Module 1用仿写法写点餐（课件）-2024-2025学年六年级英语下册写作突破专项训练（外研版三起）

Module1 外研版三年级起点六年级下册 用仿写法写点餐 CONTENTS 目录 写作方法指引 01 基础知识精讲 02 真题写作练习 03 模拟写作提升 04 行业PPT模板http:///hangye/ 模板来自于： 第一PPT https:/// 01 写作方法指引 PART.01 01 写作方法指引-原文指路 介绍自己想吃什么 01 写作方法指引-原文指路 介绍价格 总体抒发感情 01 写作方法指引 介绍人物、地点和事情 eg: Today Sam and Amy come to the restaurant for a meal. Today … come to the …for a meal. 仿写：Today Daming and Lingling come to the restaurant for a meal. 类型1 介绍想吃什么 eg: I want a hot dog. I want to eat some bread. …want a ______. And … want to eat…. 仿写：I want some sausages. I want to eat some sausages. 01 写作方法指引 eg: She wants some bread. I want to eat some bread. …wants a ______. And … wants to eat…. 仿写：Amy wants some bananas. She wants to eat some bananas. 类型1 介绍价格 eg: It's thirty yuan. We need to pay thirty yuan. It’s … yuan. … need to pay ______ yuan. 仿写：It’s forty-five yuan. They need to pay forty-five yuan. 01 写作方法指引 总体抒发感情 eg: They all look forward to having a good meal in the restaurant. … all look forward to having a … meal in the restaurant. 仿写：We all look forward to having a nice meal in the restaurant. 类型1 eg: We have a very nice meal. We like this new restaurant. … have/has a very nice meal. … like/ likes …. 仿写：Amy has a very nice meal. Daming likes the restaurant. 01 写作方法指引 Cashier: Can I help you? A: I want a hot dog. And what do you want to eat? B: I want some rice. Cashier: What do you want to drink? A: I want a cola And you? B: A cola for me, too. How much is it? Cashier: It’s twenty yuan. A: Here you are. Cashier: Thank you. Enjoy your meal! 介绍价格 总体抒发感情 类型2-对话 店员询问 介绍自己想吃什么 Cashier: Can I help you? A: I want some rice And what do you want to eat? B: I want some dumplings. Cashier: What do you want to drink? A: I want to drink some juice And you? B: Some juice for me, too. How much is it? Cashier: It’s thirty yuan. A: Here you are. Cashier: Thank you. Enjoy your meal! 仿写 Cashier: Can I help you? Daming: I want some dumplings. And what do you want to eat, Xiaoyong? Xiaoyong: I want some noodles. Cashier: What do you want to drink? Daming: I want a cola. And you, Xiaoyong? Xiaoyong: A cola for me, too. How much is it? Cashier: It's thirty yuan. Xiaoyong: Here you are. Cashier: Thank you. Enjoy your meal! 01 写作方法指引-示例 店员询问 介绍自己想吃什么 介绍价格 总体抒发感情 10 Today, I'm Lucy. I go to the new restaurant near our school with my friend Tom. I want to eat some noodles. They smell nice. I also want to drink some hot milk. Tom wants to eat a big chicken burger. He says it looks good. And he wants to drink cold lemon juice. The noodles are 15 yuan, the milk is 5 yuan. The chicken burger is 20 yuan and the lemon juice is 4 yuan. So we need to pay 44 yuan. We had a nice meal and we want to come back here again. 01 写作方法指引-示例 介绍人物、地点和事情 介绍想吃什么 介绍价格 总体抒发感情 11 02 基础知识精讲 PART.02 02 基础知识精讲-句型 开头：引入话题-介绍人物、地点和事情 Today, …come to the restaurant for a meal. Hi, my name is …. I go to the … restaurant …with my …. 介绍想吃什么喝什么 … wants to eat …. And … wants to drink …. … want to eat …. And … want to drink …. 类型1 13 02 基础知识精讲-句型 介绍价格 … is …yuan. … are …yuan. 总体抒发感情 … all look forward to having a good meal in the restaurant. … have a very nice meal. …like this new restaurant. … need to pay ______ yuan. 14 02 基础知识精讲-句型 店员询问 Cashier: Can I help you? Cashier: What do you want to eat? Cashier: What do you want to drink? Cashier: How much is it? Cashier: Thank you. Enjoy your meal! 类型2-对话 顾客点餐 A: I want some / a… I want to eat… I want to drink… 03 模拟写作提升 PART.03 前情提要： 小朋友来到餐厅聚餐，请参考下表，写一写每位小朋友想吃些什么、喝些什么。一共花了30元。 要求:语句通顺连贯，不少于40个单词。可适当发挥想象。 模拟写作提升1 Name To eat To drink Lingling a hamburger juice Xiaolan a hot dog a cola Xiaogang some bread milk 参考句型： Today, ______ come to the ______for a meal. ______ wants to eat a ______. And she wants to drink ______. ______ likes ______. ______ also wants to drink ______. ______ wants to eat ______. And ______ wants to drink ______. They need to pay ______ yuan. They all look forward to having a good meal in the restaurant. 参考词汇： restaurant; hamburger; juice; hot dogs; cola; bread; milk 18 Today, Lingling, Xiaolan and Xiaogang come to the restaurant for a meal. Lingling wants to eat a hamburger. And she wants to drink juice. Juice is her favorite drink. Xiaolan likes hot dogs. So she wants to eat a hot dog. She also wants to drink a cola. Xiaogang wants to eat some bread. And he wants to drink milk. Milk is good for his health. They need to pay 30 yuan. They all look forward to having a good meal in the restaurant. 范文1： 介绍人物、地点和事情 介绍想吃什么 介绍 价格 总体抒发感情 19 模拟写作提升2 请根据下列材料写篇对话: 大明和小勇去餐馆吃饭。大明吃水饺，小勇吃面条，他们每人一瓶牛奶。一共花了30元。 要求: ①结合参考问题; ②语句通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，标点正确，书写规范、清晰，无语法错误; ③不少于5个句子。 20 参考句型： Cashier: Can I help you? Daming: I want ________. And what do you want to ________, Xiaoyong? Xiaoyong: I want ________. Cashier: What do you want to ________? Daming: I want ________. And you, Xiaoyong? Xiaoyong: A ________ for me, too. How much is it? Cashier: It's ________ yuan. 参考词汇： dumplings; noodles; cola; thirty 21 In the restaurant Cashier: Can I help you? Daming: I want some dumplings. And what do you want to eat, Xiaoyong? Xiaoyong: I want some noodles. Cashier: What do you want to drink? Daming: I want a cola. And you, Xiaoyong? Xiaoyong: A cola for me, too. How much is it? Cashier: It's thirty yuan. Xiaoyong: Here you are. Cashier: Thank you. Enjoy your meal! 范文2： 店员询问 介绍自己想吃什么 介绍朋友吃什么 介绍自己想吃什么 介绍朋友吃什么 店员询问 介绍价格 总体抒发感情 22 04 真题写作练习 PART.03 假设你是Daming，学校附近新开了一家餐厅，你今天和朋友Sam来到这家餐厅吃午餐，请结合参考问题写一段话介绍你和Sam想吃什么、想喝什么、该付多少钱。 参考问题: 1.What do you want to eat /drink? 2. What does Sam want to eat/drink? 3. How much are they? 4. Do you have a nice meal? 要求: ①结合参考问题;②语句通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，标点正确，书写规范、清晰，无语法错误; ③不少于5个句子。 真题写作练习-海口市 参考句型： Hi, my name is ______. I go to the ______with my friend ______. I want to eat _______. I also want to drink _______. ______ wants to eat ______ and ______ wants to drink ______. _____is _____ yuan, _____ are _____, the _____ is _____ yuan. _____ is _____ yuan and _____ is _____ yuan. So we need to pay _____ yuan. We have a very nice meal. We like this new restaurant. 参考词汇： restaurant ; hamburger ; French fries; orange juice; cola 25 Hi, my name is Daming. I go to the new restaurant near my school with my friend Sam. I want to eat a hamburger and some French fries. I also want to drink a glass of orange juice. Sam wants to eat a pizza and he wants to drink a cup of cola. The hamburger is 15 yuan, the French fries are 10 yuan, the orange juice is 8 yuan. The pizza is 20 yuan and the cola is 6 yuan. So we need to pay 59 yuan. We have a very nice meal. We like this new restaurant. 范文3： 介绍人物、地点和事情 介绍自己想吃什么 介绍价格 介绍朋友吃什么 总体抒发感情 26 Thank you! $$