? ●How can we have a healthy eating habit (习惯) ? 提示词语：vegetables, meat, drink, different, junk food Healthy eating is very important for teenagers. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 1．     How can we live a healthy life? Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hua. Today I want to talk about how we can live a healthy life. Firstly, it is necessary to exercise every day because it can make our bodies healthier and stronger. Secondly, good and enough sleep can make us energetic all the time. Finally, we should maintain a balanced diet to keep our bodies healthy. I hope all of us can stay healthy! My speech ends here. Thank you for listening. 【写作分析】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿； ②时态：“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，自我介绍并引入主题：讲述如何拥有健康生活。 第二步，从运动、睡眠、饮食等方面介绍如何使生活更健康。 第三步：表达希望并书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①talk about讨论 ②all the time一直 ③stay healthy保持健康 [高分句型] ①Today I want to talk about how we can live a healthy life. (how引导的宾语从句) ②Firstly, it is necessary to exercise every day because it can make our bodies healthier and stronger. (it句型；because引导的原因状语从句) 2． How to Keep Healthy Everyone wants to be healthy. Firstly, I think a good eating habit is very important. We should eat lots of vegetables and fruit. We shouldn’t eat too much meat. Drinking milk is also good for health. Secondly, we should have enough sleep. Usually we need more than eight hours’ sleep every night. Thirdly, we need to do exercise, such as walking, running and playing ball games. Exercise is good for the mind and the body. In a word, we should do enough exercise and change bad living and eating habits to keep healthy. 【写作分析】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，说明每个人都想要健康，引出下文； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容，从“良好的饮食习惯、充足的睡眠以及适量的运动”进行介绍； 第三步，书写结语，总结全文。 [亮点词汇] ①important重要的 ②be good for有益于 ③such as例如 [高分句型] Firstly, I think a good eating habit is very important.（宾语从句） 3．Say No to Junk Food Nowadays,more and more attention has been paid to food safety and health.As far as I am concerned,we should say no to junk food. There is no doubt that junk food is made delicious and attractive,but is surely does harm to our body.Meanwhile,the over packaging necessarily leads to much more rubbish. To get away from the junk food,we should focus on how to keep a healthy lifestyle.There are many tips to follow.First,eat regularly,three meals a day on time.Try as few snacks of fast food as possible.Second,take more fruits and vegetables which can provide the nutrition we need.What’s more,do more outdoor activities,as long as you are busy with something interesting,you will more probably get away from junk food. In a word,a healthy diet with less junk food can help make us stronger and stronger. 【写作分析】 阅读题干，这是一篇材料类文章，时态以一般现在时为主。 亮点词汇与短语：there is no doubt that…毫无疑问；be harm to对…有害；meanwhile同时，另一方面；lead to导致；on time准时；What’s more更重要的是；get away from远离；In a word一句话。 亮点句型： To get away from the junk food, we should focus on how to keep a healthy lifestyle. 为了远离垃圾食品，我们应该关注如何保持健康的生活方式。get away from远离，focus on关注；how to do疑问词+不定式； Second, take more fruits and vegetables which can provide the nutrition we need. 其次，多吃能提供我们所需营养的水果和蔬菜。Which引导的定语从句。 What’s more, do more outdoor activities, as long as you are busy with something interesting, you will more probably get away from junk food. 更重要的是，做更多的户外活动，只要你忙着做一些有趣的事情，你就会更有可能远离垃圾食品。as long as引导的条件状语从句（主将从句）。 4． Hello, everyone! The Health Club has just made a survey about the lifestyles of our students. Today we are going to share the results. Most students go to school by bike or on foot. They don’t eat snacks between the meals. They play sports every day. They think it’s good for their health. So they are very healthy. But some students go to school in their parents’ cars. They eat too much meat. They never exercise and they are very fat. I think we have to do sports every day. We can’t eat too much meat or too many snacks. We need to be healthy. 【写作分析】 [总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，一篇广播稿； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，包括学生上学情况、饮食和运动情况、自己的希望。 [写作步骤] 第一步，总说此次调查的主题和内容； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。先介绍大部分学生上学情况、饮食和运动情况，接下来是一些学生上学情况、饮食和运动情况； 第三步，最后是叙述自己的希望。 [亮点词汇] ① play sports 做运动 ② be good for 对……有好处 ③ too much 太多 [高分句型] ① They think it’s good for their health. （think 后为宾语从句） ② They never exercise and they are very fat.（and 并列两个陈述句） 5． Boys and girls, Welcome to our English Broadcast! I’m Li Hua, the chairman of Students’ Union. Recently quite a few students in our school couldn’t have lessons as usual because they had a cold. This affected their studies. In order to make you stronger, I’ll give you some useful advice. Firstly, it’s important to have a healthy eating habit. You should eat more vegetables and fruit but less junk food. Secondly, you’d better sleep well. Don’t stay up late. Besides, do exercise every day. You can take a walk or run. Lastly, a good attitude towards life is also good for your health. I’m looking forward to seeing you happier and healthier! That’s all! Thanks for your listening! 【写作分析】 1.题干解读：本文是一篇演讲稿。根据表格提示要点，写一篇关于学生养成良好的生活习惯和加强体育锻炼的建议，以提高身体素质的作文。 2.写作指导：本文时态采用一般现在时；人称以第二人称为主。写作时可分为三段，第一段承接开头，点明主题；第二段介绍具体的建议；第三段表示感谢。写作时可适当使用过渡词使文章通顺，另外确保作文逻辑清晰，无单词拼写和语法错误。 6． Dear Tom, How are you doing? I am very excited to receive your letter. I’d like to tell you something about my daily diet. I usually like healthy food like eggs, milk and bread for breakfast. For lunch, I eat at school. There are some rules in my home. For example, I must go to bed early and get up early every day. Besides, I must do my homework first when I get home. In my opinion, healthy diet is very important. It can help us study better. Besides, it can also help us have a better sleep. Best wishes! Yours, Wang Shuai 【写作分析】 [总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍收到信时的⼼情； 第二步，具体介绍你的日常饮食和家庭规则； 第三步，最后介绍健康饮食的好处。 [亮点词汇] ①for example例如 ②besides此外 ③in my opinion在我看来 [高分句型] I must do my homework first when I get home.（when引导的时间状语从句） 7． Dear Jim, I am glad to hear from you! To keep healthy, here are some ideas for you. First, you should eat more vegetables and fruit. Do you remember the old saying in your country “An apple a day keeps the doctor away.”? There is lots of vitamin C in both vegetables and fruit. Second, doing more exercise is necessary to keep healthy. In your free time, you can go swimming or play ball games. Exercising is always good for you. Third, don’t eat junk food. Most junk food tastes good, but it is not good for you. So you’d better not eat it. I hope these ideas can help you. Yours， Li Lei 【写作分析】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据提示内容，给出保持健康的建议，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯，表述完整。 [写作步骤] 第一步，通过表达“为了保持健康，有一些建议给你”来引出话题； 第二步，介绍保持健康的建议； 第三步，书写结语，表达希望建议能够帮助到对方。 [亮点词汇] ①hear from收到某人的来信 ②be good for对……有好处 ③junk food垃圾食品 [高分句型] ①To keep healthy, here are some ideas for you.（动词不定式作目的状语） ②Second, doing more exercise is necessary to keep healthy.（动名词作主语） ③I hope these ideas can help you.（省略that的宾语从句） 8． Hello, everyone! I think the most charming girl is my classmate who is my best friend. Her name is Lucy. She is thirteen years old. She is good at playing the guitar. She also likes playing basketball. After school, she often plays it with classmates. Her favorite subject is English because she thinks it is interesting. She often helps us learn English. She has a healthy eating habit. She likes eating vegetable and fruit. She likes milk and eggs for breakfast; noodles, vegetables and chicken for lunch. She likes porridges  and some fruit for dinner. She is outgoing and she is always friendly to me. So I like her. 【写作分析】 1. 题干解读：这是一篇话题作文。主要是描写心中的魅力学生，本文要写的材料比较具体，写作时要运用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来，要选用恰当的词汇和短语，可以适当发挥。 2.写作指导：文章主要用一般现在时，人称用第三人称展开介绍。文章可分两段描写。第一段总体指出最有魅力的是自己最好的朋友露西；第二段分别从不同的方面描述露西的情况。写作时要注意文章描写要具体，思路清晰，语言表达准确，用词恰当，意思通俗易懂。 9． A good eating habit is important. For breakfast, I eat eggs, milk, vegetables, fruit and bread. I like eating many kinds of food in the morning. It helps me feel well. I like eating chicken, rice and vegetables at noon. Vegetables are good for health and I love them very much. I have dinner with my parents at home. We always have a simple supper. Because it is healthy. 【写作分析】 题目解读：本文是一篇话题作文，要求以“我的饮食习惯”为题，写一篇短文。作文的要求简单，并没有给出太多的提示信息。因此作者可以发挥的空间较大，此时就要注意，写文章之前，要先拟定大纲，做到有条理的介绍，否则文章容易毫无主题、中心，东一句西一句。 点评：以第一人称书写，是一篇记叙文，时态是一般现在时。开头点题，表明一个好的饮食习惯非常重要。本文以介绍自己一日三餐的形式介绍自己的饮食习惯。条理清晰，简洁，内容充实。 高分亮点： 短语：like doing sth.；many kinds of；in the morning；help sb. do sth.；very much。 句型：并列句Vegetables are good for health and I love them very much.；Because it is healthy.；I have dinner with my parents at home. 10． Healthy eating is very important for teenagers. In my daily life, I often eat some pasta, fruits and vegetables. I think it is of great importance for us to know how to keep healthy. First of all, it’s necessary to keep a balanced diet. We should eat less meat and eat more vegetables and fruits which contains lots of vitamins. Moreover, keeping a good state of mind is also good for our health. We should always have an active attitude towards life. Last but not least, make sure we take proper exercise every day. Running or walking, simple as it is, has a positive effect on our health. In a word, there is a lot we can do to keep healthy. Let’s take action to be healthier. 【写作分析】 1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“健康饮食”为主题，根据提示问题，写一篇英文短文，谈谈你的饮食习惯以及你对于健康饮食的看法。 2.写作指导：本文应以第三人称为主；时态采用一般现在时。按照提示问题的两个方面进行写作。可采用分段的形式，使文章结构清晰。最后保证语言通顺，行文连贯；注意语法正确，无标点和大小写错误。 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$