13 UNIT 2 Be sporty，be healthy Period 6 写作-【名师导航】2024-2025学年高中英语必修第二册同步讲义(译林版2020)

Period 6　 写作(Writing) 建议信 本单元要求写一封信鼓励他人参加锻炼，属于建议信，要给出一些解决问题的建议。此外，语言要得体，字里行间要体现出对对方的理解、支持和关心，给对方信心和力量。 [基本框架] 1．开头——回应对方的问题并交代写信目的 2．主体——提出针对性的解决办法并说明理由 3．结尾——鼓励、祝愿等 [常用表达] 1．I was (awfully) sorry to hear that...I used to have the same problem! 得知……我很遗憾。我以前也遇到过同样的问题。 2．I'm sorry to know that you are having trouble with/in doing...at the moment． 得知此刻你遇到……麻烦，我深感遗憾。 3．I quite understand how you feel now，but... 我特别能理解你现在的感受，但…… 4．It would be of great benefit to your health if you could... 如果你可以……的话，对你的健康会有很大的好处。 5．What calls for special attention is that... 需要特别注意的是…… 6．What's far more important is that... 更重要的是…… 7．Similarly，we should pay attention to... 同样，我们要注意…… 8．For one thing... for another... 一方面……另一方面…… 9．I hope you will find these suggestions helpful/useful． 我希望你觉得这些建议对你有所帮助/有用。 10．After all，nothing is impossible for a willing heart． 毕竟，心之所愿，无所不成。 11．I'm sure/convinced that you will make great progress in...if you... 我肯定/相信如果你……，你将会在……方面取得很大的进步。 假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Tom来信谈及身体变胖令他烦恼。请你给他回信，内容包括： 1．表示理解； 2．你的建议。 注意：1．词数80左右； 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 [审题构思] 1．确定体裁：应用文 2．确定人称：第二人称为主 3．确定时态：一般现在时和现在完成时 4．确定内容： ①回复问题并点明写信目的； ②建议一：均衡饮食； ③建议二：坚持锻炼； ④鼓励或祝福。 [遣词造句] 1．我完全理解你对体重增加的沮丧和你想解决这个问题的愿望。 I completely understand your frustration over weight gain and your desire to solve this problem． 2．保持均衡饮食是非常重要的。 It is of great importance to keep a balanced diet． 3．均衡饮食由各种水果、蔬菜和全谷物组成。 A balanced diet is made up of all kinds of fruit，vegetables and whole grains． 4．同时限制高糖和高脂肪食物的摄入。 At the same time the consumption of high-sugar and high-fat foods should be limited． 5．经常锻炼可以有效燃烧卡路里，提高健康水平，并显著促进你的整体健康。 Taking exercise regularly can effectively burn calories，improve fitness levels，and significantly contribute to your overall well-being． 6．务必记住，取得积极成果的关键在于你的巨大决心和不断的努力。 Do remember the key to getting positive outcomes lies in your great determination and constant efforts． 7．相信自己有能力做出惊人的积极改变！ Believe in your ability to make amazingly positive changes! [句式升级] 用非谓语动词结构将句2、句3和句4合并成一个句子。 It is of great importance to keep a balanced diet made up of all kinds of fruit，vegetables and whole grains，while limiting the consumption of high-sugar and high-fat foods． [连句成篇](注意使用适当的衔接过渡词语) ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ [参考范文] Dear Tom， I completely understand your frustration over weight gain and your desire to solve this problem． First of all，it is of great importance to keep a balanced diet made up of all kinds of fruit，vegetables and whole grains，while limiting the consumption of high-sugar and high-fat foods．Besides，taking exercise regularly can effectively burn calories，improve fitness levels，and significantly contribute to your overall well-being．In the end，do remember the key to getting positive outcomes lies in your great determination and constant efforts．So believe in your ability to make amazingly positive changes! Best wishes! Yours， Li Hua 动作场景　突发事件应变处理场景描写 [词块积累] 1．bear down on逼近 2．let go of放开；松开 3．hit/kick sb．in/on打/踢某人的(身体部位) 4．break into a run拔腿就跑 5．hit sb．with a loud crash砰的一声砸/击到某人 6．be bitten by the dog被狗咬伤了 7．throw/aim sth．at把……瞄准/对准 8．rush/dive/jump into...without pausing毫不犹豫地冲/跳进去 9．wrap sb．in one's arms 紧紧抱住某人 10．pull/drag sb．into/onto把某人拉进/上 [佳句积累] 1．He dashed along the platform and jumped on the train． 他沿着站台冲了过去，跳上了火车。 2．It started to rain so we dived into the nearest café． 天开始下雨了，所以我们钻进了最近的咖啡馆。 3．A book suddenly fell onto the floor and he bent down/over and picked it up． 突然一本书掉到地上，他弯下腰将它捡了起来。 4．The moment I saw the dog chasing after me，I broke into a run． 一看到那只狗正在追逐我，我拔腿就跑。 5．He stormed out of the room and crashed the door shut behind him． 他气冲冲地冲出房间，随手把门砰的一声关上。 6．She fought him desperately，kicking and biting． 她拼命地与他搏斗，又踢又咬。 7．She would scream，kick and lie on the floor drumming her heels． 她会尖叫，踢腿，躺在地板上敲着脚跟。 8．He held up his bicycle and threw it at the wolf，in the hope that the wolf would be frightened away． 他举起自行车朝狼扔去，希望能把狼吓跑。 9．Before it could realize what had happened，Paul had already opened the front door and instantly pulled Mac into the car． 它还没有意识到发生了什么，保罗已经打开了前门，立即把麦克拉进了车里。 10．Hardly had Mac stood up when the wolf arrived and was about to launch another attack． 麦克刚站起来，狼就来了，准备发动另一次袭击。 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写一个80词左右的段落，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Everyday Heroes One Saturday afternoon，in Texas，11-year-old TJ Smith had just jumped off the scooter(滑板车) as his neighbor Kim，aged 7，claimed her turn and her sister Julie，9，looked on．Kim stood on the scooter and paused to catch her breath．That was when the bearded man appeared．The kids didn't see where he came from，but they know exactly what happened next: Without saying a word，he picked Kim up off the scooter and calmly walked away． Kim cried for help．She began kicking and biting，trying to get free of the man's hands．“What are you doing？” Julie shouted．But the man quickly walked the length of the block and disappeared． TJ's first thought was to run after them．But what was a four-foot-tall，70-pound kid going to do to stop a grown man? “I wanted to help，but I couldn't do it myself，”he says．So he ran to his grown-up neighbors' home． Brad Ware and his wife were in their living room when their front door burst open． “Brad！” yelled TJ．“A man just picked up a little girl and took her into the block！” And just like that，TJ was gone，back on the street racing after his kidnapped little friend．“I ran back to where I saw him take her to see if they were still there，” says TJ．Ware and his wife jumped into their car and followed close behind． TJ ran to the end of the street and turned the corner．Suddenly he spotted the man a couple of blocks down，standing in front of an abandoned white house．He was pushing the frightened girl through a window．Just then，Ware and his wife pulled up．“Stay here，” Ware told TJ as he took off toward the house．With Ware now bearing down on him，the man let go of Kim and ran away，almost calmly．He was about to break into a run when Ware caught up with him． Alerted by Julie and other neighbors，the police and the victim's mother had arrived on the scene．__________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ [参考范文] Alerted by Julie and other neighbors，the police and the victim's mother had arrived on the scene．Kim ran into the safety of her mother's arms，safe and sound．The two cried and hugged．Meanwhile，officers arrested the man．There were a few heroes that day，but Ware insisted that the quick-thinking 11-year-old deserved most of the credit．“You know，he's the reason why we managed to find the girl before something terrible happened，” Ware told a local newspaper．That news came as no surprise to TJ's mother．“This is exactly his character，” says the mother．“His first thought is not of himself．It's always of others．” 课时分层作业(六) Ⅰ．阅读理解 A Chinese society，basically agricultural，has always laid great stress on understanding the pattern of nature and living in harmony with it．The world of nature was seen as the visible expression of the workings of a higher power through the interaction of the Chinese philosophy of yin and yang．As Chinese art developed，its purpose turned to the expression of human understanding of these forces，in the form of painting of landscapes，bamboo，birds and flowers． Particularly in early times，art also had social and moral functions．The earliest wall paintings referred to in ancient texts often described merciful emperors，officials，and their evil opposites as examples and warnings to the living．Human relationships have always been of great importance in China，and a common theme of figure painting is that of gentlemen enjoying staying together or of the depressing partings and infrequent reunions．Among the typical themes of traditional Chinese art，there is no place for war，violence or death．No theme would be accepted in traditional Chinese art that was not inspiring，noble，or refreshing to the spirit． In the broadest sense，therefore，all traditional Chinese art is symbolic，for everything that is painted reflects some aspects of what the painter is aware of．Bamboo suggests the spirit of the person，which can be bent by circumstance but never broken．The dragon is the wholly kind-hearted symbol of the emperor；the crane(鹤)symbolizes long life；and paired mandarin ducks symbolize wedded loyalty．Popular among the many symbols drawn from the plant world are the orchid(兰花)，a symbol of purity；the plum blossom(梅花)，which comes out even in the snow and stands for uncontrollable purity，in either a revolutionary political or a spiritual sense；and the pine tree，which may represent either survival in a fierce political environment or the unconquerable spirit of old age． 【语篇解读】　本文是一篇议论文。中国历来重视人与自然的和谐，衍生的阴阳哲学促进了中国传统艺术的形成和发展。本文主要介绍了中国传统艺术所表达的特色主题和象征意义。 1．What does the underlined word “that” in paragraph 2 refer to? A．The art．　　　 B．The painting． C．The theme． D．The relationship． C　[代词指代题。根据上下文可知，人物画的一个共同主题是喜欢待在一起的士大夫或者是令人沮丧的离别和难得的团聚。据此可知，代词that指代前文中的theme(主题)。] 2．Which of the following best describes the typical themes of traditional Chinese art? A．Violent and alarming． B．Material and instructive． C．True-to-life and educative． D．Positive and inspiring． D　[细节理解题。根据第二段中的“No theme would... to the spirit．”可知，在中国传统艺术中，只有鼓舞人心、崇高、令人精神焕然一新的主题才会被接受。据此可知，积极向上和鼓舞人心是中国传统艺术的典型主题。] 3．How does the author introduce traditional Chinese art in the last paragraph? A．By giving examples． B．By making comparisons． C．By analyzing causes． D．By following time order． A　[推理判断题。最后一段讲到竹子象征着人的精神，可以被环境弯曲，但绝不会被折断；龙是皇帝慈祥的象征；鹤象征长寿；成对的鸳鸯象征着对婚姻忠贞。此外，该段还列举了兰花、梅花、松树等的象征意义。据此可知，最后一段中作者通过举例来介绍中国传统艺术。] 4．Which is the best title for the passage? A．The Role of Traditional Chinese Art B．Agriculture and Traditional Chinese Art C．Significance and Value of Traditional Chinese Art D．Characteristic Themes and Symbols of Traditional Chinese Art D　[标题归纳题。通读全文，尤其是最后一段中的“In the broadest sense... what the painter is aware of．”可知，文章主要介绍了中国传统艺术所表达的特色主题和象征意义。D项“中国传统艺术的特色主题和象征”作为文章标题最合适。] B The widespread sedentary(久坐不动的) lifestyle has become a problem in America，fueling the rising obesity(肥胖) rate． Now a new study finds that being surrounded by active friends can help a person living a sedentary lifestyle get more exercise each day．Researchers found that people in social groups where exercise is valued are more likely to be more active themselves．Lonely people are more likely to live a sedentary lifestyle without another person around to give them a boost．The findings highlight the idea that the company a person keeps can be a boost to their overall health and direction in life． Dr Diana Thomas，a professor at a military school and study author，said that the idea for the research came from real-life experiences on campus．Her team had noticed a trend of people becoming more interested in fitness and other activities once arriving at the school．This is not usually the case at other schools and workplaces，where there is no significant impact on fitness．Thomas believed that this trend could be the result of in-group social conditioning，where people will take part in activities that others around them are doing． People whose data were gathered for the study were split into three groups based on their physical activity level—sedentary，moderately active and extremely active．Moderately active folks were the most important for drawing people who are sedentary to becoming active，and to sustaining that activity．Thomas explained that sedentary people would be unlikely to change their behavior when placed in a group of the extremely active，as it would seem unattainable． 【语篇解读】　本文是一篇说明文。文章介绍了一项研究发现，如果身边都是爱运动的朋友的话，久坐不动的人也会多参加体育锻炼的。 5．Why does the author mention the rising obesity rate in the first paragraph? A．To make comparisons． B．To introduce the topic． C．To support the argument． D．To provide examples． B　[推理判断题。作者在第二段介绍了一项研究发现，根据研究发现的内容可知，第一段提到美国肥胖率上升的问题旨在引出话题。故选B。] 6．What helps a sedentary person become active? A．Volunteering in social groups． B．Working in a caring company． C．Joining sports-loving friends． D．Giving a lonely neighbor a boost． C　[细节理解题。根据第二段中的“being surrounded by active friends can help a person living a sedentary lifestyle get more exercise”可知，如果久坐不动的人周围都是爱运动的人，他们也会多多锻炼，因此和爱运动的朋友在一起有助于久坐不动的人多运动。故选C。] 7．What might have caused the trend at the military school? A．Requirements from the school． B．People's natural addition to sports． C．Social interaction within a group． D．Competition against other schools． C　[细节理解题。根据第三段中的“Thomas believed that this trend could be the result of in-group social conditioning”并结合选项可知，军事学院的这种趋势是由群体内社交互动造成的。故选C。] 8．Why are extremely active people less influential according to Dr Thomas? A．They have no appeal for sedentary people． B．They are unwilling to involve sedentary people． C．They themselves often fail to sustain exercising． D．They seem like an example beyond sedentary people． D　[推理判断题。根据最后一段中的“sedentary people would be unlikely to change their behavior when placed in a group of the extremely active，as it would seem unattainable”可知，超级爱锻炼的人标准太高，久坐不动的人无法达到他们的锻炼强度，据此可以推断，他们可能不适合久坐不动的人效仿，所以对久坐不动的人影响不大。unattainable“无法达到的；无法获得的”。故选D。] Ⅱ．应用文写作 假定你是李华，你的外国笔友Jack来信向你询问如何保持健康。请给他回信，内容包括： 1．合理饮食； 2．加强锻炼； 3．保证睡眠。 注意：1．写作词数应为80左右； 2．请按如下格式作答。 Dear Jack， ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ I hope you will find these suggestions helpful． Yours， Li Hua [参考范文] Dear Jack， Learning that you want to know how to keep healthy，I'd like to give you some advice． First，keep a healthy and balanced diet．In order to get enough energy and nutrients，you need a variety of foods，such as fish and meat，especially vegetables and fruit．Besides，you should take physical exercise regularly．For example，you can play basketball or take a walk after school．What's more，having enough sleep is of great importance．Therefore，I advise that you have at least eight hours' sleep every day and not stay up too late．Only in this way can you keep fit． I hope you will find these suggestions helpful． Yours， Li Hua 10/11 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$