Unit 1 Saving the Earth Writing 主题写作 （分层练习）英语牛津上海版九年级下册

Unit 1 Saving the Earth Writing 主题写作 夯实基础 1．近期日本东京福岛核污染排海作业引发了全球讨论，世界人民再次关注到海洋生态问题。你们学校的报刊就这一话题刊登了一些图片，向同学们就保护海洋环境这一问题征稿，请结合图片的内容和写作要点投稿。 写作要点：1.海洋污染的危害（至少两点）； 2. 解决措施（至少两点）； 3. 你的感受和期望。 写作要求： 1.内容积极向上，包含题目所有要点信息，可适当发挥以使行文流畅。 2. 结构完整，语句流畅，条理清晰，语法正确，表达规范，书写工整。 3. 不得出现题目以外的人名、地名、校名及其它透露个人信息的名字。 4. 词数80左右（短文首句已给出，不计入总词数）。 参考词汇： release(释放)  nuclear-contaminated wastewater(核污染废水)  marine life(海洋生物)  human(人类)  ocean (海洋)   destroy(破坏) Recently, Japan released nuclear-contaminated wastewater. By doing so, the sea water will be polluted. The situation of the sea is more and more difficult. ________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________   2．青山如黛。绿水盈盈。从万里长江到九曲黄河，从东北平原到热带雨林，选择源于保护生态环境的初心，行动来自对美好家园的热爱。作为中学生，请你写一篇短文，谈谈你对环保的认识以及你的做法。 提示：做法：列举至少生活中三件有关环保的小事； 要求： 1. 适当增加细节，语句通顺，语意连贯； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、班级及校名； 3. 80-100词 。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 提升能力 3．保护环境，人人有责。从你我做起，从身边做起，从点滴做起，让我们为保护环境做出力所能及的贡献。请以“Protect the environment”为主题，写一篇英语短文，可参考所给信息适当增加内容。 提示信息：throw rubbish, ride bike/walk, save water/electricity, clean up, reuse old things 写作要求： 1. 语句通顺，逻辑清晰，书写规范。 2. 词数60—80左右。 3. 文中不能出现真实姓名和校名等信息。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4. 从2008年6月1日起，国家将禁止商家免费提供塑料袋，掀起全国“拒塑”的环保运动。假如你是李华，准备以“What Can We Do for the Environment”  为题，写一篇保护环境的英语演讲稿。 内容包含：1.在购物时用布袋子替代塑料袋；  2.尽可能地再利用使用过的课本； 3.离开教室应关灯； 4.最好走路或骑自行车上学；   5.简述理由：保护环境，减少污染，节约能源等 注意：1.词数：80词左右。开头和结尾已经为你写好，不计入总词数； 2.可根据要点适当增加细节，使行文连贯；  3.文章中不能出现真实姓名和校名，否则以零分处理。 3.参考词汇：布袋子cloth bag塑料袋plastic bag保护protect能源energy污染pollution课本textbook What Can We Do for the Environment Hello, everyone. I’m Li Hua. It’s nice to speak about what we can do for the environment,and I think each of us can do a little bit to help with this problem.________________________________  In fact, even the simplest everyday activities can make a real difference to the environment. I believe we can make the world a better place to live in. Thank you for your listening! 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！2 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ Unit 1 Saving the Earth Writing 主题写作 夯实基础 1．近期日本东京福岛核污染排海作业引发了全球讨论，世界人民再次关注到海洋生态问题。你们学校的报刊就这一话题刊登了一些图片，向同学们就保护海洋环境这一问题征稿，请结合图片的内容和写作要点投稿。 写作要点：1.海洋污染的危害（至少两点）； 2. 解决措施（至少两点）； 3. 你的感受和期望。 写作要求： 1.内容积极向上，包含题目所有要点信息，可适当发挥以使行文流畅。 2. 结构完整，语句流畅，条理清晰，语法正确，表达规范，书写工整。 3. 不得出现题目以外的人名、地名、校名及其它透露个人信息的名字。 4. 词数80左右（短文首句已给出，不计入总词数）。 参考词汇： release(释放)  nuclear-contaminated wastewater(核污染废水)  marine life(海洋生物)  human(人类)  ocean (海洋)   destroy(破坏) Recently, Japan released nuclear-contaminated wastewater. By doing so, the sea water will be polluted. The situation of the sea is more and more difficult. ________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________   【答案】例文 Recently, Japan released nuclear-contaminated wastewater. By doing so, the sea water will be polluted. The situation of the sea is more and more difficult. Firstly, marine pollution is causing significant harm to marine life. The wastewater contains toxic chemicals that are bad for marine life. Secondly, marine pollution is also affecting human health, because some people may eat the contaminated seafood. To solve the problems, we need to take action. The government needs to make strict laws and regulations to limit the release of wastewater. Besides, people should raise the awareness of protecting the ocean. The ocean environment is closely related to us, so we should try our best to protect it. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，为说明文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息，需做适当发挥，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍海洋污染的危害； 第二步，介绍解决污染的措施； 第三步，表达感受和期望大家保护海洋环境。 [亮点词汇] ①marine pollution海洋污染 ②cause harm to对……造成伤害 ③take action采取行动 ④raise the awareness of 增强……的意识 [高分句型] ①The wastewater contains toxic chemicals that are bad for marine life.（that引导的定语从句） ②Secondly, marine pollution is also affecting human health, because some people may eat the contaminated seafood.（because引导的原因状语从句） 2．青山如黛。绿水盈盈。从万里长江到九曲黄河，从东北平原到热带雨林，选择源于保护生态环境的初心，行动来自对美好家园的热爱。作为中学生，请你写一篇短文，谈谈你对环保的认识以及你的做法。 提示：做法：列举至少生活中三件有关环保的小事； 要求： 1. 适当增加细节，语句通顺，语意连贯； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、班级及校名； 3. 80-100词 。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 As we know, we have only one Earth. Everyone can make a difference to the environment. So I always go to school by bike. Protecting the environment begins with small things. We can save electricity by turning off the lights when we leave a room. We can reuse our own bags instead of buying plastic bags from supermarkets. We can choose to ride a bike, take a bus or walk to school, but not by taxi or car. It is also important for us to remind ourselves to throw the rubbish in the dustbin. All these small things could add up and become big things that could improve the environment. If we can keep them a habit in our daily life, the earth will become a safer planet for us to live on. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ② 时态：一般现在时； ③ 提示：考生应讲述自己对环保的认识和自己的做法，以及如何环保。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出环保主题。 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“节约用电、重复使用袋子、绿色出行、垃圾处理等”几个方面重点介绍如何保护环境。 第三步，倡导大家在日常生活中养成环保习惯。 [亮点词汇] ① make a difference to 对……产生影响 ② save electricity 节约用电 ③ begins with 开始于…… ④ turning off the lights 关灯 ⑤ instead of 而不是 ⑥ remind ourselves to... 提醒我们自己…… ⑦ add up 积少成多 [高分句型] ① Protecting the environment begins with small things.（动词ing形式作主语） ② We can save electricity by turning off the lights when we leave a room.（when引导时间状语从句） ③ It is also important for us to remind ourselves to throw the rubbish in the dustbin.（it作形式主语，动词不定式作真正的主语） ④ If we can keep them a habit in our daily life, the earth will become a safer planet for us to live on.（if引导条件状语从句） 提升能力 3．保护环境，人人有责。从你我做起，从身边做起，从点滴做起，让我们为保护环境做出力所能及的贡献。请以“Protect the environment”为主题，写一篇英语短文，可参考所给信息适当增加内容。 提示信息：throw rubbish, ride bike/walk, save water/electricity, clean up, reuse old things 写作要求： 1. 语句通顺，逻辑清晰，书写规范。 2. 词数60—80左右。 3. 文中不能出现真实姓名和校名等信息。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Protecting the environment begins with small things. We can save electricity by turning off the lights when we leave a room. We can reuse our own bags over and over again instead of buying plastic bags from supermarkets. We can choose to ride a bike, take a bus or walk to school, but not by taxi or car. It is also important for us to remind ourselves to throw the rubbish in the dustbin. All these small things could add up and become big things that could improve the environment. Our everyday actions can make a difference and lead to a better future. Let’s take action now! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：题目要求以“Protect the environment”为主题，写短文谈谈如何保护环境。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出文章主题； 第二步，介绍如何保护环境； 第三步，倡导大家行动起来。 [亮点词汇] ①begin with 开始于 ②turn off 关掉 ③remind sb. to do sth. 提醒某人做某事 ④make a difference 产生影响 ⑤take action 采取行动 [高分句型] ①We can save electricity by turning off the lights when we leave a room.（when引导时间状语从句） ②It is also important for us to remind ourselves to throw the rubbish in the dustbin.（it固定句式） 4. 从2008年6月1日起，国家将禁止商家免费提供塑料袋，掀起全国“拒塑”的环保运动。假如你是李华，准备以“What Can We Do for the Environment”  为题，写一篇保护环境的英语演讲稿。 内容包含：1.在购物时用布袋子替代塑料袋；  2.尽可能地再利用使用过的课本； 3.离开教室应关灯； 4.最好走路或骑自行车上学；   5.简述理由：保护环境，减少污染，节约能源等 注意：1.词数：80词左右。开头和结尾已经为你写好，不计入总词数； 2.可根据要点适当增加细节，使行文连贯；  3.文章中不能出现真实姓名和校名，否则以零分处理。 3.参考词汇：布袋子cloth bag塑料袋plastic bag保护protect能源energy污染pollution课本textbook What Can We Do for the Environment Hello, everyone. I’m Li Hua. It’s nice to speak about what we can do for the environment,and I think each of us can do a little bit to help with this problem.________________________________  In fact, even the simplest everyday activities can make a real difference to the environment. I believe we can make the world a better place to live in. Thank you for your listening! 【范文】 What Can We Do for the Environment Hello, everyone. I’m Li Hua. It’s nice to speak about what we can do for the environment, and I think each of us can do a little bit to help with this problem. 1.在购物时用布袋子替代塑料袋The first thing we can do is to use cloth bags in stead of plastic bags when we go shopping. 简述理由It helps to protect the environment. 2.尽可能地再利用使用过的课本；The second thing we can do is to reuse the old textbooks as possible as we can. 3.离开教室应关灯We should also never forget to turn off the lights when we leave the classrooms in order to .简述理由save energy. What’s more, 4.最好走路或骑自行车上学it would be better if we walk or ride a bike to school. We should try our best 简述理由reduce pollution and waste. 自己感想In fact, even the simplest everyday activities can make a real difference to the environment. I believe we can make the world a better place to live in.    Thank you for your listening! 【Sentences& phrases】 1.in stead of 2.It helps to protect the environment. 3.reuse the old textbooks as possible as we can 4.turn off the lights 5.in order to save energy. 6.What’s more 7.reduce pollution and waste 8.Even the simplest everyday activities can make a real difference to the environment 9.I believe we can make the world a better place to live in. 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！2 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$