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Unit10 If you go to the party, you’ll have a great time!
Section B (3a- self-check)
Learning objectives
Learn how to give advice on your friends’ problems by writing.
Know the basic structure of a letter on the topic of giving advice.
1. 有许多担忧 ___________________
2. 与某人交谈 ___________________
3. 害怕做某事 ___________________
4. 最终 ____________
5. 生气 ___________
6. 犯错误______________________
将下列词组或句子翻译成英语。
have a lot of worries
talk to someone
be afraid to do sth.
in the end
be angry
Review
make mistakes
7. 逃避问题 ____________________
8. 努力去解决他们________________________
9. 将……分成两半 _______________
10. 有时候他们在学业上出现问题。 ________________________________
11.问题和焦虑在生活中很常见。_________________________
try to solve them
run away from the problems
cut … in half
Sometimes they have problems with their schoolwork.
Problems and worries are normal in life.
health
schoolwork
friends
looks
money
clothes
problems
…
common
problems
of students
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Speak out the troubles in daily life and try to provide solutions.
I fail the exam.
I feel sleepy in class.
I can’t learn math well.
schoolwork
problems
1. Ask the teacher for advice.
2. Spend more time studying.
Go to bed early at night.
Answer questions actively in class.
Listen to the teacher carefully and ask questions if necessary.
Do more exercises.
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Talk to someone you know. Find out his / her three biggest worries. Try to think of some solutions to the problems and write them down.
3a
Problems Possible solutions
too heavy
do more exercise , eat more vegetables and less junk food
feel sleepy in class
go to bed early and don’t stay up late.
not good at physics
take notes, listen to the teacher carefully ,ask the teacher for help.
Write about your friend’s first problem and the possible solutions. Use the structures below to help you plan your writing.
My friend ______________ has a problem.
He / She ____________________________.
I think he / she should _____________________
_____________________________________.
If he / she __________________________________,
_____________________________________________he / she will _________________________.
Jenny
is too heavy
do more exercise and eat more vegetables
does more exercise ,eats more vegetables and less junk food.
get thinner
who
problem / worry
advice
result
3b
【审清题目】
内容:针对他人的烦恼提出建议;首先,写清楚朋友的名字及现在存在的问题或困难。然后,写出自己的建议。用if从句来进一步说明自己建议将会起到的作用。
文体:说明文
时态:以一般现在时为主
人称:介绍对方的烦恼及给对方建议时用第二人称;介绍自己的观点时用第一人称。
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writing steps
1 审题
2 列提纲
3 用相关的连接词
find out what to write.
ending
beginning
main part
an outline
使用连接词
4 添加好词语
5 初写与美化
词语丰富
句式丰富,调整文章结构
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审题三确定
人称
第一人称
第三人称
时态
一般现在时
一般将来时
内容
Para.1
(beginning)
Para.2
(body)
Para.3 (ending)
引出话题
问题及建议
总结全文
Write a passage about your friend’s problems, and give at least two pieces of advice about each problem.
My friend … has some problems / worries.
First, he/she ___________________. I think he/she should_______________________________________.
If he/she _____________________________________,
he/she will __________________________. Second, he / she ____________________________. In my opinion, it is best (not) to _______________________.
If he / she _____________________, he / she will ________.
All in all, problems and worries are normal in life. I think we should try to solve them. / I hope my advice can help my friend.
3b
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“一摆二提三谈法”写问题建议类作文
一摆:摆问题。
二提:提建议。
三谈:谈想法。
My friend ______ has a problem.
He/She ______________________________________.
I think he/she should __________________________
____________________________________________.
If he/she _____________________________________,
he/she will ___________________________________.
John
is too fat/ heavy.
eat less junk food and more
vegetables, and he should do more exercise.
does more exercise,
be healthier.
Problem
Solution
Result
(If 从句)
1.列出连词
表示时间和顺序
表示转折对比
表示总结的词语
表示递进
表示列举的词语
表示原因或结果
表示强调:
first second next
but ,however ,although
in one's opinion
in short,in a word
what's more
for example,such as,
because、 so
in fact
表示观点
2.列出好词好句
Outline
1 It is +adj+(for/of sb)+ to do sth
2The worst thing is to do nothing.
3 Talking to people helps a lot.
8 have problems with
9 feel better/worse 10 keep doing
11 make a mistake
12 be halfway to doing
4 unless …5 if…
6 as soon as….
7 It’s best to do…
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passage
美化一 杜绝语法和拼写错误
美化二 杜绝词语与句型错误
美化三 让词语与句型丰富
美化四 卷面整洁、字迹工整
3. 美化
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My friend Jenny has some problems. First, she is heavy, I think she should do more exercise and eat more vegetables and less junk. If she does so, she will get thinner. Second, she feels sleepy in class. I think she should go to bed early, it’s best not to stay up late. If she does that, I’m sure she can’t feel sleepy in class. Third, she is not good at physics. l think she should take notes, listen to the teacher carefully in class and ask the teacher for help. If she does that, she will improve her physics. All in all, problems and worries are normal in life. I think we should try to solve them, I hope my advice can help my friend.
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假如你是Peter,你的好友李华在英语学习上遇到了一些困难。他想让你提一些关于提高英语的建议,请根据以下提示写一篇短文,向李华介绍提高英语的方法,帮他提高英语水平。
1.多看英语报纸和杂志;2.用英语跟老师和同学交流; 3. 听英文歌,看英文电影;4. …
Dear Li Hua,
I’m sorry to hear that you have some problems in your life. you asked me how to improve your English. Here is my advice.
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Beginning
Body
Ending
As we know that problems in our
life are quite common. ...
Outline
You’d better ask your teacher for help
Dear _______,
I’m sorry to hear that you have some problems in your life.
You should read more .....
If you … your English will …
…is a great way to
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Let’s learn some useful phrases and sentences.
You should do sth.
You’d better do sth.
It’s best to do sth.
If you…, you will…
I’m glad you trust me so much that you share your problems with me.
I will try my best to help you.
I understand you and I want to give you some advice.
提建议
愿意提供帮助
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While-writing
Dear Li Hua,
I’m sorry to hear that you have some problems in your life. you asked me how to improve your English. Here is my advice.
First of all, you should read more English newspapers and magazines in your free time. What’s more, you’d better ask your teachers for help. In addition, If you listen to English songs and watch English movies, your English will be better. At last, keeping a diary in English is a great way to help you learn English well.
I believe that if you keep trying and never give up, your English will be better and better. I hope that my advice can help you a lot.
Yours,
Mike
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Frame
结构
Content
内容
Language
Hand writing
Well-organized structure
About the topic / clear ideas/ well developed
Correct expressions/ fewer mistakes
Beautiful hand writing
Total:
Writing Evaluation
新课标第一网 (新) -
Your school is taking part in the project “We can help!” Add more items to the poster. Then talk about what you will do if you take part in the project.
We Can Help!
· old people’s home visit
· school clean-up
· children’s hospital visit
· _________________
· _________________
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探访敬老院
学校大扫除
访问儿童医院
名词短语
动词短语
visit an old people’s home
clean up our school
visit a children’s hospital
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What will you do if you visit an old people’s home?
If I do that, I’ll bring the old people some flowers.
If I do that, I’ll sing and dance for them to make them happy.
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Fill in the blanks with the word in the box.
Self-check
1. If my family travels to a new country this summer, I’ll send you a letter about my _______________.
2. Will you watch the ________ with me if you are free this weekend?
3. If the ____________ stay out too late, their parents will worry about them.
4. I’ll go to the ___________ if it ends by 5:00 p.m.
meeting
teenagers
video
experience
experience
video
teenagers
meeting
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Complete the conversation with the words in the box.
Self-check
A: Hi, Sally. ____ you _______ to the party tomorrow?
B: I _____ to, but I can’t.
A: Oh! But _____ you don’t go to the party, you
_____ miss all the fun!
B: I know, but I got into a _____ with my parents.
A: Hmm… then you should just say _____ to your
parents.
B: I guess you’re right. I _____ talk to them
tonight.
if
are
will
fight
want
sorry going
Are
going
want
if
will
fight
sorry
will
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根据材料中的信息,写一段话。
假如你是英语校报编辑李华。校报收到初一新生 Ben 的来信,他提出了面临的两个问题。请你根据以下提示写一封回信,说明 Ben 的问题,提出你的建议并陈述理由。
注意:
1.回信应包括所有要点;
2.词数80左右(信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。
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根据材料中的信息,写一段话
Ben’s problems Your advice and reasons
朋友少,感觉孤单 1.参加学校社团(club),结识更多朋友
2.……(请你补充)
英语单词难记 1.多阅读英语故事、新闻,在运用中学单词
2.……(请你补充)
Dear Ben,
I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble getting used to the life in middle school. In your letter you said that ______________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________
Good luck with everything!
Yours,
Li Hua
Use your imagination! What will you do if …
Self-check
Use your imagination! What will you do if …
1. it rains all weekend?
________________________________________________
2. there’s an English test tomorrow?
________________________________________________
3. your cousin decides to come and visit from another town?
________________________________________________
I will stay at home.
I will work hard / go to bed early tonight.
I will buy a gift for him.
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1. In summer, food will go bad quickly ____ we put it into a fridge.
A. if B. unless C.as soon as D. while
2. —When is the school art festival?
—It will be held on time if it ____ next Monday.
A. don’t rain B. won’t rain C. doesn’t rain D. didn’t rain
3. Well, to make the party fun, let’s try something ____. What about dancing to the music?
A. else B. every C. other D. either
4. Just keep quiet — shouting won’t _____ anything!
A. prepare B. solve C. cover D. discuss
5. —I don’t care what people think of me. —Well, you ____.
A. can B. could C. should D. may
A
B
C
B
C
I. 单项选择
ⅠI.用所给单词的适当形式填空
1.My 18-year-old elder brother can take good care of ________(he).
2.Would you mind giving me some_______(advice) on how to learn English well?
3.Please check your paper _________(care) after you finish it. We hope you can get good grades.
4.The doctor advised me __________(not eat) hamburgers.
5.You'll fail in the chemistry test again unless you ______(work) harder.
himself
advice
carefully
not to eat
work
ⅠⅠI.根据汉语提示完成下列句子。
如果你向他请求, 他会帮助你。
1. If you _______ him, he _______________ you.
2. 我说那天是星期二, 实际上是星期一。
I said it _____Tuesday, but __________ it was Monday.
3. 为了赶火车, 她匆匆做完了她的工作。
______________ catch the train, she hurried through her work.
4. 我们玩得很快乐。
We have __________________.
a great time
In order to
ask
will help
was
in fact
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Summary
1.Phrases:think of some solutions to the problems,take part in,old people's home,get into a fight with sb.,say sorry to sb.,school clean-up,children's hospital
2.Target language:
A:What will you do if you visit an old people's home?
B:If I do that, I'll bring the old people some flowers.
Summary
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