06 UNIT 1 Lights，camera，action Period 6 写作-【名师导航】2024-2025学年高中英语必修第二册同步讲义(译林版2020)

Period 6　 写作(Writing) 影评 本单元要求写一篇电影评论。电影评论，简称影评，是通过对一部电影的分析，表达自己的感受和看法的文章。 [基本框架] 1．开头——简介背景 2．主体——介绍电影情节内容等 3．结尾——发表作者的感受和评论 [常用表达] 1．The latest film，...，directed by ...，has been well received． 由……执导的最新电影……，受到了好评。 2．A classic movie which was called...made a deep impression on me． 一部叫……的经典电影给我留下了深刻的印象。 3．As far as I'm concerned，the film... 在我看来，这部电影…… 4．I strongly/highly recommend the film to you． 我强烈向你推荐这部电影。 5．This movie tells us that every difficulty can be overcome as long as you try your best． 这部电影告诉我们，只要你拼尽力，任何困难都能克服。 6．For some audience，it is one of the most moving films of the year． 对于一些观众来说，它是本年度最感人的电影之一。 7．It is a good movie that people of all ages can enjoy． 这是一部老少皆宜的好电影。 8．The amazing film will certainly attract people of all ages． 这部精彩的电影一定会吸引各个年龄段的人。 假设你是李华，你们学校本周组织观看了《流浪地球2》，请你就此给校英文报写一篇英文影评。 注意：1．词数80左右； 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：《流浪地球2》The Wandering Earth Ⅱ [审题构思] 1．确定体裁：影评 2．确定人称：第三人称 3．确定时态：一般现在时 4．确定内容： ①电影基本概述； ②对电影的感受和评价； ③推荐该电影。 [遣词造句] 1．《流浪地球2》由几位著名演员主演，是一部很棒的科幻电影！ The wandering Earth Ⅱ，starring several famous actors，is an awesome science fiction movie! 2．它有惊人的特效和一个伟大的故事，讲述的是人们如何在太空中生存下去。 This movie has amazing special effects and a great story and it is about how people keep on struggling to survive in space． 3．动作场面真的很酷，电影看起来很棒。 The action scenes are really cool，and the movie looks fantastic． 4．故事的某些部分可能很容易猜到。 Some parts of the story might be easy to guess． 5．它仍然是一部非常有感染力和令人兴奋的电影。 It's still a really emotional and exciting movie． 6．《流浪地球2》提供了惊险刺激的体验，让观众渴望看到更多。 The Wandering Earth Ⅱ offers a thrilling experience that leaves viewers eager for more． 7．如果你喜欢科幻电影，你一定要看这部电影！ If you like science fiction films，you should definitely watch this movie! [句式升级] 1．用定语从句把句2变成主从复合句。 This movie has amazing special effects and a great story which is about how people keep on struggling to survive in space． 2．将句4和句5合并为并列句。 Some parts of the story might be easy to guess，but it's still a really emotional and exciting movie． [连句成篇](注意使用适当的衔接过渡词语) ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ [参考范文] The wandering Earth Ⅱ，starring several famous actors，is an awesome science fiction movie! First of all，this movie has amazing special effects and a great story which is about how people keep on struggling to survive in space．Besides，the action scenes are really cool，and the movie looks fantastic．Some parts of the story might be easy to guess，but it's still a really emotional and exciting movie．Overall，The Wandering Earth Ⅱ offers a thrilling experience that leaves viewers eager for more．If you like science fiction films，you should definitely watch this movie! 情感描写　动作与神态 [词块积累] 1．hug sb．tightly 紧紧抱住某人 2．smile somewhat shyly 有点腼腆地微笑 3．reply softly轻声回答 4．look sb．in the eye 直视某人 5．bravely go up to sb．勇敢地走向某人 6．a most loving，tender hug一个充满爱意和柔情的拥抱 7．twist excitedly in one's arms在某人臂弯里激动地扭着身体 8．cup one's face in one's hands某人双手捧着某人的脸颊 9．give...a long，loving hug给……一个长久的爱的拥抱 10．never taking her little eyes off the wonderful sight 小眼睛一眨不眨地盯着眼前令人赞叹的景象 [佳句积累] 1．Mary's heart beat wildly with her legs trembling． 玛丽的心怦怦直跳，双腿颤抖。 2．Tom hugged him tightly，tears of gratitude welling up in his eyes． 汤姆紧紧地抱着他，眼里满是感激的泪水。 3．The little girl had a big smile on her face．/A big smile spread across the little girl's face． 那个小女孩儿脸上露出灿烂的笑容。 4．The young man went up to her bravely，handing her a bunch of red roses． 这个年轻人勇敢地走向她，给她献上一束红玫瑰。 5．Gently，he picked up the frightened boy and carried him to the safety． 他轻轻地抱起那个被惊吓的孩子，并把他抱到安全的地方。 6．What is unforgettable is that her eyes shine like diamonds and her lips keep smiling． 让人难以忘怀的是她的眼睛像钻石一样闪闪发光，嘴唇保持着微笑。 7．Mr．Smith received the long-expected invitation，and opened it excitedly with his trembling hands． 史密斯先生收到了期待已久的邀请函，激动地用颤抖的双手把它打开。 8．With forcefulness that burned right into my soul，he told me something that left me a different person． 他用一种直击我灵魂的有力口吻告诉了我一些事，使我完全变了个人。 9．Then the man stood up，and gazed into his oldest son's eyes while cupping his son's face in his hands． 然后男人站起来，凝视着他大儿子的眼睛，用手捧着他的脸。 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写一个80词左右的段落，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Decide to love While waiting to pick up a friend at the airport，I had one of those life-changing experiences．It happened only two feet away from me． Eager to find my friend among the passengers coming through the jet way，I noticed a man walking toward me carrying two light bags．He stopped right next to me to greet his family． First he waved to his son (maybe about six years old) as he laid down his bags．They gave each other a long，loving hug．As they separated enough to look in each other's face，I heard the father say，“It's so good to see you．I missed you so much！” His son smiled shyly，and replied softly，“Me too，Dad！” While this was happening，a baby girl(perhaps one or one-and-a-half) was twisting excitedly in her mother's arms，never once taking her little eyes off the wonderful sight of her returning father．The man said，“Hi，baby girl！” as he gently took the child from her mother．The little girl instantly relaxed and simply laid her head on his shoulder，satisfied． After several moments，he turned to his wife and declared，“I've saved the best for last！” and gave her the longest kiss I ever remember seeing．They stared at each other's eyes，smiling at one another for long． For an instant they reminded me of newly-married couples．However，I knew by the age of their kids that they couldn't possibly be．Full of admiration，I asked，“Wow! How long have you two been married？” “Twelve years，” he replied，without breaking his look from his lovely wife's face．“Well，then，how long have you been away？” I asked．“Two whole days！” “Two days？” I was surprised，thinking he'd been gone for at least several weeks．I knew my expression betrayed(背叛) me，so I turned away my eyes and said quietly，“I hope my marriage is still that passionate after so long！” The man suddenly stopped smiling and looked me straight in the eye．_______ ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ [参考范文] The man suddenly stopped smiling and looked me straight in the eye．Then he told me something that left me a different person．“Don't hope，friend...decide！” He flashed me his wonderful smile again，shook my hand and said，“God bless！” With that，he and his family turned and walked away together．I was still watching that man and his special family walk just out of sight when my friend came up to me and asked，“What are you looking at？” Without hesitation and with a curious sense of certainty，I replied softly，“My future！” 课时分层作业(三) Ⅰ．阅读理解 A We live in a town with three beaches．There are two parts less than 10 minutes' walk from home where neighbourhood children gather to play．However，what my children want to do after school is pick up a screen—any screen—and stare at it for hours．They are not alone．Today's children spend an average of four and a half hours a day looking at screens，split between watching television and using the Internet． In the past few years，an increasing number of people and organisations have begun coming up with plans to counter this trend．A couple of years ago film-maker David Bond realised that his children，then aged five and three，were attached to screens to the point where he was able to say “chocolate” into his three-year-old son's ear without getting a response．He realised that something needed to change，and，being a London media type，appointed himself “marketing director from Nature”．He documented his journey as he set about treating nature as a brand to be marketed to young people．The result was Project Wild Thing，a film which charts the birth of the Wild Network，a group of organisations with the common goal of getting children out into nature． “Just five more minutes outdoors can make a difference，” David Bond says．“There is a lot of really interesting evidence which seems to be suggesting that if children are inspired up to the age of seven，then being outdoors will be a habit for life．” His own children have got into the habit of playing outside now: “We just send them out into the garden and tell them not to come back in for a while．” Summer is upon us．There is an amazing world out there，and it needs our children as much as they need it．Let us get them out and let them play． 【语篇解读】　本文是一篇记叙文。为了让孩子们远离屏幕，电影制作人David Bond拍摄自己的旅行，并将自然当作一个品牌，推销给孩子们。 1．What is the problem with the author's children? A．They often annoy the neighbours． B．They are tired of doing their homework． C．They have no friends to play with． D．They stay in front of screens for too long． D　[细节理解题。根据第一段中的“However，what my children want to do after school is pick up a screen—any screen—and stare at it for hours．(然而，我的孩子们放学后想做的是拿起一个屏幕——任何屏幕——盯着它看几个小时)”可知，作者的孩子一放学后就想拿起屏幕，他们在屏幕前待的时间太长了，这是一个问题。故选D项。] 2．How did David Bond advocate his idea? A．By making a documentary film． B．By organizing outdoor activities． C．By advertising in London media． D．By creating a network of friends． A　[细节理解题。根据第二段中的“He documented his journey as he set about treating nature as a brand to be marketed to young people．(他记录了他的旅程，他开始把大自然当作一个品牌，让年轻人看到)”可知，David Bond通过拍一个纪录片宣传他的想法。故选A项。] 3．Which of the following can replace the underlined word “charts” in paragraph 2? A．records　　　　　 B．predicts C．delays D．confirms A　[词义猜测题。根据画线词所在句“a film which charts the birth of the Wild Network，a group of organisations with the common goal of getting children out into nature(一部电影charts Wild Network的诞生，Wild Network这个组织的共同目标是让孩子们走进大自然)，由“a film”可知，本句主语是一部电影，下文“the birth of the Wild Network”解释了这部电影的主旨。由此推知，画线词charts意为“记录，描绘”，与“records”意思一致。故选A项。] 4．What can be a suitable title for the text? A．Let Children Have Fun B．Young Children Need More Free Time C．Market Nature to Children D．David Bond: A Role Model for Children C　[标题归纳题。根据第二段中的“He documented his journey as he set about treating nature as a brand to be marketed to young people．The result was Project Wild Thing，a film which charts the birth of the Wild Network，a group of organisations with the common goal of getting children out into nature．(他把自己的旅行记录下来，开始把自然当作一个品牌，推销给年轻人。其结果是Project Wild Thing，一部记录了Wild Network诞生的电影，Wild Network是以让孩子们接触大自然为共同目标的团体组织)”可推知，本文主要讲述了电影制作人David Bond为了让孩子们远离屏幕，拍摄自己的旅行，并将自然当作一个品牌，推销给孩子们，这是本文的中心内容。由此可知，C项“Market Nature to Children(把自然推销给孩子们)”适合作为本文标题。故选C项。] B The Way We Do Things Round Here Some years ago，I was hired by an American bank．I received a letter from head of the Personnel Department that started，“Dear John，I am quite pleased that you have decided to join us．” That “quite” saddened me．I thought he was saying “we're kind of pleased you decided to join us although I wish we had hired someone else．” Then I discovered that in American English “quite” sometimes means “very”，while in British English it means “fairly”． So the first lesson about working in other countries is to learn the language and by that I don't just mean the words people speak．It is body language，dress，manners，ideas and so on．The way people do things highlights many of the differences we see between cultures(文化)． Some of these differences may be only on the surface－dress，food and hours of work－while others may be deeper and take longer to deal with．Mostly，it is just a question of getting used to the differences and accepting them，like the climate(气候)，while getting on with business． Some of the differences may be an improvement．People are more polite；the service is better；you ask for something to be done and it happens without having to ask again． However，other differences can be troubling，like punctuality(准时)．If you invite people to a party at 7 o'clock，your guests will consider it polite to turn up exactly on time in Germany，five minutes early in the American Midwest，an hour early in Japan，15 minutes afterwards in the UK，up to an hour afterwards in Italy and sometime in the evening in Greece．I prefer not to use the word “late” because there is nothing wrong with the times people arrive．It is simply the accepted thing to do in their own country． 【语篇解读】　本文是一篇说明文。作者通过自己的亲身经历，说明了一些国家在文化、语言方面的差异。 5．The author was unhappy as mentioned in paragraph 1 because he thought ______． A．the American bank didn't think much of him B．the American bank might hire another person C．it's difficult to get used to American culture D．it's easy to misunderstand Americans A　[细节理解题。根据第一段中“That ‘quite’ saddened me．I thought he was saying ‘we're kind of pleased you decided to join us although I wish we had hired someone else．’ Then I discovered that in American English ‘quite’ sometimes means ‘very’，while in British English it means ‘fairly’．(我相当的(quite)高兴你决定加入我们(银行)。他用的这个‘相当的’字眼让我感到难过。我觉得他好像在说：‘我们有些高兴你决定加入我们，虽然我的希望是我们雇用了另外一个人。’后来我发现，在美式英文里‘相当’的意思是‘非常’，而在英式英文中，‘相当’只是说‘还可以’。)”可知，作者对于“quite”一词的理解偏差导致了作者心情不愉快。因为作者认为这家美国银行并不器重他。故选 A。] 6．The word “highlights” in paragraph 2 probably means ______． A．encourages B．helps to narrow C．increases D．draws attention to D　[词义猜测题。根据第二段中“So the first lesson about working in other countries is to learn the language and by that I don't just mean the words people speak．It is body language，dress，manners，ideas and so on．(所以我对在别的国家工作所学到的第一课就是语言。我的意思不只是别人所说的话。而是要注意人的肢体语言、衣着、态度以及观念等等)”可知，作者认为人们做事的方式强调了我们在不同文化之间看到的许多差异。highlight “强调”。故选 D。] 7．According to the author，what should we do with most cultural differences? A．Ask the native people for help． B．Understand and accept them． C．Do things in our own way． D．Do in-depth research． B　[细节理解题。根据第三段信息句 “Mostly，it is just a question of getting used to the differences and accepting them，like the climate，while getting on with business．”可知，适应文化差异就像在外出差适应当地的气候一样，所以要学会适应和接受。故本题选 B。] 8．When invited to a party，the people who are usually punctual are ______． A．Italians B．Germans C．Greeks D．the British B　[细节理解题。由第五段信息句 “If you invite people to a party at 7 o'clock，your guests will consider it polite to turn up exactly on time in Germany(在德国，如果你邀请别人7点参加聚会，你的客人会认为准时到场是礼貌的)”可知，德国人是准时的人。故选 B。] Ⅱ．应用文写作 假如你是李华，下周末是学校英语文化节。你准备制作一张电影海报介绍一部你最喜欢的电影，内容包括： 1．电影简要介绍(年代、主演等)； 2．从中学到的道理。 注意：1．词数80左右； 2．可适当添加细节，以使行文连贯。 My Favorite Film ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ [参考范文] My Favorite Film My favorite film is Forrest Gump，one of the most inspirational films that leave a deep impression on me．This is an American film made in 1994．Tom Hanks stars in the film．Forrest Gump，the main character，was unfortunately born with an IQ of 75，but he has a wonderful life．Not only is he a football star，but he is also a war-hero and later a millionaire．He wins respect，wealth and money． The lesson I learn from it is that if we do what we should do well，life will give us a good gift． 2/11 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$