“同题异构”提升应用文写作训练的效率之专题02-1(话题:名人、名言)“同题异选”-2025届新高考英语二轮复习

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“同题异构”提升应用文写作训练的效率之专题 02-1(话题:名人、名言)“同题异选” 所谓“同题异选”是指试题本身就有允许考生选择的话题(一定范围内<选择范围有大有小>的多选或二选一),具体写作时不同的人会对话题有不同的选择,且有不同的构思,因而答案也是多种多样的。 一、推介名人 高考英语第一节写作就“推介名人”的命题方式一般有两种:一种是给出指定的人物及其文字简介,并提出相应的要求让考生写作;另一种不指定具体人物,允许考生在试题所设定的框架内自由选择一位进行写作。比较而言,前者的写作相对容易,而后者的写作难度则相当大。本专题所涉及的内容为后者的写作。 当然,“名人”选择的范围绝对不仅仅局限于“历史人物”(可选范围比较开放),还包括我们身边令人敬佩的人物(可选范围更加开放)。写好此类短文考生首先需要解决以下三个难点:一是“人物”的选择:选择恰当的人物加以介绍(考生本人要对此人物的大致情况十分了解),确保有事可写,有感可发;二是写作的构思:推介人物的写作总体来说属于夹叙夹议文的范畴,但是短文里也有说明。“推介人物”写作三段式构思:①点明推介人物及其概况(要准确、精炼);②叙述人物的具体情况(具体事迹、具体贡献等等);③对人物作出评价或探讨他/她的精神品质、人生态度、先进事迹、杰出成就等给我们带来的启示或影响;三是语言的表达:使用恰当的逻辑词串起对人物的描述,使其言简意赅,同时注意高级词汇的灵活运用。其次,考生在高考复习中需要注重有关“推介名人”方面素材的积累:一是有关“名人”(出身背景、学术成就、文化贡献、思想理念等)素材的积累;二是写作常用句式的积累(为方便起见,我们将其分成两组列出,其实两组之间有些句子是可以通用的)。 第一组:推介著名人物 1. ..., a famous/well-known historical figure in Chinese traditional culture, was born in ... ……生于……,是中国传统文化中著名的历史人物。 2. He/She was one of the scientists who made great contributions to society. 他/她是对社会做出巨大贡献的科学家之一。 3. ..., who was born in ... in ..., is a simple but great man....,...年出生于...,是一个朴实而伟大的人。 4. He/She is considered to be one of the most influential figures in history due to ....因为……,他/她被认为是历史上最具影响力的人物之一。 5. ... was a master of the art of literature, and his/her literary works were highly praised by his contemporaries. ……是文学艺术大师,他/她的文学作品被同时代的人称颂。 6. In distinguished Chinese history, many people have made great contributions to the development of our country, among whom ... stands out. He/She is one of the pioneers of ...在耀眼的中国历史上,许多人为我国的发展做出了巨大贡献,其中……的贡献十分突出。他/她是……的先驱者之一。 7. ... was not only a famous patriotic poet in ... history, but also a pioneer of romanticism in ... classical literature. ……不仅是……历史上著名的爱国诗人,还是……浪漫主义古典文学的先驱。 8. ... is a great modern Chinese writer, thinker and revolutionary.……是中国现代伟大的作家、思想家和革命家。 9. She/He has been burying herself/himself in medical study, which enables her/him to win the Nobel Prize. 一直埋头于医学研究,这使得她/他获得诺贝尔奖。 10. Living in a golden age of ..., he was best known for his rich imagination and striking imagery in his poetry as well as his great love for wine.……生活在……的黄金时代。他以丰富的想象力和诗歌中引人注目的意象以及对酒的热爱而闻名。 11. The person I admire most is ..., a famous scientist known as “the Father of ...”. 我最钦佩的人是……,一位被称为“中国……之父”的著名科学家。 12. There are many respectable people around us. Among them, the person I respect most is ..., who has become a household name for his great contributions to ....我们周围有很多受人尊敬的人。其中,我最尊敬的人是……,他因对……作出的巨大贡献而家喻户晓。 13. ... emphasized the importance of moral values, respect for elders, and social harmony. ……强调道德价值观、尊重长辈和社会和谐的重要性。 14. I admire ... the most among all the scientists. He is one of the most outstanding scientists in the 20th century and is regarded as “the father of ...”.在所有科学家中,我最钦佩……。他是20世纪最杰出的科学家之一,被誉为“现代……之父”。 15. His/Her impact on history cannot be overstated, as his/her ideas/discoveries/inventions/leadership changed the course of human history.他/她对历史的影响不容小觑,因为他/她的想法/发现/发明/领导力改变了人类历史的进程。 16. He imparted his wisdom to countless people and leaving a profound impact on Chinese society. 他将他的智慧传授给无数的人,对中国社会产生了深远的影响。 17. Despite facing numerous obstacles and challenges, he/she persevered/persisted/overcame and left a lasting impact on history through his/her accomplishments/achievements/ideas.尽管面临许多障碍和挑战,他/她坚持不懈/克服了困难,通过他/她的成就/贡献/想法在历史上留下了深刻的影响。 18. He/She is known for having accomplished/achieved major breakthroughs/discoveries/inventions in the field of field of expertise.他/她以在专业领域取得的重大突破/发现/发明而闻名。 19. He/She played a major role in event/movement by leading/fighting for/advocating for ...他/她通过领导/为……而战/倡导在事件/运动中发挥了重要作用。 20. He/She is remembered for contributing/pioneering in field of expertise and advancing/revolutionizing field of expertise.他/她因在专业领域做出贡献/开创并推进/革命化了专业领域而被人们铭记。 21. He/She is credited with creating/developing concept/technology/idea which revolutionized/transformed field of expertise/society.他/她被认为是创造/开发概念/技术/思想的人,这革命化/改变了专业领域/社会。 22. He/She left a lasting impact on field of expertise/society by introducing/developing/promoting idea/technology /movement, which continues to influence field of expertise/society today.他/她通过引入/开发/推广思想/技术/运动在专业领域/社会留下了深远的影响,直到今天仍在影响着专业领域/社会。 23. He/She serves as a source of inspiration for future generations, reminding us of what is possible and motivating us to achieve greatness.他/她是未来一代的灵感来源,他们提醒我们什么是可能的,并激励我们取得伟大的成就。 24. Studying the lives and accomplishments of ... provides valuable insights into the past, increasing our understanding of how events unfolded and how people lived and thought in earlier times.研究……的生平和成就可以为我们提供宝贵的历史洞见,增加我们对过去的理解,了解先人们如何生活和思考。 25. He/She can serve as role models, educating us on the importance of hard work, perseverance, and dedication in achieving success.他/她可以作为榜样,教育我们努力工作、毅力和奉献精神在取得成功中的重要性。。 26. By learning about the lives and accomplishments of ..., we can gain a better appreciation for the progress and achievements of our society and how far we have come.通过了解……的生平和成就,我们可以更好地欣赏社会的进步和成就,以及我们已经取得的成就。 27. I believe her remarkable achievements are bound to leave you a lasting impression. 我相信她非凡的成就一定会给你留下深刻的印象。 28. His/Her life teaches us that with unwavering dedication and wisdom, we can navigate through even the most complex situations and ultimately bring harmony and peace to our surroundings.他/她的人生启示我们,凭借坚定不移的奉献和智慧,我们可以克服最复杂的境遇,最终给我们周围的人、事、物带来和谐与安宁。 29. Nowadays, with more and more international exchanges, it is a great time for us to learn from ... to spread our brilliant culture to the whole world.如今,随着国际交流日益频繁,现在正是我们向……学习向全世界传播我们辉煌文化的好时机。 30. His/Her patriotism, loyalty, and dedication to his country and people are qualities that we should all strive to emulate.他/她的爱国主义精神、忠诚以及对国家和人民的奉献精神值得我们学习。 31. In a word, ... devoted himself too much to our country. He/She has had too much influence on our future generations.总之,……对我们的国家做出了许多贡献。他/她的爱国精神对一代代后人产生了深远的影响。 32. He/She put his/her heart into scientific research all his/her life and made great contributions to the development of the Chinese ... industry. I am greatly influenced by his/her selflessness and devotion to the country. I also want to be a man of value.他/她毕生致力于科学研究,为中国……事业的发展做出了巨大贡献。他/她的无私和对国家的奉献精神深深地影响了我。我也想成为一个有价值的人。 33. He devoted himself whole-heartedly to scientific research during his lifetime, making remarkable achievements in the Chinese ... industry.他一生全心全意地致力于科学研究,在中国……事业中取得了显著成就。 34. Greatly inspired by his patriotism and self-sacrifice, I’m longing to make great contributions to our country as well.受到他的爱国主义和自我牺牲精神的极大鼓舞,我也渴望为我们的国家做出巨大贡献。 35. It is his/her hard work, perseverance and selflessness that make him/her an outstanding scientist. We are called on to learn from him/her and devote ourselves to scientific research.正是他/她的勤奋、毅力和无私使他/她成为一名杰出的科学家。我们被要求向他/她学习,献身于科学研究。 第二组:推介令人敬佩的人物 1. When it comes to the person I admire most, ... pops up in my mind instantly. 说到我最欣赏的人,……立刻出现在我的脑海中。 2. Today, I would like to talk about the person I admire most—my ... My ... has always been a pillar of strength in my life and I truly admire her for many reasons.今天,我想谈谈我最钦佩的人——我的……。我的……一直是我生命中的支柱,我真的很钦佩她,原因有很多。 3. There are many respectable people around us. I have great admiration for Mr, Sun my English teacher, a middle-aged man of few words.我们周围有很多受人尊敬的人。我非常钦佩我的英语老师孙先生,一个沉默寡言的中年人。 4. He is a young man of medium build and always wears a bright smile. 他是一个中等身材总是带着灿烂的笑容的年轻人。 5. He/She is so easy to get along with that we all like to make friends with him/her. 他/她很容易相处,我们都喜欢和他/她交朋友。 6. He/ She is considered as one of the most popular teachers in our school because ... 他/她被认为是我们学校最受欢迎的老师之一,因为…… 7. Whenever I meet with some difficulties, he is ready to give me a hand.每当我遇到困难时,他总是愿意帮助我。 8. ... has always been dedicated to her/his work and strives for excellence in everything she/he does. ……一直致力于她/他的工作,并在她/他所做的一切中追求卓越。 9. She/He always puts others before herself and is always there to lend a helping hand. 她/他总是把别人放在自己之前,总是在那里伸出援手。 10. Her/his helpfulness and kindness win her/him great popularity and a good reputation among us. 她/他的乐于助人和善良为她/他赢得了很高的声望和良好的声誉。 11. Whatever difficulties we come across, he/she doesn’t hesitate to come to our aid. 无论我们遇到什么困难,他/她都会毫不犹豫地帮助我们。 12. However, he/she cared little about fame and wealth. Instead, he/she spared no effort to help those in need. 然而,他/她很少关心名利。相反,他/她不遗余力地帮助那些有需要的人。 13. She/He really cared about others and was an extremely talented listener. 她/他很关心他人,是个很好的倾听者。 14. He/She does very well in ..., and is good at ... as well./Not only does he/she do well in ..., but also he/she is good at ...他/她……学得很好,……也很擅长。 15. From her/his success, we can see that everyone should be devoted to hard work consistently. 从她/他的成功中我们可以看出每个人应始终如一地努力工作。 16. With a loving character, ... is such a kind and helpful person as we can not praise too much. 充满爱心的……是一个善良,乐于助人的人,我们怎么赞扬他也不为过, 17. He/She is always willing to help others in trouble, thus becoming popular among us. 他/她总是乐于帮助需要帮助的人,因此很受大家欢迎。 18. Her/His diligence has set an example to others.她/他的勤奋为他人树立了榜样。 19. Undoubtedly, she/he sets us teenagers a very good example with her/his tough will and pioneering spirits. 毫无疑问,她/他以坚韧的意志和开拓精神为我们青少年树立了一个很好的榜样。 20. In conclusion, ... is the person I admire most due to her/his hard work, kindness, and perseverance. 总之,……是我最钦佩的人,因为她/他的勤奋、善良和毅力。 1 (2023年全国英语甲卷)你们学校正举办主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动。请你以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿。 内容包括:1.人物简介及事迹; 2. 意义或启示。 注意:1. 词数100左右; 2. 题目已为你写好。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2 (2024高三·全国·专题练习)假设你是李华,你的美国朋友Chris在来信中提到对中国古代名人感兴趣,学校举办以英语用讲中国故事为主题的征文活动,请以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿。 内容包括:1. 人物事迹; 2. 意义; 3. 启示。 注意:1. 词数 100 左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3 (2020全国I卷)你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题,写一篇短文参赛。内容包括:1. 人物简介; 2. 尊敬和爱戴的原因。 注意:1. 词数100左右; 2. 短文题目和首句已为你写好。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4 (24-25高二上·陕西西安·阶段练习)假如你是李华,你校英文报正在组织题为The Person I Admire Most的征文比赛。请你写一篇短文参赛。 内容包括:1. 人物事迹简介: 2. 对你的影响。 注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右: 2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 The Person I Admire Most ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 二、推介名言 本专题所谓的“名言”指的是:中外名言,包括谚语、俗语、成语、格言和警句。高考英语第一节写作就“推介名言”的命题方式一般有三种:一种是给出一句名言警句,并提出相应的要求让考生写作;另一种是给出至少两句名言警句,让考生择其一个,并根据题目所规定的要求进行写作;还有一种是不指定具体名言,允许考生在题目所设定的框架内自由选择一句名言警句进行写作。第一种的写作,话题不可选择,而后两者的写作话题的选择则自由度较大,尤其是第三组话题选择的自由度则更大。本专题所涉及的内容为后两者的写作。 写好此类短文考生首先需要解决以下两个难点:一是名言警句的选择:选择恰当的名言警句(考生本人要十分了解其意思),确保解释到位,有例可举,有论可议,有感可发;二是写作的构思:推介名言警句的写作总体来说属于夹叙夹议文或议论文的范畴,但是短文里也有解释或说明。“推介名言警句”写作三段式构思:夹叙夹议文模式:①引出名言警句,简单阐述对该名言警句的理解;②举例佐证;③发出感悟。议论文模式:①引出名言警句;②解释其意思,阐述其道理;③总结全文,升华主题。其次,考生在高考复习中需要注重有关“名言警句”方面素材的积累。 1. Where there is a will, there is a way/Nothing is impossible to a willing heart.有志者事竟成。 ①It means that whenever we meet with challenges or difficulties, we will eventually succeed as long as we have a strong will. /It means that if someone is determined to do something, they will find a way to accomplish it, no matter how difficult it may seem. /It means that if a person makes up his mind to do something, he will reach his goal through hard work. ②It emphasizes the power of determination and perseverance. Essentially, it suggests that with strong willpower and commitment, one can overcome obstacles and achieve their goals. 2. No Pains, No Gains.一分耕耘,一分收获/没有付出就没有收获/不劳则无获。 ①It stresses the importance of hard work and devotion in achieving success. I’ve learned this valuable lesson from my own experience./It means that if you want to achieve something or be successful, you must work hard and put in a lot of effort. ②It suggests that success and rewards do not come easily; they require dedication, perseverance, and often, some level of sacrifice or discomfort. In other words, one can’t expect to get good results without putting in the necessary work and effort. 3. Industry is the parent of success.勤奋是成功之母。 ①It suggests that success is a result of consistent and dedicated work. /In other words, if you are industrious—meaning you put in a lot of effort, stay committed, and work hard—you are more likely to achieve success. ②This idiom emphasizes the importance of perseverance and dedication in achieving one’s goals. 4. Constant dropping wears away a stone.滴水穿石。 ①It means that persistent effort, no matter how small or seemingly insignificant, can achieve great results over time. It suggests that if you keep working at something consistently and even if the progress seems slow, you can eventually accomplish your goal or overcome even the most difficult obstacles. ②This idea is often used to encourage perseverance and patience. 5. Failure is the mother of success.失败是成功之母。 ①What failure to us is what sunshine to the trees, without which we cannot arrive at the place where we hope to go. Although failure is annoying, as long as we face it bravely, we will succeed sooner or later./It means that failure often leads to success. ②It suggests that when we fail, we learn valuable lessons and gain experience that can help us improve and eventually achieve success. Essentially, it emphasizes the importance of perseverance and learning from mistakes. 6. There is no royal road to learning.书山有路勤为径,学海无涯苦作舟。 ①It conveys the idea that there are no easy or shortcuts to acquiring knowledge and mastering a subject. ②It emphasizes that learning requires hard work, dedication, and perseverance. The process of gaining knowledge and understanding is often challenging and demands effort and commitment. 7. Experience is the mother of wisdom.经验是智慧之母。 ①It means that wisdom or deep understanding comes from having a wide range of experiences. In other words, as we go through different situations and learn from them, we gain valuable insights and knowledge that contribute to our overall wisdom. ②This saying emphasizes the importance of practical, real-life experiences in developing a wise and discerning mind. 8. Practice makes perfect.熟能生巧。 ①It means if we practice unfamiliar things again and again,  we’ll be able to perform it perfectly. /The idiom means that the more you practice or do something, the better you will become at it. /The meaning of “Practice makes perfect” is that anything can only be truly understood, comprehended, and mastered through personal experimentation. ②Essentially, it suggests that through repeated effort and continuous practice, one can achieve a high level of skill or proficiency in a particular task or activity. The idea is that by consistently working on something, you can eventually master it and perform it flawlessly. /This sentence emphasizes the importance of practice in acquiring knowledge, believing that only through practice can we truly understand and master the essence and laws of things. 9. Lost years are worse than lost dollars.一寸光阴一寸金。 ①It means that the time you lost is more valuable and irreplaceable than the money you lost. While money can be earned back, the time that passes cannot be regained. ②This emphasizes the importance of valuing and making the most of your time, as it is a limited and precious resource. 10. An idle youth, a needy age.少壮不努力,老大徒伤悲。 ①The meaning is that if you don’t work hard when you are young, you will only be sad in vain when you are old. /It meaning that if one does not work hard when young and strong, regret and sadness in old age will be in vain. ②It emphasizes the importance of being productive and diligent during one’s younger years to ensure a more secure and comfortable future. 11. God helps those who help themselves.天助自助者。 ①To achieve success, one cannot rely on others or wait for good luck. First, one must put in effort on their own. Only through one’s own efforts can one obtain the “timing”, that is, the help of heaven, and ultimately achieve success ②It suggests that people who take action to improve their own situation are more likely to succeed and receive assistance, whether it be from divine or other sources. 12. A fall into the pit,a gain in your wit.吃一堑,长一智。 ①It means that to receive a lesson and increase one’s intelligence after experiencing a setback. /It means that when you make a mistake or experience a setback, you can learn from it and become wiser. ②Essentially, it suggests that even negative experiences can be valuable because they provide lessons that help you grow and improve. /In other words, every time you fall or fail, you gain more wisdom and understanding. /Metaphorically speaking, one can learn from a setback or failure, gain wisdom and experience 13 . More hasty, less speed.欲速则不达。 ①The meaning of this idiom is: violating the rules, blindly seeking speed, and failing to achieve the goal. It means that when you rush or act too quickly, you are more likely to make mistakes, which can ultimately slow you down. In other words, being overly hurried often results in less efficiency and effectiveness. ②It’s a reminder that taking your time and being careful can lead to better and faster outcomes in the long run. 14. It’s never too old to learn.活到老,学到老。 ①It means that a person is never at an age where they can no longer learn new things or acquire new skills. ②It emphasizes that learning is a lifelong process and that age should not be a barrier to education or personal growth. In other words, no matter how old you are, you can always continue to learn and improve yourself. /It reminds us that the journey of acquiring knowledge is never-ending, regardless of our age or circumstances. 15. A journey of a thousand miles begins with the first step.千里之行始于足下。 ①It means we should take the first step with courage to pursue our dream rather than just shout empty slogans without taking any action. /It suggests that even the longest and most difficult tasks or journeys can be accomplished if you begin and keep moving forward. ②Essentially, it encourages people not to be overwhelmed by the magnitude of a goal but to start with a single, manageable step. This idea is often used to motivate and inspire individuals to take the initiative and make progress toward their objectives. /It emphasizes the importance of starting and taking action, no matter how small or seemingly insignificant. 16. Rome was not built in a day.罗马不是一天建成的/伟业非一日之功。 ①The English idiom means that significant achievements or changes take time, effort, and patience. /It means that one should not rush to achieve things, only by putting in effort and persevering can one achieve success. ②The saying is often used to encourage perseverance and to remind people that it's normal for important tasks or goals to require a long period of time to complete. 17. Well begun, half done.良好的开端是成功的一半。 ①The meaning of this sentence is that a good start is crucial for success. If things have a good start, the subsequent progress will be much smoother. /It means that a good start is a crucial part of successfully finishing a task. If you begin something in a well-organized and effective manner, you are more likely to complete it efficiently and with better results. ②It emphasizes that one should prepare in advance and lay a solid foundation when doing things, because a good start can lay the foundation for the success of the entire process. /This saying emphasizes the importance of preparation and a strong beginning in any endeavor. 18. It is never too late to mend.亡羊补牢,犹时未晚。 ①It means that it is always possible to correct a mistake or improve a situation, no matter how late it might seem. /This idiom metaphorically refers to timely remediation(补救)of mistakes to avoid greater losses. ②Essentially, it encourages people to take action to fix problems or make positive changes, even if they feel they have waited too long. The idea is that there is always an opportunity for improvement and redemption, and one should not give up hope just because time has passed. 19. A good medicine tasks bitter.良药苦口。 ①It means that means something that is beneficial or helpful, even if it may not be pleasant or enjoyable at first. ②The idea behind this saying is that often, the things that are most effective in helping us(like medicine)can sometimes be difficult to accept or experience because they are not immediately pleasurable. However, the long-term benefits outweigh the temporary discomfort. /In other words, sometimes we need to endure a bit of discomfort or unpleasantness in order to achieve a greater good or to improve our situation. This can apply to many areas of life, such as taking on challenging tasks, receiving constructive criticism, or making difficult decisions. 20. The early bird catches the worm.早起的鸟儿有虫吃。 ①It means that those who start their day early or begin tasks promptly are more likely to succeed. ②It emphasizes the benefits of being proactive, diligent, and not procrastinating. Essentially, it suggests that people who wake up early or act quickly have a better chance of achieving their goals or obtaining opportunities. /The old saying reminds us that if people want to be successful and outstanding, they must plan ahead of time and make their efforts to overcome all the possible difficulties. 21. All that glitters is not gold.闪光的未必都是金子。 ①The meaning of the phrase is that one should not be misled by surface phenomena, but rather by the essence of things. ②It warns people not to be misled by the superficiality of shining things, because not all shining things necessarily have true value. 22. Look before you leap.三思而后行。Think twice before you act ①It is a piece of advice that encourages careful consideration and reflection before making a decision or taking an action. ②It suggests that you should pause, evaluate the potential consequences, and think about the situation from different angles before proceeding. This can help you avoid hasty decisions that might lead to regret or negative outcomes. In essence(本质上), it promotes a thoughtful approach to problem-solving and decision-making. 23. Facts speak plainer than words.事实胜于雄辩。 ①It means that actual evidence or real occurrences are more convincing and straightforward than mere statements or arguments. /In other words, it suggests that the truth and reality of a situation are clearer and more powerful when demonstrated through concrete facts rather than just explained with words. ②This emphasizes the importance of tangible proof over rhetoric. 24. Action speaks louder than words.行动胜过语言/行动比语言更响亮。 ①Actions are more persuasive than words, emphasizing the importance of action. /The idiom means that it is more important and effective to do something and show what you mean, rather than just talking about it. /In other words, what you do has a stronger impact and is more convincing than what you say. ②It emphasizes proving one’s commitment and goals through practical actions, rather than just making verbal promises. 25. A friend in need is a friend indeed.患难见真情。 ①It means that a true friend is someone who will support and help you when you are facing difficulties or are in a difficult situation. ②It emphasizes that the real value of friendship is not just in the good times, but also in how friends stand by each other during hard times. A person who helps you when you are in need is a genuine and trustworthy friend. (2022届广东省广州市天河区普通高中毕业班综合测试三,也是2014年山东高考英语真题)某英文报社组织题为“我喜欢的英语谚语”征文活动,你有意参加。请从下面两句谚语中任选一句作为标题写一篇英语作文。 ①A friend in need is a friend indeed. ②Where there’s a will, there’s a way. 内容包括:1. 该谚语的含义; 2. 体现该谚语含义的个人经历。 注意:1. 词数:120-150; 2. 文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称。 参考词汇:谚语 proverb ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 说明:以下1-6题从题材上说都属于“同题”。为了练习的方便,笔者分开单列。 1 (湖北省部分重点中学2024届高三上学期11月月考)中国古典诗词是中华民族的文化瑰宝,为鼓励同学们讲好中国故事,你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以“我最喜欢的诗人”为题,写一篇短文参赛。 内容包括:1. 该人物及其主要贡献简介; 2. 该人物对你的影响。 注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右; 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 My favourite poet ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2 (北京市海淀区2024-2025学年高三上学期10月考)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到中国运动员闪耀巴黎奥运会,并请你介绍此届奥运会上你最喜欢的一名运动员。请你给Jim回信。 内容包括:1. 简要介绍该运动员; 2. 该运动员对你的影响。 注意:1. 词数100左右。开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Jim, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 3 (新疆阿克苏市实验中学2024-2025学年高二上学期9月月考)请以The Person Who Influences Me Most为题,写一篇关于对你生命产生重大影响的人物的短文。这个人可以是你的家人、老师、导师或公众人物。描述他/她是如何影响你的,你欣赏他/她的哪些品质,他/她的言行如何塑造了你的观点或行为。 注意:1. 词数80左右; 2. 请在答题卡的相应位置作答。 The Person Who Influences Me Most ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4 (四川省成都市彭州市2023-2024学年高二上学期期中考试)你校英文报正举办主题为“Person of the Year”的征文活动。请你选择一位名人或者身边熟悉的人写一篇短文投稿。 内容包括:1. 人物简介及事迹; 2. 推荐他/她的理由。 注意:1. 词数80左右。题目已为你写好,不计入总词数; 2. 请在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Person of the Year ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5 (广东省高州市第一中学2024-2025学年高二上学期开学校考)请以“The Hero in My Eyes”为题目写一篇短文。 内容包括:1. 该人物的简要介绍; 2. 该人物的主要事迹或成就; 3. 你对该人物的评价。 注意:1. 字数100左右; 2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯,人物生动立体; 3. 短文标题已给出,答题卡中不需抄写题目。 The Hero in My Eyes ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6 (吉林省延边第二中学2023-2024学年高二上学期第二次阶段检测)假如你是李华,你校英语报正在举办“大国科技推动者”主题征文比赛,请你写一篇英语短文,介绍你最敬佩的一名科学工作者。 内容包括:1. 人物简介; 2. 令人敬佩的原因。 注意:1. 词数:100左右 2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 说明:以下7-10题从题材上说都属于“同题”。为了练习的方便,笔者分开单列。 7 (云南省云南师大附中2023-2024学年高三下学期高考适应性月考卷八)假定你是李华,本周你们班的英语课堂活动主题是中国谚语,请你就“There is no royal road to learning (书山有路勤为径,学海无涯苦作舟) ”这句谚语写一篇英语发言稿,谈谈你的理解。 注意:1. 写作词数应为80词左右。开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数; 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Good morning, everyone. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you for listening. 8 (广东省潮州市2023-2024学年高三上学期期末教学质量检测)假定你是李华,你要参加学校英语报以“Practice makes perfect”为题开展的征文活动。 内容包括:1. 你对这句谚语的理解; 2. 你个人的实践经验; 3. 这句谚语对学习生活的指导意义。 注意:1. 词数80左右。开头已给出,不计入总词数; 2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; Every proverb brings people some wisdom ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9 (2024届黑龙江省齐齐哈尔市克东县一中高三下学期三模)一句名言“It is never too old to learn.”引发了你的思考,请你写一篇感想与同学交流。 内容包括:1. 你对这句话的理解; 2. 这句话对你的影响。 注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右; 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10 (贵州省贵阳市一中2023-2024学年高三下学期高考适应性月考卷八)假定你是李华,打算参加你校即将举办的主题为“用英语讲中国道理”的演讲比赛。请你以“A thousand-mile journey starts with one step.”为主题写一篇演讲稿。 内容包括:1.介绍这句话所蕴含的道理; 2.你喜欢它的原因。 注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Ladies and gentlemen, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权,侵权必究!1 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 $$ “同题异构”提升应用文写作训练的效率之专题 02-1(话题:名人、名言)“同题异选” 所谓“同题异选”是指试题本身就有允许考生选择的话题(一定范围内<选择范围有大有小>的多选或二选一),具体写作时不同的人会对话题有不同的选择,且有不同的构思,因而答案也是多种多样的。 一、推介名人 高考英语第一节写作就“推介名人”的命题方式一般有两种:一种是给出指定的人物及其文字简介,并提出相应的要求让考生写作;另一种不指定具体人物,允许考生在试题所设定的框架内自由选择一位进行写作。比较而言,前者的写作相对容易,而后者的写作难度则相当大。本专题所涉及的内容为后者的写作。 当然,“名人”选择的范围绝对不仅仅局限于“历史人物”(可选范围比较开放),还包括我们身边令人敬佩的人物(可选范围更加开放)。写好此类短文考生首先需要解决以下三个难点:一是“人物”的选择:选择恰当的人物加以介绍(考生本人要对此人物的大致情况十分了解),确保有事可写,有感可发;二是写作的构思:推介人物的写作总体来说属于夹叙夹议文的范畴,但是短文里也有说明。“推介人物”写作三段式构思:①点明推介人物及其概况(要准确、精炼);②叙述人物的具体情况(具体事迹、具体贡献等等);③对人物作出评价或探讨他/她的精神品质、人生态度、先进事迹、杰出成就等给我们带来的启示或影响;三是语言的表达:使用恰当的逻辑词串起对人物的描述,使其言简意赅,同时注意高级词汇的灵活运用。其次,考生在高考复习中需要注重有关“推介名人”方面素材的积累:一是有关“名人”(出身背景、学术成就、文化贡献、思想理念等)素材的积累;二是写作常用句式的积累(为方便起见,我们将其分成两组列出,其实两组之间有些句子是可以通用的)。 第一组:推介著名人物 1. ..., a famous/well-known historical figure in Chinese traditional culture, was born in ... ……生于……,是中国传统文化中著名的历史人物。 2. He/She was one of the scientists who made great contributions to society. 他/她是对社会做出巨大贡献的科学家之一。 3. ..., who was born in ... in ..., is a simple but great man....,...年出生于...,是一个朴实而伟大的人。 4. He/She is considered to be one of the most influential figures in history due to ....因为……,他/她被认为是历史上最具影响力的人物之一。 5. ... was a master of the art of literature, and his/her literary works were highly praised by his contemporaries. ……是文学艺术大师,他/她的文学作品被同时代的人称颂。 6. In distinguished Chinese history, many people have made great contributions to the development of our country, among whom ... stands out. He/She is one of the pioneers of ...在耀眼的中国历史上,许多人为我国的发展做出了巨大贡献,其中……的贡献十分突出。他/她是……的先驱者之一。 7. ... was not only a famous patriotic poet in ... history, but also a pioneer of romanticism in ... classical literature. ……不仅是……历史上著名的爱国诗人,还是……浪漫主义古典文学的先驱。 8. ... is a great modern Chinese writer, thinker and revolutionary.……是中国现代伟大的作家、思想家和革命家。 9. She/He has been burying herself/himself in medical study, which enables her/him to win the Nobel Prize. 一直埋头于医学研究,这使得她/他获得诺贝尔奖。 10. Living in a golden age of ..., he was best known for his rich imagination and striking imagery in his poetry as well as his great love for wine.……生活在……的黄金时代。他以丰富的想象力和诗歌中引人注目的意象以及对酒的热爱而闻名。 11. The person I admire most is ..., a famous scientist known as “the Father of ...”. 我最钦佩的人是……,一位被称为“中国……之父”的著名科学家。 12. There are many respectable people around us. Among them, the person I respect most is ..., who has become a household name for his great contributions to ....我们周围有很多受人尊敬的人。其中,我最尊敬的人是……,他因对……作出的巨大贡献而家喻户晓。 13. ... emphasized the importance of moral values, respect for elders, and social harmony. ……强调道德价值观、尊重长辈和社会和谐的重要性。 14. I admire ... the most among all the scientists. He is one of the most outstanding scientists in the 20th century and is regarded as “the father of ...”.在所有科学家中,我最钦佩……。他是20世纪最杰出的科学家之一,被誉为“现代……之父”。 15. His/Her impact on history cannot be overstated, as his/her ideas/discoveries/inventions/leadership changed the course of human history.他/她对历史的影响不容小觑,因为他/她的想法/发现/发明/领导力改变了人类历史的进程。 16. He imparted his wisdom to countless people and leaving a profound impact on Chinese society. 他将他的智慧传授给无数的人,对中国社会产生了深远的影响。 17. Despite facing numerous obstacles and challenges, he/she persevered/persisted/overcame and left a lasting impact on history through his/her accomplishments/achievements/ideas.尽管面临许多障碍和挑战,他/她坚持不懈/克服了困难,通过他/她的成就/贡献/想法在历史上留下了深刻的影响。 18. He/She is known for having accomplished/achieved major breakthroughs/discoveries/inventions in the field of field of expertise.他/她以在专业领域取得的重大突破/发现/发明而闻名。 19. He/She played a major role in event/movement by leading/fighting for/advocating for ...他/她通过领导/为……而战/倡导在事件/运动中发挥了重要作用。 20. He/She is remembered for contributing/pioneering in field of expertise and advancing/revolutionizing field of expertise.他/她因在专业领域做出贡献/开创并推进/革命化了专业领域而被人们铭记。 21. He/She is credited with creating/developing concept/technology/idea which revolutionized/transformed field of expertise/society.他/她被认为是创造/开发概念/技术/思想的人,这革命化/改变了专业领域/社会。 22. He/She left a lasting impact on field of expertise/society by introducing/developing/promoting idea/technology /movement, which continues to influence field of expertise/society today.他/她通过引入/开发/推广思想/技术/运动在专业领域/社会留下了深远的影响,直到今天仍在影响着专业领域/社会。 23. He/She serves as a source of inspiration for future generations, reminding us of what is possible and motivating us to achieve greatness.他/她是未来一代的灵感来源,他们提醒我们什么是可能的,并激励我们取得伟大的成就。 24. Studying the lives and accomplishments of ... provides valuable insights into the past, increasing our understanding of how events unfolded and how people lived and thought in earlier times.研究……的生平和成就可以为我们提供宝贵的历史洞见,增加我们对过去的理解,了解先人们如何生活和思考。 25. He/She can serve as role models, educating us on the importance of hard work, perseverance, and dedication in achieving success.他/她可以作为榜样,教育我们努力工作、毅力和奉献精神在取得成功中的重要性。。 26. By learning about the lives and accomplishments of ..., we can gain a better appreciation for the progress and achievements of our society and how far we have come.通过了解……的生平和成就,我们可以更好地欣赏社会的进步和成就,以及我们已经取得的成就。 27. I believe her remarkable achievements are bound to leave you a lasting impression. 我相信她非凡的成就一定会给你留下深刻的印象。 28. His/Her life teaches us that with unwavering dedication and wisdom, we can navigate through even the most complex situations and ultimately bring harmony and peace to our surroundings.他/她的人生启示我们,凭借坚定不移的奉献和智慧,我们可以克服最复杂的境遇,最终给我们周围的人、事、物带来和谐与安宁。 29. Nowadays, with more and more international exchanges, it is a great time for us to learn from ... to spread our brilliant culture to the whole world.如今,随着国际交流日益频繁,现在正是我们向……学习向全世界传播我们辉煌文化的好时机。 30. His/Her patriotism, loyalty, and dedication to his country and people are qualities that we should all strive to emulate.他/她的爱国主义精神、忠诚以及对国家和人民的奉献精神值得我们学习。 31. In a word, ... devoted himself too much to our country. He/She has had too much influence on our future generations.总之,……对我们的国家做出了许多贡献。他/她的爱国精神对一代代后人产生了深远的影响。 32. He/She put his/her heart into scientific research all his/her life and made great contributions to the development of the Chinese ... industry. I am greatly influenced by his/her selflessness and devotion to the country. I also want to be a man of value.他/她毕生致力于科学研究,为中国……事业的发展做出了巨大贡献。他/她的无私和对国家的奉献精神深深地影响了我。我也想成为一个有价值的人。 33. He devoted himself whole-heartedly to scientific research during his lifetime, making remarkable achievements in the Chinese ... industry.他一生全心全意地致力于科学研究,在中国……事业中取得了显著成就。 34. Greatly inspired by his patriotism and self-sacrifice, I’m longing to make great contributions to our country as well.受到他的爱国主义和自我牺牲精神的极大鼓舞,我也渴望为我们的国家做出巨大贡献。 35. It is his/her hard work, perseverance and selflessness that make him/her an outstanding scientist. We are called on to learn from him/her and devote ourselves to scientific research.正是他/她的勤奋、毅力和无私使他/她成为一名杰出的科学家。我们被要求向他/她学习,献身于科学研究。 第二组:推介令人敬佩的人物 1. When it comes to the person I admire most, ... pops up in my mind instantly. 说到我最欣赏的人,……立刻出现在我的脑海中。 2. Today, I would like to talk about the person I admire most—my ... My ... has always been a pillar of strength in my life and I truly admire her for many reasons.今天,我想谈谈我最钦佩的人——我的……。我的……一直是我生命中的支柱,我真的很钦佩她,原因有很多。 3. There are many respectable people around us. I have great admiration for Mr, Sun my English teacher, a middle-aged man of few words.我们周围有很多受人尊敬的人。我非常钦佩我的英语老师孙先生,一个沉默寡言的中年人。 4. He is a young man of medium build and always wears a bright smile. 他是一个中等身材总是带着灿烂的笑容的年轻人。 5. He/She is so easy to get along with that we all like to make friends with him/her. 他/她很容易相处,我们都喜欢和他/她交朋友。 6. He/ She is considered as one of the most popular teachers in our school because ... 他/她被认为是我们学校最受欢迎的老师之一,因为…… 7. Whenever I meet with some difficulties, he is ready to give me a hand.每当我遇到困难时,他总是愿意帮助我。 8. ... has always been dedicated to her/his work and strives for excellence in everything she/he does. ……一直致力于她/他的工作,并在她/他所做的一切中追求卓越。 9. She/He always puts others before herself and is always there to lend a helping hand. 她/他总是把别人放在自己之前,总是在那里伸出援手。 10. Her/his helpfulness and kindness win her/him great popularity and a good reputation among us. 她/他的乐于助人和善良为她/他赢得了很高的声望和良好的声誉。 11. Whatever difficulties we come across, he/she doesn’t hesitate to come to our aid. 无论我们遇到什么困难,他/她都会毫不犹豫地帮助我们。 12. However, he/she cared little about fame and wealth. Instead, he/she spared no effort to help those in need. 然而,他/她很少关心名利。相反,他/她不遗余力地帮助那些有需要的人。 13. She/He really cared about others and was an extremely talented listener. 她/他很关心他人,是个很好的倾听者。 14. He/She does very well in ..., and is good at ... as well./Not only does he/she do well in ..., but also he/she is good at ...他/她……学得很好,……也很擅长。 15. From her/his success, we can see that everyone should be devoted to hard work consistently. 从她/他的成功中我们可以看出每个人应始终如一地努力工作。 16. With a loving character, ... is such a kind and helpful person as we can not praise too much. 充满爱心的……是一个善良,乐于助人的人,我们怎么赞扬他也不为过, 17. He/She is always willing to help others in trouble, thus becoming popular among us. 他/她总是乐于帮助需要帮助的人,因此很受大家欢迎。 18. Her/His diligence has set an example to others.她/他的勤奋为他人树立了榜样。 19. Undoubtedly, she/he sets us teenagers a very good example with her/his tough will and pioneering spirits. 毫无疑问,她/他以坚韧的意志和开拓精神为我们青少年树立了一个很好的榜样。 20. In conclusion, ... is the person I admire most due to her/his hard work, kindness, and perseverance. 总之,……是我最钦佩的人,因为她/他的勤奋、善良和毅力。 1 (2023年全国英语甲卷)你们学校正举办主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动。请你以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿。 内容包括:1.人物简介及事迹; 2. 意义或启示。 注意:1. 词数100左右; 2. 题目已为你写好。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 The Historical Figure in China Confucius is a well-known figure in Chinese history. His teachings emphasized the importance of moral values, respect for elders, and social harmony. Confucius traveled throughout the country, imparting his wisdom to countless disciples and leaving a profound impact on Chinese society. The significance of Confucius cannot be overstated. His teachings shaped the moral and ethical foundation of Chinese culture, fostering respect for authority, harmonious relationships, and the pursuit of knowledge. Even today, his ideas continue to guide individuals and communities in China and beyond. Confucius’s life offers valuable lessons. He stressed the self-cultivation, respect for elders, and the pursuit of knowledge, which serves as a guiding light in our fast-paced and interconnected world. His teachings remind us of the importance of integrity, compassion, and social responsibility. 【导语】本篇属于夹叙夹议文的写作(投稿)。要求考生为学校正举办的主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文 活动写一篇短文投稿。 【详解】 1. 词汇积累 著名的:well-known → famous 人物:figure → person 强调:emphasize → stress 基础:foundation → basis 2. 句式拓展 原 句:His teachings shaped the moral and ethical foundation of Chinese culture, fostering respect for authority, harmonious relationships, and the pursuit of knowledge. 拓展句:His teachings shaped the moral and ethical foundation of Chinese culture, which fostered respect for authority, harmonious relationships, and the pursuit of knowledge. 【高分句型】 1. Confucius traveled throughout the country, imparting his wisdom to countless disciples and leaving a profound impact on Chinese society. (运用了现在分词作伴随状语) 2. He stressed the self-cultivation, respect for elders, and the pursuit of knowledge, which serves as a guiding light in our fast-paced and interconnected world. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) 2 (2024高三·全国·专题练习)假设你是李华,你的美国朋友Chris在来信中提到对中国古代名人感兴趣,学校举办以英语用讲中国故事为主题的征文活动,请以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿。 内容包括:1. 人物事迹; 2. 意义; 3. 启示。 注意:1. 词数 100 左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Dear Chris, I feel more than delighted to know you are interested in the famous historical figures in ancient China. I’d like to share my favourite poet named Du Fu in Tang Dynasty with you. Du Fu, a famous poet of the Tang Dynasty, is crowned as “Poet-Sage” by later generations. Many of his poems has remained today, having a great impact on our Chinese culture and society. What I appreciate most are his landscape poems, which are clear and natural in words with profound messages. They convey his strong love for nature, friends and the people. As is known to all, Du Fu is regarded as one of the greatest romantic poets of the Tang Dynasty. Sincerely, I hope my brief introduction can be of help to you and provide some insight into this important historical figure. 【导语】本篇属于应用文的书信体写作。要求考生给美国朋友Chris写一封信,介绍一位中国历史人物。 【详解】 1. 词汇积累 人物:figure→person 影响:impact→influence 传达:convey→express 帮助:help→assistance 2.句式拓展 原 句:Many of his poems has remained today, having a great impact on our Chinese culture and society. 拓展句:Many of his poems has remained today, which have a great impact on our Chinese culture and society. 【高分句型】 1. What I appreciate most are his landscape poems, which are clear and natural in words with profound messages.(运用what引导主语从句和which引导非限制性定语从句) 2. As is known to all, Du Fu is regarded as one of the greatest romantic poets of the Tang Dynasty. (运用as引导非限制性定语从句) 附录:其他【答案】 The Historical Figure in China Numerous influential historical figures have emerged in China's long history, each of whom made tremendous contributions to the progress of society in their own way.  As for me, the most influential one is Sima Qian, through whose master work “Shih Chi” we can have access to the history dating back to thousands of years as well as obtain a lot of ancient wisdom. Besides, the whole process of writing the book was full of ups and downs. Though in face of adversities, Qian accomplished the thoroughly researched historical book. From his bitter episode, we have learned that nothing can knock us down as long as there is resolution and perseverance. The Historical Figure in China Among many historical figures, I admire Su Shi most. Despite ups and downs in his political career, he always kept optimistic. No matter what position he was appointed to, he never complained and tried his best to do things beneficial to local people. In addition, he occupied himself in working the fields, studying food and writing poems in his spare time, so that he has countless “titles” today. All in all, when you feel upset, you can read “The Biography of Su Dongpo”and you may find more tips for happiness.                     The Historical Figure in China Being a brilliant medical scientist, Zhang Zhongjing impresses me the most among all the scientists. During Zhang’s time, various diseases broke out and thousands of people came down with illness. He studied medical classics, collected many herbal medicines, and constantly did research, finally writing the medical masterpiece Shanghan Zabing Lun. This book laid a solid foundation for TCM. Doctors today still subscribe to Zhang’s theories and practices. His contribution earns him a reputation as the “Sage of Chinese Medicine”. His humanity and efforts will inspire me for the years to come. 3 (2020全国I卷)你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题,写一篇短文参赛。内容包括:1. 人物简介; 2. 尊敬和爱戴的原因。 注意:1. 词数100左右; 2. 短文题目和首句已为你写好。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 We have a lot of respectable people around us. They may be our teachers, parents or one of our elders. As for me, my father is the person I respect most. My father is a teacher who loves his work and his students very much. He works very hard every day but he will also spare some time to accompany me and share many funny things with me about his work. When I come across the problems of learning in my study, my father will listen to me patiently and encourage me to overcome the difficulties bravely. He achieved a lot in his work, respected by his students. So, in my mind my father is the person I respect most and I love him deeply. 【导语】本篇属于夹叙夹议文的写作(投稿)。要求考生以The Person I Respect为题写一篇短文参加你校正在组织英语作文比赛。 【详解】 1. 词汇积累 喜爱:love→be fond of 遇见:come across→run into 勇敢地:bravely→courageously 克服:overcome→get over 2.句式拓展 原 句:We have a lot of respectable people around us. They may be our teachers, parents or one of our elders. 拓展句:We have a lot of respectable people around us, who may be our teachers, parents or one of our elders. 【高分句型】 1. My father is a teacher who loves his work and his students very much.(运用了who引导的定语从句) 2. He achieved a lot in his work, respected by his students.(运用了过去分词作状语) 4 (24-25高二上·陕西西安·阶段练习)假如你是李华,你校英文报正在组织题为The Person I Admire Most的征文比赛。请你写一篇短文参赛。 内容包括:1. 人物事迹简介: 2. 对你的影响。 注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右: 2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 The Person I Admire Most ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】1 The Person I Admire Most When it comes to the person I admire most, Tu Youyou pops up in my mind instantly. Knowing thousands of lives were lost to a deadly disease malaria, Tu Youyou was dedicated to finding a cure to address it. You could never imagine how many setbacks and hardships she had been confronted with, but she never yielded. Through trial and error, she eventually succeeded in extracting artemisinin(青蒿素), winning her the Nobel Prize in 2015 at the age of 85. Undoubtedly, she sets us teenagers a very good example with her tough will and pioneering spirits, which, I believe, we are obliged to learn from her. 【导语】本文是一篇夹叙夹议文的写作(投稿)。要求考生以The Person I Admire Most为题写一篇文章给校英文报投稿。 【详解】 1.词汇积累 立刻:instantly→ immediately 奉献于:be dedicated to→ be committed to 解决:address→ settle 最终:eventually→ finally 2.句式拓展 原 句:Through trial and error, she eventually succeeded in extracting artemisinin, winning her the Nobel Prize in 2015 at the age of 85. 同义句:It was through trial and error that she eventually succeeded in extracting artemisinin, winning her the Nobel Prize in 2015 at the age of 85. 【高分句型】 1. You could never imagine how many setbacks and hardships she had been confronted with, but she never yielded. (运用了how many引导的宾语从句) 2. Undoubtedly, she sets us teenagers a very good example with her tough will and pioneering spirits, which, I believe, we are obliged to learn from her. (运用了了which引导的非限制性定语从句) 【答案】2 The Person I Admire Most There are many respectable people around us. I have great admiration for Mr. Sun my English teacher, a middle-aged man of few words. First, his helpfulness and kindness win him great popularity and a good reputation among us. Whatever difficulties we come across, he doesn’t hesitate to come to our aid. In some sense, he is virtually a beacon of hope, encouraging us never to give up. On top of that, it is his rich experience and devotion to teaching that not only give us easy access to professional knowledge but most importantly shape our character. Such is Mr. Sun that I have the highest admiration for him and get along with him. 【导语】本篇属于夹叙夹议文的写作(投稿)。要求考生以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题,写一篇短文参加学校正在组织的英语作文比赛,内容包括人物介绍以及尊敬和爱戴的原因。 【详解】 1.词汇积累 遇到:come across →meet with 激励:encourage →inspire 奉献:devotion →dedication 相处:get along with →fit in with 2.句式拓展 原 句:I have great admiration for Mr. Sun my English teacher, a middle-aged man of few words. 拓展句:I have great admiration for Mr. Sun my English teacher, who is a middle-aged man of few words. 【高分句型1】 1. Whatever difficulties we come across, he doesn’t hesitate to come to our aid. (运用了whatever引导的让步状语从句) 2. On top of that, it is his rich experience and devotion to teaching that not only give us easy access to professional knowledge but most importantly shape our character.(运用了强调句型以及“not only…but (also)…”连接的并列结构) 二、推介名言 本专题所谓的“名言”指的是:中外名言,包括谚语、俗语、成语、格言和警句。高考英语第一节写作就“推介名言”的命题方式一般有三种:一种是给出一句名言警句,并提出相应的要求让考生写作;另一种是给出至少两句名言警句,让考生择其一个,并根据题目所规定的要求进行写作;还有一种是不指定具体名言,允许考生在题目所设定的框架内自由选择一句名言警句进行写作。第一种的写作,话题不可选择,而后两者的写作话题的选择则自由度较大,尤其是第三组话题选择的自由度则更大。本专题所涉及的内容为后两者的写作。 写好此类短文考生首先需要解决以下两个难点:一是名言警句的选择:选择恰当的名言警句(考生本人要十分了解其意思),确保解释到位,有例可举,有论可议,有感可发;二是写作的构思:推介名言警句的写作总体来说属于夹叙夹议文或议论文的范畴,但是短文里也有解释或说明。“推介名言警句”写作三段式构思:夹叙夹议文模式:①引出名言警句,简单阐述对该名言警句的理解;②举例佐证;③发出感悟。议论文模式:①引出名言警句;②解释其意思,阐述其道理;③总结全文,升华主题。其次,考生在高考复习中需要注重有关“名言警句”方面素材的积累。 1. Where there is a will, there is a way/Nothing is impossible to a willing heart.有志者事竟成。 ①It means that whenever we meet with challenges or difficulties, we will eventually succeed as long as we have a strong will. /It means that if someone is determined to do something, they will find a way to accomplish it, no matter how difficult it may seem. /It means that if a person makes up his mind to do something, he will reach his goal through hard work. ②It emphasizes the power of determination and perseverance. Essentially, it suggests that with strong willpower and commitment, one can overcome obstacles and achieve their goals. 2. No Pains, No Gains.一分耕耘,一分收获/没有付出就没有收获/不劳则无获。 ①It stresses the importance of hard work and devotion in achieving success. I’ve learned this valuable lesson from my own experience./It means that if you want to achieve something or be successful, you must work hard and put in a lot of effort. ②It suggests that success and rewards do not come easily; they require dedication, perseverance, and often, some level of sacrifice or discomfort. In other words, one can’t expect to get good results without putting in the necessary work and effort. 3. Industry is the parent of success.勤奋是成功之母。 ①It suggests that success is a result of consistent and dedicated work. /In other words, if you are industrious—meaning you put in a lot of effort, stay committed, and work hard—you are more likely to achieve success. ②This idiom emphasizes the importance of perseverance and dedication in achieving one’s goals. 4. Constant dropping wears away a stone.滴水穿石。 ①It means that persistent effort, no matter how small or seemingly insignificant, can achieve great results over time. It suggests that if you keep working at something consistently and even if the progress seems slow, you can eventually accomplish your goal or overcome even the most difficult obstacles. ②This idea is often used to encourage perseverance and patience. 5. Failure is the mother of success.失败是成功之母。 ①What failure to us is what sunshine to the trees, without which we cannot arrive at the place where we hope to go. Although failure is annoying, as long as we face it bravely, we will succeed sooner or later./It means that failure often leads to success. ②It suggests that when we fail, we learn valuable lessons and gain experience that can help us improve and eventually achieve success. Essentially, it emphasizes the importance of perseverance and learning from mistakes. 6. There is no royal road to learning.书山有路勤为径,学海无涯苦作舟。 ①It conveys the idea that there are no easy or shortcuts to acquiring knowledge and mastering a subject. ②It emphasizes that learning requires hard work, dedication, and perseverance. The process of gaining knowledge and understanding is often challenging and demands effort and commitment. 7. Experience is the mother of wisdom.经验是智慧之母。 ①It means that wisdom or deep understanding comes from having a wide range of experiences. In other words, as we go through different situations and learn from them, we gain valuable insights and knowledge that contribute to our overall wisdom. ②This saying emphasizes the importance of practical, real-life experiences in developing a wise and discerning mind. 8. Practice makes perfect.熟能生巧。 ①It means if we practice unfamiliar things again and again,  we’ll be able to perform it perfectly. /The idiom means that the more you practice or do something, the better you will become at it. /The meaning of “Practice makes perfect” is that anything can only be truly understood, comprehended, and mastered through personal experimentation. ②Essentially, it suggests that through repeated effort and continuous practice, one can achieve a high level of skill or proficiency in a particular task or activity. The idea is that by consistently working on something, you can eventually master it and perform it flawlessly. /This sentence emphasizes the importance of practice in acquiring knowledge, believing that only through practice can we truly understand and master the essence and laws of things. 9. Lost years are worse than lost dollars.一寸光阴一寸金。 ①It means that the time you lost is more valuable and irreplaceable than the money you lost. While money can be earned back, the time that passes cannot be regained. ②This emphasizes the importance of valuing and making the most of your time, as it is a limited and precious resource. 10. An idle youth, a needy age.少壮不努力,老大徒伤悲。 ①The meaning is that if you don’t work hard when you are young, you will only be sad in vain when you are old. /It meaning that if one does not work hard when young and strong, regret and sadness in old age will be in vain. ②It emphasizes the importance of being productive and diligent during one’s younger years to ensure a more secure and comfortable future. 11. God helps those who help themselves.天助自助者。 ①To achieve success, one cannot rely on others or wait for good luck. First, one must put in effort on their own. Only through one’s own efforts can one obtain the “timing”, that is, the help of heaven, and ultimately achieve success ②It suggests that people who take action to improve their own situation are more likely to succeed and receive assistance, whether it be from divine or other sources. 12. A fall into the pit,a gain in your wit.吃一堑,长一智。 ①It means that to receive a lesson and increase one’s intelligence after experiencing a setback. /It means that when you make a mistake or experience a setback, you can learn from it and become wiser. ②Essentially, it suggests that even negative experiences can be valuable because they provide lessons that help you grow and improve. /In other words, every time you fall or fail, you gain more wisdom and understanding. /Metaphorically speaking, one can learn from a setback or failure, gain wisdom and experience 13 . More hasty, less speed.欲速则不达。 ①The meaning of this idiom is: violating the rules, blindly seeking speed, and failing to achieve the goal. It means that when you rush or act too quickly, you are more likely to make mistakes, which can ultimately slow you down. In other words, being overly hurried often results in less efficiency and effectiveness. ②It’s a reminder that taking your time and being careful can lead to better and faster outcomes in the long run. 14. It’s never too old to learn.活到老,学到老。 ①It means that a person is never at an age where they can no longer learn new things or acquire new skills. ②It emphasizes that learning is a lifelong process and that age should not be a barrier to education or personal growth. In other words, no matter how old you are, you can always continue to learn and improve yourself. /It reminds us that the journey of acquiring knowledge is never-ending, regardless of our age or circumstances. 15. A journey of a thousand miles begins with the first step.千里之行始于足下。 ①It means we should take the first step with courage to pursue our dream rather than just shout empty slogans without taking any action. /It suggests that even the longest and most difficult tasks or journeys can be accomplished if you begin and keep moving forward. ②Essentially, it encourages people not to be overwhelmed by the magnitude of a goal but to start with a single, manageable step. This idea is often used to motivate and inspire individuals to take the initiative and make progress toward their objectives. /It emphasizes the importance of starting and taking action, no matter how small or seemingly insignificant. 16. Rome was not built in a day.罗马不是一天建成的/伟业非一日之功。 ①The English idiom means that significant achievements or changes take time, effort, and patience. /It means that one should not rush to achieve things, only by putting in effort and persevering can one achieve success. ②The saying is often used to encourage perseverance and to remind people that it's normal for important tasks or goals to require a long period of time to complete. 17. Well begun, half done.良好的开端是成功的一半。 ①The meaning of this sentence is that a good start is crucial for success. If things have a good start, the subsequent progress will be much smoother. /It means that a good start is a crucial part of successfully finishing a task. If you begin something in a well-organized and effective manner, you are more likely to complete it efficiently and with better results. ②It emphasizes that one should prepare in advance and lay a solid foundation when doing things, because a good start can lay the foundation for the success of the entire process. /This saying emphasizes the importance of preparation and a strong beginning in any endeavor. 18. It is never too late to mend.亡羊补牢,犹时未晚。 ①It means that it is always possible to correct a mistake or improve a situation, no matter how late it might seem. /This idiom metaphorically refers to timely remediation(补救)of mistakes to avoid greater losses. ②Essentially, it encourages people to take action to fix problems or make positive changes, even if they feel they have waited too long. The idea is that there is always an opportunity for improvement and redemption, and one should not give up hope just because time has passed. 19. A good medicine tasks bitter.良药苦口。 ①It means that means something that is beneficial or helpful, even if it may not be pleasant or enjoyable at first. ②The idea behind this saying is that often, the things that are most effective in helping us(like medicine)can sometimes be difficult to accept or experience because they are not immediately pleasurable. However, the long-term benefits outweigh the temporary discomfort. /In other words, sometimes we need to endure a bit of discomfort or unpleasantness in order to achieve a greater good or to improve our situation. This can apply to many areas of life, such as taking on challenging tasks, receiving constructive criticism, or making difficult decisions. 20. The early bird catches the worm.早起的鸟儿有虫吃。 ①It means that those who start their day early or begin tasks promptly are more likely to succeed. ②It emphasizes the benefits of being proactive, diligent, and not procrastinating. Essentially, it suggests that people who wake up early or act quickly have a better chance of achieving their goals or obtaining opportunities. /The old saying reminds us that if people want to be successful and outstanding, they must plan ahead of time and make their efforts to overcome all the possible difficulties. 21. All that glitters is not gold.闪光的未必都是金子。 ①The meaning of the phrase is that one should not be misled by surface phenomena, but rather by the essence of things. ②It warns people not to be misled by the superficiality of shining things, because not all shining things necessarily have true value. 22. Look before you leap.三思而后行。Think twice before you act ①It is a piece of advice that encourages careful consideration and reflection before making a decision or taking an action. ②It suggests that you should pause, evaluate the potential consequences, and think about the situation from different angles before proceeding. This can help you avoid hasty decisions that might lead to regret or negative outcomes. In essence(本质上), it promotes a thoughtful approach to problem-solving and decision-making. 23. Facts speak plainer than words.事实胜于雄辩。 ①It means that actual evidence or real occurrences are more convincing and straightforward than mere statements or arguments. /In other words, it suggests that the truth and reality of a situation are clearer and more powerful when demonstrated through concrete facts rather than just explained with words. ②This emphasizes the importance of tangible proof over rhetoric. 24. Action speaks louder than words.行动胜过语言/行动比语言更响亮。 ①Actions are more persuasive than words, emphasizing the importance of action. /The idiom means that it is more important and effective to do something and show what you mean, rather than just talking about it. /In other words, what you do has a stronger impact and is more convincing than what you say. ②It emphasizes proving one’s commitment and goals through practical actions, rather than just making verbal promises. 25. A friend in need is a friend indeed.患难见真情。 ①It means that a true friend is someone who will support and help you when you are facing difficulties or are in a difficult situation. ②It emphasizes that the real value of friendship is not just in the good times, but also in how friends stand by each other during hard times. A person who helps you when you are in need is a genuine and trustworthy friend. (2022届广东省广州市天河区普通高中毕业班综合测试三,也是2014年山东高考英语真题)某英文报社组织题为“我喜欢的英语谚语”征文活动,你有意参加。请从下面两句谚语中任选一句作为标题写一篇英语作文。 ①A friend in need is a friend indeed. ②Where there’s a will, there’s a way. 内容包括:1. 该谚语的含义; 2. 体现该谚语含义的个人经历。 注意:1. 词数:120-150; 2. 文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称。 参考词汇:谚语 proverb ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】1 My favorite English proverb is A friend in need is a friend indeed. The proverb tells us the importance of friends. A life without friends is a life without sunshine! Friends try their best to help you without thinking of what they can get from it. Once I doubted the usefulness of study, losing my interests and direction, even confidence. Finally, I decided to stop studying. After knowing the news, my friend encouraged me patiently. She insisted on persuading me until I promised to give up this thought. Later, I made up my mind to study hard so as to enter my dream university. Many people will be in and out of your life, but only true friends will leave footprints in your heart. True friends always come to you when you need help. 【导语】本篇属于夹叙夹议文的写作(投稿)。要求考生从所给的两句谚语中任选一句作为标题,写一篇包括该谚语含义以及体现该谚语含义的个人经历的英语作文来参加英文报社组织的题为“我喜欢的英语谚语”征文活动。 【详解】 1. 词汇积累 重要性:importance→significance 曾经:once→at one time 怀疑:doubt→be suspicious of 最后:finally→at last 2. 句式拓展 原 句:My favorite English proverb is “A friend in need is a friend indeed”. The proverb tells us the importance of friends. 拓展句:My favorite English proverb is “A friend in need is a friend indeed”, which tells us the importance of friends. 【高分句型】 1. Friends try their best to help you without thinking of what they can get from it.(运用了what引导的宾语从句) 2. She insisted on persuading me until I promised to give up this thought.(运用了until引导的时间状语从句) 【答案】2 The well-known proverb “Where there is a will, there is a way” has long been accepted by all of us. It means that whenever we meet with challenges or difficulties, we will eventually succeed as long as we have a strong will. It is widely recognized that thought decides behavior. Nothing will be hard to a determined and persistent person. Now, we are faced with the College Entrance Examination and we need to set a goal for ourselves and strive for. Otherwise, we will have no motivation to get our goal achieved. So, having a goal and working hard for it is the base of our success. What we need to do now is to get rid of bad habits, improve study efficiency and discuss with our teachers actively. Everything comes to him who waits. Perseverance means victory. In an age when modern competition becomes more and more fierce, a strong will seems more than necessary. With this awareness, we can encounter and overcome all the challenges calmly and confidently. 【导语】本篇属于议论文的写作。要求考生阐述自己对于“Where there is a will, there is a way(有志者事竟成)”这个谚语的理解,并结合自身情况进行进一步说明。 【详解】 1.词汇积累 最终:finally→ eventually 认可:admit→ recognize 奋斗:fight/struggle→ strive 毅力:willpower→perseverance 遇见,遭遇:meet→encounter 2.句式拓展 原 句:Now, we are faced with the College Entrance Examination and we need to set a goal for ourselves and strive for. 拓展句:Now, faced with the College Entrance Examination ,we need to set a goal for ourselves and strive for. 【高分句型】 1. It is widely recognized that thought decides behavior. (运用了it作形式主语的主语从句) 2. What we need to do now is to get rid of bad habits, improve study efficiency and discuss with our teachers actively. (运用了主语从句以及不定式作表语) 3. In an age when modern competition becomes more and more fierce, a strong will seems more than necessary.(运用了when引导的定语从句) 说明:以下1-6题从题材上说都属于“同题”。为了练习的方便,笔者分开单列。 1 (湖北省部分重点中学2024届高三上学期11月月考)中国古典诗词是中华民族的文化瑰宝,为鼓励同学们讲好中国故事,你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以“我最喜欢的诗人”为题,写一篇短文参赛。 内容包括:1. 该人物及其主要贡献简介; 2. 该人物对你的影响。 注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右; 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 My favourite poet ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】                                                           My favourite poet   Many celebrated Chinese poets of the Tang dynasty have displayed their extraordinary talents and unique intelligence in Tang poetry. Among all these poets, Li Bai has always held a special place in my heart.   As a poet, Li Bai’s major contribution lies in the exquisite craftsmanship of his poems, which effortlessly blend vivid landscapes with deep philosophical musings. Besides, his ability to capture the beauty of nature and the human experience resonates deeply with readers worldwide. His timeless verses of profound imagery and emotion have left a long-lasting mark on literature.   In essence, Li Bai’s poetry serves as a timeless reminder, continuing to inspire generations of readers, including myself. His poems have taught me to appreciate the fleeting moments of beauty, explore my own creativity, and express my feelings through writing. 【导语】本篇属于夹叙夹议文的写作(投稿)。要求考生以“我最喜欢的诗人”为题,写一篇短文,参加学校正在组织的英语作文比赛。 【详解】 1.词汇积累 著名的:celebrated→noted 非凡的:extraordinary→remarkable 才能:talent→gift 另外:besides→moreover 2.句式拓展 原 句:In essence, Li Bai’s poetry serves as a timeless reminder, continuing to inspire generations of readers, including myself. 拓展句:In essence, Li Bai’s poetry serves as a timeless reminder, which continues to inspire generations of readers, including myself. 【高分句型】 1. As a poet, Li Bai’s major contribution lies in the exquisite craftsmanship of his poems, which effortlessly blend vivid landscapes with deep philosophical musings. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) 2. In essence, Li Bai’s poetry serves as a timeless reminder, continuing to inspire generations of readers, including myself. (运用了现在分词作状语) 2 (北京市海淀区2024-2025学年高三上学期10月考)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到中国运动员闪耀巴黎奥运会,并请你介绍此届奥运会上你最喜欢的一名运动员。请你给Jim回信。 内容包括:1. 简要介绍该运动员; 2. 该运动员对你的影响。 注意:1. 词数100左右。开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Jim, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Jim, I am delighted to receive your letter and would like to introduce my favorite athlete of the Paris Olympics, Pan Zhanle. Pan Zhanle, who is only 20 years old this year, is the world and Olympic record holder for men’s 100m freestyle and 4×100m medley relay at the 2024 Paris Olympics. Pan Zhanle has become the “fastest swimmer in the world” at such a young age. Pan Zhanle’s impressive achievements tell me that “a strong youth leads to a strong nation”. I am determined to learn from him. Working hard to master knowledge and strengthening my body are my primary tasks at present. Starting from achieving a small goal, I will gradually realize my aspirations. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇属于应用文的书信体写作。要求考生给英国朋友Jim写封回信,向他介绍此届奥运会上最喜欢的一名运动员,以及该运动员对自己的影响。 【详解】 1.词汇积累 收到某人的来信:receive one’s letter→hear from sb. 乐意做某事:would like to do→be willing to 下决心做某事:be determined to do→make up one’s mind to do 志向/愿望:aspirations→dreams/ambitions 2.句式拓展 原 句:Starting from achieving a small goal, I will gradually realize my aspirations. 拓展句:If I started from achieving a small goal, I will gradually realize my aspirations. 【高分句型】 1. Pan Zhanle, who is only 20 years old this year, is the world and Olympic record holder for men’s 100m freestyle and 4×100m medley relay at the 2024 Paris Olympics.(运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句) 2. Pan Zhanle’s impressive achievements tell me that “a strong youth leads to a strong nation”. (运用了that引导宾语从句) 3 (新疆阿克苏市实验中学2024-2025学年高二上学期9月月考)请以The Person Who Influences Me Most为题,写一篇关于对你生命产生重大影响的人物的短文。这个人可以是你的家人、老师、导师或公众人物。描述他/她是如何影响你的,你欣赏他/她的哪些品质,他/她的言行如何塑造了你的观点或行为。 注意:1. 词数80左右; 2. 请在答题卡的相应位置作答。 The Person Who Influences Me Most ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】                                                                         The Person Who Influences Me Most Many people do have a great influence on me, but I think no one can be compared with my mother. Her attitude towards life will never stop influencing my thoughts and actions. It is my mother who teaches me to be curious, kind, optimistic and persistent. Working as a government official, she doesn’t appear to be extraordinary in any way, but just works faithfully and devotedly; at the same time, she never puts her family aside. Today, when I come across someone in need, I’m willing to give a helping hand within my ability; when I see something odd or unfamiliar, I am eager to find out what it is; when I encounter difficulties in life, I always have a positive attitude and constantly seek for approaches to addressing them. She is not only my mother, but also my life mentor. Indeed, she is just the person affecting me greatly. 【导语】本篇属于夹叙夹议文的写作。要求考生写一篇短文,描写生命产生重大影响的人物,描述他/她是如何影响你的,你欣赏他/她的哪些品质,他/她的言行如何塑造了你的观点或行为。 【详解】 1.词汇积累 影响:influence→impact 乐观:optimistic→positive 坚持不懈的:persistent→untiring 此外:besides→additionally 2.句式拓展 原 句:Indeed, she is just the person affecting me greatly. 拓展句:Indeed, she is just the person who affects me greatly. 【高分句型】 1. It is my mother who teaches me to be curious, kind, optimistic and persistent.(运用了强调句型) 2. Indeed, she is just the person affecting me greatly.(运用了现在分词作后置定语) 4 (四川省成都市彭州市2023-2024学年高二上学期期中考试)你校英文报正举办主题为“Person of the Year”的征文活动。请你选择一位名人或者身边熟悉的人写一篇短文投稿。 内容包括:1. 人物简介及事迹; 2. 推荐他/她的理由。 注意:1. 词数80左右。题目已为你写好,不计入总词数; 2. 请在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Person of the Year ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Person of the Year I would like to nominate my friend Emily as the Person of the Year. She is a selfless individual who has dedicated countless hours to volunteering in our community. Despite her busy schedule, Emily always finds time to help others. One particular story that stands out is Emily’s involvement in a local food drive. Not only did she help gather donations, but she also took the initiative to deliver the collected food to families in need. Her dedication and determination were evident as she tirelessly spread kindness and supported those facing hardships. I recommend Emily for this prestigious title because of her unwavering commitment to helping others. She is a role model for us and serves as a reminder that a single individual can make a significant difference. 【导语】本篇属于夹叙夹议文的写作(投稿)。题目要求考生选择一位名人或者身边熟悉的人写一篇短文参加主题为“Person of the Year”的征文活动,需给出人物简介,描述其事迹,并说明推荐他或她的理由。 【详解】 1. 词汇积累 提名:nominate→put forward, propose 奉献:dedication→commitment 清楚的:evident→clear, obvious 面临:face→encounter, be faced with 因为:because of→due to, on account of 2. 句式拓展 原 句:Despite her busy schedule, Emily always finds time to help others. 拓展句:Despite the fact that she has a busy schedule, Emily always finds time to help others. 【高分句型】 1. She is a selfless individual who has dedicated countless hours to volunteering in our community. (运用了who引导限制性定语从句修饰先行词individual) 2. She is a role model for us and serves as a reminder that a single individual can make a significant difference. (运用了that引导名词性从句作reminder的同位语) 5 (广东省高州市第一中学2024-2025学年高二上学期开学校考)请以“The Hero in My Eyes”为题目写一篇短文。 内容包括:1. 该人物的简要介绍; 2. 该人物的主要事迹或成就; 3. 你对该人物的评价。 注意:1. 字数100左右; 2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯,人物生动立体; 3. 短文标题已给出,答题卡中不需抄写题目。 The Hero in My Eyes ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 The Hero in My Eyes The person I respect most is the geophysicist Huang Danian, who helped China to make many technological advances. Huang was a remarkable scientist. He had studied and worked in Britain for 18 years, but when he felt that his country needed him, he gave up his well-paid job and returned to China. Over the next seven years, Huang worked to develop many devices needed for deep-Earth exploration. Unfortunately, such achievements didn’t come cheap. Due to the frantic pace of his research, Huang was absent from his father’s funeral, and even his own cancer went undetected as he had no time to see a doctor. To sum up, Huang sacrificed everything for his research, and I think more people should honour him. 【导语】本篇属于夹叙夹议文的写作。要求考生以“The Hero in My Eyes”为题,写一篇短文。 【详解】 1.词汇积累 杰出的:remarkable→outstanding 返回:return to→go back to 不幸地:unfortunately→ unluckily 因为:due to→ owing to 2.句式拓展 原 句:Over the next seven years, Huang worked to develop many devices needed for deep-Earth exploration. 拓展句:Over the next seven years, Huang worked to develop many devices which are needed for deep-Earth exploration. 【高分句型】 1. The person I respect most is the geophysicist Huang Danian, who helped China to make many technological advances.(运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句) 2. He had studied and worked in Britain for 18 years, but when he felt that his country needed him, he gave up his well-paid job and returned to China. (运用了when引导的时间状语从句) 6 (吉林省延边第二中学2023-2024学年高二上学期第二次阶段检测)假如你是李华,你校英语报正在举办“大国科技推动者”主题征文比赛,请你写一篇英语短文,介绍你最敬佩的一名科学工作者。 内容包括:1. 人物简介; 2. 令人敬佩的原因。 注意:1. 词数:100左右 2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 There are many scientists who have driven social development.Among them,the one I admire most is Yuan Longping, an outstanding agricultural scientist known as the “Father of Hybrid Rice”. A few decades ago,the lack of food was one of the main problems threatening Chinese people.After years of study,Yuan Longping successfully developed the world’s first hybrid rice,which dramatically increased rice production.His approach to rice breeding also serves as a solution to food problems around the globe. Three is no doubt that his contribution is of great significance.His story gives me inspiration and motivates me to love science,and I would like to make contributions to it in the future. 【导语】本篇夹叙夹议文的写作。要求考生写一篇英语短文,介绍最敬佩的一名科学工作者。 【详解】 1. 词汇积累 杰出的:outstanding→distinguished 剧烈地:dramatically→acutely 激励:motivate→inspire 充当:serves as→act as 2. 句式拓展 原 句:A few decades ago,the lack of food was one of the main problems threatening Chinese people. 拓展句:A few decades ago,the lack of food was one of the main problems that threatened Chinese people. 【高分句型】 1. There are many scientists who have driven social development.(运用了who引导的限制性定语从句) 2. After years of study, Yuan Longping successfully developed the world’s first hybrid rice,which dramatically increased rice production.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) 说明:以下7-10题从题材上说都属于“同题”。为了练习的方便,笔者分开单列。 7 (云南省云南师大附中2023-2024学年高三下学期高考适应性月考卷八)假定你是李华,本周你们班的英语课堂活动主题是中国谚语,请你就“There is no royal road to learning (书山有路勤为径,学海无涯苦作舟) ”这句谚语写一篇英语发言稿,谈谈你的理解。 注意:1. 写作词数应为80词左右。开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数; 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Good morning, everyone. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you for listening. 【答案】      Good morning, everyone.       Today, I’d like to talk about a famous Chinese proverb: “There is no royal road to learning.”, which resonates deeply with my understanding of education. In my experience, this proverb holds a profound truth. Whether it’s learning a new language or understanding scientific concepts, there is no shortcut to success. Just like climbing a high mountain or sailing across an endless sea, learning requires persistent effort and devotion. Moreover, this proverb encourages a growth mindset, which leads us to take on challenges and view them as opportunities for improvement. In conclusion, the proverb is a powerful reminder that inspires us to embrace the journey of learning with determination and resilience. Thank you for listening. 【导语】本篇是一篇应用文写作的发言稿,要求考生就中国谚语“书山有路勤为径, 学海无涯苦作舟”为题写一篇感想。 【详解】 1. 词汇积累 深刻的:deep→profound 奉献:devotion→contribution 鼓励:encourage→inspire 改善:improvement→enhancement 2. 句型拓展 原 句:Just like climbing a high mountain or sailing across an endless sea, learning requires persistent effort and devotion. 拓展句:Learning requires persistent effort and devotion, the process of which is just like climbing a high mountain or sailing across an endless sea. 【高分句型】 1. Moreover, this proverb encourages a growth mindset, which leads us to take on challenges and view them as opportunities for improvement.(which引导的定语从句) 2. In conclusion, the proverb is a powerful reminder that inspires us to embrace the journey of learning with determination and resilience.(that引导的定语从句,determination/resilience等高级词汇) 8 (广东省潮州市2023-2024学年高三上学期期末教学质量检测)假定你是李华,你要参加学校英语报以“Practice makes perfect”为题开展的征文活动。 内容包括:1. 你对这句谚语的理解; 2. 你个人的实践经验; 3. 这句谚语对学习生活的指导意义。 注意:1. 词数80左右。开头已给出,不计入总词数; 2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; Every proverb brings people some wisdom ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Every proverb brings people some wisdom The famous saying “Practice makes perfect” is widely accepted today. In my opinion, it means if we practice unfamiliar things again and again, we’ll be able to perform it perfectly. The practice of learning English is a good example. As for me, I started to practice English when I was very little. Nowadays, not only am I able to communicate with foreign friends easily but I can read English novels, newspapers and magazines. The proverb has helped me a lot in my English learning process. So if you plan to study something new, just try your best to practice. It’s of great benefit to your learning life. 【导语】本篇属于议论文的写作(投稿)。要求考生就自身实践经验谈谈对“Practice makes perfect”的理解,同时说明这句谚语对于学习生活的指导意义。 【详解】 1.词汇积累 接受、认可:accept→recognize 能够:be able to→be capable of 帮助:help→assist 计划做某事:plan to do sth.→intend to do sth. 2.句式拓展 原 句:So if you plan to study something new, just try your best to practice. It’s of great benefit to your learning life. 拓展句:So if you plan to study something new, just try your best to practice, which is of great benefit to your learning life. 【高分句型】 1. In my opinion, it means if we practice unfamiliar things again and again, we’ll be able to perform it perfectly.(运用了省略连接词that的宾语从句,从句中含有if引导的状语从句) 2. Nowadays, not only am I able to communicate with foreign friends easily but I can read English novels, newspapers and magazines.(运用了not…only, but…(also)句型和部分倒装句型) 9 (2024届黑龙江省齐齐哈尔市克东县一中高三下学期三模)一句名言“It is never too old to learn.”引发了你的思考,请你写一篇感想与同学交流。 内容包括:1. 你对这句话的理解; 2. 这句话对你的影响。 注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右; 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 The proverb means that a person is never at an age where they can no longer learn new things or acquire new skills and holds a simple yet powerful truth. It reminds us that the journey of acquiring knowledge is never-ending, regardless of our age or circumstances. This belief underscores the importance of maintaining a curious and open mind, always ready to explore new ideas and concepts. This quote has significantly influenced my own approach to life. It has inspired me to continually seek new experiences and expand my horizons, never settling for the comfort of familiarity. It has taught me that true growth and fulfillment come from a constant desire to learn and improve. 【导语】本篇属于议论文写作。要求考生写一篇关于“It is never too old to learn.”的感想与同学交流。 【详解】 1. 词汇积累 获得:acquire→obtain 不管:regardless of→in spite of 影响:influence→affect 激励:inspire→stimulate 2. 句式拓展 原 句:This quote has significantly influenced my own approach to life. It has inspired me to continually seek new experiences and expand my horizons, never settling for the comfort of familiarity. 拓展句:This quote has significantly influenced my own approach to life because it has inspired me to continually seek new experiences and expand my horizons, never settling for the comfort of familiarity. 【高分句型】 1. It reminds us that the journey of acquiring knowledge is never-ending, regardless of our age or circumstances. (运用了that引导宾语从句) 2. It has inspired me to continually seek new experiences and expand my horizons, never settling for the comfort of familiarity. (运用了现在分词作状语) 10 (贵州省贵阳市一中2023-2024学年高三下学期高考适应性月考卷八)假定你是李华,打算参加你校即将举办的主题为“用英语讲中国道理”的演讲比赛。请你以“A thousand-mile journey starts with one step.”为主题写一篇演讲稿。 内容包括:1.介绍这句话所蕴含的道理; 2.你喜欢它的原因。 注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Ladies and gentlemen, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Ladies and gentlemen, It’s my great honor to share with you a timeless wisdom from China—A thousand-mile journey starts with one step. This proverb embodies the essence of perseverance and the importance of taking the first step towards our goals. To begin with, I admire this wisdom most because it reminds us that no matter how daunting a task may seem, every great accomplishment starts with a small action. Additionally, it encourages us to overcome inertia and fear, and to start moving forward towards our dreams, one step at a time. So, let’s embrace this wisdom and take the first step towards achieving our aspirations. Thank you! 【导语】本篇属于应用文写作的演讲稿。要求考生以“A thousand-mile journey starts with one step.”为主题写一篇演讲稿。 【详解】 1.词汇积累 永恒的:timeless→everlasting 重要性:importance→significance 首先:To begin with→in the first place 2.句式拓展 原 句:So, let’s embrace this wisdom and take the first step towards achieving our aspirations. 同义句:Therefore, let’s embrace this wisdom and take the first step towards realizing our wishes. 【高分句型】 1. It’s my great honor to share with you a timeless wisdom from China —A thousand-mile journey starts with one step.(运用了it作形式主语) 2. To begin with, I admire this wisdom most because it reminds us that no matter how daunting a task may seem, every great accomplishment starts with a small action.(运用了because引导的原因状语从句和that引导的宾 语从句) 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权,侵权必究!1 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 $$

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