Unit 6 Writing 课件 2024-2025学年牛津上海版英语八年级上册

8AUnit 6 Writing Teacher: Date:2024 12.4 ABC Nan Hui No 2 Middle School Holiday on Holiday Island Plan Pre-writing Analyse the introduction Next month,35 students from Greenwood School will go camping on Holiday Island.There are 20 girls and 15 boys.The teacher told Rita and May to arrange a programme of activities for the students.They also wrote an article about the camp for the school newspaper. Writing Plan Camp Text Type Topic Tense Simple future When What Where Background introduction Who What are they going to do to make a popular programme? Pre-writing Think ,Choose and Arrange Study the list of answers and tick(√) the six activities that are the most popular. 1. Having a barbecue 2. Swimming 3. Sailing 4. Playing volleyball 5. Having a quiz 6. Cycling Top 6 Arrange the activities for a 2-day schedule. Cycling Swimming Playing volleyball Having a quiz Having a barbecue Sailing Arrange the activities for a 2-day schedule. Cycling Swimming Having a quiz Playing volleyball Having a barbecue Sailing Arrange the activities in a proper way. What are they going to do to make a popular programme? Pre-writing Think and Answer Choose the popular activities Arrange the activities properly Pre-writing Complete the plan Pre-writing Complete the plan Holiday on Holiday Island Next month 35 lucky Greenwood students (1)_two whole days on the beautiful Holiday Island. They(2)_at the island late on Monday,25 July. Early on Tuesday, they(3)_their activities. On Tuesday morning,they(4)_.In the afternoon,they(5)_. In the evening,they(6)_. On Wednesday morning,they(7)_. In the afternoon,they (8)_. In the evening,they (9)_. Everyone(10)_home on Thursday,28 July.The ferry(11)_Holiday Island at 9a.m. It(12)_back in Shanghai at noon. We are sure that all the students (13)_themselves. will spend will arrive will begin will go cycling will go swimming will have a quiz will play volleyball will go sailing will have a barbecue will return will leave will be will enjoy Pre-writing Analyse the structure Hamburger writing Beginning Body Ending Next month 35 lucky Greenwood students will spend two whole days on the beautiful Holiday Island. They will arrive at the island late on Monday,25 July. Early on Tuesday, they will begin their activities. On Tuesday morning,they will go cycling.In the afternoon,they will go swimming.In the evening,they will have a quiz. On Wednesday morning,they will play volleyball.In the afternoon,they will go sailing.In the evening,they will have a barbecue. Everyone will return home on Thursday,28 July.The ferry will leave Holiday Island at 9a.m. It will be back in Shanghai at noon. We are sure that all the students will enjoy themselves. Holiday on Holiday Island Next month 35 lucky Greenwood students will spend two whole days on the beautiful Holiday Island. They will arrive at the island late on Monday,25 July. Early on Tuesday, they will begin their activities. On Tuesday morning,they will go cycling.In the afternoon,they will go swimming.In the evening,they will have a quiz. On Wednesday morning,they will play volleyball.In the afternoon,they will go sailing.In the evening,they will have a barbecue. Everyone will return home on Thursday,28 July.The ferry will leave Holiday Island at 9a.m. It will be back in Shanghai at noon. We are sure that all the students will enjoy themselves. Beginning Body Ending Introduction to the event Arrangement of the activities Expectations to the event Introduction to the event Expectations to the event Arrangement of the activities Next month 35 lucky Greenwood students will spend two whole days on the beautiful Holiday Island. They will arrive at the island late on Monday,25 July. Early on Tuesday, they will begin their activities. On Tuesday morning,they will go cycling.In the afternoon,they will go swimming.In the evening,they will have a quiz. On Wednesday morning,they will play volleyball.In the afternoon,they will go sailing.In the evening,they will have a barbecue. Everyone will return home on Thursday,28 July.The ferry will leave Holiday Island at 9a.m. It will be back in Shanghai at noon. We are sure that all the students will enjoy themselves. Pre-writing Compare and Analyse Beginning Body Ending Holiday on Holiday Island Next month 35 lucky Greenwood students will spend two whole days on the beautiful Holiday Island. They will arrive at the island late on Monday,25 July. Early on Tuesday, they will begin their activities. On Tuesday morning,they will go cycling.In the afternoon,they will go swimming.In the evening,they will have a quiz. On Wednesday morning,they will play volleyball.In the afternoon,they will go sailing.In the evening,they will have a barbecue. Everyone will return home on Thursday,28 July.The ferry will leave Holiday Island at 9a.m. It will be back in Shanghai at noon. We are sure that all the students will enjoy themselves. Pre-writing Compare and Analyse Organize the plan in the clear structure with corresponding(相应的) content. before the camp during the camp after the camp in the time order Arrange the activities properly and clearly in the time order. Pre-writing Think and Analyse Next month 35 lucky Greenwood students will spend two whole days on the beautiful Holiday Island. They will arrive at the island late on Monday,25 July. Early on Tuesday, they will begin their activities. We are sure that all the students will enjoy themselves. Everyone will return home on Thursday,28 July.The ferry will leave Holiday Island at 9 a.m. It will be back in Shanghai at noon. On Tuesday morning,they will go cycling. … On Wednesday morning,they will play volleyball. Who When Where What Why How exact time Expectations What activities to do Carefully consider how to make the plan all-sided(全面的) and exact. exact place On Tuesday morning,they will go cycling around the Island. Pre-writing Review and summarize Introduction to the event:when where who what why how Arrangement of activities properly, clearly(exact time and place) simple future tense in the time order Expectations,feelings,etc Topic A plan Beginning Body Ending Checklist Did you organize your plan in the clear structure with corresponding(相应的) contents? Did you carefully consider how to make the plan all-sided(全面的)and exact? Did you arrange the activities properly and clearly in the time order? Did you use the simple future tense correctly? While-writing Write a new plan Writing task 14th birthday celebration Topic Background introduction … To help students better realize their growth and responsibility and to leave valuable memory, Greenwood School will hold the 14th birthday celebration for Grade 8 students in Sheshan on December 31. They’ll go there by bus. Post-writing Share Let’s share your writing in class! What do you think of the title? Pre-writing Think and Analyse Holiday on Holiday Island Related? Concise? Attractive? The title should be related,concise and attractive. Homework 1. Work in pairs and evaluate each other’s writing based on the checklist. 2. Revise the writing according to the comments. Thank you! ABC ENGLISH LESSON $$