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第15讲 作文专练 目录 万能模板：写人、写物 万能句型 主题要点 实战演练 Many people think it’s hard to write a article. But now, try again. 万能模板 写人 I would like to share/introduce/recommend myself for you. I’m a 15-year-old student who has a lot of hobbies, such as playing football, swimming, drawing and so on. However, I like playing football best. I have/has many advantages. First of all, I am helpful. I not only teach my classmates to study English, but also give the seat to the old women. Next, I am hard-working. It is at 7 p.m. after school everyday that I usually go to the library to learn carefully. The most importantly, I am honest. Undoubtedly, I never tell lies. But I also have some disadvantages, for example, I am not good at Maths. All in all, this is me. I sincerely hope that everyone can be better. 写物 There are many methods learning English, such ..., ..., ..., ... and so on. /However, I like ... best. /Here is/are my advice/plans/reasons/experiences/feelings. First of all, we can watch English movies and listen to English music. Don’t ... It can not only relax ourselves, but also benefit our study. Next, we can read the passages on the same topic to remember the new words. I also keep a diary in English in the library from 5 p.m. to 6 p.m. on Saturdays and Sundays. What’s more, we can communicate with people in English. Especially, it brings me a lot of fun. But it also has some difficulties, for example, it’s hard to learn. Whatever, when we face some challenges, never give up. All in all, the above is my advice. I hope everyone has a wonderful time / can be better. 通用要点 德 do some volunteer work, such as helping the old tidy their flats, raising money for people in need and so on. 智 do some practices, such as English listening, writing and so on. 体 do some exercise/sports, such as running, swimming, playing ping-pong and so on. 美 do some activities, such as DIY, painting competitions, watching some dramas and so on. 劳 do some housework, such as washing the dishes, tiding the house and so on. 保护环境 关水龙头 turn off the taps 减少空气污染 reduce air pollution 走路或坐公交车 go to school by bike or by bus 少用塑料袋 use less plastic bags 多种树 plant more trees 过环保的生活 live a green life 保护环境 protect the environment 其他 合理饮食 keep a diet 保持健康 keep healthy 面对困难 face some difficulties 永不言弃 never give up 不想背？太棒了！那就自己写吧！ 万能句型 不定时句型 It’s + adj. + (for/of sb.) + to do sth. 主语 + find/think/believe/make + it + adj. + to do sth. It + takes/took sb. + 时间/金钱 + to do sth. 主语 + would like + to do ... 主语 + be supposed + to do sth. = 主语 + should do sth. 主语 + had better + do sth. 状语从句 条件(if + 句子, 句子); 时间(句子 + when/while + 句子); 目的(句子 + so that/ in order that + 句子) 宾语从句 I think/hope/believe (that) + 句子 there be 句型 There is/am/are ... 祈使句 Let’s do sth. Do sth. Don’t do sth. 感叹句 How + adj. + 主谓 What + （a/an） + adj. + n. + 主谓 句子语序 某人做某事 主谓宾+状语（时间、地点、方式） I also keep a diary in English in the library from 5 p.m. to 6 p.m. on Saturdays and Sundays. 某人是什么（身份） 主系表（主语+系+冠词+名词） I’m a 15-year-old student 某人是怎么样的 （外貌性格品质等） 主系表（主语+系+形容词） I am hard-working. 主题要点 个人信息 Class 1, Grade 7, 12 years old. Subjects：be good at Maths, help my classmates with homework hobbies：play Chinese chess with my dad 学校生活 Schedule：start at 9 a.m., end at 5 p.m. Rest:play ping-pong together on the playground people: care about us, friendly and helpful 生活作风 Diet: eat lots of fruit and vegetables Sports: do morning exercise Sleep：get enough sleep 理性消费 spend most of my lucky money on school things use some money to help children in need save the rest in my bank account 节日庆祝 the Spring Festival clean their homes and put up the Spring Festival couplets enjoy a big dinner, prepare some dishes like jiaozi and niangao watch the Spring Festival Gala visit relatives and friends and send each other good wishes give kids red packets to wish them good luck the Dragon Boat Festival have dragon boat races eat delicious rice dumplings the Lantern Festival eat tangyuan guess riddles on lanterns watch all kinds of beautiful lantern and lively lion dances the Mid-Autumn Festival eat mooncake have a big family dinner enjoy the moon after dinner The Double Ninth Festival go mountain climbing wish our elders a long and happy life. Christmas have a big family dinner give each other presents and sing Christmas songs decorate our homes and trees with gifts 总之，过节总少不了“have a big family meal/dinner” 房屋住所 balcony：look at the nice view of the city living room：enjoy playing Chinese chess with Grandpa yard：keep some hens 街坊邻里 have a “helping hands" meeting do some shopping for the old people give away some of our old books raise money for 实战演练 1．假如你是李华，一名中学生。近期，你在一个学习网站上认识了美国网友 Lisa。现在，请你写一封邮件，向她介绍你自己以及你的新学校。 写作要求： 1.80—120词，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 写作要点： 参考用词： ● Words and phrases ● beautiful/ handsome/ tall/ bigeyes/ short black hair ● kind/ funny/ always happy/ clever ● play football/ go hiking/ love animals/ like reading ● classroom building/ dining hall/ sports field ● in front of.../ across from.../ between... and... Sentence patterns ● There is/ are... in my school. ● My favorite place is... because... Dear Lisa, I’m your new friend, Li Hua. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 2．假如你是李华，你校将开展以“My Daily Life”为题的征文活动。请你根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文参加此次活动。 提示： 1.时间安排：六点起床；六点半吃早饭；八点上课； 2.主要活动：上午4节课，下午3节课；帮助同学学习；打篮球；晚上…… 3.你的感受:…… 参考词汇: get up, breakfast, lesson, help, play basketball, do my homework, … 要求： 1.可选择使用参考词汇，亦可适当发挥； 2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3.文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等)； 4.词数：不少于50词(开头已给出，但不计入总词数)。 My Daily Life I’m Li Hua. I want to tell you about my daily life.  __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．假如你想参加时尚俱乐部，你要给俱乐部主席Mr Brown写一封信，介绍自己的情况。 内容包括以下要点： 1.基本信息：年龄，外貌，兴趣爱好等； 2.生活方式：描述自己健康的生活作息，并作出合理评价： 3.饮食习惯：概述自己健康的饮食习惯，并作出合理评价。 注意： 1.词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2.全文围绕申请加入时尚俱乐部展开，内容涵盖要点； 3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。 Dear Mr. Brown, I’d like to join the Fashion Club ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope I can be a member of your club. Yours sincerely, Amy 4．假如你是李华，你的朋友Tom对于中国人过春节给孩子压岁钱很感兴趣，请给他回邮件介绍这一习俗的意义及你是如何处理你的压岁钱的。 写作要求： 1. 包含所给要点，70词左右； 2. 条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．假设你是李华，你的好友Mike对中国节日很感兴趣，请你写一封电子邮件向他介绍中国的元宵节。不少于90词。 要点： 1. 节日时间：农历正月十五； 2. 庆祝方式：看舞狮、吃元宵(yuanxiao)、猜灯谜 (guess lantern riddles)； 3. 发出邀请：体验中国的元宵佳节。 Dear Mike, I’m very happy to know that you are interested in Chinese festivals. I’d like to tell you something about the Lantern Festival. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ All the best. Yours, Li Hua 6．家是温暖的港湾，是我们成长的摇篮，你的家是什么样子的呢？请以My Home为题写一篇小短文。 要求： 1、词数不少于80个； 2、语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁； 3、文中不得使用你的真实姓名，否则以零分计。 4、短文必须写在答卷相应位置上，如在本卷上作答，一律不得分。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．你校团支部组织学生在业余时间参加社会活动。上周日你参加了志愿者服务活动“Volunteer now for our common future”，请你写一篇英语短文，向英文社团投稿, 记述本次活动，并谈谈你的感受。 要点提示: ①help old people ②clean up the street ③hold a charity bazaar(义卖) 要求： 1.词数为80词左右(首句已给出，不计入总词数)； 2.包含所有要点，适当增加细节，以使内容充实，行文连贯： 3.文中不能出现与考生相关的真实信息。 Our school organized us to take part in social activities in our spare time. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 答案第1页，共2页 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 第15讲 作文专练 目录 万能模板：写人、写物 万能句型 主题要点 实战演练 Many people think it’s hard to write a article. But now, try again. 万能模板 写人 I would like to share/introduce/recommend myself for you. I’m a 15-year-old student who has a lot of hobbies, such as playing football, swimming, drawing and so on. However, I like playing football best. I have/has many advantages. First of all, I am helpful. I not only teach my classmates to study English, but also give the seat to the old women. Next, I am hard-working. It is at 7 p.m. after school everyday that I usually go to the library to learn carefully. The most importantly, I am honest. Undoubtedly, I never tell lies. But I also have some disadvantages, for example, I am not good at Maths. All in all, this is me. I sincerely hope that everyone can be better. 写物 There are many methods learning English, such ..., ..., ..., ... and so on. /However, I like ... best. /Here is/are my advice/plans/reasons/experiences/feelings. First of all, we can watch English movies and listen to English music. Don’t ... It can not only relax ourselves, but also benefit our study. Next, we can read the passages on the same topic to remember the new words. I also keep a diary in English in the library from 5 p.m. to 6 p.m. on Saturdays and Sundays. What’s more, we can communicate with people in English. Especially, it brings me a lot of fun. But it also has some difficulties, for example, it’s hard to learn. Whatever, when we face some challenges, never give up. All in all, the above is my advice. I hope everyone has a wonderful time / can be better. 通用要点 德 do some volunteer work, such as helping the old tidy their flats, raising money for people in need and so on. 智 do some practices, such as English listening, writing and so on. 体 do some exercise/sports, such as running, swimming, playing ping-pong and so on. 美 do some activities, such as DIY, painting competitions, watching some dramas and so on. 劳 do some housework, such as washing the dishes, tiding the house and so on. 保护环境 关水龙头 turn off the taps 减少空气污染 reduce air pollution 走路或坐公交车 go to school by bike or by bus 少用塑料袋 use less plastic bags 多种树 plant more trees 过环保的生活 live a green life 保护环境 protect the environment 其他 合理饮食 keep a diet 保持健康 keep healthy 面对困难 face some difficulties 永不言弃 never give up 不想背？太棒了！那就自己写吧！ 万能句型 不定时句型 It’s + adj. + (for/of sb.) + to do sth. 主语 + find/think/believe/make + it + adj. + to do sth. It + takes/took sb. + 时间/金钱 + to do sth. 主语 + would like + to do ... 主语 + be supposed + to do sth. = 主语 + should do sth. 主语 + had better + do sth. 状语从句 条件(if + 句子, 句子); 时间(句子 + when/while + 句子); 目的(句子 + so that/ in order that + 句子) 宾语从句 I think/hope/believe (that) + 句子 there be 句型 There is/am/are ... 祈使句 Let’s do sth. Do sth. Don’t do sth. 感叹句 How + adj. + 主谓 What + （a/an） + adj. + n. + 主谓 句子语序 某人做某事 主谓宾+状语（时间、地点、方式） I also keep a diary in English in the library from 5 p.m. to 6 p.m. on Saturdays and Sundays. 某人是什么（身份） 主系表（主语+系+冠词+名词） I’m a 15-year-old student 某人是怎么样的 （外貌性格品质等） 主系表（主语+系+形容词） I am hard-working. 主题要点 个人信息 Class 1, Grade 7, 12 years old. Subjects：be good at Maths, help my classmates with homework hobbies：play Chinese chess with my dad 学校生活 Schedule：start at 9 a.m., end at 5 p.m. Rest:play ping-pong together on the playground people: care about us, friendly and helpful 生活作风 Diet: eat lots of fruit and vegetables Sports: do morning exercise Sleep：get enough sleep 理性消费 spend most of my lucky money on school things use some money to help children in need save the rest in my bank account 节日庆祝 the Spring Festival clean their homes and put up the Spring Festival couplets enjoy a big dinner, prepare some dishes like jiaozi and niangao watch the Spring Festival Gala visit relatives and friends and send each other good wishes give kids red packets to wish them good luck the Dragon Boat Festival have dragon boat races eat delicious rice dumplings the Lantern Festival eat tangyuan guess riddles on lanterns watch all kinds of beautiful lantern and lively lion dances the Mid-Autumn Festival eat mooncake have a big family dinner enjoy the moon after dinner The Double Ninth Festival go mountain climbing wish our elders a long and happy life. Christmas have a big family dinner give each other presents and sing Christmas songs decorate our homes and trees with gifts 总之，过节总少不了“have a big family meal/dinner” 房屋住所 balcony：look at the nice view of the city living room：enjoy playing Chinese chess with Grandpa yard：keep some hens 街坊邻里 have a “helping hands" meeting do some shopping for the old people give away some of our old books raise money for 实战演练 1．假如你是李华，一名中学生。近期，你在一个学习网站上认识了美国网友 Lisa。现在，请你写一封邮件，向她介绍你自己以及你的新学校。 写作要求： 1.80—120词，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 写作要点： 参考用词： ● Words and phrases ● beautiful/ handsome/ tall/ bigeyes/ short black hair ● kind/ funny/ always happy/ clever ● play football/ go hiking/ love animals/ like reading ● classroom building/ dining hall/ sports field ● in front of.../ across from.../ between... and... Sentence patterns ● There is/ are... in my school. ● My favorite place is... because... Dear Lisa, I’m your new friend, Li Hua. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Lisa, I’m your new friend, Li Hua. I’m your new friend, Li Hua. I am tall and have big eyes. I’m very outgoing. I often help people in need. I often volunteer in the park on weekends, too. I like playing basketball. If I have time, I often go to the park to play basketball with my friends on weekends. My school is not big, but it is beautiful. There is a teaching building, a library, a playground and a canteen. My favorite place is the library, because I like reading books. After class, I often go to the playground with my classmates. What about yours? I look forward to hearing from you. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，自我介绍（外貌、个性和爱好）； 第二步，介绍学校； 第三步，表达自己的愿望。 [亮点词汇] ①in need在困难中的 ②go to the park去公园 ③like doing sth.喜欢做某事 ④look forward to期待 [高分句型] ①If I have time, I often go to the park to play basketball with my friends on weekends.（if引导的条件状语从句）   ②There is a teaching building, a library, a playground and a canteen.（there be句型） ③My favorite place is the library, because I like reading books.（because引导的原因状语从句） 2．假如你是李华，你校将开展以“My Daily Life”为题的征文活动。请你根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文参加此次活动。 提示： 1.时间安排：六点起床；六点半吃早饭；八点上课； 2.主要活动：上午4节课，下午3节课；帮助同学学习；打篮球；晚上…… 3.你的感受:…… 参考词汇: get up, breakfast, lesson, help, play basketball, do my homework, … 要求： 1.可选择使用参考词汇，亦可适当发挥； 2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3.文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等)； 4.词数：不少于50词(开头已给出，但不计入总词数)。 My Daily Life I’m Li Hua. I want to tell you about my daily life.  ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文： My Daily Life I’m Li Hua. I want to tell you about my daily life. I usually get up at 6:00 in the morning. After that, I have breakfast at 6:30. I go to school at 7:00. Classes start at 8:00. We have four classes in the morning and three classes in the afternoon. I often help my classmates with their study. I like playing basketball, so I often play it with my friends after school. In the evening, I do my homework at home. I go to bed at 9:30. I am living a happy life at school. I enjoy my school life. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出“我的日常生活”的话题； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“时间安排、主要活动、个人感受”等方面进行介绍； 第三步，书写结语，总结全文。 [亮点词汇] ①want to do sth想要做某事 ②get up起床 ③help sb with sth帮助某人做某事 [高分句型] ①I like playing basketball, so I often play it with my friends after school.（so引导的并列复合句） 3．假如你想参加时尚俱乐部，你要给俱乐部主席Mr Brown写一封信，介绍自己的情况。 内容包括以下要点： 1.基本信息：年龄，外貌，兴趣爱好等； 2.生活方式：描述自己健康的生活作息，并作出合理评价： 3.饮食习惯：概述自己健康的饮食习惯，并作出合理评价。 注意： 1.词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2.全文围绕申请加入时尚俱乐部展开，内容涵盖要点； 3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。 Dear Mr. Brown, I’d like to join the Fashion Club ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope I can be a member of your club. Yours sincerely, Amy 【答案】例文 Dear Mr. Brown, I’d like to join the Fashion Club. I’m Amy, a 16-year-old student. I have long brown hair and enjoy fashion design. I lead a healthy lifestyle by waking up at 6:30 a.m. and exercising regularly. I think a balanced plan keeps me energetic. Regarding my diet, I eat plenty of fruits, vegetables, and whole grains. I believe my choices are nutritious and help me stay healthy. I hope I can be a member of your club. Yours sincerely, Amy 【详解】[总体分析]   ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；   ②时态：时态为一般现在时；   ③提示：按照提示要点，涵盖基本信息、生活方式和饮食习惯三方面内容。   [写作步骤]   第一步，介绍个人的基本信息，包括年龄、外貌特征和兴趣爱好；   第二步，描述自己的健康生活作息并做出评价；   第三步，概述自己的饮食习惯并给出评价。   [亮点词汇]   ①fashion design 时尚设计   ②plenty of 许多 [高分句型]   ①I think a balanced plan keeps me energetic. (使用宾语从句)   ②I believe my choices are nutritious and help me stay healthy. (使用宾语从句) 4．假如你是李华，你的朋友Tom对于中国人过春节给孩子压岁钱很感兴趣，请给他回邮件介绍这一习俗的意义及你是如何处理你的压岁钱的。 写作要求： 1. 包含所给要点，70词左右； 2. 条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Dear Tom, I’m very glad to receive your email. I’d like to share some information with you about Chinese lucky money. During the Chinese New Year, older people give children lucky money in red envelopes. This is to bring good luck and wishes for a happy and healthy new year. It also shows how much they care about us. I always get excited when I receive lucky money every year. I keep a small amount as pocket money for myself. My dad helps me put the rest into my bank account, so I save most of my lucky money for the future. I think this tradition is not only fun but also educational, as it teaches us about family and the value of money. I hope you get a chance to experience it someday! Best wishes. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为一封电子邮件； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：文章应该包括所有提示信息，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开门见山：分享压岁钱的相关信息； 第二步，介绍春节给孩子压岁钱这一习俗的意义； 第三步，介绍你自己如何处理压岁钱； 第四步，表达自己的感受； 第五步，表达祝愿。 [亮点词汇] ①not only … but also … 不但……而且…… ②bring good luck 带来好运 [高分句型] ①I always get excited when I receive lucky money every year. (when引导的时间状语从句) ②It also shows how much they care about us. (宾语从句) 5．假设你是李华，你的好友Mike对中国节日很感兴趣，请你写一封电子邮件向他介绍中国的元宵节。不少于90词。 要点： 1. 节日时间：农历正月十五； 2. 庆祝方式：看舞狮、吃元宵(yuanxiao)、猜灯谜 (guess lantern riddles)； 3. 发出邀请：体验中国的元宵佳节。 Dear Mike, I’m very happy to know that you are interested in Chinese festivals. I’d like to tell you something about the Lantern Festival. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ All the best. Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Mike, I’m very happy to know that you are interested in Chinese festivals. I’d like to tell you something about the Lantern Festival. The Lantern Festival is very important in China. It’s on the 15th day of the first lunar month. It is the last day of the Spring Festival celebrations. People celebrate the festival in many ways. My family usually get together and eat yuanxiao to celebrate this festival. We also watch lively lion dances on the street. In the evening, we go out to watch beautiful fireworks and lantern shows and guess lantern riddles. There are lots of interesting things to do and everyone is very happy. I hope you can come and enjoy the festival with me one day. All the best. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，不要遗漏信息，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出元宵节的描述； 第二步，具体阐述元宵节的时间以及传统的庆祝方式； 第三步，最后发出邀请，表示欢迎。 [亮点词汇] ①important重要的 ②celebrations庆祝活动 ③get together聚在一起 [高分句型] ①There are lots of interesting things to do and everyone is very happy.（there be句型） ②I hope you can come and enjoy the festival with me one day.（宾语从句） 6．家是温暖的港湾，是我们成长的摇篮，你的家是什么样子的呢？请以My Home为题写一篇小短文。 要求： 1、词数不少于80个； 2、语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁； 3、文中不得使用你的真实姓名，否则以零分计。 4、短文必须写在答卷相应位置上，如在本卷上作答，一律不得分。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】     I have a tidy and beautiful home. Although it is not very big, it is cozy and warm. In my home, there are two bedrooms, a living room, a study, a bathroom and a kitchen. The living room is where my family spends most of our time together. My father often watches TV there. My mother often stays in the kitchen. She cooks delicious meals for us. I love the smell of her cooking. And I often study in the study. There are many books in my study. I like reading them very much. My bedroom is my favorite place where I can escape from the world and have some peace and quiet of my own. This is my home, a safe and comfortable home. I love my home very much. 【详解】【总体分析】 题材：本文是一篇话题作文； 时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主； 提示：考生应根据提示要点进行书面表达, 不要遗漏要点。应能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等, 清楚连贯地表达自己的思想, 进而完成写作任务。 【写作步骤】 第一步，表明写作意图。引出“My Home”这一话题； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。介绍家的具体情况； 第三步，书写结语。表达对家的爱。 【亮点词汇】 ① cozy and warm舒适温暖 ② delicious美味的 ③ escape from逃离…… 【高分句型】 ① Although it is not very big, it is cozy and warm.（although引导让步状语从句） ② My bedroom is my favorite place where I can escape from the world and have some peace and quiet of my own.（where引导定语从句） 7．你校团支部组织学生在业余时间参加社会活动。上周日你参加了志愿者服务活动“Volunteer now for our common future”，请你写一篇英语短文，向英文社团投稿, 记述本次活动，并谈谈你的感受。 要点提示: ①help old people ②clean up the street ③hold a charity bazaar(义卖) 要求： 1.词数为80词左右(首句已给出，不计入总词数)； 2.包含所有要点，适当增加细节，以使内容充实，行文连贯： 3.文中不能出现与考生相关的真实信息。 Our school organized us to take part in social activities in our spare time. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Our school organized us to take part in social activities in our spare time. Last Sunday, I participated in a volunteer service activity called “Volunteer now for our common future”. We helped old people by doing some housework for them and chatting with them. We also cleaned up the street to make our environment cleaner. Besides, we held a charity bazaar to raise money for those in need. Through this activity, I learned the importance of helping others and how to contribute to society. It was a really meaningful experience and I hope to participate in more such activities in the future. 【总体分析】①题材：本文是一篇稿件； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 【写作步骤】第一步，开篇点题，表明上周参加了学校的志愿者服务活动。 第二步，具体介绍上周日的志愿者服务活动； 第三步，谈一谈你参加志愿者活动的感受。 【亮点词汇】①participate in参加 ②chat with sb与某人交谈 ③the importance of……的重要性 【高分句型】①I participated in a volunteer service activity called “Volunteer now for our common future”.（过去分词做后置定语） ②We helped old people by doing some housework for them and chatting with them.（by+doing sth通过做某事） 答案第1页，共2页 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$