“同题异构”提升应用文写作训练的效率之专题03-1(美丽校园)“同题异练”——2025届新高考英语二轮复习

“同题异构”提升应用文写作训练的效率之专题 03-1(美丽校园)“同题异练” 所谓“同题异练”是指：要求考生就同一话题以书信体写作的要求和非书信体的写作要求进行不同视角下的写作训练。具体的说：针对同一个话题或题目，从不同的角度命题，要求考生使用不同的文体风格和表达方式来进行多次写作练习。这有助于考生更全面地理解话题，积累更多的素材和灵感，提升思维的灵活性，激发写作的创造力，快速提高写作能力，以便在未来的高考中写出精彩纷呈的考场作文。 本专题的话题是“(创建)美丽校园(也包括绿色校园)”，在练习时考生需要注意以下几个方面。 一是要弄清写作文体：认真审题，弄清写作文体，是用书信体还是用非书信体。本次练习涉及到的文体大体为：书信体的建议信和邀请信；非书信体的倡议书、活动报道、投稿、以及通知等等。 二是要谋划篇章结构：一般来说，我们常常采用三段式写作(与本专题相关的写作)： 三是要打开写作思路：这是考生普遍存在的软肋(高考英语第一节的写作作为衡量考生英语综合运用能力的重要题型之一，近年来愈发凸显考生思路开阔的重要性。然而，许多考生除了语言基础不扎实、表达受阻这一最常见的问题外，思路不开阔的问题也越来越常见)。就本专题，笔者建议考生从以下几个方面打开思路：①自然环境的打造(有待改进的地方：不合理的校园布局<包括植树绿化>等)；②人文环境的营造(有待改进的地方：不文明的想象<包括人的言行>、<室内外>校园文化的氛围不强等)；③校园环境建设的建议(对自己，对他人<包括对家长和学校>的建议等)；④校园环境亮点的挖掘(以便对外展示、对外宣传等)；⑤自己参与的(创建)美丽校园(也包括绿色校园)活动的回顾(包括由参与活动所引发的感受)等。 另外，建议考生参看本系列资料的专题01“同题异解”细节的构思(将题目中所给的关键信息进行充 实与拓展)。 (四川省部分名校2024-2025学年高三上学期期中考试<略有改动>)假定你是李华，你校为了建设美丽校园，最近开展了“环保周”活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道。 内容包括：1. 活动的目的； 2. 活动的主要内容； 3. 你对该活动的感受。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 An Environmental Week in Our School ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【简析】 本篇属于非书信体的(活动)报道的写作。要求考生以李华的身份，为校英文报写一篇关于学校最近开展的“环保周”活动的报道，内容需涵盖活动的目的、主要内容以及个人感受。本篇写作的重点是对整个活动的介绍，还要加以适当的议论，即语篇的第二段的构思与写作(需要考生打开写作思路)。以下提供第二段不同的写作内容。 1. Throughout the week, various activities were held, including planting trees and flowers, recycling old books, cleaning the campus. Each activity was designed to engage us in hands-on environmental conservation efforts, fostering a deeper understanding of our role in protecting the environment. 2. The event was filled with diverse and meaningful activities. There were environmental protection knowledge lectures where professionals shared the latest information and solutions. Also, a campus-wide waste classification and recycling activity was carried out, which enabled students to put what they learned into practice. Additionally, an environmental protection painting competition was held, and the wonderful artworks displayed students' creativity and their concerns for the environment. 3. During this week, a series of engaging activities took place. Firstly, a tree-planting activity was organized, and students actively participated, adding many new saplings to our campus. Secondly, an environmental photo exhibition was held, presenting shocking pictures of environmental damage and inspiring stories of environmental protection. Moreover, a debate on environmental policies was arranged, which sharpened students' thinking and understanding of environmental issues. 4. The main activities included an environmental protection speech contest. The contestants delivered passionate speeches, expressing their views and solutions on various environmental problems. A campus environmental inspection was also conducted, where students identified areas that needed improvement and proposed practical suggestions. Furthermore, an environmental protection film screening was held, and the documentaries showed the real and serious environmental challenges we are facing. 【完整答案】 In order to build a beautiful campus, recently our school hosted an Environmental Week, which was aimed at raising our awareness of environmental protection and promoting sustainable practices. The event sought to encourage everyone to develop eco-friendly habits. Throughout the week, various activities were held, including planting trees and flowers, recycling old books, cleaning the campus. Each activity was designed to engage us in hands-on environmental conservation efforts, fostering a deeper understanding of our role in protecting the environment. Participating in these activities was enlightening and inspiring. I learned the significance of small actions in protecting our environment. The Environmental Week reminded me of our responsibility to safeguard the planet for future generations. 1 (2024届山东济南市二模)假定你是某国际学校学生李华，你校将举行“创建美丽校园”活动，请你就此向留学生发出倡议。 要点包括：1. 创建美丽校园的重要性； 2. 校园内的不文明现象； 3. 你的态度。 注意：1. 文中不得出现考生个人真实信息； 2. 词数80~120； 3. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear fellow students, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2 (湖北省部分市州2023届高三上学期元月期末联合调研)上周你校组织了以创建美丽校园为主题的绘画比赛。你校英文报正在征集活动报道。请你据此写一篇短文投稿。 内容包括：1. 活动介绍； 2. 个人感想。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Building A Beautiful Campus ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3 (上海市实验学校2024-2025学年高三上学期十月月考)Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是实验中学高三学生王梓，你们学校正在开展“美丽校园计划”征集活动。请你选择校园一处可以优化的地方，给校长写一封信。 信中必须包含以下内容：①推荐一个你认为既有创意又易于操作的优化方案； ②说明你推荐该方案的理由。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4 (2024届江西省重点中学盟校高三下学期二模)近来，你校英语报摄影栏“美丽校园掠影”正在向全校师生征稿。请你挑选一张你所拍摄的照片并用电子邮件发送给栏目负责人Mike。 内容包括：1. 照片简要描述； 2. 选择的理由。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Mike, I’m sending to you an extraordinary photo for Glimpses of Our Pretty School column. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best regards! Yours sincerely, Li Hua 5 (山东省泰安市一中2024-2025学年高二12月学情检测)假定你是校学生会主席李华，你校即将举办“美丽校园”短视频大赛。请你用英文写一份邀请函，请国际班的学生参加比赛。 内容包括：1. 比赛目的； 2. 视频要求。 注意：写作词数应为80个左右。 Dear students, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 6 (2022届山西省晋中市高三3月普通高等学校招生模拟考试一模)假定你是校学生会主席李华，学校将举办以“美丽校园”为主题的短视频大赛。请你用英文写一篇通知，告知国际班的学生。 内容包括：1. 比赛目的和时间； 2. 视频时间和要求； 3. 欢迎参加。 注意：1. 词数100左右(格式已给出)； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Notice ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7 (河南省驻马店市2023-2024学年高二上学期1月期末)假定你是李华，上周你校举办了“绿色校园”主题活动，请你为校英文报写一篇报道。 内容包括：1. 活动内容； 2. 活动反响。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8 (2023届山东省潍坊市安丘市高三3月过程检测)假定你是李华，为迎接4月22日世界地球日，请代表学生会为校英文报写一封倡议书，呼吁同学们从自身做起，共同创建“绿色”校园。 内容包括：1. 建设绿色校园的必要性； 2. 如何建设绿色校园。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80词左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear fellow students, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ The Student Union 9 (北京市八一学校2024-2025学年高二上学期期中)假设你是红星中学高二学生李华。你们学校下个月将举办以“绿色校园”为主题的系列实践活动。请你用英文给国际部交换生Jim写一封邮件，邀请他一起参加。 内容包括：1. 系列活动的安排和内容； 2. 你打算参加的活动。 注意：1. 词数100左右； 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 10 (安徽省安庆市2023-2024学年高二上学期10月月考)某校英文报社开设了一个专栏Green Living。本期话题是如何建设绿色校园，请你以“How to create a green campus”为题，用英语写一篇短文，谈一些自己的看法。 内容包括：1. 简述校园环境的现状； 2. 建设绿色校园的具体建议(不少于两点)。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ “同题异构”提升应用文写作训练的效率之专题 03-1(美丽校园)“同题异练” 所谓“同题异练”是指：要求考生就同一话题以书信体写作的要求和非书信体的写作要求进行不同视角下的写作训练。具体的说：针对同一个话题或题目，从不同的角度命题，要求考生使用不同的文体风格和表达方式来进行多次写作练习。这有助于考生更全面地理解话题，积累更多的素材和灵感，提升思维的灵活性，激发写作的创造力，快速提高写作能力，以便在未来的高考中写出精彩纷呈的考场作文。 本专题的话题是“(创建)美丽校园(也包括绿色校园)”，在练习时考生需要注意以下几个方面。 一是要弄清写作文体：认真审题，弄清写作文体，是用书信体还是用非书信体。本次练习涉及到的文体大体为：书信体的建议信和邀请信；非书信体的倡议书、活动报道、投稿、以及通知等等。 二是要谋划篇章结构：一般来说，我们常常采用三段式写作(与本专题相关的写作)： 三是要打开写作思路：这是考生普遍存在的软肋(高考英语第一节的写作作为衡量考生英语综合运用能力的重要题型之一，近年来愈发凸显考生思路开阔的重要性。然而，许多考生除了语言基础不扎实、表达受阻这一最常见的问题外，思路不开阔的问题也越来越常见)。就本专题，笔者建议考生从以下几个方面打开思路：①自然环境的打造(有待改进的地方：不合理的校园布局<包括植树绿化>等)；②人文环境的营造(有待改进的地方：不文明的想象<包括人的言行>、<室内外>校园文化的氛围不强等)；③校园环境建设的建议(对自己，对他人<包括对家长和学校>的建议等)；④校园环境亮点的挖掘(以便对外展示、对外宣传等)；⑤自己参与的(创建)美丽校园(也包括绿色校园)活动的回顾(包括由参与活动所引发的感受)等。 另外，建议考生参看本系列资料的专题01“同题异解”细节的构思(将题目中所给的关键信息进行充 实与拓展)。 (四川省部分名校2024-2025学年高三上学期期中考试<略有改动>)假定你是李华，你校为了建设美丽校园，最近开展了“环保周”活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道。 内容包括：1. 活动的目的； 2. 活动的主要内容； 3. 你对该活动的感受。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 An Environmental Week in Our School ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【简析】 本篇属于非书信体的(活动)报道的写作。要求考生以李华的身份，为校英文报写一篇关于学校最近开展的“环保周”活动的报道，内容需涵盖活动的目的、主要内容以及个人感受。本篇写作的重点是对整个活动的介绍，还要加以适当的议论，即语篇的第二段的构思与写作(需要考生打开写作思路)。以下提供第二段不同的写作内容。 1. Throughout the week, various activities were held, including planting trees and flowers, recycling old books, cleaning the campus. Each activity was designed to engage us in hands-on environmental conservation efforts, fostering a deeper understanding of our role in protecting the environment. 2. The event was filled with diverse and meaningful activities. There were environmental protection knowledge lectures where professionals shared the latest information and solutions. Also, a campus-wide waste classification and recycling activity was carried out, which enabled students to put what they learned into practice. Additionally, an environmental protection painting competition was held, and the wonderful artworks displayed students' creativity and their concerns for the environment. 3. During this week, a series of engaging activities took place. Firstly, a tree-planting activity was organized, and students actively participated, adding many new saplings to our campus. Secondly, an environmental photo exhibition was held, presenting shocking pictures of environmental damage and inspiring stories of environmental protection. Moreover, a debate on environmental policies was arranged, which sharpened students' thinking and understanding of environmental issues. 4. The main activities included an environmental protection speech contest. The contestants delivered passionate speeches, expressing their views and solutions on various environmental problems. A campus environmental inspection was also conducted, where students identified areas that needed improvement and proposed practical suggestions. Furthermore, an environmental protection film screening was held, and the documentaries showed the real and serious environmental challenges we are facing. 【完整答案】 In order to build a beautiful campus, recently our school hosted an Environmental Week, which was aimed at raising our awareness of environmental protection and promoting sustainable practices. The event sought to encourage everyone to develop eco-friendly habits. Throughout the week, various activities were held, including planting trees and flowers, recycling old books, cleaning the campus. Each activity was designed to engage us in hands-on environmental conservation efforts, fostering a deeper understanding of our role in protecting the environment. Participating in these activities was enlightening and inspiring. I learned the significance of small actions in protecting our environment. The Environmental Week reminded me of our responsibility to safeguard the planet for future generations. 1 (2024届山东济南市二模)假定你是某国际学校学生李华，你校将举行“创建美丽校园”活动，请你就此向留学生发出倡议。 要点包括：1. 创建美丽校园的重要性； 2. 校园内的不文明现象； 3. 你的态度。 注意：1. 文中不得出现考生个人真实信息； 2. 词数80~120； 3. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear fellow students, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Dear fellow students, I’m writing to appeal to everyone to take an active part in building a beautiful campus. An attractive campus can make our learning pleasant and improve our grades. However, some students can be seen running on the lawn, picking flowers or throwing rubbish everywhere, which have already harmed our school environment. It’s time we did something to change the situation. From my perspective, everyone is responsible for the beauty of our campus. Besides, if we all avoid doing anything improper, our campus will become more beautiful. Every effort matters. Let’s make an effort and take action now. Students’ Union 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一份倡议书，内容包括：创建美丽校园的重要性；校园内的不文明现象；你的态度。 【详解】 1. 词汇积累 积极参与：take an active part in→participate actively in 对……有害：harm→do harm to 在我看来：from my perspective→in my view 此外：besides→moreover 2. 句式拓展 原 句：It’s time we did something to change the situation. 拓展句：It’s time to do something to change the situation. 【高分句型】 1. However, some students can be seen running on the lawn, picking flowers or throwing rubbish everywhere, which have already harmed our school environment. (运用了现在分词短语作主语补足语、which引导非限 制性定语从句) 2. Besides, if we all avoid doing anything improper, our campus will become more beautiful. (运用了if引导条 件状语从句、动名词作宾语) 2 (湖北省部分市州2023届高三上学期元月期末联合调研)上周你校组织了以创建美丽校园为主题的绘画比赛。你校英文报正在征集活动报道。请你据此写一篇短文投稿。 内容包括：1. 活动介绍； 2. 个人感想。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Building A Beautiful Campus ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Our school launched a drawing competition on the play ground last week, which proved a great success. Aimed at arousing students’ awareness of building a beautiful campus, the competition is tailored for students who have great enthusiasm for drawing. Participants were required to express their ideas of a better campus by drawing. And winners of the competition were awarded a chance to present their pictures in the school stadium. This activity is well organized from my perspective, from which students have a better grasp of beautifying and purifying the campus. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇短文投稿校英文报，报道你校组织的以创建美丽校园 为主题的绘画比赛。 【详解】 1. 词汇积累 激起：arouse→provoke 热情：enthusiasm→passion 比赛：competition→contest 观点：perspective→viewpoint 2. 句式拓展 原 句：Participants were required to express their ideas of a better campus by drawing. 拓展句：Participants would draw pictures, by means of which they expressed their ideas of a better campus. 【高分句型】 1. Our school launched a drawing competition on the play ground last week, which proved a great success. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) 2. This activity is well organized from my perspective, from which students have a better grasp of beautifying and purifying the campus.(运用了介词+which引导的非限制性定语从句) 3 (上海市实验学校2024-2025学年高三上学期十月月考)Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是实验中学高三学生王梓，你们学校正在开展“美丽校园计划”征集活动。请你选择校园一处可以优化的地方，给校长写一封信。 信中必须包含以下内容：①推荐一个你认为既有创意又易于操作的优化方案； ②说明你推荐该方案的理由。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Dear Principal,    I am Wang Zi, a senior student at our school. As part of the “Beautiful Campus Project,” I would like to propose a creative and practical plan to optimize our school’s garden area. I suggest transforming it into a “Reading Garden.” This space could include comfortable seating, shade-giving plants, and small water features to create a serene environment for students to read and relax. The reason for this recommendation is that a tranquil outdoor reading space can promote mental well-being, encourage more reading habits, and offer a peaceful retreat from the busy school life. This idea, which won’t require extensive resources, can be implemented and will serve as an excellent addition to our educational environment. I hope you consider this suggestion.     Sincerely, Wang Zi 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。学校正在开展“美丽校园计划”征集活动，要求考生给校长写一封信， 推荐一个你认为既有创意又易于操作的优化方案并说明理由。 【详解】 1. 词汇积累 建议：propose→recommend 宁静的：serene→peaceful 希望：hope→wish 建议：suggestion→tip 2. 句式拓展 原 句：As part of the “Beautiful Campus Project,” I would like to propose a creative and practical plan to optimize our school’s garden area. 拓展句：As part of the “Beautiful Campus Project,” I would like to propose a creative and practical plan, which is designed to optimize our school’s garden area. 【高分句型】 1. The reason for this recommendation is that a tranquil outdoor reading space can promote mental well-being, encourage more reading habits, and offer a peaceful retreat from the busy school life. (运用了that引导的表语从句) 2. This idea, which won’t require extensive resources, can be implemented and will serve as an excellent addition to our educational environment.(运用了which引导的非限定性定语从句) 4 (2024届江西省重点中学盟校高三下学期二模)近来，你校英语报摄影栏“美丽校园掠影”正在向全校师生征稿。请你挑选一张你所拍摄的照片并用电子邮件发送给栏目负责人Mike。 内容包括：1. 照片简要描述； 2. 选择的理由。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Mike, I’m sending to you an extraordinary photo for Glimpses of Our Pretty School column. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best regards! Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Mike, I’m sending to you an extraordinary photo for Glimpses of Our Pretty School column. I took it by accident around 22:30 last month. One night when I was heading to my dorm, I happened to see two teachers taking photos of the bright moon above the main building on our campus. They were sitting on their bikes. Obviously, they had just finished a long day of work and were on their way home. What has made this photo extraordinary is the dreamy beauty of our campus and the quiet happiness on the teachers’ faces and it is selected to show my appreciation of their untiring devotion to their work. Best regards! Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达是应用文。学校英语报摄影栏“美丽校园掠影”正在向全校师生征稿。要求考生挑 选一张所拍摄的照片并用电子邮件发送给栏目负责人Mike，并对照片进行简要描述并阐述选择的 理由。 【详解】 1. 词汇积累 偶然地，意外地：by accident →accidentally 显然地：obviously→evidently 极好的：extraordinary→excellent 挑选：select→choose 2. 句式拓展 原 句：Obviously, they had just finished a long day of work and were on their way home. 拓展句：It is obvious that they had just finished a long day of work and were on their way home. 【高分句型】 1. One night when I was heading to my dorm, I happened to see two teachers taking photos of the bright moon above the main building on our campus. (运用了when引导的时间状语从句) 2. What has made this photo extraordinary is the dreamy beauty of our campus and the quiet happiness on the teachers’ faces and it is selected to show my appreciation of their untiring devotion to their work. (运用了what引导的主语从句) 5 (山东省泰安市一中2024-2025学年高二12月学情检测)假定你是校学生会主席李华，你校即将举办“美丽校园”短视频大赛。请你用英文写一份邀请函，请国际班的学生参加比赛。 内容包括：1. 比赛目的； 2. 视频要求。 注意：写作词数应为80个左右。 Dear students, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear students, I would like to invite you all to participate in a short video contest whose theme is “Beautiful Campus”. The contest is a great chance to show the beauty of our campus and share your unique perspectives on our school. Please note that the short video should be related to our campus and school life. Besides, subtitles and music can be added to make it more colorful. All the short videos must be made within three minutes and in MP4 form, which should be uploaded to the campus website by December 30th. The top ten with the most likes will be rewarded afterwards. Looking forward to your active participation. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【导语】本篇是应用文写作。你校即将举办“美丽校园”短视频大赛，要求考生用英文写一份邀请函，邀 请国际班的学生参加比赛。 【详解】 1. 词汇积累 参加：participate in→take part in 主题：theme→topic 机会：chance→opportunity 另外：besides→in addition 2. 句式拓展 原 句：The contest is a great chance to show the beauty of our campus and share your unique perspectives on our school. 拓展句：The contest, which provides an excellent opportunity to showcase the beauty of our campus and share your unique perspectives, is something we all should participate in. 【高分句型】 1. I would like to invite you all to participate in a short video contest whose theme is “Beautiful Campus”. (whose引导的定语从句) 2. Please note that the short video should be related to our campus and school life. (祈使句型以及that引导的宾语从句) 6 (2022届山西省晋中市高三3月普通高等学校招生模拟考试一模)假定你是校学生会主席李华，学校将举办以“美丽校园”为主题的短视频大赛。请你用英文写一篇通知，告知国际班的学生。 内容包括：1. 比赛目的和时间； 2. 视频时间和要求； 3. 欢迎参加。 注意：1. 词数100左右(格式已给出)； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Notice ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Notice In order to record the beauty of our campus, a short video contest is to be held next Friday. The short video should be related to our campus and school life. Besides, subtitles and music can be added to make it more colorful. All the short videos must be made within three minutes and in MP4 form, which should be uploaded to the campus website by this Sunday. The top ten with the most likes will be rewarded afterwards. We hold the belief that you may display your wonderful talents through this contest. Looking forward to your participation. The Students’ Union 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以校学生会主席李华的身份，用英文写一篇通知，告知国际 班的学生学校将举办以“美丽校园”为主题的短视频大赛。 【详解】 1. 词汇积累 比赛：contest→competition 相关的、有联系的：related→connected 此外：Besides→Moreover 展现：display→show 2. 句式拓展 原 句：The top ten with the most likes will be rewarded afterwards. 拓展句：If ranking in the top ten with the most likes, you will be rewarded afterwards. 【高分句型】 1. All the short videos must be made within three minutes and in MP4 form, which should be uploaded to the campus website by this Sunday.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) 2. We hold the belief that you may display your wonderful talents through this contest. (运用了that引导同位语从句) 7 (河南省驻马店市2023-2024学年高二上学期1月期末)假定你是李华，上周你校举办了“绿色校园”主题活动，请你为校英文报写一篇报道。 内容包括：1. 活动内容； 2. 活动反响。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 In order to help save energy and raise students’ awareness of protecting the environment, last week our school organized an activity whose theme was green campus. It lasts for a whole week. Throughout the week, teachers and students were encouraged to reduce their carbon footprint by using public transportation to get to campus. In addition, volunteers made posters advocating a green lifestyle. Finally, classes in Grade one held class meeting under the title of green campus, offering suggestions for environment improvement. The activity is such a great success that everyone thinks highly of it. Not only does it contribute to a better environment but provides all the students with a new perspective of environmental protection. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就上周学校举办的“绿色校园”主题活动，为校英文报写一 篇报道。 【详解】 1. 词汇积累 主题：theme→ topic/subject 减少：reduce → lower/decrease 提倡：advocate→ promote/campaign for 提供：offer→ provide 2. 句式拓展 原 句：It lasts for a whole week. Throughout the week, teachers and students were encouraged to reduce their carbon footprint by using public transportation to get to campus. 拓展句：It lasts for a whole week, throughout which teachers and students were encouraged to reduce their carbon footprint by using public transportation to get to campus. 【高分句型】 1. In order to help save energy and raise students’ awareness of protecting the environment, last week our school organized an activity whose theme was green campus.(运用了whose引导的定语从句) 2. Not only does it contribute to a better environment but provides all the students with a new perspective of environmental protection.(运用了not only...but also引出的部分倒装句) 8 (2023届山东省潍坊市安丘市高三3月过程检测)假定你是李华，为迎接4月22日世界地球日，请代表学生会为校英文报写一封倡议书，呼吁同学们从自身做起，共同创建“绿色”校园。 内容包括：1. 建设绿色校园的必要性； 2. 如何建设绿色校园。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80词左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear fellow students, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ The Student Union 【答案】 Dear fellow students, Generally speaking, the environment of our school is quite clean and tidy with green trees and fragrant flowers. Yet there still exist some aspects that need to get improved. As to how to create a green campus, I’d like to put forward some suggestions as follows. On the one hand, students’ awareness of environmental protection should be further promoted. They are required to save energy on day-to-day basis by turning off the tap and electricity when necessary. On the other hand, garbage classification is of great significance. Not only can it cope with pollution issue effectively but also more energy will be saved. I firmly believe that every small single action can make a big difference. With the joint effort of every individual, our campus can become a greener home. The Student Union 【导语】本篇书面表达属于说明文，假定你是李华，为迎接4月22日世界地球日，请代表学生会为校英文 报写一封倡议书，呼吁同学们从自身做起，共同创建“绿色”校园。 【详解】 1. 词汇积累 重要性：significance→importance 提出：put forward→raise 建议：suggest→advice 处理：cope with→deal with 2. 句式拓展 原 句：With the joint effort of every individual, our campus can become a greener home. 同义句：If every individual makes great effort, our campus can become a greener home. 【高分句型】 1. Yet there still exist some aspects that need to get improved. (运用了that引导的定语从句) 2. Not only can it cope with pollution issue effectively but also more energy will be saved. (运用了not only放句首的部分倒装句) 9 (北京市八一学校2024-2025学年高二上学期期中)假设你是红星中学高二学生李华。你们学校下个月将举办以“绿色校园”为主题的系列实践活动。请你用英文给国际部交换生Jim写一封邮件，邀请他一起参加。 内容包括：1. 系列活动的安排和内容； 2. 你打算参加的活动。 注意：1. 词数100左右； 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Jim, Long time no see. How’s everything going? Next Friday, our school will hold a theme day activity called “Green Campus”. I would like to invite you to participate in this activity. On the morning of the activity, we will invite some experts to give lectures on environmental protection. In the afternoon, we will plant trees and clean the campus to put our ideas into practice. I am very interested in this activity and I believe that you will also like it. Please let me know if you have any questions or suggestions. I am looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给交换生Jim写一封邮件，邀请他参加“绿色校园”活动。 【详解】 1. 词汇积累 喜欢：like→be fond of 参加：participate in→take part in 专家：expert→specialist 建议：suggestion→advice 2. 句式拓展 原 句：Next Friday, our school will hold a theme day activity called “Green Ecological Campus”. 拓展句：Next Friday, our school will hold a theme day activity, which is called “Green Ecological Campus”. 【高分句型】 1. I am very interested in this activity and I believe that you will also like it.(运用了that引导宾语从句) 2. Please let me know if you have any questions or suggestions. (运用了if引导条件状语从句) 10 (安徽省安庆市2023-2024学年高二上学期10月月考)某校英文报社开设了一个专栏Green Living。本期话题是如何建设绿色校园，请你以“How to create a green campus”为题，用英语写一篇短文，谈一些自己的看法。 内容包括：1. 简述校园环境的现状； 2. 建设绿色校园的具体建议(不少于两点)。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 How to create a green campus Green campus does not only mean more trees and grasses in our campus’s environment but also developing an energy-efficient and resource-cycled campus. However, there are a lot of environmental problems and waste of energy. Some students may keep the water pipes on when they do the laundry. When eating, they throw food away because it’s not delicious. And the lights in the classroom are on all the time, even if no one is inside. In my opinion, to create green campus, everyone on campus should be informed to form the habit of using resources properly and saving energy, such as turning off the light when leaving and value food. In addition, students will be educated to take environmental problems seriously as their own commitment and responsibility. What’s more, only by the co-efforts of the whole society could “green campus” work smoothly and bring benefit to people’s well-beings. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“How to create a green campus”为题，用英语写一篇短文， 谈一谈如何建设绿色校园。 【详解】 1. 词汇积累 关闭：turn off→switch off 珍惜：value→cherish 在我看来：in my opinion→from my perspective 此外：what’s more→besides 2. 句式拓展 原 句：When eating, they throw food away because it’s not delicious. 拓展句：When eating, if food is not delicious, they throw it away. 【高分句型】 1. Some students may keep the water pipes on when they do the laundry. (运用了when引导时间状语从句) 2 . 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