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新人教必修三
Unit 1
Festivals and Celebrations
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教学目的
By the end of this unit, you will be able to:
1.Learn about the Naadam Festival.
2.Know how to write a festival experience.
3.Master expressions related to Festivals.
4.Have a sense of responsibility to tell China's story well in English.
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Have you ever been to Inner Mongolia?
What's your impression of it?
Mongolian tents
Mongolian robes
roast mutton
Mongolian
grassland
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Lead-in
What is the most important festival in Inner Mongolia?
the Naadam Festival
Leading in
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Lead-in: Guess activites from incomplete pictures
wrestling
horse racing
archery
What are they doing?
在辽阔的草原上,有一个特别的民族。他们都是草原上威风凛凛的骑射手。他们特别喜欢喝奶酒,奶茶,奶制品。而且,他们也特别热情好客,他们就是马背上的民族,成吉思汗的后代—蒙古族。
在蒙古族,有一项历史悠久的节日—那达慕节。“那达慕”是蒙语的译音,意为“游戏”,以表示丰收的喜悦之情。每年农历六月初四开始的那达慕,是草原上一年一度的传统盛会。
Cultural background
Step 1 Pre-reading
My amazing Naadam experience
The text is mainly about the writer’s __________ of taking
part in ___________________ in Mongolia and the writer feels _______at it.
amazed
the Naadam Festival
experience
1.The passage is a(n) ___________.
A. Narration(记叙文)
B. Argumentation(议论文)
C. Exposition (说明文)
2.In what order does the author write the diary?
_______________
Diary
Step 2 While-reading (organization)
My amazing Naadam experience
.In what order does the author write the diary?
Time order
tense?(时态)
past tense
Step 2 While-reading (organization)
According to the left information, we can divide the passage into______ parts.
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Opening paragraph
Body paragraph
Closing paragraph
1. Describe the start of the festival and the surroundings.
2. Describe in detail the festival activities.
3. Describe in detail the festival activities.
State the topic (e.g. where, when and with whom you celebrated the festival, and also your main feelings).
Give a brief summary of the experience
Tip 1: Follow a clear structure and the time order when writing about an experience.
(Part1) How does the author introduce the topic?
Step 2 While-reading : (Language features)
opening sentence
When does the Naadam festival fall on? (part1)
1.春节在每年的农历初一,通常持续15天,是中国的传统节日。
仿写:
The Spring festival falls on the first day of the first month of the lunar calendar, usually lasting for 15 days,which is a traditional festival in China.
Tip 2: Properly use Verbs , V-ing form and different clauses(从句)
节日日期的表达:
fall on 适逢,正当
Step 2 While-reading : (Language features)
Body part: (Para2)
What do people do to prepare for the festival?
(What did the author see when arriving?)
仿写:
People do different activities to celebrate the Spring Festival. Some paste couplets, some perform dragon dance and lion dance, and others set off fireworks.
Description of sense:
sight
Sentence structure 1:
Some ... , some ... , and
others ...
Tip 3:Describe senses with certain sentence patterns to enrich writing. (some ..., some ... , and others ...)
Step 2 While-reading : (Language features)
Rules
Scenes of the competitions
Tip4: Describe activities in detail by action chains (V-ing) or rhetorical device (eg: simile )to make our article vivid
2. How is the scene of the competitors getting onto the green field described?
Describe horse races
in detail
Body part: (Para3-4)
1. What events are described? And how are the events described?
Step 2 While-reading : (Language features)
Part3: Summary (Para.5) : appreciate the ending
I’m finally back home now, feeling really tired, but celebrating Naadam with my friend was totally worth it.
Tip 5: use adverbs(副词) to stress the feeling in the end.
仿写:我们最终完成了大扫除,真的感到又累又宽慰。
We finally finished the thorough cleaning , feeling really tired but relieved.
Step 2 While-reading : (Language features)
How to express the feelings and emotions?
Underline the sentences that describe the writer's feelings and emotions.
excited; amazed; moved; surprised; worried; tired; satisfied; happy...
Tip6: To hold readers’ attention, we can add our feelings and emotions to our article.
I was deeply moved by the wonderful performance.
仿写:我被精彩的演出深深地感动了。
Step 2 While-reading : (Language features)
Review of the structure
Step 3 Post-reading :
How to share your festival experience ?
How to write a festival experience?
Tip 1: Follow a clear structure and the time order while using past tense and first person to organize the article logically .
Tip 5: Use rhetorical devices to make the language vivid.
Tip 4: Describe activities in detail with shining sentences.
(action chains, V-ing, adv ,different clauses)
Tip 3: Describe senses with certain sentence patterns to enrich writing.
(Some ... , some ..., and others ... .)
Tip 6: Describe the change of emotions to make the content convincing.
Summary of writing tips
Logical
Vivid
Convincing
Language
Effective Writing
Structure
Tip 2: Use opening sentence to state the topic.
Read for structure
The beginning of the festival
and its surroundings
A brief introduction to the festival
Mongolian wrestling details
Horse racing details
A brief summary of the experience
opening
body
ending
Read for details
What can you learn about Naadam from the opening?
where
when
what
opening
how
... festival falls on ...
... festival represented by ...
Title _______________________
I experienced the Naadam Festival in China’s Inner Mongolia Autonomous Region for the first time this year. The festival falls on the fourth day of the six month of the lunar calendar, usually lasting for three days. Naadam means “games” in Mongolian, and it is represented by three events: horse racing, wrestling, and archery, which are all so exciting to watch!
What
Where
When
Major events
Feeling
State the topic:
Structure and Feature
My amazing Naadam experience
Place the keyword in the rihgt color
Body
Time-order
Activities
Partner
surroundings
On the first day, I set off to the games early with my friend Burin. I saw a lot of people wearing fancy Mongolian robes. Some were feeding their horses, some were practicing archery, and others were chatting or taking photographs. Burin told me that Mongolians travel every year from near and far to attend the festival, just as their ancestors had done for centuries.
Descibe the start of the festival
When?
What dress?
Who can attend?
How often to be held ?
Structure and Feature
After the opening ceremony and some amazing performances, the wrestling competition began. Mongolian wrestling is different from the wrestling in the Olympic Games. There are no rounds, and wrestlers are not separated by weight. The wrestlers loses if any part of his body above his knee touches the ground. After singing some songs, the competitors danced onto the green field, waving their arms in the air as if they were eagles. I was quite moved by their show of strength and grace.
I absolutely enjoyed the archery, too, but the horse races were my favorite part. However, I was surprised to see that the riders were boys and girls! I heard it is because children are lighter and the horses can run faster and farther. At first, I was a little worried about the children’s safety, but Burin said, “Don’t worry. They’ve been riding horses all their lives. They’ll be just fine.” That was the moment I started to understand why people say “Horses are at the heart of Mongolian culture”. ...
The events ?
The rules of the competition?
The author’s feelings
The most impressive thing?
Describe the festival activities in detail
Structure and Feature
Guess what will write about this ending
I’m finally back home now...
If you were Mike, imagine what would you write?
feelings
expectation
lesson
comments
I can’t wait to do...
feeling really tired, but...was totally worth it.
The festival let me know...
I will remember that day forever because...
ending
5. I’m finally back home now, feeling really tired, but celebrating Naadam with my friend was totally worth it. He invited me back for the winter to stay in a traditional Mongolian tent and eat hot pot. I can’t wait!
Give a brief summary
The author’s feelings
Structure and Feature
请用英语写一篇日记,介绍你经历的最难忘、最有意义的春节。内容包括:
1. 节日概况;2. 庆祝活动;3. 你的感受。
一般过去时
Step 1
审题立意
体裁
要点
时态
日记
①春节介绍
②庆祝活动
③感受
人称
第一人称
Step 2 谋篇布局
Para.1: 2 lines
Para.2:7 lines
Para.3: 2 lines
Part 1: Opening sentence and introduce the Spring Festival(2 lines)
Step 3 遣词造句
请用英语写一篇日记,介绍你经历的最难忘、最有意义的春节。内容包括:
1. 节日概况;2. 庆祝活动;3. 你的感受。
①This was my first time spending … and it was an enjoyable and exciting experience for me.
②I’ll never forget … because …
③I’ll always remember… which…
④… fall on…
enjoyed ourselves
Festival activities
Part 2: Body part( 7 lines)
cleaned and decorated the house
paid visits to our relatives and friends
watched the Spring Gala
prepared food with parents
got together to have a big meal
1.重要的:
春节对于中国人意义重大。(主系表)
The Spring Festival is of great significance for Chinese people.
2. …提供了一个…的机会。
…provides a valuable chance for us to
important significant
= of great importance / significance
Part 3: Conclusion+aspiration (2 lines)
Evaluation and Group Presentation
Use the checklist to better the drafts.
Is the structure clear?
Does he/she introduce the topic in the first paragraph?
Is there an opening sentence in the first paragraph?
Does he/she apply the writing techniques learned in the class?
Does he/she describe his/her feelings and emotions?
Can you find any grammar or spelling mistakes?
5c tips:
Clean & clear
Complete
Coherent
Correct
Colourful / vivid
Do you know what other festivals are held by ethnic minorities? Can you list some of them ?
Water-Splashing
Festival 泼水节
彝族 白族 纳西族
广西壮族 侗族 瑶族 苗族
傈僳族
[lì sù zú]贵州苗族
傣族 阿昌族 布朗族
The Torch Festival
火把节
Sanyuesan Festival
三月三歌节
Daogan Festival
刀杆节
How to write an experience passage
Para 2. The start of the celebration:
1. The topic: Confucius Grand Ceremony
2. When, where, activities included
3. Use the first person and the past tense
4. My feeling
Title_____________
Para 1. State the topic:
The time (at 9 in the morning), the route( from Maninsan Wall to the gate of Confucian Temple)
The people, their dressing ( a yellow ribbon)
1. At 9:30 the worship team arrived at the Dacheng Hall
2. Present the flower basket, dance to the music ,read the memorial, bow to Confucius
3. My feeling
My feeling and impression
Para 5. Give a summary:
Para 3-4. Describe the celebration activities in detail
仓颉之初作书盖依类象形故谓之文其形声相益即谓之字文者物象之本字者言孳乳而浸多也著于竹帛谓之仓颉之初作书盖依类象形故谓之文其形声相益即谓之字文者物象之本字者言孳乳而
新人教必修三
Unit 1
Thank You !
Reading for Writing
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