Unit1用三步法写你和你的好朋友（专项训练）-2024-2025学年六年级英语下册写作突破专项训练（人教PEP版）

Unit1用三步法写你和你的好朋友 话 1、 写作方法指引 教材引路 Zhang Peng: How tall are you? John: I'm 1.61 metres. Zhang Peng: Oh! I'm taller. 身高比较 John: You're older than me, too. John: How heavy are you, Jim? Jim: I'm 52 kilograms. John: You're heavier than me.体重比较 Wu Binbin: Size 7? That's so small. Mike: In China I wear size 40 shoes.鞋码比较 Wu Binbin: Oh! your feet are bigger than mine. My shoes are size 37. 01 写作方法指引 My friend 开头：介绍自己和好朋友的基本情况。 I'm...I have a good friend. His / Her name is... 中间：具体介绍你和好朋友之间的异同。(从年龄、身高、体重、爱好等方面进行比较) I'm / He's / She's...years old. /...is younger / older than... I'm / He's / She's...metres./...is shorter / taller than.. I'm / He's / She's...kilograms./ ...is thinner / heavier than... 结尾表达你对友谊的珍重之情。 We often play together, / Do you want to make a friend with...? / How happy we are ! 写作方法指引-示例写作方法指引-示例 My good friend （开头-引出话题）Hello! I'm Jack. I have a good friend. His name is John. He is 12 years old. I'm11 years old. He is one year older than me. He is 1.65 metres. I'm 1.62 metres. He is taller than me. He is 50 kilograms. I am 48 kilograms. He is heavier than me. We both like playing basketball. We often play basketball together.（具体描述） How happy we are!（结束语） 2、 基础知识精讲 02 基础知识精讲-句型 开头 介绍自己和好朋友的基本情况 I'm...I have a good friend. His/Her name is... 结尾表达你对友谊的珍重之情。 We often play together, / Do you want to make a friend with...? / How happy we are ! 具体描述： 年龄比较： I am ..years old. She is .. years old... older/younger than .. 身高比较： I am .. metres. She is..metres.. taller/shorter than.. 体重比较： I am .. kilograms. She is .. kilograms.. thinner/ stronger than .. 鞋码比较 ： My shoes are ...Her shoes are ... smaller/bigger than .. 外貌比较： younger…older…taller…shorter 描述身体部位特征： 形容词性物主代词/名词所有格+身体部位+be+形容词 三、模拟写作提升 模拟写作提升1 Bella和Lucy是好朋友。请根据以下表格内容用形容词的比较级写一篇小短文描述她们的外貌特征。 要求: 短文应包括给出的全部信息内容(可适当发挥)，条理清楚行文连贯，不少于50 词(开头已给出)。 参考句型： Bella and Lucy are _______. Bella is _____ years old and Lucy is _____ years old. Bella is _____ than Lucy. But Lucy is _____ than Bella. How _____ are they? Bella is _____ kilograms and Lucy is _____ kilograms. So, Lucy is _____ than Bella. Look! Bella's eyes are _____ than Lucy's, but Lucy's hair is _____ than Bella’s. They are good friends. 参考词汇： brother（兄弟）; sister（姐妹）;taller（更高的）; shorter（更矮的） stronger（更强壮的）;heavier（更重的） 范文1： Bella and Lucy Bella and Lucy are good friends. （开头引出话题）Bella is 11 years old and Lucy is 13 years old. Bella is younger than Lucy. But Lucy is taller than Bella. How heavy are they? Bella is 40 kilograms and Lucy is 45 kilograms. So, Lucy is heavier than Bella. Look! Bella's eyes are bigger than Lucy's, but Lucy's hair is longer than Bella’s. （具体描述）They are good friends.（结束语） 模拟写作提升2 前情提要： 下面是 Joe 和他的妹妹 Jane 的信息。根据表格，写一篇小作文,比较一下他们的年龄、身高、体重等。50个单词左右。 参考句型： Joe and Jane are __________. Joe is ___________. Jane is ___________. Joe is ___________older than ___________. Joe is ___________. Jane is ___________tall. Jane is ___________ than ___________. Joe is ___________. Jane is ___________. Joe is ___________than ___________. They often play together. 参考词汇： taller（更高的）; younger（更年轻的）; heavier（更重的）; eyes（眼睛，复数形式）; bigger（更大的）; hair（头发）;longer（更长的） 范文2： My friend Joe and Jane are brother and sister.（开头引出话题）Joe is 12 years old. Jane is 10 years old. Joe is 2 years older than his sister. Joe is 1.62 metres tall. Jane is 1.46 metres tall. Jane is shorter than her brother. Joe is 41kilograms. Jane is 33 kilograms. Joe is stronger and heavier than his sister.（具体描述）They often play together.（结束语） 四、真题写作练习-成都市成华区 我们都有好朋友，你的好朋友是谁?你俩的形体样貌有何特征?你俩相比，谁年龄更大?谁更高?谁更重?快来介绍一下吧! 要求: 条理清楚行文连贯，不少于50 词(开头已给出)。 My friend Hi, I'm Amy. I have a good friend.______________________ __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ 参考句型： Hi, I’m _____. I have a good friend. Her name is _____. She lives in _____. She is _____ years old. She is _____ years older than me. But I'm _____ m. She is only _____ m. I'm _____ centimetres taller than ____. She is _____ kilograms. I'm _____ kilograms. I'm _____ than ____. Her shoes are size _____ . And my shoes are size _____ , too. She has _____ hair. But I have _____ hair. This is my friend. I like my friend. 参考词汇： long; short; older; taller; heavier 范文3 My friend Hi, I'm Amy. I have a good friend. Her name is Lucy.（开头引出话题）She lives in Chengdu. She is 12 years old. She is 2 years older than me. But I'm 1.55m. She is only 1.45m. I'm 10 centimetres taller than her. She is 40 kilograms. I'm 41 kilograms. I'm heavier than her. Her shoes are size 37. And my shoes are size 37, too. She has long hair. But I have short hair. She likes playing the pipa. I like drawing pictures.（具体描述）This is my friend. I like my friend.（结束语） 6 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$