Unit 1五步法写童话故事（课件）-2024-2025学年五年级英语下册写作突破专项训练（译林版三起）

Unit 1 译林版三年级起点五年级下册 五步法写童话 故事 CONTENTS 目录 写作方法指引 01 基础知识精讲 02 真题写作练习 03 模拟写作提升 04 行业PPT模板http:///hangye/ 模板来自于： 第一PPT https:/// 01 写作方法指引 PART.01 01 写作方法指引-原文指路 故事开始 结尾 经过 4 01 写作方法指引 审： 人称： 故事主人公，第一二三人称，单复数人称 时态：一般现在时，一般过去时，现在进行时 eg: Cinderella is a poor girl. She lives with her stepmother and sisters. 故事主人公 第三人称 三单形式 列： 列出故事的开始--经过--结尾 5 eg: 开始：Cinderella is a poor girl. She lives with her stepmother and sisters. She has no new clothes. There is a party at the prince’s house. But Cinderella can't go. She is very sad. 经过： A fairy comes and helps her. Cinderella puts on the new clothes and goes to the party. She goes back at 12 o'clock. She leaves a shoe behind. 结尾： The prince picks up the shoe. Many girls try on the shoe. But it is too big or too small. At last, Cinderella tries it on. It fits well. 01 写作方法指引 6 01 写作方法指引 扩： 扩展句子，增加高级词汇，短语，长难句 eg: But it is not fit.-- But it is too big or too small. 连：增加连词-but; finally; then; at last; fist eg: But it is too big or too small. At last, Cinderella tries it on. It fits well. 查：检查时态，人称，词汇是否正确，标点符号 7 02 基础知识精讲 PART.02 02 基础知识精讲-句型 “but 与 and” eg: Many girls try on the shoe, but it does not fit. 很多姑娘都试穿了这只鞋，但没有适合的。 解析： but 作连词，可以连接两个并列成分或两个并列分句，意为“但是，然而”。表示转折,but 前面的成分与 but 后面的成分意思相反。and 连接两个相同的成分，且如果连接两个动词时，动词形式要一致。 9 02 基础知识精讲-句型 “try on ” eg: Finally, Cinderella tries it on.最后，灰姑娘试穿了它。 解析： try on 试穿，try 的三单形式为 tries。 注意:put on(穿上)，take of(脱下)，try on(试穿)这一类的词组，使用规则如下: a.如果后面接名词,有两种形式,名词放在中间或者后面都可以； 如:Put on your coat./Put your coat on(穿上你的大衣) 10 02 基础知识精讲-句型 b.如果后面接代词(it, them)，只有一种形式，即:宾语要放在两个单词之间； 如:Put it on.(把它穿上。)/Try them on.(试穿它们。) 加动词原形V 1)情态动词 can + V; may + V; must + V; Shall we + V; will + V; should+ V; Would+ V; 2)Let's /Let me + V 3)祈使句.(Don‘t)+V或 please + V 4)助动词 do + V, does + V, don't+ V, doesn't+ V 11 02 基础知识精讲-语法 一般现在时 频率副词：always; usually; often ;sometimes; seldom; never on+星期复数：on Mondays ; on weekends； every 系列：every day; every year； 固定周期： once a week ; twice a year ①肯定句:主语+动词原形/动词第三人称单数形式+其他 ②否定句:主语+don't/ doesn't+动词原形+其他 02 基础知识精讲-语法 练一练 用单词的适当形式填空。 1.Tom often__________ (eat) dinner at school. 2.My brother usually __________ (go) to school on foot. 3.Lily and Lucy __________ (be) in the same class. 4. We___________(not go) to school on Sunday. 5.He __________ (like) playing basketball. 6. What _______ Tom often________ (do) on the weekend? eats goes are don’t go likes does do 03 模拟写作提升 PART.03 前情提要： 丑小鸭因为长相与众不同而被兄弟姐妹嘲笑，离开家后经历了很多，最终在春天变成了美丽的天鹅。 模拟写作提升1 审：人称： The Ugly Duckling; 时态：一般现在时 列： 开始： ____ is a ____. But he ____ from ____. 经过： His brothers and sisters don't ____. They ____ him and say he is ____. ___is very ___. In winter, it's very ____. He has to ___ to ___. 结尾： Finally, spring comes. ___ sees his ___ in the _____. He is ____. He has become a ___. Now he is _____ and _______. 扩： look different ; laugh at; ugly; sad; leave home; 连：and; finally; 查：检查三单形式 参考句型： _________ is a _________. But he _________ from _________. His brothers and sisters don't _________. They _________ him and say he is _________. _________ is very _________. In winter, it's very _________. He has to _________ to _________. Finally, spring comes. The Ugly Duckling sees his _________ in the _________. He is _________. He has become a _________. Now he is _________ and _________. 参考词汇： the Ugly Duckling; look different ; laugh at; ugly; sad; leave home; cold; reflection; surprised; swan 17 The Ugly Duckling is a little duck. But he looks different from other ducks. His brothers and sisters don't like him. They laugh at him and say he is ugly. The Ugly Duckling is very sad. He leaves home and goes to many places. In winter, it's very cold. He has to find a place to stay. Finally, spring comes. The Ugly Duckling sees his reflection in the water. He is surprised. He has become a beautiful swan. Now he is happy and makes many new friends. 范文1： 18 模拟写作提升2 请根据课文内容，以“Cinderella”为题，用第三人称写一写灰姑娘和王子之间的故事。不少于6句话。 提示: prince, no nice clothes, leave…behind, try on, fit well 19 审：人称： Cinderella prince 时态：一般现在时 列： 开始： There is ______at ______. 经过： But Cinderella cannot __, because she doesn’t have ____, She is very ____. ___ helps her. Cinderella puts on ___. The prince likes _____. But Cinderella has to ___ before___. She ___ and leaves__. 结尾： The prince ___. Many girls ____, but it doesn't ____. Finally, Cinderella _____. it fits well. 扩： leave…behind, try on, fit well 连：but; finally; 查：检查三单形式 参考句型： There is ______at ______. But Cinderella cannot ______, because she doesn’t have ______, She is very ______. ______ helps her. Cinderella puts on ______. The prince likes _____. But Cinderella has to ______ before ______. She ______ and leaves ______. The prince ______. Many girls ______, but it doesn't ______. Finally, Cinderella tries it on. it fits well. 参考词汇： party; prince's house; clothes; shoes; sad; fairy; clothes; shoes. She looks beautiful; o'clock; runs away ; leaves; try on; 21 Cinderella There is a party at the prince's house. But Cinderella cannot go, because she doesn’t have nice clothes or shoes, She is very sad. A fairy helps her. Cinderella puts on the clothes and shoes. She looks beautiful. Cinderella has a great time at the party. The prince likes her very much. But Cinderella has to go home before 12 o'clock. She runs away and leaves a shoe behind. The prince visits every house. Many girls try on the shoe, but it doesn't fit. Finally, Cinderella tries it on. it fits well. 范文2： 22 04 真题写作练习 PART.03 请你根据下面的故事梗概，发挥想象，用英文写一则小故事。 真题写作练习 【思路点拨】 可能用到的词汇: cock 公鸡 hungry 饥饿的 catch 抓住 fox 狐狸 eat....up 把….吃掉 一天,狐狸看到了一只公鸡。他想把公鸡当午餐吃掉。他问公鸡:“你为什么这么难过?公鸡回答道:“因为我唱歌不好听。”狐狸说:“我知道你唱歌很好听。你能给我唱一首吗?公鸡听见很高兴。然后他闭上眼睛开始唱歌。最后，狐狸抓住了他，并把他吃掉了。 审：人称： fox 狐狸 cock 公鸡 时态：一般现在时 列： 开始：One day, a fox sees ______. He is ______. He wants to ______. 经过： _____ comes to _____and asks, “Why ______?" ____answers, “Because I ______” _____says, "I know ______. Can you ______for me? " _____is ______to ______. Then he ______and ______. 结尾： The fox ______ him and ______at last. 扩：can…; very well… ; be happy to…; …want to …for… 连：then; at last; 查：检查三单形式 参考句型： One day, a fox sees ______. He is ______. He wants to ______. He comes to the cock and asks, “Why ______?" The cock answers, “Because I ______” The fox says, "I know ______, Mr Cock. Can you ______for me? " The cock is ______to ______. Then he ______and ______. The fox ______ him and ______at last. 参考词汇： cock 公鸡 hungry 饥饿的 catch 抓住 fox 狐狸 eat....up 把….吃掉 26 One day, a fox sees a cock. He is so hungry. He wants to eat the cock for lunch. He comes to the cock and asks, “Why are you so sad?" The cock answers, “Because I can't sing well.” The fox says, "I know you can sing well, Mr Cock. Can you sing a song for me? " The cock is very happy to hear that. Then he closes his eyes and begins to sing. The fox catches him and eats him up at last. 范文3： 27 Thank you! $$